Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Comparative Writing (Bridge I) (with adaptations for Bridge Prep-BP) FastTRAC Bridge Project Designer: George Schooley Page Contents 1 Table of Contents 2 Module Planning Map (Bridge I) 3-4 Module Benchmarks (Bridge I) 5-6 Module Overview (Bridge I) 7-8 9 Daily Planning Calendar (Bridge I) Daily Planning Calendar (Bridge Prep) George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 1 Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Unit Plan Comparative Writing (Bridge I) Activity Product 3 *Do as many follow up exercises from textbook as you Activity Product 4 deem necessary to* Distribute pictures review this form. of a department from Activity Product 2 *Make Venn Diagram comparing two sports and use that to make sentences using comparative. Section Product the workplace showing employees from now and from a few years 1 beforehand to create discussion of changes. *Students will use comparative forms Activity Product 1 to describe before * Use article in Grammar and after graphs in Context , p. 344, to from their review comparatives. Have Ss compare workplace. Activity Product 5 * Distribute graphs of a department’s production now and from a few years beforehand to create discussion of changes. Activity Product 2 *Given a compare/ contrast prompt, students use a graphic organizer for pre-writing and Activity Product 3 Activity Product 2 Activity Product 1 * Given a compare/ write a 4-5 Activity Product 1 * Students list what *Students will paragraph essay. contrast prompt, Ss they like better about * Have students make review a list of create a graphic one workplace over a Venn Diagram to common compare/ organizer, fill it in describe differences another and what contrast prompts and similarities with pre-writing they like less about found on GED Section Product 2 the between two Section Product 3 ideas, and write a other workplace. practice writing workplaces they Final Product: *High: Students write 4-5 paragraph *Students will choose. tests. report in essay format *Students will write a essay. individually write and explaining why they like five paragraph essay edit their own GED one workplace over based on GED testing practice writing test another. Low: Students using the prompt write a paragraph models using a compare chosen in previous explaining why they like contrast testing one workplace over Activity product. American football to Soccer. another. George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 prompt/question. 2 Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Module Benchmarks for Comparative Writing (Bridge I) SCANS Skill Focus: Final Module Product (Description): Students will write a five paragraph essay responding to a test prompt to practice GED essay test taking skills and will use comparative forms to complete the practice test. GED Benchmarks (Content & Strategies) in bold. Section Product: Reading Conversation Writing Work/Soft Skills Technology *Grammar Focus Learners will produce… *Grammar Focus *Grammar Focus Students will use Students will read Students will discuss Students will analyze Students will read comparative forms to an article differences and and interpret graphs graphs to identify describe before and comparing sports changes in from their workplace. changes and trends in after pictures and graphs in their countries demographics and the workplace. Students will use from their workplace. to those of the production at their comparative and USA. workplace. superlative forms to Students will Students will discuss compare photos and identify trends they see in graphs. comparative forms practice graphs from in article and a GED textbook. analyze how they are used. Students will write a Students will read Students will discuss Students will write Students will identify paragraph describing and edit each workplaces from paragraphs good manufacturing comparing their other’s essays. their past and comparing their or production workplace to another compare them to workplace to another. practices in the based on their interests their current workplace. as in their previous workplace. workplace or a workplace in their country of origin. George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 3 Section Product: Reading Conversation Learners will produce… *Grammar Focus *Grammar Focus Student will review Students will read Students will use various GED practice test prompts comparatives to writing prompts to make identifying key address prompt. up their own to answer elements to in a five paragraph address. essay. George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Work/Soft Skills Technology Writing *Grammar Focus Students will make a Students will identify plan using an idea and use test taking graphic to address strategies in writing test prompt. and essay tests. Students will write an essay answering test prompt using intro., main idea, supporting details and conclusion. 4 Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Learning Module Overview (Bridge I) Module Title: Comparative Writing CASAS or TABE Forn/Level: Adv. ESL/Inter. ABE Module Duration: _______ SCANS Skill Focus: ____________________________________________________________________ Section Product 1 (S1) Description: Students will use comparative forms to describe before and after graphs from their workplace. Materials: Comparing Graphs Worksheet (S1) Materials Grammar Practice: Comparatives (S1-A1, A3)Grammar in Context, pp. 344-350 The Sport of Comparing (S1-A2) –Bridge I & Low Before and After Photos (S1-A4) Activity Product 1 (S1-A1) Activity Product 2 (S1-A2) Activity Product 3 (S1-A3) Use article in Grammar in Make Venn Diagram comparing Do as many follow up exercises Context , p. 344, to review two sports and use that to make from textbook as you deem comparatives. Have Ss compare sentences using comparative. necessary to review this form. American football to Soccer. Activity Product 4 (S1-A4) Activity Product 5 (S1-A5) Activity Product 6 (S1-A6) Distribute pictures of a department from the workplace showing employees from now and from a few years beforehand FY11 On-Time Shipments to to create discussion of changes. Distribute graphs of a department’s production now and from the previous year to create discussion of changes. Hospitals Graph (S1-A5a) FY10 On-Time Shipments to Hospitals Graph (S1-A5b) Comparing Graphs Worksheet (S1) Section Product 2 (S2) Materials Description: Comparing Workplaces High: Students will write report (S2-A1) Bridge I & Low in essay format (with Comparing Workplaces introduction, details, & conclusion) explaining why they Details (S2-A2) Activity Product 1 (S2-A1) Activity Product 2 (S2-A2) Activity Product 3 (S2-A3) Have students make a Venn Diagram to describe differences and similarities between two workplaces they choose. like one workplace over another. Comparing Workplaces Activity Low: Students write a paragraph Writing (S3) Bridge I & Low (with a topic sentence) explaining why they like one workplace over another. Product 4 (S2-A4) Activity Product 5 (S2-A5) Activity Product 6 (S2-A6) Materials: Comparing Workplaces Writing (S3) Bridge I & Low George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 Students list what they like better about one workplace over another and what they like less about the other workplace. 5 Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Section Product 3 (S3) Description: Students will individually write and edit their own GED practice writing test using the prompt chosen in previous Activity product. Materials Practice Writing an Essay Part I (S3-A2) Practice Writing an Essay Part I (S3-A3) Activity Product 4 S3-A1) Activity Product 5 (S3-A2) Activity Product 6 (S3-A3) Students will review a list of Given a common common compare/contrast prompts compare/contrast prompt, found on GED practice writing tests. students will use a graphic Given a common compare/contrast prompt, students will create a graphic organizer for pre-writing and then organizer, fill it in with their prewrite a 4-5 paragraph essay. writing ideas, and write a 4-5 paragraph essay. Materials: NA Activity Product 4 (S3-A4) Activity Product 5 (S3-A5) Activity Product 6 (S3-A6) Final Product (FP) Materials Students will write a five GED Practice Writing, Composition Test (FP) paragraph essay based on GED testing models using a compare contrast testing prompt/question . Final Product Description Distribute another GED writing practice test prompt. Have Ss make a plan based on previous modeling. If you want you can have students make their own prompts based on previous comparisons of their workplace to a previous one. In this situation have students come up with their own prompts in groups. Write them on board and have class choose one, two or three to use in their own practice tests. George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 6 Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Comparatives Writing Unit Planning Calendar (Bridge I) Hour Plan by Hour 1 Discuss differences between American football and soccer. Also discuss what sports are popular in students’ countries. 2 3 4 5 6 Draw a Venn Diagram on the board labeling one side American football and the other soccer. Use that to facilitate whole class discussion and to visually introduce the concept of comparing. Write sentences on board to represent students’ comparisons. Use these sentences to introduce the grammatical structure of comparatives. Use worksheet, “The Sport of Comparing (S1-A1),” to make comparisons between two sports, one from students’ countries and one from the US. Have Ss complete this in pairs. Read article in textbook, Grammar in Context, p. 344. (I reviewed superlatives and equalities in this unit too.) Have students notice how comparatives are used and go over content and the textbooks overview of this structure. Have students compare the ideas they had previous to reading the article to what the article said. Do as many of the exercises as deemed necessary for review to act as a focused practice for this structure. Distribute one picture of the students’ current workplaces’ staff and one past photo and have students compare the two photos noticing any changes in small groups using “Before and After Photos (S1-A2).” 7 Write comparisons on board, one from each group. Point out how students used comparative structures to express these differences. Distribute graphs comparing workplace production from last year and this year. Have students work in same small groups to compare these. Have students write conclusions on board and discuss them and correct them as a whole class using “Comparing Graphs worksheet (S1-A3).” 8 Have students list types of workplaces from around the world and those that they have worked in. Have pairs of students share lists and come up with five that would be interesting to compare to their present workplace using “Comparing Workplaces (S2-A1).” 9 Have students make a Venn Diagram to describe differences and similarities between the two workplaces they choose after freewriting to describe each. 10 Have students work to come up with a main idea/general statement describing this diagram and the supporting details from the Venn Diagram. 11 Have students write a five paragraph essay using diagram along with a prepared outline or writing plan. 12 Have students edit each others’ work in small groups using editing worksheet. 13 Have Ss analyze a compare and contrast prompt from GED practice test. Model using a bubble idea graphic to plan an answer to prompt. Show how to make groupings to make paragraphs. Write a topic sentence for each group. Use “Practice Writing Essay, Part I (S3-A1).” George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 7 Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Hour Plan by Hour 14 Have Ss analyze another compare and contrast prompt from GED practice test. Have Ss work in pairs to make their own bubble ideagraphs on their own. Use “Practice Writing Essay, Part II (S3A2).” 15 I used the chapter, “Gathering Your Ideas,” in Contemporary’s GED Exercise Book: Language Arts, Writing, pp. 78-83, for extra practice and guidance. 16 Distribute another GED writing practice test prompt. Have Ss make a plan based on previous modeling. If you want you can have students make their own prompts based on previous comparisons of their workplace to a previous one. In this situation have students come up with their own prompts in groups. Write them on board and have class choose one, two or three to use in their own practice tests. George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 8 Comparative Writing_Curriculum_Bridge I Comparatives Writing Practice Unit Planning Calendar (Bridge Prep) Hour Plan by Hour 1 Discuss what sports they like to watch on TV, what sports they play in their countries and what they know about the Olympics. 2 Compare two sports discussed above using a Venn Diagram. Introduce comparatives using Azar’s, “Basic English Grammar,” pp. 454 – 469. 3 Read article from internet, “Things you should know about the Olympics,” by Matthew Wagner. Have students notice how comparatives are used and go over content and the textbooks overview of this structure. Have students compare the ideas they had previous to reading the article to what the article said. 4 Do as many of the exercises as deemed necessary for review to act as a focused practice for this structure. 5 Distribute one picture of the students’ current workplaces’ staff and one past photo and have students compare the two photos noticing any changes in small groups. 6 Write comparisons on board, one from each group. Point out how students used comparative structures to express these differences. 7 Have students list types of workplaces from around the world and those that they have worked in. Have students as a whole class share lists and come up with five that would be interesting to compare to their present workplace. 8 9 Have students make a Venn Diagram to describe differences and similarities between the two workplaces they choose after making a list of what advantages and disadvantages to both workplaces. Have students work to come up with a main idea/general statement describing this diagram. 10 Have students write a paragraph with a topic sentence and a comparison of two workplaces. 11 Have students edit each others’ work in small groups using editing worksheet. 12 Have Ss analyze a compare and contrast prompt from GED practice test. Model using a bubble idea graphic to plan an answer to prompt. Show how to make groupings to make paragraphs. Write a topic sentence for each group. Distribute another GED writing practice test prompt. Have Ss make a plan based on previous modeling. 13 George Schooley_FastTRAC Bridge Project_2011 9