Peer Pressure, Peer Power: Toward Systematic Collaborative Peer Review in the Composition and Writing Across the Curriculum Classroom Andrea L. Beaudin, Instructor Steven J. Corbett, Ph.D., Co-Director, Composition Program Ilene W. Crawford, Ph.D., Co-Director, Composition Program Department of English, Southern Connecticut State University Theory and Process–by Dr. Steven J. Corbett At Southern Connecticut State University, New Haven, the Composition Program aligns itself closely with the Writing Across the Curriculum Program. Together we work to help faculty provide the best possible instruction in writing to students across the disciplines. One of our most successful initiatives has been in our attention to the practice of peer review and response. What Is Peer Review and Why Do It? Peer review is more than just having students read and comment on each other’s papers. The idea of peer review extends into what academics do—to the idea of disciplinarity. We research and write. Then we submit our writing to “peer reviewers” who comment on our essays in different ways, and either accept or reject our attempts at publication. I believe that for students, we should think of peer review in similar ways. Peer review can be “sold” to students for what it really is—the process through which academic writing and communication gets done. Peer review can get the power of student-student/student-teacher reciprocal teaching and learning moving full steam ahead. Rather than having the teacher play the role of all-wise, all-knowing, systematic collaborative peer review can send a loud and clear message to students that they have much to teach as well as learn—that the processes of teaching and learning go together quite well and make each other, and everyone involved, much stronger. By conducting peer review in a systematic and collaborative way—by making it central to our curriculum—students and teachers can learn to internalize the writing strategies and moves they wish to continue using and developing (and avoid less-desired strategies and moves) so they can externalize these writing techniques in other composing and communicative situations. (See Appendix for a brief literature review.) Peer Pressure, Peer Power | Some Things to Consider The huge variety of ways/methods of peer review I think the way to approach peer review (as with most teaching) is with an experimental attitude. Start having students read and comment on each other’s papers, and soon you will begin to make adjustments that suit your—and your students’—needs and desires. There is much choice involved in the art of systematic collaborative peer review. For example, two things I have experimented with successfully over the years are: 1) Inviting peer tutors from the writing center into the classroom to help facilitate peer response. Students can learn to analyze peer writing, and consequently their own writing better if knowledgeable peers (tutors) circulate among the groups during writing workshops. Tutors can help the instructor listen for how the students talk to each other about their writing and can offer advice or strategies for communicating ideas as productively and helpfully as possible. This can also help build rapport with your campus writing center(s), tutors, instructors, and students. 2) We play a little in-class game called 7-UP. In this game students read 7 of their peers’ papers. They then rank them from strongest to weakest. Then they come into class and write their #1 choice on the board. As a class we take the top 2-3 papers and, with the writers’ permission, project them on a screen and discuss and critique together as a class. Sometimes we even go one step further and start with already-peer-reviewed papers. That way, students are studying and critiquing models of strong peer reviews. With this method, both the reviewers and the writers can discuss the process aloud for everyone’s benefit. How to form groups/partners An important initial choice involves how to form groups. Experts debate on the optimal size of groups, but a good working group should be between 3-5 students. Again, you can experiment with groups of 2, 3, 5. (I usually have them work in groups of 3 and sometimes 2; groups of 5 might only be used for shorter papers.) Groups should be formed early in the term. Experiment a little with how you form groups. For example: 1) You can have students initially form their own groups. They will typically gravitate toward folks sitting close by. 2) You can form groups after, perhaps, seeing writing samples from your students. 3) Or you can do a combination of the two above: have them initially form their own groups, then mix them up from time to time depending on the task. Group members should exchange contact information. These group partnerships can also be utilized for other collaborative learning endeavors and projects. | Peer Pressure, Peer Power How to give comments/feedback You will want to explore and develop the many ways students can give each other feedback. Do you want to have students give feedback during class or out of class? Do you want students to talk about their essays before giving written feedback or after? How much conversation should be included in peer review? (For example, having the reviewer read the essay and supply verbal suggestions while the reviewee writes commentary can work quite well.) Should commentary be hand-written or digital/typed? I usually have students peer review papers first. Then I have them rewrite their papers. Then they submit these second drafts to me for my commentary (along with a little note describing what they’ve done and what they’d like me to look out for). You can even comment on the same review as one or more of the writer’s partners if you use different fonts or especially colors. This can create an on-thepage dialogue that can be very useful overall. How to train students Importantly, students must be provided with ongoing, iterated training in peer review. Experts encourage students to focus on higher-order concerns (HOCs) like claim, structure, and evidence first in early drafts and later-order concerns (LOCs) like grammar and spelling in later more final drafts. It is also a good idea to encourage a mix of praise and constructive criticism. Many students feel they don’t have the authority or expertise to give constructive criticism. But ALL students can be taught the value of giving substantial, detailed, and specific analytic praise to work they feel they have nothing to “criticize.” After providing detailed summary and analysis of what works well in their peers’ papers—repeatedly—sooner or later weaker writers will begin to incorporate some of those same moves into their own writing. Students can also be given a rubric, perhaps the same rubric you will use for assessing their writing, so everyone can be on the same page as far as expectations. How to assess You will need to develop methods of assessing peer review in order for students to truly take it seriously. In my writing courses, peer review counts as 20% of their overall grade. Assessment (as all good assessment should) then becomes integral to how you are training students to tutor each other with their writing and writing processes. 1) Students should also be well-aware of the course goals and objectives, how they relate to what they are writing, and how they can work in the language of the course goals and objectives into their reviews. If you are using a rubric for peer review, make sure they closely reflect these goals and objectives. 2) A good way to get students involved in this assessment is to have them write about the process, including their own and their reviewers’ performances. I have students write two formal letters to me— one closer to the midterm, one towards the final—that detail how they think the overall process is working. Teaching while Learning Finally, peer review is a truly reciprocal learning experience—we will learn as much if not more than our students. We can learn to be better responders to student writing. We can learn to be better at, and perhaps conduct more frequent, one-to-one conferences. We can learn the value of multi-draft or portfolio writing instruction. And we can learn just how much students have to teach (and learn from) us and one another. Peer Pressure, Peer Power | Appendix At the 2009 Conference on College Composition and Communication in San Francisco, Chris Anson presented on “The Current Nature of Response to Student Writing: Results from a National Survey of 23,000 Students.” This study shared “large-scale and situated analyses of the state of the art in response practices today across a variety of settings and considered how current theoretical developments in understanding discourse, learning, and pedagogy might reshape our understanding of response.” Informed by this and other studies, Anson and his colleagues argued that there are two things writing programs and instructors need to focus on to strengthen student engagement and success in writing courses: 1. Systematic collaborative peer review; and 2. Interactions with peer tutors. Much has been written on the value—both pros and cons—of collaborative peer review and response (CPRR) in the writing classroom since Kenneth Bruffee’s first edition of A Short Course in Writing in 1972 (see, for example, Elbow; George; Newkirk; Grimm; Gere; Spear; Holt; Bishop; Harris; Cazden; Murphy; Belcher; Spigelman and Grobman; Moss, Highberg, and Nicolas; Corbett, “Bringing the Noise,” “The Role of the Emissary”; Corbett and Guerra; Corbett and LaFrance). At SCSU we seek to provide new and experienced teaching assistants and instructors, writing center personnel, and WAC personnel with workshops for CPRR where we engage with: information on the variety of ways/methods of designing and conducting peer review; how to form groups/partners; various ways to give comments/feedback; how to train students (including how to get students to take CPRR seriously); how to assess student performance; and, importantly, how, when, and why to engage in this pedagogical endeavor. Over the past forty years, scholars have written on how CPRR can get the resuscitating power of student-student and student-teacher reciprocal teaching and learning moving full steam ahead. In the late 1960s Bruffee came upon the work of William Schwartz, who was moving away from the predominantly individual, one-to-one model of social work in the ‘60s and ‘70s, to a model focusing on “the social worker as a mediator interacting with small groups” (Trimbur and Kail xxiii). This interest in small group mutual aid led to his first edition of A Short Course in Writing in 1972. Anne Ruggles Gere, in her influential 1987 monograph, linked Vygotsky’s zone of proximal development theory to the history and implications of writing groups outside and inside the classroom. Gere claimed that close in-class collaborations between students and teachers and students and each other allow each to explore how the authority of the individual can coexist with the authority of consensus. Students become empowered as their communication apprehensions are loosened, while “they discover new capacities in themselves as they collaborate” (64). Students learn together the meta-language that brings them closer to understanding how academic communication is dialogically constructed. Rather than having the teacher play the role of all-wise, all-knowing, systematic CPRR can send a loud and clear message to students that they have much to teach as well as learn—that the processes of teaching and learning go together quite well and make each other, and everyone involved, much stronger. By conducting CPRR in a systematic and collaborative way—by making it central to our curriculum—students and teachers can learn to internalize the writing strategies and moves they wish to continue using and developing (and avoid less-desired strategies and moves) so they can externalize these writing techniques in other composing, pedagogical, and communicative situations (Vygotsky; Burke, 311; Bruffee, Collaborative Learning). But others have questioned this somewhat pretty picture of CPRR. Donald Stewart, drawing on Isabel Briggs Myers, pointed out that people with different personality types will have more trouble collab | Peer Pressure, Peer Power orating well with each other. In “Collaboration Is Not Collaboration Is Not Collaboration” Harris, focusing more on issues like experience and confidence rather than personality types (although there may be a connection), compares peer response groups and one-to-one peer tutoring (also see Belcher, 108-9, for comparisons to student-teacher conferences). She explains how one-to-one tutoring at a writing center offers the kind of individualized, nonjudgmental focus lacking in the classroom, and how peer response is done “in the context of course guidelines” in the classroom with practice in working with a variety of reviewers (381). But she also raises some concerns, especially pertinent to CPRR. One problem involves how students might evaluate each other’s writing with a different set of standards than their teachers: “Students may likely be reinforcing each other’s abilities to write discourse for their peers, not for the academy—a sticky problem indeed, especially when teachers suggest that an appropriate audience for a particular paper might be the class itself” (379). Obviously, the issue here is student authority and trust. Further, many students new to peer response, or others who have tried it with little success in the past, may discount CPPR altogether. Since students have not been trained in the arts of peer response, how, then, can they be expected to give adequate response when put into groups, especially if the student is a first-year or an otherwise inexperienced academic writer? How can students reap the benefits of both individualized and small-group CPRR? Writing programs like the ones at Penn State, Berks, and the University of Washington, Seattle, among many others, have answered Wendy Bishop’s 1988 call to be “willing to experiment” (124) with CPRR group work. Practitioners have experienced first-hand the substantial collaborative value(s) CPRR can inspire in their pedagogies, in the learning growth and development of their students. Still, student anxiety around issues of plagiarism and autonomous originality can be hard to dispel. Spigelman suggests that students need to know how the collaborative generation of ideas differs from plagiarism. If students can understand how and why authors share and appropriate ideas, they may be more willing to experiment with more collaborative writing practices. Drawing on the work of Andrea Lunsford, she concludes that “if we want our students to experience nonhierarchical forms of learning, we will need to make explicit what is at stake in this effort” (204; also see Cazden 131-4). But can this explicit meta-awareness in itself really help mitigate the deep socio-cultural force of student desire and dependence on teacher—rather than peer—authority? Spigelman’s own accounts, as well as the accounts of the scholars above, suggest that it is no easy job to work toward restructuring authority and trust in the writing classroom. How can we, and why should we, make CPRR a central— even the central—part of our teaching (and learning) in the writing classroom? Sample Syllabus and Guidelines for Using MS Word for Peer Review– by Dr. Ilene W. Crawford Peer Pressure, Peer Power | Crawford spring 2006 ENG 112 course sched/1 English 112.37 Course Schedule We meet TR 11-12:15 in EN A 109. The following schedule is subject to change. It is your responsibility to keep track of all announced changes. Additional readings will be assigned as the direction of your portfolio essays warrant. You will also conduct independent research for your portfolio essays. EA= Everything’s an Argument EW=The Everyday Writer NYT=The New York Times USE=Using Sources Effectively VE=Visual Exercises CD-ROM Week Da Date Schedule One T 1/24 Introductions and prerequisite check; syllabus overview; introduce NYT online; Discuss VE Elements & Contrast. FOR NEXT TIME: R 1/26 Collect syllabus p. 8; Discuss EA Ch 1; Introduce webblog; Discuss VE Text & Purpose. FOR NEXT TIME: T 1/31 Discuss EA Chs 2,15; assign Visual Argument Analysis Essay; Discuss VE Audience & Framing. FOR NEXT TIME: R 2/2 Discuss EA Ch 3; Discuss VE Alignment; Planning and drafting the Visual Argument Analysis Essay FOR NEXT TIME: T 2/7 Discuss EA Ch 4; Discuss VE Context; Planning and drafting the Visual Argument Analysis Essay FOR NEXT TIME: R 2/9 Discuss EA Ch 5; Discuss VE Emphasis & Color; Planning and drafting the Visual Argument Analysis Essay FOR NEXT TIME: T 2/14 Discuss EA Ch 6; Discuss VE Proximity; Planning and drafting the Visual Argument Analysis Essay FOR NEXT TIME: R 2/16 Discuss EA Ch 7; Discuss VE Organization; Planning and drafting the Visual Argument Analysis Essay FOR NEXT TIME: Two Three Four | Peer Pressure, Peer Power Crawford spring 2006 ENG 112 course sched/2 Five Six Seven Eight Nine Ten Eleven Twelve T 2/21 Discuss EA Chpt 8; Discuss VE Sequence; Planning and drafting the Visual Argument Analysis Essay FOR NEXT TIME: R 2/23 Using Microsoft Word’s Comment feature for Workshop Assessments; Assign Self-Evaluation Essay FOR NEXT TIME: T 2/28 Visual Argument Analysis Workshop: __________ and __________; Discuss EW ___ FOR NEXT TIME: R 3/2 Visual Argument Analysis Workshop: __________ and __________; Discuss EW___ FOR NEXT TIME: T 3/7 Visual Argument Analysis Workshop: __________ and __________; Discuss EW ___ FOR NEXT TIME: R 3/9 Visual Argument Analysis Workshop: __________ and __________; Discuss EW ___ FOR NEXT TIME: T 3/14 Visual Argument Analysis Workshop: __________ and __________; Discuss EW ___ FOR NEXT TIME: R 3/16 T R T R 3/21 3/23 3/28 3/30 T 4/4 Midterm Portfolio due: add Visual Exercises assignments, drafts, and final copy of Visual Argument Analysis Essay; add first draft of Self-Evaluation Essay No Class—Spring Break No Class—Spring Break TBA EA Ch 13; Assign Humorous Argument Essay FOR NEXT TIME: EA Ch 20; USE 1, 2 FOR NEXT TIME: R 4/6 EA Ch 21; USE 3, 4 FOR NEXT TIME: T 4/11 EA Ch 22; USE 5 FOR NEXT TIME: Peer Pressure, Peer Power | Crawford spring 2006 ENG 112 course sched/3 Thirteen Fourtee n Fifteen Sixteen R 4/13 EA Ch 18; USE 6 FOR NEXT TIME: T 4/18 EA Ch 19; Humorous Argument Essay Workshop: __________ and ____________ FOR NEXT TIME: R 4/20 Humorous Argument Essay Workshop: __________ and __________ Discuss EW ___ FOR NEXT TIME: T 4/25 Humorous Argument Essay Workshop: __________ and __________ Discuss EW ___ FOR NEXT TIME: R 4/27 Humorous Argument Essay Workshop: __________ and __________ Discuss EW ___ FOR NEXT TIME: T 5/2 Workshop: __________ and __________ Discuss EW ___ FOR NEXT TIME: R 5/4 T 5/16 Final Portfolio due: add research notes, drafts, and final copies of your Argument Analysis Essay, Humorous Argument Essay, and your Self-Evaluation Essay; complete written course evaluations. 10:15am-12:15pm Final Exam session* There is no final exam for ENG 112.37. Students may make an appointment for a final portfolio conference during the final exam session. Final conferences will be in EN D263. | Peer Pressure, Peer Power English 112.37 Composition II Southern Connecticut State University Spring 2006 Dr. Crawford Using the Comment feature in Word (version 1997-2003) 1.Open Word and the document you want to comment on—your partner’s draft. 2.Copy the document and save it as “[writer’s][name of essay] with [assessor’s] comments.” 3.Close the original file and work in the duplicated file. 4.When you are ready to make a comment, put your cursor on the point in the text you wish to comment on. 5.Click on the “Insert” tab at the top of the screen and select “Comment.” 6. Then type your comment. 7.You can click the bubble again to add to your comment. 8.You can click “Edit” then “Undo add comment” to erase a comment. 9.Repeat 4-9 as many times as needed to address the questions that follow: Assessing your classmate’s drafts with the Comment feature in Word Read the entire essay, then make specific comments on the following: 1.Does the introduction explain where/when the image originated, who its audience was, and what its purpose was? What context do you still need? 2.Does the introduction end with a thesis statement? How could it be better? 3.Assess the writer’s ability to use the concepts from Visual Exercises and Everything’s an Argument. Are they using the VE terms to explain how the different elements of the image make an argument? Are they using the concepts from EA to explain the appeals the image is using to make its argument? To identify the warrants the image’s argument relies on? Where could they? How? 4.Where are you lost or confused as a writer? 5.What are the best parts of this essay and why? Note the specific places where you feel the draft is very effective for you as a reader and explain why. 6.Assess the argument structure of the essay—does the thesis make a specific argument? Are there point sentences (making a claim) instead of topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph? How could the writer improve the argument structure? 7.Assess the relationship of point to particulars in each paragraph. Does each paragraph have a point sentence (making a claim)? Do the particulars in the paragraph support that point? What does not seem to belong? What evidence is missing? Type your comment in the box that appears. When you are done, just move your cursor to a new place in the text, and your comment will remain. [IWC 1/15/2006] REMEMBER—the thesis of this essay should assert how the elements of the image come together to make an argument. The thesis SHOULD NOT assert whether you agree or disagree with the argument the image makes. [IWC 1/15/2006] “I’m not sure what you mean by____” or “I feel confused here because” or “I need you to explain ___ __ for this to make sense to me” are all readerly ways you can address #5. [IWC 1/15/2006] Each workshopped draft you do will be graded check plus, check, or check minus. You will benefit from comments you receive. The process of giving comments will also teach you how to read your own paper critically and revise it. Save and print two copies of the document with your comments on it—one for your reader and another for me. You can see Ms. Stephens and/or me with your draft in office hours for additional feedback. Peer Pressure, Peer Power | English 110.05 & 06 Mind the Gap: Easing the Transition from High School to College Southern Connecticut State University Fall 2006 Dr. Crawford Assessing Workshop Drafts Using the Comment Feature in Word (1997-2003 version) I. Set-up/instructions for using Comment 1.When you open your classmates’ drafts as email attachments, save them to your flashdrive immediately. Under the “file” tab in Word, choose the “save as” option and label each draft like this: “workshop draft Informative Essay [name] [date]”. 2.When you are ready to make a comment, put your cursor on the point in the text you wish to comment on. (You can also highlight an entire sentence or paragraph). 3.Click on the “Insert” tab at the top of the screen and select “Comment.” 4. 5.You can click the bubble again to add to your comment. 6.You can click “Edit” then “Undo add comment” to erase a comment. 7.Repeat 4-9 as many times as needed to address the questions that follow: II. How to respond to your classmates’ drafts: Read the entire essay first and then make specific Comments on the following: 1.Does the introduction provide you with a focused overview that leads to a main claim expressed as a strong thesis? Why or why not? How could it? 2.Assess the argument structure of the essay—do you see a series of subclaims that add up to prove the main claim? Are the first sentences of each paragraph point sentences instead of topic sentences? Why or why not? How could the writer improve the argument structure? 3.Assess the relationship of point to particulars in each paragraph. Does each paragraph have a point sentence? Do the particulars in the paragraph support that point? What does not seem to belong? What evidence is missing? 4.Assess the writer’s ability to use sources. Is the writer showing the sources they cite by quoting from class readings, interviews, journals, etc.? Is the writer introducing quotes with an attributive tag/signal phrase, providing an in-text parenthetical citation when necessary, providing complete source information in a Works Cited page? Identify specific places where the writer still needs to do so. 5.What are the best parts of this essay and why? Note the specific places where you feel the draft is very effective for you as a reader. What persuades you and why? This is a graded assignment. You will be assessed on how accurately you can identify and communicate what is working in the draft, what needs improvement, and how to make those improvements. Print two copies of each Commented-on draft—one for your reader and another for me. 10 | Peer Pressure, Peer Power Type your comment in the box that appears. When you are done, just move your cursor to a new place in the text, and your comment will remain. [IWC 9/1/2006] Remember, there is a difference between a thesis and a strong thesis. [IWC 9/1/2006] If the thesis is not strong, how could it be? If the paragraphs do not have point sentences, what could they be? [IWC 9/1/2006] If the particulars or evidence given in the paragraph do not support the point sentence, what more effective evidence could the writer use? Does the evidence support a different sublclaim? 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