Informative Speech Informative Speech Planning Document/Outline Prepare a detailed speech complete sentence outline, including a purpose, introduction, body, conclusion, reference list with a minimum of three credible sources in APA style, and attach a copy of annotated articles planned for use in the speech. .com sites must use the CRAP test. Due: _________ Outline, visual aid, and speech giving due on date provided, no exceptions Informative Speech Present a planned, extemporaneous, informative speech on a topic about which you are knowledgeable and passionate. Length of the speech should be 5 minutes plus 3 minutes for a question and answer discussion period. Due: _________ Speech to Inform Objectives: (a) Demonstrate research skills using a high-quality, scholarly database (b) Organize ideas in a purposeful, cohesive sequence which meets audience expectations and needs (c) Organize content into seamless, easy-to-follow introduction, body, and conclusion. (d) Create and present an effective informative message to a target audience (e) Demonstrate effective informative communication in a public context (f) Effectively support ideas using evidence, sources, and sensory aids. Synthesize information from 3+ high quality sources and orally cite those sources during the speech. Topic: ________________________ General purpose: To inform Behavioral outcome: When I finish my speech, each audience member will be able to state: ___________________________________________________________________. Specific purpose: To inform the class about _________________________________________________________(topic or key ideas). The visual aid I will use is: _________________________________________________. Speech Outline I. Introduction A. A story, anecdote, or quotation about this topic, which will appropriately introduce the topic is: ___________________________________________________________. B. I know about this topic because _____________________________________, and this topic is important to me because: _____________________________________. C. Today, I plan to inform you about _________________________________ (state your central idea) II. Body of Speech A. Write key idea one as a statement: _______________________________________ Supporting materials will include: Informative Speech 1. 2. B. Write key idea two as a statement: _______________________________________ Supporting materials will include: 1. 2. C. Write key idea three as a statement: ______________________________________ Supporting materials will include: 1. 2. (You should have AT LEAST 3 main point in the body of your speech.) III. Conclusion A. In conclusion, today, I informed you about _______________________________ ___________________________________________________________(key ideas). B. Remember (or other transition), _______________________________________ (startling statement, quotation, or some other attention device). References: (You will need three solid sources. Format in APA style and attach an annotated copy of each.) Use a library scholarly database, credible web sources, or books. Visual Aid Requirements: Videos may only take up 1 minute and be cited on reference page PPTs must be at least 5 slides; photos must also be given credit by listing the link underneath APA references or in the student PPT Websites must reference at least 3 areas Objects must be directly related and referred to at least 3 times Food must be directly tied to speech and explained Informative Speech Speech Outline Sample Topic: Giant Panda Twins in Chengdu General purpose: When I finish my speech, each audience member will be able to state the strategy for saving twin panda cubs in captivity. Specific purpose: To inform the class about the strategy of cub rotation for saving panda cubs (topic or key ideas). The visual aid I will use is: My website and a PPT. I. Introduction: A. A story, anecdote, or quotation about this topic, which will appropriately introduce the topic is: in doing the ultrasound to look for an embryo in the panda in the national zoo, the code was “I think I see a stick of butter” (Doolittle, 2006). B. I know about this topic because my daughter is a veterinarian for the Smithsonian/ National Zoo. 1. She will go to San Diego next week for sperm. 2. You can see photos at my website <http://onlineacademics.org/> C. This topic is important to me because: 1. There are only 200 pandas in captivity and they may not survive in the wild (Dell’Amore, 2005) 2. We spend millions of dollars each year to save the panda (Emerling, 2006). D. Today, I plan to inform you about how there is new hope regarding the Giant Panda Reproduction of twins (state your central idea). II. Body of Speech A. Write key idea one as a statement: In the wild, when twins are born, one dies. Supporting materials will include: 1. Zoos have had a difficult time raising pandas (Senator, 2006). 2. A newborn panda is small, with a low survival rate. 3. The mother can easily abandon or kill the newborn. 4. There is concern about whether the mother or other cubs are involved in raising the cub (Synder et al, 2003). B. Write key idea two as a statement: Two sets of twins were born this past month, and the Chengdu base is trying a new strategy of rotating the twins with the mother. Supporting materials will include: 1. Keepers go in and take both babies away immediately, then return one. Informative Speech 2. While a keeper cares for one baby, the mother cares for the other baby. 3. The twins are rotated every day or two. C. Write key idea three as a statement: The mother then needs to care for both babies when they about three months old and out of danger. Supporting materials will include: 1. Sometimes a baby will be more attached to the keeper. 2. The mother has to accept and nurture both babies. 3. When the mother can reproduce, all the babies are given to a different mother to help nurture the toddlers. III. Conclusion A. In conclusion, today, I informed you about the new strategy of rotating twins with the mother for raising Giant Panda twins in captivity (key ideas). B. Remember, "Rare things are precious," says the Chinese proverb. I think we all have an emotional stake in the successful reproduction of this precious endangered species. (startling statement, quotation, or some other attention device). References China's captive pandas in trouble. (2005). New Scientist. Dell'Amore, C. (2005). Breeding success. Smithsonian, 36(8), 24-24. Doolittle, A. (2006). Tai Shan as new D.C. representative?. Washington Times, The (DC). Emerling, G. (2006). Pricey pandas put squeeze on zoo finances. Washington Times, The (DC). Nihao, S. & Zaijian, W. Happy birthday China. This month Beijing. ChineseBusinessWorld.com. Retrieved from http://www.cbw.com/btm/issue71/80-82.html Senator, J. (2006). Let's Get It On-On. Atlanta, 45(9), 63-63. Synder, R. J. et al. (2003). Behavioral and developmental consequences of early rearing experience for captive giant pandas (Ailuropoda melanoleuca). Journal of Comparative Psychology, 117(3), 235-245. Requirements Typed Double spaced References cited within outline Include a title Include a reference page correctly formatted in APA Informative Speech Speech Planning Documents Grading Rubric Desired Outcomes 1. Planning documents submitted on time (on due date before the speech round). 2. Topic and specific purpose appropriate for assignment & audience__. Need: Be careful about sensitive nature of topic___. Need to more carefully adapt to audience___. May want to broaden topic area___. May want to narrow topic area___. See chapter 4 for ideas. 3. Outline shows appropriate organizational pattern (e.g. chronological, problem-solution, Monroe’s Motivated Sequence) & format ___. Ideas need to be grouped together more effectively___. Full sentence outline. See chapters 8, 9, 10 for ideas. 4. Variety of supporting materials. Need: Need to develop supporting materials more___. Use a variety of support___. See chapter 7 for ideas. 5. Reference list in APA style with parenthetical citations in the outline___. Need reference list___. Need APA style for references (1) ___ Citations (1) ___. Cite sources in parenthetical style in your outline___. 6. Three quality, credible sources including one non-internet Need: Higher quality___. More sources: ___. 7. Annotated copy of each source. (At least 3) Points 2 Earned 2 4 4 6 6 6 Total ______ / 30 Informative Speech Content Rubric 5 4 3 2 0 Introduction – 5 Points Attention getter Link Thesis Preview Used appropriate attention-getter; connected to the speech topic; link is present; thesis clearly introduces topic with an effective preview statement. Ideas fully explain and give a detailed account of first main point and are supported fully with research and details. Organization of ideas is logical and adds to the understanding of topic. Attention getter does not fully engage audience, somewhat cliché; link is present with clear thesis; preview statement is clear and effective. Very weak attentiongetter; link is present with a vague or unclear thesis statement; preview does not effectively introduce speech. Weak attentiongetter; link is present with a simple thesis statement; preview is ineffective. Introduction is missing an element, either: attention getter, link, thesis or preview. Ideas explain and give a somewhat detailed account of first main point. Ideas are mostly supported with research and are organized in a logical manner. Ideas do not fully explain or give details of first main point. Significant details and explanation would need to be added for full understanding. Ideas are not fully supported through research. Information is disorganized in logic. No details or research supports first main point. No research is presented. Ideas fully explain and give a detailed account of second main point and are supported fully with research and details. Organization of ideas is logical and adds to the understanding of topic. Ideas explain and give a somewhat detailed account of second main point. Ideas are mostly supported with research and are organized in a logical manner.. Ideas fully explain and give a detailed account of third main point and are supported fully with research and detailed. Organization of ideas is logical and adds to the understanding of topic. Ideas explain and give a somewhat detailed account of third main point. Ideas are mostly supported with research and are organized in a logical manner. Ideas do not fully explain or give details of second main point. Significant details and explanation would need to be added for full understanding. Ideas are not fully supported through research. Information is disorganized in logic. Ideas do not fully explain or give details of third main point. Significant details and explanation would need to be added for full understanding. Ideas are not fully supported through research. Information is disorganized in logic. No details or research supports second main point. No research is presented. Ideas – 10 Points (5*2) Body #3 Conclusion – 5 Points Re-State Thesis Summary Clincher All components are present and effective. Re-statement of thesis and summary successfully highlights main points of speech and succinctly wraps up ideas. Led audience in effective discussion; prompted questions; no silence Evidence of research is explicit throughout speech and verbal citations follow correct format in all citations. 6 citations are heard. Outline is formatted correctly. All components are present and somewhat effective. Re-statement of thesis and summary is somewhat effective in highlighting main idea of speech. Ideas somewhat explain and give a detailed account of first main point, although more detail/explanation is needed for full understanding. Ideas are somewhat supported by research. Information is somewhat disorganized in logic. Ideas somewhat explain and give a detailed account of second main point, although more detail/explanation is needed for full understanding. Ideas are somewhat supported by research. Information is somewhat disorganized in logic Ideas somewhat explain and give a detailed account of third main point, although more detail/explanation is needed for full understanding. Ideas are somewhat supported by research. Information is somewhat disorganized in logic All components are present, but are weak. Summary does not highlight all main points and there is not a clear or impactful clincher. Missing components of conclusion. Conclusion is not effective in summary or wrap up. Does not attempt to conclude or wrapup. Speech may end abruptly. Very weak prompting of audience questioning and discussion Evidence of research is somewhat present throughout speech. Verbal citations are correct in format in all citations. 4 citations are heard. Outline has 3 errors No attempt to engage audience in questioning or discussion Evidence of research is present throughout speech, although some citations are not delivered in correct format. 3 citations are heard. Outline has 4+ errors. No discussion; says “I’m done” Ideas – 10 Points (5*2) Body #1 Ideas – 10 Points (5*2) Body #2 Q&A Session – 10 points (5*2) Research & Verbal Citations – 10 points (5*2) Did not fully prepare for the Q&A with questions; prompted some questioning Evidence of research is explicit throughout speech. Verbal citations follow correct format in all citations. 5 citations are heard. Outline has 1-2 errors. No details or research supports third main point. No research is presented. Evidence of research is not present throughout. No verbal citations are used OR citations are not delivered in correct format. Outline is not revised. Informative Speech 5 Voice Volume Tone Articulation/ inflection Eye Contact Scans entire audience Confident Gestures and Body Movement Natural gestures Firm posture Time Length Technology 4 3 2-1 Easily heard and understood by ENTIRE audience; enthusiasm is shown Most words understandable; can be heard most of the time. Moments of enthusiasm could use more practice. Some words unclear, mumbled or slurred; Sometimes difficult to hear; Sometimes monotone Difficult to understand, inaudible, and/or monotone Looks at entire audience with confidence; can see eyes at all times Does not read speech Looks at most of the audience; a little too much reading from cards Looks up and down frequently in attempt to make eye contact; shows lack of practice Little or no eye contact Never turns back to audience; posture and gestures are firm but natural, not stiff Never turns back to audience; posture may falter slightly; gestures are natural with minor fidgeting Posture and gestures are lacking confidence but not totally distracting Postures and gestures are distracting; leans on podium or whiteboard; major fidgeting On time. Over or under by seconds Visual Aid Visual aid was appropriate length and supported thesis Appearance Professional attire and overall composure is appropriate and effective for presentation Under or over time by one minute Visual aid did not completely support argument or was lacking in length Attempts to appear professional and composed for presentation but effort is not fully executed Content Total: _____/ 60 Under or over time by two minutes Under or over time by three minutes or more Visual aid was weak in support of evidence; not correct format No technology Clothing was not distracting but did not show a professional demeanor. Clothing was inappropriate or unprofessional and proved to be a deterrent from the presentation. Nonverbal Total: ____/30 Informative Speech Total: _____ / 90 You will revise your outline before speaking and turn in your notecards after giving your speech – remember not to write a full manuscript on the cards! Informative Speech Listener Feedback Form Communicator: Listener: Purpose statement: Did the speaker get the audience’s attention and clearly indicate the purpose of the speech in the introduction? Yes No Did the speaker bridge—make a transition—to the body of the speech? Yes No Did the organization of the speech help the listener understand the sender’s purpose? Yes No Did the speaker support his or her purpose with explanations and examples? Yes No Did the conclusion leave the audience with the speaker’s basic purpose? Yes No Did the speaker adapt his or her presentation to the audience (subject, language, audience interest, etc.)? Yes No Describe the nonverbal elements of this speech and how they helped get the message across: What are two items the speaker should work on? Questions to ask during Q&A: 1. 2. Informative Speech Student’s Post-performance Feedback Speaker Date Directions: Read each statement; then, in the space provided, use numbers to indicate your feelings about the behavior described. If you are unable to respond to a statement, consider the audience feedback you observed and your feelings while giving and immediately following the speech. 4—Strongly agree _____ 1. _____ 2. _____ 3. _____ 4. _____ 5. _____ 6. _____ 7. _____ 8. _____ 9. _____ 10. _____ 11. _____ 12. _____ 13. _____ 14. _____ 15. _____ 16. _____ 17. _____ 18. _____ 19. _____ 20. _____ 21. _____ 22. _____ 23. _____ 24. 3—Agree 2—Disagree 1—Strongly disagree The topic suited the audience. The speech suited the setting. The speech suited me and my knowledge. I gained the audience’s attention with the introduction. I provided the audience with necessary background. I provided a clear statement of purpose. I used a clear pattern of arrangement for the body of the speech. The logical appeals were expected by and acceptable to the audience. The major points were well supported. I used vivid descriptions, exciting words, and personal involvement statements. I began the conclusion by summarizing the information presented during the discussion. I concluded the speech by driving home the point(s). My presentational outline was clear and provided me the opportunity to speak spontaneously. The speech was enhanced by my selection of appropriate supplementary aids. The speech was enhanced by the method I used to present the selected supplementary aids. My delivery contained very few verbal distracters. My delivery contained very few nonverbal distracters. My grammar was appropriate to the audience, the purpose, and the setting. My word choice was appropriate to the audience, the purpose, and the setting. My physical movements contributed to my being perceived as dynamic and sociable. My vocal variety contributed to my being perceived as dynamic and sociable. My eye contact was direct and consistent. I achieved the objectives I set for the presentation. The question-and-answer session was effective. What are two things that you think you did especially well in this speech? What are two things that you did not do as well as you would have liked in this speech? What do you plan to do before your next speech to improve on the two areas that you identified in question 2? Informative Speech CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas, concepts, and information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and analysis of content. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.2.B Develop the topic thoroughly by selecting the most significant and relevant facts, extended definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples appropriate to the audience's knowledge of the topic. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.RI.11-12.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text, including determining where the text leaves matters uncertain. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.11-12.1.C Propel conversations by posing and responding to questions that probe reasoning and evidence; ensure a hearing for a full range of positions on a topic or issue; clarify, verify, or challenge ideas and conclusions; and promote divergent and creative perspectives. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.11-12.4 Present information, findings, and supporting evidence, conveying a clear and distinct perspective, such that listeners can follow the line of reasoning, alternative or opposing perspectives are addressed, and the organization, development, substance, and style are appropriate to purpose, audience, and a range of formal and informal tasks. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.11-12.5 Make strategic use of digital media (e.g., textual, graphical, audio, visual, and interactive elements) in presentations to enhance understanding of findings, reasoning, and evidence and to add interest. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.SL.11-12.6 Adapt speech to a variety of contexts and tasks, demonstrating a command of formal English when indicated or appropriate. CCSS.ELA-LITERACY.W.11-12.7 Conduct short as well as more sustained research projects to answer a question (including a self-generated question) or solve a problem; narrow or broaden the inquiry when appropriate; synthesize multiple sources on the subject, demonstrating understanding of the subject under investigation.