NAME: ____________________________________________________________ Rubric 95% 85% 75% 65% 55% Newspaper as a Whole Excellent; Creative title, follows newspaper format; thorough, mature, original, intelligent layout;1930s Strong; Creative title, follows newspaper format; good articles; strong-good layout; 1930s feel; creative title(s); is Good; good title, follows newspaper format; good layout; attempt at 1930s feel; good titles; need to show more understanding Of Mice and Men and/or Cinderella Man; Little organization; Missing creative title(s), articles, and/or other parts; below level of what is expected for a 9th grade English class Lacking outline and form; lacks basic requirements; difficult to follow at some or all parts; not acceptable Little evidence to show understanding of task; perhaps missing a requirement and/or fails to go beyond simply rewriting stories; Articles need work Does not demonstrate understand of the task; missing major parts that are required; not acceptable newspaper feel/voice; creative/appropriate titles; thoughtth out, and appropriate for a 9 grade English class; exceeds the minimum expectation Articles Thorough, mature, original, intelligent understanding of task; exceptional knowledge of book/movie that is relevant; goes beyond plot to stretch story in a realistic way; contain best/excellent evidence (quotes woven into sentences); tells an informative, well written story; clearly addresses 5w’s; appropriate and meaning pictures included; isn’t over/under appropriate for a 9th grade English class; goes a bit beyond the minimum expectation appropriate for a 9th grade English class Good, thoughtful understanding of task; overall 1930s feel/voice; Rudimentary understanding of task; good articles that perhaps are too demonstrates knowledge of simplistic and/or rely solely book/movie that is sufficient on plot from book/movieneed to add intelligent and relevant; contain good, supplemental thoughts; solid evidence (quotes good pictures; while good woven); tells informative points, work can be done story; addresses 5w’s; to improve articles appropriate and meaning pictures; isn’t over/under developed developed Obituaries/ Advts. Appropriate and mature tone for an obituary; uniquely creative yet factual; doesn’t just retell stories; includes next of kin/ arrangements; isn’t over developed or underdeveloped; ads show understanding and research of 1930s Appropriate tone for an obituary; creative yet factual; doesn’t just retell stories; includes next of kin/arrangements; isn’t over developed or underdeveloped; ads show understanding and research of 1930s Not fully developed ideas; perhaps one or more: under developed, does not have appropriate tone, repetitive with no new information, off topic, irrelevant ads Leaves reader with questions Few details; missing basic elements; perhaps: begins idea but doesn’t finish; fails to go beyond rewriting stories Does not demonstrate understand of the task; missing major parts that are required; not acceptable Conventions No errors; excellent handle of grammar and usage; no spelling, punct errors; uses level-app and time period app vocab, takes risks but is not verbose; clearly proofread; includes authors Errors are minimal; good handle of grammar, spelling, and usage; perhaps could work on punct errors/proofreading; avoids simplistic words (ex:good, bad) Some/Many errors in spelling, punct, grammar and/or usage; needs to improve proofreading; at times paper might be difficult to follow SEVERAL errors that make the paper difficult to read and/or follow at times MANY errors QUOTES 1) Quotes should be woven into your own sentences Ex: Crook’s inability to “control his delight” in having Lennie in his room proves….(48). When Lennie repeats the idea that they will “ ‘live off the fatta the land,’” the reader can clearly see that….(48). 2) Quotes should not be any longer than 2 lines long. OTHER POINTS: Transitional phrases should connect body paragraphs and transitional words should be used within body paragraphs. Your topic sentences should not be the exact same words as used in your thesis.