Personal Character Sketch Friendly Letter Descriptive Writing Essay -Place Reading Inventory HSAP Questions of the Day set one set two set three due 8/26 due 9/2 due 9/16 due 9/23 sets 1,2,3 due 8/25 due 9/8 due 9/22 English II Mon Week 1 August 15-19 Week 2 August 22-26 Week 3 Aug. 29 – Sept.2 Week 4 September 12 - 16 Week 6 September 19 – 23 Tues Welcome Introduction to the course The Open Window by Saki 10 -16 The Californian’s Tale by Mark Twain 17 - 27 An Astrologer’s Day by R.K. Narayan 54-62 The Masque of the Red Death by Poe 73 - 83 Labor Day School Closed September 5- 9 Week 5 Unit 1: Short Story Thurs The Californian’s Tale by Mark Twain 17 - 27 Civil Peace by Chinua Achebe 64 - 71 HSAP set 1 due When Mr. Pirzada Came to Dine by Jhumpa Lahiri 123 - 140 quiz The Book of the Dead by Edwidge Danticat 157 - 170 Writer’s workshop Fri quiz Quiz Personal Character Sketch Due Midway Test Friendly Letter Due Everyday Use by Alice Walker 186 – 197 quiz HSAP set 2 due Lullaby by Leslie Marmon Silko 247 - 257 To Catch the Moon by Cofer 218 - 228 Short Story by Tolstoy Wed Quiz Descriptive (place) Writing Essay Due Unit Test Unit Test HSAP set 3 due Reading Inventory Due Reading and Writing Assignments • • • • • Personal Character Sketch (due 8/26) Friendly Letter (due 9/2) Descriptive Writing Essay -Place (due 9/16) Reading Inventory (due 9/23) HSAP Questions of the Day – set one (due 8/25) – set two (due 9/8) – set three (due 9/22) HSAP Questions of the Day Rubric Unit 1 Set 1 due Thurs. 8/25 Name _______________ P# ________ • • • • • • 15 Questions copied 2 points each _____ 15 Correct Answers 3 points each _____ Legible 15 15 points total _____ In Order 10 points total ______ Typed 10 points extra credit _________ TOTAL ________ barely readable 5pts Just OK 10pts HSAP Questions of the Day Rubric Unit 1 Set 2 due Thurs. 8/25 Name _______________ P# ________ • • • • • • 15 Questions copied 2 points each _____ 15 Correct Answers 3 points each _____ Legible 15 15 points total _____ In Order 10 points total ______ Typed 10 points extra credit _________ TOTAL ________ barely readable 5pts Just OK 10pts HSAP Questions of the Day Rubric Unit 1 Set 3 due Thurs. 8/25 Name _______________ P# ________ • • • • • • 15 Questions copied 2 points each _____ 15 Correct Answers 3 points each _____ Legible 15 15 points total _____ In Order 10 points total ______ Typed 10 points extra credit _________ TOTAL ________ barely readable 5pts Just OK 10pts Planning Page – Friendly Letter 1. Choose one of the stories that we have read thus far in the classroom. 2. Write a summary sentence about the setting. 3. Copy a sentence from the story and write down the page # it is on. Then, in your own words, explain what that sentence means to the story 4. Repeat # 3 once more. IE find ANOTHER sentence from the story copy it and write down the page #. 5. Save in tab 4 – Inventory Rubric for the Friendly Letter (Setting Described): Name:__________________ Date: _______ Tasks Points (0) Points (12) Points (16) Points (20) not submitted 1 Criteria Met 2 Criteria Met All Criteria Met not submitted 1–2 Criteria Met 3–5 Criteria Met All 6 Criteria Met not submitted 1- 2 Criteria Met 3 -4 Criteria Met All 5 Criteria Met The Writing Process Observed Planning Notes First Draft with Revisions Marked Edited Copy - Revisions Made (changes made to the final copy) not submitted 1 Criteria Met 2 Criteria Met All Criteria Met Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation, SAE not submitted 5 or more errors 1- 4 errors no errors Typed size 12 Times New Roman with proper margins Easy to read Heading Attractive Rubric Attached Friendly Letter Heading Date Correct Greeting Correct Salutation Correct Paragraphs Correct On Topic Evaluation Accurate description of the setting in selected story 1st Example from text 2nd Example from text 1st Elaboration made 2nd Elaboration made Note: 10 points will be deducted for each day late. Amy Craig Beasley A August 30, 2011 Sample Dear Jane, Friendly I have just finished reading a novella by Sandra Cisneros entitled Letter The House on Mango Street. The story takes place in a Latino 223 Normal Town Road Greenwood, SC 29649 neighborhood in Chicago. The time period is never mentioned. Figurative language and imagery are used by Cisneros to enhance this setting . I found it amazing how she uses figurative language to enhance the setting. With great detail, she describes the inside of a neighbor’s house, so that something so ordinary becomes a beautiful. She writes, “She likes looking at the walls, how neatly their corners meet, the linoleum roses on the floor, the ceiling smooth as wedding cake (102). Cisneros also uses imagery to enhance the setting. In describing a garden, she writes, “There were sunflowers big as flowers on Mars and thick cockscombs bleeding the deep red fringe of theater curtains (94). This garden is rich, and I can see it when I read about it. If you are looking for a good novella to read, one with an especially interesting setting, try Cisneros’s story The House on Mango Street . You just might like it! All the Best, Amy Rubric for the Personal Character Sketch - Unit One Name: __________ pts Expectations 15 In the first sentence, refer to yourself(10) & give an opinion(5) 12 With great detail, write a physical description (12 pts :: 4 pts for 3 aspects) of yourself. 3 Describe the community that surrounds you(3 pts) 12 Write about your interests(12 pts:: 4 pts for specific actions or thoughts), 3 Name and explain one conflict that you face (3) 5 State your feelings about what kind of individual you are. 10 Describe your hopes for the future(5) and what you need to do to accomplish your goals(5) 20 Follow the writing Process (15) and submit in this order (5) – RUBRIC (2), planning page(2), rough draft (5), revision notes on rough draft (3), final edited copy (3) 10 Grammar and Punctuation - Please use Standard American English 1-3 mistakes (-3pts) 4 mistakes(-5pts) 5 mistakes(-7pts) 6 or more mistakes (-10pts) 10 Manuscript Form: Must be typed, Double Spaced(1); Font: Times New Roman, regular style (2), size 12 (2) ; Proper margins (1), Title (2), proper paragraph form (2) -5 points if late ( you have 5 days after the due date to turn in any late work) Assignment: In one paragraph, following the writing process, and using MLA format, write a personal character sketch. See the rubric for guidelines. Name: ________________________________ Date: __________ P# _______ Traits Focus & Details Organization 1 (each box =10 pts) The topic and main ideas are not clear. 2(each box =12 pts) There is one topic. Main ideas are somewhat clear. There is no clear introduction, structure, or conclusion. The introduction states the main topic. A conclusion is included. 3(each box =13 pts) 4(each box =14 pts) There is one clear, well focused topic. Main There is one clear, well focused topic. ideas are clear but are not well supported Main ideas are clear and are well by detailed information. supported by detailed and accurate information. The introduction states The introduction is inviting, states the the main topic and main topic, and provides an overview of provides an overview the paper. Information is relevant and of the paper. A conclusion is included. presented in a logical order. The conclusion is strong. The author’s purpose of writing is somewhat clear, and there is evidence of attention to audience. The author’s knowledge and/or experience with the topic is/are limited. The writer uses a limited vocabulary. The author uses words that Jargon or clichés may be present communicate clearly, but the writing and detract from the meaning. lacks variety. The author’s purpose of writing is somewhat clear, and there is some evidence of attention to audience. The author’s knowledge and/or experience with the topic is/are evident. The author’s purpose of writing is very clear, and there is strong evidence of attention to audience. The author’s extensive knowledge and/or experience with the topic is/are evident. Sentence Structure, Grammar, Mechanics, & Spelling The author uses vivid words and phrases. The choice and placement of words is inaccurate at times and/or seems overdone. Sentences sound awkward, are Most sentences are well constructed, Most sentences are well constructed and distractingly repetitive, or are difficult but have a similar structure and/or have varied structure and length. The to understand. The author makes 6 length. The author makes 4 – 5 author makes a 1 -3 errors in grammar, or more errors in grammar, errors in grammar, mechanics, mechanics, and/or spelling, but they do not mechanics, and/or spelling that and/or spelling that interfere with interfere with understanding. interfere with understanding. understanding. The author uses vivid words and phrases. The choice and placement of words seems accurate, natural, and not forced. All sentences are well constructed and have varied structure and length. The author makes no errors in grammar, mechanics, and/or spelling. Format 6 or more mistakes in MLA 4-5 mistakes in MLA formatting 1-3 mistakes in MLA formatting No mistakes in MLA formatting: typed, Times New Roman, size 12 font, double spaced, standard margins, and title and headings and citations are correct. The Writing Process Only 1 step in the process Only 2 steps in the process Only 3 steps in the process Voice Word Choice On time? The author’s purpose of writing is unclear. E25.3 Rubric: Description of Place At least 4 steps in the process: Planning, legible Rough Draft, Revised Work, Edited, and Rubric. 2 points ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Follow the writing process to Write a Descriptive Essay About Your Favorite Place 1. Write an essay that focuses on an inviting subject(YOUR FAVORITE PLACE IN THE WORLD),contains a variety of supporting information (sensory details, memory details, and so on), informs and entertains the reader. 2. When writing, organize in a logical way. Include an engaging beginning, strong development, and an effective ending. The essay should form a meaningful whole, moving smoothly from one main point to the next. 3. Write with an Engaging Voice. Voice is personality, shine through what you say and how you say it! Displays a thorough knowledge of the subject, and speaks with an appropriate ACADEMIC voice. 4. When choosing words, be Original. Use contains specific nouns, vivid verbs, and colorful modifiers. Capture the subject’s ideas and feeling in dialogue. 5. Be stylish. Sentences should flow smoothly from one idea to the next. Use variation in sentence structure. 1. Formatting and Grammar are important. Correct, Accurate Copy. Adhere to The basic rules of writing. Follow the appropriate format for citing sources (MLA). Assessment Checklist for Descriptive Essays Stimulating Ideas The writing . . . ____focuses on an inviting subject. ____contains a variety of supporting information (sensory details, memory details, and so on). ____informs and entertains the reader Logical Organization ____includes an engaging beginning, strong development, and an effective ending. ____forms a meaningful whole, moving smoothly from one main point to the next. Engaging Voice ____displays a thorough knowledge of the subject. ____ speaks with an appropriate voice. Original Word Choice ____contains specific nouns, vivid verbs, and colorful modifiers. ____captures the subject’s ideas and feeling in dialogue. Effective Sentence Style ____flows smoothly from one idea to the next. ____shows variation in sentence structure. Correct, Accurate Copy ____adheres to the basic rules of writing ____follows the appropriate format for citing sources (MLA).