COMMAS PRETEST SECTION 1 On the line following the appropriate number write the words in each sentence that should be followed by a comma; then place a comma after each of these words. If a sentence does not need a comma, write None. 1. Soon after you fall asleep at night you begin a series of dreams, which you may not remember when you awaken. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 2. Scientists who do research on dreaming believe that most people average five dreams each night. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 3. There are some dreams that are common to most people but you probably do not realize that other people have “your” dream. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 4. For example a common dream experience is one in which you are running but never arrive at a destination. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 5. When you wake up from a nightmare you often feel tense or frightened or exhausted. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 6. A dream about falling through dark endless space can be scary. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 7. Looking at a sleeper’s eyelids you can tell when a dream is taking place. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 8. A dream is signaled by REM which stands for “rapid eye movement.” LEARNING TARGET 4 __________________________________________________________________________________ 9. Dreaming helps maintain health sanity and well-being. LEARNING TARGET 1 __________________________________________________________________________________ 1 10. Having learned this much scientists are continuing their research on sleep and dreaming. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 11. Ms. Scott the substitute teacher walked into the study hall demanded that everyone be quiet and start studying took a candy bar away from one student intercepted a paper headed for the wastebasket and finally got a chance to call the roll. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 12. First performed on March 11 1959 on Broadway in New York City Lorraine Hansberry’s play A Raisin in the Sun which was later made into a movie was awarded the New York Drama Critics Circle Award. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 13. Although the house looked like a disaster had hit Mother said that if we all helped put away toys and books picked up all the clothes lying around dusted the furniture and vacuumed the rug it would look presentable by the time Grandmother arrived. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 14. After all you could look at the map to see if there is an exit from Interstate 70 to a state road that will take us south to Greenville Ilinois instead of complaining because I don’t know the way. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 2 15. On her way to work each morning she saw young people on their paper routes children waiting for school buses mail carriers beginning their deliveries and the inevitable joggers puffing along on their morning workouts. LEARNING TARGET ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 16. City buses are a pleasant way to travel but why do they run so infrequently and when they do arrive why are they in bunches of three or more? LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 17. Covered by newspapers and magazines on the table the two hundred dollars in cash escaped the thief’s attention. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ 18. If you are going to paint window frames the panes of glass should be covered with masking tape which will protect the glass from being spattered. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 19. On a beautiful fall day it is wise to go for a walk play touch football or a little basketball or go for a drive through a lovely park for it won’t be long until everything is bleak cold and dreary. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 20. If I had my way I would live in a climate where it would be warm not hot in the daytime and cool in the evening all year round. LEARNING TARGET __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ 3 SECTION 2 Look at the item that matches the number of the underlined part. Pick the best replacement for the underlined part. If the underlined part is the best, select NO CHANGE. Comic book fans who often own large 1 collections know that the books need to be 1 stored safely. Without proper storage, the 1. paper in the books can be damaged by its own acidic content moisture in the air and 2 changing light conditions. In addition, polluted 2 3 air and dust can harm comic books. For the 3 best preservation, comic books should be 2. stored in Mylar pockets and the pockets should 4 be changed every two to three years. The 3. comics should be stored upright, in acid-free, 5 boxes. 5 4. 5. A. NO CHANGE B. fans, who often own large collections, C. fans who often own large collections, D. fans who often, own, large collections, LEARNING TARGET A. NO CHANGE B. by its own acidic content moisture in the air, and changing light conditions. C. by its own, acidic content moisture in the air and changing light conditions. D. by its own acidic content, moisture in the air, and changing light conditions. LEARNING TARGET A. NO CHANGE B. In addition polluted air C. In addition polluted air. D. In addition polluted air, LEARNING TARGET A. NO CHANGE B. Mylar pockets, and the pockets, C. Mylar pockets, and the pockets D. Mylar, pockets, and the Pockets LEARNING TARGET A. NO CHANGE B. in acid-free boxes. C. in, acid-free boxes. D. in acid, free boxes. LEARNING TARGET 4