How We Choose to Act Every day, we choose how to act. These choices are sometimes conscious and sometimes unconscious. People make choices of which they are proud, and people choose to act in ways they later regret. In this unit, you will discover that a performer makes choices about how to act before an audience. You will be introduced to pantomime, inflection, role playing, and other performance skills. In addition, you will learn to read and analyze poetry and to portray yourself and characters in individual and group performances. Essential Questions 1. How does a speaker create and present an effective oral text? 2. How do literary devices enhance a text? TP-CASTT Analysis Poem Title: Author: Title: Make a prediction. What do you think the title means before you read the poem? Paraphrase: Translate the poem in your own words. What is the poem about? Rephrase difficult sections word for word. Connotation: Look beyond the literal meaning of key words and images to their associations. Attitude: What is the speaker’s attitude? What is the author’s attitude? How does the author feel about the speaker, about other characters, about the subject? Shifts: where do the shifts in tone, setting, voice, etc., occur? Look for time and place, keywords, punctuation, stanza division, changes in length or rhyme, and sentence structure. What is the purpose of each shift? How do they contribute to effect and meaning? Title: Reexamine the title. What do you think it means now in the context of the poem? Theme: Think of the literal and metaphorical layers of the poem. Then determine the overall theme. The theme must be written in a complete sentence. Performing with a Purpose Sharing information and stories begins with oral communication. The oral tradition of telling and listening to stories has its modern expression in drama. Actors are not the only people, though, who communicate orally. The art of expressing yourself orally is probably one of the most important communication skills you can master. Performance is a way of honing your ability to communicate with others by making physical and vocal choices to convey a certain idea or purpose and feeling or tone. You already modify your voice depending on your purpose and audience, and you naturally use gestures and your face to create a certain effect. Oral Interpretation Performance is simply the art of making purposeful and deliberate choices to express a text. Oral interpretation is the art of deciding on what a text means and then expressing that meaning through movement, gesture, facial expression, and the voice. Inflection Intonation Emphasis What you already know: You already know how to sound sarcastic, or excited, or sad, and you can use your face and your body to convey that tone as well as your voice. Couple that with knowledge with a monologue that expresses a specific tone and you can bring your audience to laughter or to tears. Let’s Talk (Think-Pair-Share) 1. How does a speaker create and present an effective oral text? 2. How do literary devices enhance a text? What You Will be Asked to Do….. Read the Assignment, Steps, and Rubric: Underline or highlight the places that mention a skill or knowledge necessary to succeed on the task. The Task – Assessment 1 Your assignment is to write, revise, and present an original monologue that demonstrates you knowledge of pantomime, inflection, word emphasis, ways to show emotion, and the monologue form. You will select your topic, tone, and audience. Steps 1. Review the texts and your personal reflections from this unit that address the concept of choice and the consequences of choices. You will write a monologue about a time when you made an important choice or decision. The speaker of the monologue, however, does not have to be you; you may want to adopt a persona. It could be someone who is affected by your choice or even a bystander who happens to observe the choice. Organizing Describe a time when you made a significant choice, and explain the results of that choice. Who will be the speaker of the monologue? Why? Who is your intended audience? How will this audience affect what you write? What is the setting, and what descriptive words will you use to help your listeners visualize it? What is the purpose you are trying to communicate? What is the tone of the message? (tone = attitude) What words and phrases might help to illustrate the tone? Drafting Revisit the monologues we have read. Look at their structure and format. Draft your monologue in the correct format, and incorporate your ideas from the graphic organizer. Consult the Scoring Guide to ensure that you are meeting the specific criteria. When your draft is complete, read it, and clarify your ideas before sharing it within your writing group. Sharing and Responding Share your monologue in your writing group, and use the feedback to revise the following: Clarity and coherence of ideas presented Purpose and target audience Consistent tone with appropriate word choice and language use Revising After you have revised your draft, work with a partner to review and edit each other’s work for grammar, punctuation, and spelling. You might choose to use resources (i.e. dictionary, thesaurus, grammar book, etc.) to assist you with this phase of the writing process. Performing To prepare for your presentation, mark your text to identify places where you want to include inflection, gestures, movements, facial expressions and various tones. Use the following guide to analyze your text and then to mark it. Preparing Elements to Include How I will mark the text to show this element: Inflection Raise pitch ↗ Speak louder < Speak softer > Pause , Gestures Draw or write how to gesture in the margins Movement Write down where and how to move. Facial Expression Draw simple expressions in the margins. Tones to Emphasize Describe the tone as a reminder (e.g. furious, mournful, anxious, etc.). Underline words to say in that tone. Line numbers where I will use this element and HOW I will use the element: Extras Describe the props and costumes (or props to pantomime) you plan to use at the specific points in your presentation: Props: Props to pantomime: Costumes: Rehearsal Rehearse your monologue with a partner. Practice your monologues several times using appropriate facial expressions, gestures, and movements. Give each other suggestions and constructive feedback regarding the performance and possible props or costumes. If necessary, revise your monologues once again based on comments from your partner and your own reflection on your rehearsal. The complete the feedback graphic organizer to help refine your performances for the class. Check the box that describes your partner’s performance in each area. Offer suggestions for each area. Suggestions to Consider Inflections to consider: Gestures/Facial Expression/Movement to consider: To clarify the choice of the words (diction) you use, try…. To achieve your purpose, try… (see p. 312 Feedback rubric for partners) Scoring Guide for Teacher Scoring Criteria Exemplary Proficient Emerging The original monologue skillfully reveals the relationship between a choice and the consequence(s) of that choice by coherently communicating with a clear purpose to an intended audience accurately using monologue structure and format skillfully using language to convey tone. The original monologue reveals a choice and the consequence(s) of that choice by: Communicating with a purpose to an intended audience Following monologue structure and format Using language to convey tone. The original monologue fails to sufficiently reveal a choice and the consequence(s) of that choice. It may not include one or more of the following: A purpose or intended audience A monologue structure or format Language to convey tone. Performance The performance includes the purposeful use of inflection and volume to emphasize and reinforce key words and ideas effectively in the monologue. The performance includes appropriate use of inflection and volume to bring attention to key words and ideas in the monologue. The performance includes limited use of inflection and volume to reinforce key words or ideas in the monologue. Presentation The performance includes extensive use of effective gestures, facial expressions, movements, props, and/or costumes to enhance the ideas presented in the monologue. The performance includes adequate use of gestures, facial expressions, movements, props, and/or costumes to demonstrate the ideas presented in the monologue. The performance includes minimal use of gestures, facial expressions, movements, props, and/or costumes to reinforce the ideas presented in the monologue. Ideas Organization Use of Language Scoring Guide (teacher)Continued Scoring Criteria Reflection Additional Criteria Exemplary Proficient The reflection clearly and descriptively explains: • Choices on the topic, tone, and revisions during the creation of the monologue • Perspective on the most successful aspects of the performance and those aspects he/she wishes to improve The reflection explains: • Choices on the topic, tone, and revisions during the creation of the monologue • Perspective on the most successful aspects of the performance and those aspects he/she wishes to improve. Emerging The reflection gives a minimal response to the writer’s choices during the creation of the monologue or his/her perspective on the aspects of performance. Rubric for Student Feedback Exemplary Proficient Emerging Inflection Inflection changes to make the purpose clear and interesting. Inflection changes when appropriate. The inflection is sometimes unclear or flat. Gestures Facial Expressions Movement Gestures, facial expression, and movement are appropriate to the monologue and enhance the Performance. Gestures, facial expression, and movement usually occur in the monologue when appropriate. Gestures, facial expression, and movement is inconsistent or does not vary enough to make the performance effective. Clarity of Words The diction fits the tone of the situation and makes the performance powerful for the audience. The diction makes the purpose clear to the audience. The diction needs more descriptive words to convey the emotion of the monologues. Achievement of Purpose The performance is able to elicit the emotional response desired from the audience. The performer elicits a response from the audience. The intended purpose of the monologue is unclear.