NAME: _____________________________________________________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Lit Circle Group Members:______________________ ___________________ ___________________ _______________________ ___________________ The Giver Lit Circles At what point does a utopia become a dystopia? What is freedom? What would you give up, in order to live in “peace”? How much should the individual lose of himself or herself for the collective good? Can we ignore and minimize pain in our lives--both physical and emotional--to live happier existences? As a Lit Circle team you will be reading, exploring, and analyzing The Giver You will rotate roles as a group; each person will have the opportunity to be: Discussion Director, Illuminator, Illustrator, Connector, Word Watcher, & Summarizer. Lit Circles are intended to help you foster a sense of community, as well as learn skills to help you work in a group. It will allow for both independent thought and student collaboration. (*Warning, if someone isn’t pulling their weight in a group, they will taken out of the group & resigned to complete the work on their own.) Checklist of items: Due Date Item Lit Circle Reading Calendar Lit Circle Role Assignments 10-30-12 Completed Incomplete Book Chart: basic book information Week 1 “Z-Chart” Essential Book Questions: During Reading Multi-Flow Map: Character Map Character Rendering Vocabulary circle maps for words #1-2 Vocabulary circle maps for words #3-4 Vocabulary circle maps for words #5-6 Vocabulary circle maps for words #7-8 Vocabulary circle maps for words #9-10 Themes Symbols Character Facebook Page Assessment Form for Discussion Groups Week #2 Assessment Form for Discussion Groups Week #3 Assessment Form for Discussion Groups Week #4 Assessment Form for Discussion Groups Week #5 Essential Book Questions: After Reading (separate handout) Compare & Contrast Essay: Double Bubble Map brainstorming Compare & Contrast Essay: Essay Outline 1 Oct 22nd 10/23 DUE: DUE: DUE: Harrison Bergeron Essay In-class: pre-reading activity In-class: pre-reading activity In-class: Lit Circle, Flashback Mini-lesson HW: Finish HB During reading questions HW: Finish Harrison Bergeron essay 10/29 Substitute 10/30 Substitute HW: In Giver read Ch 1; Ch 1 Discussion questions; lit roles week 2 Nov 1st Substitute DUE: Chapter 1 Discussion DUE: lit roles week 2; “Z-chart” ch 1 In-class: Lit Circle Discussion, Chapter 1 ZChart-ch 1; reading time: Chapter 2 HW: finish reading ch 2; lit roles week 2; Finish “Z-Chart” ch 1 In-class: Lit circle-finish ch 2 discussion questions; reading time: ch 3 HW: finish reading ch 3; ch 3 discussion questions; Vocabulary circle maps for words #1-2 11/06 DUE: ch 4 discussion questions In-class: HSA Test OR Reading: ch 5-7; mini lesson HW: finish reading 5-7; lit roles week 3; ch 5-7 discussion questions 11/12 NO SCHOOL – VETERAN’S DAY HW: catch up if behind 11/19 Substitute DUE: ch 11 discussion questions; lit roles week 5 In-class: lit circle discussion; read ch 12; ch 12 discussion questions HW: Read ch 13; ch 13 discussion questions 11/26 DUE: ch 15-16 discussion; lit roles week 6; Vocabulary circle maps for words #7-8 10/31 DUE: Ch 8 discussion questions; lit roles week 4 In-class: Lit Circle discussion; mini-lesson; reading: ch 9 HW: finish reading ch 9; discussion questions ch 9; Vocabulary circle maps for words #5-6 11/20 DUE: ch 18 discussion questions 11/02 11/07 11/14 DUE: ch 5-7 discussion questions; Vocabulary circle maps for words #3-4 In-class: HSA Test OR Reading: ch 5-7; mini lesson HW: read ch 8; ch 8 discussion questions, lit roles week 4 11/15 11/16 11/21 DUE: discussion questions ch 9; Vocabulary circle maps for words #5-6 In-class: mini lesson; reading ch 10; lit circle-ch 10 discussion questions HW: read chapter 11; ch 11 discussion questions; lit roles week 5 11/22 11/23 DUE: ch 13 discussion questions In-class: Mini-lesson; lit circle activity; reading: ch 14 HW: read ch 15-16; ch 15-16 discussion questions; lit roles week 6; Vocabulary circle maps for words #7-8 11/27 10/26 DUE: Ch 3 discussion questions; Vocabulary circle maps for words #1-2 In-class: Lit circle discussion; reading time: ch 4; HW: lit roles week 3, finish reading ch 4; ch 4 discussion questions NO SCHOOL- Election Day HW: catch up if behind; Vocabulary circle maps for words #3-4 11/13 10/25 NO SCHOOL- Thanksgiving Break 11/28 HW: catch up if behind No School Thanksgiving 11/05 10/24 11/29 11/30 DUE: ch 20 discussion questiongs; Vocabulary circle maps for words #9-10 2 In-class: lit circle discussion; reading: ch 17 12/03 In-class: Mini-lesson; reading: ch 19; ch 19 discussion questions HW: read ch 20; ch 20 discussion questions; Vocabulary circle maps for words #9-10 12/04 DUE: chosen projects for Bloom’s Activity DUE: TBA DUE: Project In-class: Final discussion of the book; Discussion of questions; “Utopia” Activity; work time HW: Work on Giver packet, project, & essay In-class: workday In-class: Bloom’s Activities Projects Due; Oral presentations HW: read ch 18; ch 18 discussion questions 12/05 HW: finish your project & be prepared to present to the class 12/12- Final Schedule 12/11 – Final Schedule 12/10 DUE: essay outline In-class: work time HW: finish Giver packet & Study for final exam DUE: Giver Packet In-class: Giver Final Exam TBA In-class: Bloom’s Activities; reading: ch 21; ch 21 discussion questions HW: lit roles week 7; read ch 22; ch 22 discussion questions 12/06 12/07 HW: work on finishing your Giver final packet & Assessment part 2 essay outline 12/14- all periods 12/13- Final Schedule TBA In-class: end of quarter/semester reflection 12/06: you must be ready to present & turn in your project or you will not receive presentation credit 12/10: last day to turn in late Giver projects (no presentation credit given) 12/11: LAST DAY Giver Packets will be accepted for credit IMPORTANT DUE DATES: Final Project Thursday Dec 6th Packet Tentatively Wednesday Dec Final Exam 11th Tentatively Wednesday Dec 11th 3 Your Name _________________________________________ Date ____________ Group member names: _____________________ _________________________ _____________________ ______________________ _______________________ Group Book Title: _________________________________________________________________ Weekly Role Assignments Week Due Date Discussion Director Illuminator Illustrator Connector Word Watcher Summarizer 2 3 4 5 6 7 4 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ BOOK CHART: Fill out the basic info chart below based on your book Author: Originally published: Cultural context of when written/ context of author’s life: Genre: Setting (time period in novel/ location: Main Characters: Fill in the Double Bubble map for Similarities & differences of Jonas’ culture/society to our culture/society Our society ____________ (book’s) Society 5 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Week #1: Z-Chart 1. Title of fiction or nonfiction piece: Pages Read: ____ to ____ 2. List (summarize) and discuss (comment on) three to four most important (main) ideas/events from your reading. Elaborate. 3. Create a sketch that illustrates or represents a key idea, concept or theme from your reading, explain your illustration. 4. Choose one potent (powerful/meaningful) passage from the text and explain its significance (importance). Place page # you pulled it from, and who said it in parentheses at the end of the quotation. 5. On the back, write out a word you didn’t know, the sentence it was used it, it’s definition based on context clues, 6 and your own sentence using it correctly. NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Essential Book Questions: During Reading Write your answers to these questions on a separate sheet of folder paper. Write in complete sentences for full credit. Chapter 1 1. What do you think of Jonas’s community? What words might you use to describe it? Give reasons for your answers. 2. What rules and punishments are used in Jonas’s society? How does Jonas feel about the rules? 3. Why is Jonas so “careful about language”? How important is it to choose “just the right words” in our society? Explain your answer. 4. How would you feel if your family had “telling of feelings” after dinner every night? 5. What do you think happens when someone is released? Chapter 2 1. There are two instances of rule-breaking in this chapter. Consider each one. Do you feel the punishment was justified? Explain your reasoning. 2. Why were the rules “very hard to change”? 3. What is so important about the “ceremony of twelve”? 4. What kind of job do you think Jonas will get? Explain your reasoning. 5. If some older people in your community were to observe you, what job do you think they would give you and why? Chapter 3 1. To what extent are people all the same in this society? How are differences treated? 2. Why do you think mirrors were “rare”? 3. Why do you think the author uses four paragraphs in the beginning of this chapter to discuss the subject of pale eyes and ends the chapter with the same subject? 4. What is a “birthmother”? How is this different from the concept of mothering in our world? 5. What does the colorless shade of the tunics and the apple tell you about the people in this book? What do you think happened with the apple? Chapter 4 1. In what areas of life do the members of the community have free choice? What areas of their lives are tightly controlled? 2. Do you think the rule against bragging is a good one? Why or why not? 3. What advantages and disadvantages does Jonas see in the way he decides to spend his volunteer hours? 4. What similarities are there between the newchildren and the Old? 5. What do you think about release now? Chapter 5 1. What do you think of the morning “dream telling” ritual? 7 2. At one point, the clean-up of meals is referred to in this chapter. How do you think the meals are prepared and served? Explain the reasons why you think as you do. 3. Explain in your own words why Jonas must start taking a pill every day. What effect do you think the pills will have on him? 4. Why do you think “Stirrings” are treated with pills in this community? 5. Why are the rules always printed in capital letters? Chapter 6 1. What do you think of the pledge the family has to sign about Gabriel? Why, according to the narrator, would it have been sad if they had to release Gabriel? What do you think of this? 2. What is interdependence? 3. Does the community’s explanation of the difference between release and loss make sense to you? Explain your answer. 4. Draw a picture of one of the Ceremonies described in this chapter. 5. Do you think it would be possible in our world to have a match-making service with a 100% success rate like the one in the community? Why or why not? Chapter 7 1. What do you think about the ritual of thanking people -- for example for their feelings, their dreams, and their childhood? 2. If you were involved in the Ceremony of Twelve, what would you like most about it? What would you like least? 3. Do the assignments given out seem appropriate to you? Explain. 4. What does the story of Asher’s mistake at the age of three show you about the community 5. Why do you think the Chief Elder skips Jonas? Give as many possible reasons as you can. Chapter 8 1. What does Jonas notice that is unusual about The Receiver? What meaning do you find in this? 2. Ten years before, the Committee of Elders failed in their selection of a Receiver. What else happened ten years before? In what way might the two events be connected? Explain your thinking. 3. What do you think a Receiver of Memory might do? Do you know of any other cultures that had anyone who might have been called a Receiver of Memory? Explain your answer. 4. Jonas cannot understand how someone would have trouble fitting into his community – which achieves order by enforcing sameness. How does the sameness in the community also create unity? 5. Imagine that you are Jonas. What questions do you want to ask The Receiver when you meet him? Chapter 9 1. 2. 3. 4. How do people start to treat Jonas now that he is the new Receiver? What do you think might have happened to the female Receiver? Why is Jonas puzzled by the rules he was given for training? If the community believes that everyone must use precise language because it is important to be truthful in the society, what could be the reasons behind Jonas’s rules? 5. Do you think other members of the community might lie? Explain your thinking. 8 Chapter 10 1. What does Jonas find strange about the Receiver’s dwelling? 2. Why is The Giver allowed to have many books while the other members of the community are only allowed three? How are books and memory related? 3. How does The Receiver transmit memories to Jonas? 4. Why do you think Jonas doesn’t know what the words sled, snow, and downhill mean? 5. Why does Jonas have no concept of pain? How would your life be different if you had never experienced pain? Chapter 11 1. Why do you think Jonas must experience the memories rather than just hear about them? 2. Why do you think The Receiver was a little sad after the first day of training? 3. Why does The Giver say “to have memories is a burden”? How does it ease the burden of the Giver to transmit memories to Jonas. 4. Why do you think Jonas’s world eliminated sun, hills, and snow? 5. In what ways do we preserve memories in our society? Chapter 12 1. How does Jonas’s answer to his mother’s question about his sleep and dreams revel a change in him? 2. What do you imagine the change is that Jonas sees in Fiona’s hair and in the faces of the audience and the apple? 3. Why do you think people in the book do not see colors? How has the absence of color helped this society? How has it harmed it? 4. What do you think might be very different in the world if people had only one-generation memories? 5. At this point in the book, what are your feelings about Sameness in the community? Chapter 13 1. In Chapter 12, The Giver revealed that he agreed with Jonas about Sameness. Which of his statements in this chapter show his dislike of Sameness? Which statements seem to state the opposite view? Explain your answers. 2. How did you react to the section about elephants in this chapter? What do you think happened to all the elephants in the world/ 3. What do you think The Giver means when he says, “without the memories, it’s all meaningless”? Do you agree with him? Explain. 4. When children grow up into adults, what happens to their parents in Jonas’s world? Why? How do you feel about this arrangement? Explain. 5. What do you think the answers to Janas’s questions about Elsewhere? Chapter 14 1. How does The Giver help Jonas come to terms with the meaning of pain? How does Jonas change as he experiences more pain?. 9 2. Do you think it’s better to share sorrows or for each person to try and bear his/her own pain? Explain your answer. 3. Why do you think one of the set of identical twins is always released? 4. How did Jonas give Gabriel a memory? 5. Why do you think Jonas was able to transmit a memory to Gabriel when he couldn’t with Asher, Lily, or his father? Chapter 15 1. How is Jonas now a Giver? 2. How does Jonas help The Giver in this chapter? 3. How does this chapter affect your view of whether it is better to share memories or bear them alone? 4. Do you think The Giver needs to ask Jonas’s forgiveness? If you were Jonas, what would you have said in response to The Giver’s request for forgiveness? Why? 5. How do you think Jonas will feel about The Giver and his Assignment now? Chapter 16 1. How does Jonas learn of love? 2. What clues help you to infer what the unnamed celebration was? When were you certain? 3. Compare the treatment of the Old in the community to their treatment in the family scene Jonas receives as a memory. In your opinion, which shows more care and respect for the aged? Explain your thinking. 4. Do you agree with Jonas that living the way they did in the memory was dangerous? Why or why not? 5. What provokes Jonas’s first lie to his parents? 6. Why does Jonas need to learn the joy of being an individual (special, unique, and proud)? Chapter 17 1. How are Jonas’s feelings different from his family’s feelings? 2. How is Jonas’s reaction to the children’s game of war a turning point in Jonas’s experience? 3. What does father’s certainty about the birthday of the twins reveal about how births are handled in the community? 4. Everyone seems to accept the idea of releasing a twin simply because it’s a twin in a matter of fact way. How do you feel about this attitude? Chapter 18 1. 2. 3. 4. Who was Rosemary and what happened to her? Do you think she was brave or cowardly? Why? Contrast The Giver’s feelings for Jonas with Mother’s and Father’s feelings for Jonas. What do you think The Giver means when he says ,”Memories are forever”? What do you think The Giver is thinking about when the narrator says that he is “obviously thinking”? 5. Why is The Receiver’s job so important in the community? What should happen if The Receiver should die? 10 Chapter 19 1. What shocked Jonas when he viewed his father “releasing” one of the newborn twins? 2. When did you realize what the word “release” means? What clues helped you to come to that conclusion? 3. What did Jonas learn about the community’s prohibition (rule) against lying? 4. What do you think Jonas will do now? Chapter 20 1. What do you think The Giver means when he says, “They know nothing”? Do you agree? Explain. 2. Do you agree now with the statement that “memories need to be shared”? Explain why you do or do not? 3. Now what do you think pale eyes signify? Explain how you came to that conclusion. 4. How did The Giver and Jonas plan to change the society in the book? 5. Why did The Giver decide to stay behind to help the community? Do you think he made the right decision? Why or why not? Chapter 21 1. 2. 3. 4. Why does Jonas feel that he must leave earlier than planned? How do you feel about Father when he is so calm and sweet when he talks about Gabe’s release? What would have happened to Jonas and Gabe if the searchers caught them? Explain your answer. What do you think happened in the community the day that Jonas left? What do you think The Giver did? 5. Why do you think the planes stopped? Chapter 22 1. What new things, images, and feelings do Jonas and Gab experience in this chapter? 2. If Jonas and Gabriel starve, will their efforts have been worth it in your opinion? Explain your thinking. 3. Why does the book say, “he had made the wrong choice” and a few lines later say “there had not really been a choice”? How might you explain these contradictory statements? 4. What could have brought Jonas to the point where he could cry for Gabriel but not for himself? 5. What do you think will happen next? Chapter 23 1. Jonas has a feeling that Elsewhere is near, even though he has no solid evidence. Have you ever had a similar experience? Explain what happened. 2. How does the content of Jonas’s memories change as he approaches the summit of the hill? 3. What does it mean that Jonas found a memory of his own? 4. What questions did the author leave unanswered at the end of the book? 5. How did you interpret the end of this book? 11 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Directions: Fill in the multi-flow map below; in the left boxes place the causes that lead to the current way society is run (center box), and in the right fill in the effect that this society’s order has on it’s members Actions/events that caused this society to become the way it is Multi-Flow Map Effect that this has on members of the society Current state of The Giver’s society/culture 12 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Character Map Directions: A character Map is a thinking map, with a box for each main character in the story. Each character box lists the character’s name and a brief description of who they are. Lines are then drawn between the boxes to show how characters relate or are connected to one another. Above each connecting line, write the relationship between the characters (i.e. friends, siblings, etc.) 13 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ CHARACTER RENDERING Character Rendering: Chose one character from your book and draw a picture of what you think your character looks like based on direct textual evidence/quotes that explicitly describe your character’s physical appearance YOU MUST INCLUDE A MINIMUM OF 3 QUOTES WITH YOUR DRAWING TO RECEIVE FULL CREDIT QUOTES: 1) page #_____ QUOTE: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ EXPLANATION: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2) page #_____ QUOTE: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ EXPLANATION: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3) page #_____ QUOTE: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ EXPLANATION: _____________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14 CHARACTER RENDERING In the space below draw a picture of what you think the your character looks like 15 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Vocabulary: You must find 10 NEW vocabulary words (words you don’t know already) over the course of your reading & complete a vocabulary circle map for each. Don’t forget to write down the page # for each word, next to its original sentence. 1 . 2 16 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Vocabulary: You must find 10 NEW vocabulary words (words you don’t know already) over the course of your reading & complete a vocabulary circle map for each. Don’t forget to write down the page # for each word, next to its original sentence. 3 . 4 17 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Vocabulary: You must find 10 NEW vocabulary words (words you don’t know already) over the course of your reading & complete a vocabulary circle map for each. Don’t forget to write down the page # for each word, next to its original sentence. 5 . 6 18 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Vocabulary: You must find 20 NEW vocabulary words (words you don’t know already) over the course of your reading & complete a vocabulary circle map for each. Don’t forget to write down the page # for each word, next to its original sentence. 7 . 8 19 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Vocabulary: You must find 20 NEW vocabulary words (words you don’t know already) over the course of your reading & complete a vocabulary circle map for each. Don’t forget to write down the page # for each word, next to its original sentence. 9 . 10 20 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ THEMES: (reoccurring) message the author is attempting to communicate; the insight into life or the main message Theme Significance of this theme / specific message about this theme How this theme is represented/expressed in the story? Government Control Hope Love Friendship Isolation Trust Humanity/Inhumanity Survival Youth/Age Manipulation Freedom vs confinement Community Identity Loyalty 21 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ SYMBOLISM: items that represent or stand for something greater than themselves Symbol How and when it appears in the novel What it stands for or represents beyond itself? Explain. 22 NAME: _________________________ PERIOD ________ DATE _________ Character Facebook Page: ! "#$% &' ( )% &*+% , "- +. % % % % / "- +)% _____________________________ Create a Facebook Page for one of the tributes! Choose a character & write in the information (even draw a picture & have others write on his/her “wall”). Write something about yourself. Birthdate: Home District: Relationship Status: 24 ©2010 Tracee Orman 23 Assessment Form for Discussion Groups: Week #2 Your Name _________________________________________ Date ____________ Group member names ______________________________________________________________________________ Group Discussion Topic or Focus: _________________________________________________________________ Check the appropriate box; provide evidence/explanation. Yes No Sometimes Evidence/Explanation Everyone participates and shares in the discussion process. Communication is interactive. The group is supportive of its individual members. Group climate promotes friendliness. Group members often ask questions for clarification or elaboration. The group discussion stays on topic, or on directly related issues. The group is energetic and enthusiastic. Answer all of the following questions in complete sentences: What was the best thing about the way your group worked together? Why? What was one problem your group had? Why? How did you all work to solve that problem? What else might you have done? What specific questions for you have for improvement? 24 Assessment Form for Discussion Groups: Week #3 Your Name _________________________________________ Date ____________ Group member names ______________________________________________________________________________ Group Discussion Topic or Focus: _________________________________________________________________ Check the appropriate box; provide evidence/explanation. Yes No Sometimes Evidence/Explanation Everyone participates and shares in the discussion process. Communication is interactive. The group is supportive of its individual members. Group climate promotes friendliness. Group members often ask questions for clarification or elaboration. The group discussion stays on topic, or on directly related issues. The group is energetic and enthusiastic. Answer all of the following questions in complete sentences: What was the best thing about the way your group worked together? Why? What was one problem your group had? Why? How did you all work to solve that problem? What else might you have done? What specific questions for you have for improvement? 25 Assessment Form for Discussion Groups: Week #4 Your Name _________________________________________ Date ____________ Group member names ______________________________________________________________________________ Group Discussion Topic or Focus: _________________________________________________________________ Check the appropriate box; provide evidence/explanation. Yes No Sometimes Evidence/Explanation Everyone participates and shares in the discussion process. Communication is interactive. The group is supportive of its individual members. Group climate promotes friendliness. Group members often ask questions for clarification or elaboration. The group discussion stays on topic, or on directly related issues. The group is energetic and enthusiastic. Answer all of the following questions in complete sentences: What was the best thing about the way your group worked together? Why? What was one problem your group had? Why? How did you all work to solve that problem? What else might you have done? What specific questions for you have for improvement? 26 Assessment Form for Discussion Groups: Week #4 Your Name _________________________________________ Date ____________ Group member names ______________________________________________________________________________ Group Discussion Topic or Focus: _________________________________________________________________ Check the appropriate box; provide evidence/explanation. Yes No Sometimes Evidence/Explanation Everyone participates and shares in the discussion process. Communication is interactive. The group is supportive of its individual members. Group climate promotes friendliness. Group members often ask questions for clarification or elaboration. The group discussion stays on topic, or on directly related issues. The group is energetic and enthusiastic. Answer all of the following questions in complete sentences: What was the best thing about the way your group worked together? Why? What was one problem your group had? Why? How did you all work to solve that problem? What else might you have done? What specific questions for you have for improvement? 27 Double Bubble Map: Your final assessment for this unit will be to write an essay comparing & contrasting the character Harrison Bergeron to Jonas. In preparation for this essay, fill in the double bubble map below comparing and contrasting the two characters. Harrison Bergeron Jonas 28 Name:____________________ PERIOD:_______ Date:__________________ Writing Prompt- Compare & Contrast Essay Prompt: Compare & Contrast the character Harrison Bergeron to Jonas. Analyze their physical, emotional, intellectual, and social characteristics. What was the central goal or challenge is for each character, the eventual outcome for that goal or challenge? What theme was associated with each, and what moral lesson did each character teach? I) INTRODUCTION – introduce your characters + you MUST HAVE a THESIS: one-two sentence opinion statement that your ENTIRE paper will examine/explain. II) Describe your characters; explain who they are. Then compare and contrast your characters’ physical, emotional, intellectual, and social characteristics. (You may want to discuss each of these characteristics one at a time or discuss all of the things your characters have in common first and then all of the things they do not have in common next.) Physical: how to they look? Emotional: what do they feel strongly about? What agitates or disturbs them? Intellectual: how and what do they think about? Do they think deeply? Social: how do they interact with others? Are they aware of how he/she appears to others? III) What the central goal or challenge is for each of your characters? What is the eventual outcome for that goal or challenge for each character? Explain how they are different or similar, using supporting details from the text. IV) Finally explain the theme associated with each character, and the moral lesson that each character taught. Explain why you believe this about each character using supporting details from the text. What are similarities and differences between the themes/morals that your characters taught? V) CONCLUSION – Don't simply repeat things that were in your paper or your introduction. Answer the question "So What?" Show your readers why your paper was important. Show them that your paper is meaningful, insightful, useful. Explain what you have learned about yourself, (or about people or life) from analyzing your characters and reading your novel. On your rough draft you should write legibly & skip lines. You must use complete sentences. You must write focused paragraphs. Underline your thesis statement. Show, don’t tell. Use at least THREE SPECIFIC EXAMPLES to support your point. Do not write a plot summary. Before turning in your final draft CHECK YOUR WORK for clarity, grammar, mistakes, etc. *You must complete a double-bubble thinking map before you can move on & write your essay. Make an Outline: I. INTRODUCTION a. Broad Statement/hook: _____________________________________________________________ b. Narrow your focus c. THESIS: (one-two sentence opinion statement that your ENTIRE paper will examine/explain.) ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ II. BODY ¶ 1: CHARACTER DESCRIPTION (TOPIC SENTENCE) _______________________________ 29 ________________________________________________________________________________ a. ARGUMENT _____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ b. EVIDENCE ______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ c. EXPLINATION OF EVIDENCE ______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ d. TRANSITION SENTENCE __________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ III. BODY ¶ 2: CENTRAL GOALS/CHALLENGES (TOPIC SENTENCE) ___________________________ a. ARGUMENT _____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ b. EVIDENCE ______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ c. EXPLINATION OF EVIDENCE ______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ d. TRANSITION SENTENCE __________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ IV. BODY ¶ 3: THEME/MORAL LESSON (TOPIC SENTENCE) __________________________________ a. ARGUMENT _____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ b. EVIDENCE ______________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ c. EXPLINATION OF EVIDENCE ______________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ d. TRANSITION SENTENCE __________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ V. CONSLUSION – Wrap it up; bring it all together. Don't simply repeat things that were in your paper or your introduction. Answer the question "So What?" Show your reader why your argument is important. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________ 30 Essay Rubric 4 Advanced Writer (A) / (Exceeds) Paper Formatting Thesis Clearly answers all parts of question: -Characteristics -central goal/challenge -theme/moral lesson SUPPORTS Inference/ connection Answers in complete sentences & complete ¶s 3 Engaging Writer (B) / (Proficient) 2 Developing Writer (C) / (Approaching) 1 Emerging Writer (D/F) / (Novice/No Progress) Typed, 12 pt Times New Roman Font, 1.5 spacing, header, submitted to turnitin.com Very strong, clear, highlighted thesis that presents argument Explanation is exceptionally clear and insightful. engaging and meaningful explanations and insights No formatting errors 1-2 formatting issues Didn’t type/illegible handwriting Strong, clear highlighted thesis Developing Weak or unfocused Very weak thesis, or no thesis present The explanation is clear and plausible. The explanation either lacks depth or contains occasional flaws /inaccuracies that weaken the response. Response is flawed / difficult to follow (vague / illogical) Struggles or fails to explain the components, characters, and meaning of the text Offers many examples and 3 or more excellent cited quotes that support Provides examples to argument (explains examples) Draws insightful inferences by moving beyond selection Makes attempts to support with 2 cited quotes Contains some details but they are general rather than specific Bases inferences on the obvious Answers in clear, complete sentences, using varying sentence structure. Complete ¶s The response contains sufficient detail, offers a minimum of 3 cited quotes to support argument (explains argument) Draws inferences upon connections in the selection Answered in clear complete sentences &¶ Sometimes answered in complete sentences; many are choppy; haphazard ¶s 1 or no quotes given Struggles or fails to support argument little to no detail Identifies author’s ideas literally Draws unclear inferences Rarely answers in or struggles to write complete sentences Not written in ¶s • RL & RI.9-10.1. Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text. • W.9-10.1. Write arguments to support claims in an analysis of substantive topics or texts, using valid reasoning and relevant and sufficient evidence. Introduce precise claim(s), distinguish the claim(s) from alternate or opposing claims, and create an organization that establishes clear relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, reasons, and evidence. Develop claim(s) and counterclaims fairly, supplying evidence for each while pointing out the strengths and limitations of both in a manner that anticipates the audience’s knowledge level and concerns. Use words, phrases, and clauses to link the major sections of the text, create cohesion, and clarify the relationships between claim(s) and reasons, between reasons and evidence, and between claim(s) and counterclaims. Establish and maintain a formal style and objective tone while attending to the norms and conventions of the discipline in which they are writing. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument presented. 31