From Page to Screen, Words to Pictures This course is based on the topic of book adaptations or books that have been made into movies. We will discuss ethical questions in regards to book adaptations, and compare and contrast good and not so good adaptations. Students will try their hand at creating a book (or scene) adaptation. Creativity and personal expression are keys to success. If you like books and you like movies - you will love this course! Books/Movies you will need – Lemony Snicket – THE BAD BEGINNING Lemony Snicket – THE REPTILE ROOM Lemony Snicket - THE WIDE WINDOW Lemony Snicket Movie Optional Books and Movies – suggestion list: Charlottes Web, Charlie and the Chocolate Factory, The Wizard of Oz, and Tuck Everlasting. Other books and movies may be approved by your instructor. Wk 1 -Which is more powerful – books or movies? Intro: Welcome to the books into movies class. In this class we will discuss different issues pertaining to book adaptation and a bit about novelization. You will read books and view movies to compare and contrast the similarities and differences. You will also write a script for a scene, then creating an electronic storyboard of that scene. Let me stress that all work should be done in a word processing program, spell/grammar checked and then copied to its final destination. Please save all your word processed work as a back up copy. Guiding Question: What was the most powerful movie/book scene you can remember and why was it so powerful? Or Name a movie character that changed the way people think about life. Why did that character have that kind of impact on our culture? Give an introduction of yourself. Be sure to include what days and times you are usually online for possible chat times with a peer, explain what drew you to take this course and what you’re hoping to learn from it. Also – let us know if you have taken other online courses and what your favorites were and why. (Read all – Respond to two) Show What You Know: You need to begin by familiarizing yourself with some of the Script Terminology that you may need to use. Go to the site http://www.cybercollege.com/frtv/frtv013.htm and read through the script terminology. Towards the bottom there are some sample scripts in blue links. Look at the Simple Video Script and the Dramatic film/video script format to get a feel for what script look like and how they read. See if you can picture the movie happening as you read the sample mini scripts. At the bottom of the page is a quiz. Try the timed quiz! (Click and drag the choices on the right of the page to the appropriate definition on the left side of the page!) Have fun with this! Start a journal page that defines the following script terms: EXT and INT, VO, POV, OS, SFX, Subjective Shot, Establishing Shot, MCU, CU, XCU. You will need to know these for future assignments. Go back to the dramatic film script on the site above (blue link with green square, towards the bottom of the site) and look specifically at how these terms are used in those scripts – make sure you understand. Pay attention to use of spacing and capital letters. Go to http://filmscriptwriting.com/scriptformatting.html. Look at the links in blue on this web page for more information on script writing: Basic script form, Formatting directions, Format character details, Writing and formatting effective descriptions. Add to your notes if necessary. Go to http://www.filmscriptwriting.com/storystructure.html Read and understand the blue link on the bottom “Create a Captivating Scene”. http://www.scriptologist.com/Magazine/Formatting/formatting.html See this page for more information on screenwriting and examples. Show What You Know: Following is the opening scene from Jurassic Park. Explain what the abbreviations are for, why certain words are capitalized, why it is spaced this way and any other information you think is important to note in script writing. Reading: Lemony Snicket - book 1 – THE BAD BEGINNING --READ WITH A PEN - jot down sentence fragments per chapter. Give a quick overview for each chapter. Pay attention to sequence of events while reading. Note any details or events you think are important to keep for a film and note any details or events you think can be discarded from the book when making the movie. While reading the book – are there any script terms that jump out at you to be used in a film? What are they and how would you use them? Document your thoughts or feelings at the end of each chapter – would you want your film audience to have those same feelings? Would these feelings need to be intensified? Felt differently? Wk2—How do you translate emotions from page to screen? Intro: Most of us have seen many movies that are made from books – this is called book adaptations. Sometimes books are written from movies –this is called novelizations. This is the least common of the two scenarios and can be done for marketing tactics. (A director/producer will hire someone to take a script and whip out a book based on the movie so it hits the store shelves just before the movie is released. It was also used as a way to “see a film” again before the era of recorded programming and sale of tapes and DVD’s.) Either way, there is something magical about characters being brought to life on the big screen. Some meanings and parts of a book get lost when translated to a script for the movie screen; other parts are gained and expanded on. But not every movie is as good as the book, nor is every book as good as the movie. . . . people have different preferences as to which should be read/viewed first and why. That is the dilemma for today’s forum. Guiding Question: Have you ever cried when reading a book? What about watching a movie? When with your friends, have you ever quoted a book? What about a movie? Which moves you more, text on a page or images on a screen? Choose one of the following two statements to respond to and expand upon. Interview/question family, friends and teachers to help with supporting information along with personal experience. A) Watching a movie before reading a book helps in getting to know the essence of a work quickly and enjoyably, bringing the characters and words to life, therefore movies should be seen before reading the book. B) Transforming words into pictures means a loss of deeper meaning originally intended by the author, and a lack of imagination by the reader, therefore books should be read before seeing the movie. Show What you Know: Skim through one or more of the scripts at http://www.scriptologist.com/Directory/Filmmaking/Screenplays/screenplay s.html. (ensure that they are appropriate scripts for your age level!) Choose 2 “emotional” lines from the script. How did you know that they were supposed to be emotional? What character traits (like tension) or literary techniques (like personification), did the author use to express this emotion? Choose one of the lines and create an image which depicts the scene and expresses the emotion you have interpreted. Examples of literary techniques: Personification, Back-Story, Flashback, Foreshadowing, Framing device, Irony, Juxtaposition, Hyperbole, Oxymoron, Parody, Symbolism, Figurative Language, . . . See http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_literary_terms for definitions of literary terms and other literary terms. Reading: Lemony Snicket – Book 2 – THE REPTILE ROOM Continue to journal by chapter as in book one. Wk 3- What does a critic know anyway? Intro: Some people spend their days writing scripts for movies, from books that they have read, in hopes of getting their script picked for a movie production. Other people write book reviews or movie reviews for a living. Ever hear of Siskel and Ebert? They are two well known movie critiques known for their ‘not always agreed-upon’ movie opinions and their rating scale. How about a few years ago when the TV script writers went on strike and we all watched re-runs for weeks? Read today’s forum to explore this topic more. Guiding Question: What do you know about book reviews, movie reviews and script writing? Do you ever read these items? Would reading a review or script motivate you to read a book or see a movie? How do you personally review a book or movie? How important/useful are rating scales (ex. 4 star system) to books and movies? Do you think they are accurate? Do you think verbal comment reviews are as accurate, better or worse than other rating systems? Do you have a personal rating system and what would that be? (Read all – respond to 2+) Reading Lemony Snicket - Book 3 – THE WIDE WINDOW Continue to journal by chapter as in book one. Show What You Know: 1. View the movie- for evaluation and analysis. Follow your book notes as you watch the movie (Keep the remote near! Pause the movie as needed.) You may want to watch the movie twice. Document/describe any differences in sequence, plot or characters. Document your immediate reaction to those differences. Think about the following questions after you view the movie – make notes. Why do you think the screenwriter made these changes? Would you have done the same thing? Look at your script suggestions - did the movie make the same choices? Were there script suggestions that you made, that you really felt should have been in the movie? How about your feelings as you read the book. . .did the movie encourage the same feelings? Intensify them? Diminish them? Were there differences that surprised you? How did the “visual-ness” of the movie enhance the text or did it distract from your imagination of the written words? 2. Film Critique: Write a well written film critique on the book adaptation of Lemony Snicket. Spelling and grammar are important as well as depth of writing. 12 pt font – one page that spills over on to the second page is the minimum. A good film critique begins by giving the reader a basic idea of what the film is about, a basic summary or sketch of the plot and characters. Once the summary is done – get down to the job of convincing the reader that you have something interesting to say about the film. Give a critical assessment of the success/failure or effectiveness/ineffectiveness of the film by using supporting evidence from the film. The critique is an opportunity to demonstrate an awareness of the elements of the film. (Consider the acting, visual effects, production design, sound . . .) It also describes the pleasure/ frustrations that the film offers the viewer. Your closing paragraph should summarize your opinion, give an overall quality rating of the movie and recommend / not recommend the movie to the reader (and why). Keep your review in the present tense. Avoid generic words such as “great” and “excellent”. Provide examples (specific moments) from the book/movie to support your statements. The questions below (and the questions above in the directions on viewing the movie) are meant to stimulate thought about the film. You may want to address some of these areas in your critique. 1) Since the film is a book adaptation – does it follow the original and neglect the cinematic opportunities of the story? Or does it sacrifice the original work for unnecessary cinematic devices? Did director show responsibilities to the author? How so? Was the movie true to the author’s original story? 2) Are the characters believable? Do they deviate from the characters in the book? Are the actors appropriately cast? 3) What is the theme of the film? Do the plot, acting and other elements in the film successfully impart the theme to the viewer? 4) Is the setting appropriate and effective? How close is it to the book? 5) Is the cinematography effective? Does the film make good use of the color, texture, lighting. . . .to enhance the theme, mood and setting? 6) Is the sound appropriate and functional – or is it inappropriate and obtrusive? 7) Are the camera angles used effectively? Do they help to create certain effects that are memorable? 8) Are there special effects in the film? Are they essential to the plot? Are they handled skillfully? Do they serve a necessary function or does the film sacrifice plot or characterization for the effects themselves? 9) Are there any major deviations from the book in the movie? How does this affect the film? Are there any extra scenes added to the movie that aren’t in the book and what is that effect on the plot or is it for entertainment? How different/similar was the style of the movie from the style of the book? What significant things remained the same or changed? 10) If changes were made, why do you think it was done? What are your reactions to the changes? Would author approve these changes? Would the changes hurt the author’s career/reputation? Why/why not? Did director promote/hurt his career by making changes? Why/why not? 11) Discuss your reactions, ratings, thoughts and feelings when comparing the books to the movie. Discuss things you would have done differently in the movie. Discuss if the similarities and differences in the movie are what you envisioned when reading the books. Discuss if you would have watched the movie first and then read the books – would you have had a different experience? How so and why? Check out these two critiques as a sample of what your critique may resemble. http://www.film-critiques.com/FreakyFri1R.html http://www.film-critiques.com/Schoolofrock1R.html Due end of week 4 WK 4: What is the difference between a director and a writer? Intro: Ok – so the author writes the book and the director directs the script that the script writer wrote. That’s it? Are they truly two separate jobs that never interact with each other? Or should there be some sort of communication between the two when it pertains to book adaptations and novelizations? Is there not a moral or value issue needed in these cases or is it a free for all in their own separate worlds? Today’s forum discusses these issues. Guiding Question: Should an author have a say or “rights” in how a movie is produced or is the creation of a movie from a book fair game for the producer him/herself? If an author is to be included in production, how much say or “rights” should the author have? If a director has fair game in directing the movie, should he have any responsibilities to the author when creating his movie? Create a thoughtful response to the guiding questions. Read all – respond to two. Reading: Choose a book (from the choice list or get approval from me if outside the choice list) with an appropriately rated movie. Preferably a book/movie that you haven’t seen – otherwise ensure that you have only seen/read one of the formats – not both. Choose to see the movie first or read the book first – be prepared to defend your choice. Take notes on both the book and the movie as previously done in week one through three. Be sure to add your thoughts/comments in the margins. Show What You Know: Choose a short scene from your book and create a script for it. Then create a story flow chart for it. For examples check out http://www.mcli.dist.maricopa.edu/authoring/studio/guidebook/storyboard_ example.html AND http://accad.osu.edu/womenandtech/Storyboard%20Resource/. Choose one of the storyboard examples for your story flow chart. Then think through how the two processes differed. In a short paragraph explain which role, the director or the writer, seems to fit you best. WK 5 –How important is the main character in books/films? Intro: The main characters of your script can make or break your book/film. Characters need to be developing throughout the movie as a person develops in life. Protagonist (main character) is usually the driving force behind the plot. He or she will usually face an opponent (antagonist) and undergo an important change. In classical and later theater the protagonist is the character undergoing a dramatic change (peripeteia), both of his own character and external circumstances, with the plot either going from order to chaos, as in a tragedy, with a reversal of fortune bringing about the downfall of the protagonist, usually an exceptional individual, as a result of a tragic flaw (hamartia) in his personality; or from chaos to order, as in a comedy, with the protagonist going from misfortune to prosperity and from obscurity to prominence. (Wikipedia.com) Guiding Question: Think about some of your favorite main characters from a book or a movie. What is it about them that you love about them? What makes you remember them? What is it about them that you look up to? Describe in as much detail as possible your most favorite character. Be sure to tell us what book or movie we can find the character in, and why you chose this character. Respond to 2+ Reading Continue with your book and movie choice Show What You Know: Go to http://filmscriptwriting.com/characterdevelopment.html. Explore the links carefully on the page. Take notes in your journal. Once you have read through the links, go back to the “initial character creation” link. Start building a character using the character sheet found in that link. Give your character a name (“naming your characters” link) and create a “character concept” (found in the initial character creation link). Choose two of the following to add to the development of your character: Character psychology, character relationship, unique voice, memorable character, character adversity, or character background. Write a short scene script in which your character can be seen in action. Wk 6: How does technology impact the stories we tell/ see? Intro: As you know, HD is soon to take over our TV viewing system. Films have been using digital systems since the late ‘80’s. 3-D movies are on the horizon. Virtual Reality films have been spoken about. People watch movies from their phones and Internet sources. New technologies are constantly developing. Today’s forum gets you thinking about the future of book adaptations. Guiding Question: Respond to the thoughts expressed in the following paragraph. Where do you see the future of movies and books? What should remain the same, what should change? What about this paragraph concerns you – what is exciting to you and why? Do you think reading will ever be eliminated by future technologies? Do you agree or disagree? “Consider this: the technological age has meant an increase in hours of work and a reduction in the time to set aside for reading; it is the age of the “quick fix”, the superficial fain, fast-fiction fulfillment. An age where computer games are as likely to be adapted as literature: where In the not too distant future movies might be considered as static as the written page; where virtual reality becomes the norm and to sit inert through even two hours of entertainment is considered too un-involving. And through it all, many novelists will sacrifice artistic vision for commercial gain, writing novels for profit not pleasure. Adapt or die will be the catchword. (Read all and respond to 2+) Reading: Continue from Week 5 Show What You Know: START FINAL PROJECT – DUE THE LAST FACE 2 FACE MEETING FOR PRESENTATION. Choose a scene from the current book/movie that you are reading and do it differently. Create a rationale why the scene should be re-shot. What did/didn’t you like? How should it change? What would you add? Create a work plan – what are the steps to completing this project and its parts, and what are your time frames for completing the steps to ensure the project is done on time for presentation. SEND THIS TO ME FOR APPROVAL – ASAP before going any further. Then create a script for your scene using the script writing suggestions we have studied. SEND ME A COPY before going to the next step. Create a storyboard using one of the layouts from http://www.mcli.dist.maricopa.edu/authoring/studio/guidebook/storyboard_ example.html SEND ME A COPY before going to the next step. Create the film. Use PowerPoint (create slides and speed up the viewing time to make it look more like a movie) or Movie Maker (take digital pictures or get pictures from the Internet to use) Ensure you look at character development, is there enough conflict, what is the mood of the scene, does the dialogue move the scene forward, are there any special camera shots, sounds, lighting techniques that need to be specified? Show your work to at least one other person and receive their feedback. Finally write up a self critique discussing how the project went, problems you had along the way, changes you would still make if time allowed, what was the feedback from whomever you showed your project to, and the impact this project had on you or your reactions to it. (Turn this in to me at the last F2F with your final project). Wk 7: Can there be too much drama? How do you find the right pace? Intro: Conflict moves people. It gets them excited. It helps to develop characters. Without conflict in books and movies – we would be bored. Human lives are filled with conflict – that is what makes like interesting and different day to day. As you write your scripts for your project – think about the conflict. Do you need more? Should it be dramatized? Is there too much conflict? What type of conflict are you using? As you write your scripts for your project think about the following questions: Should movies be expected to add more tension amongst characters, more drama, conflict, comical misunderstandings just for the sake of entertainment? Are there times when it is necessary to keep the entertainment value of the movie flowing? Is the movies first priority to entertain or to be true to the book? Should movies and books be compared to one another or should they be separate entities and enjoyed for their own values and uniqueness? Guiding Questions: Should movies be expected to add more tension amongst characters, more drama, conflict, comical misunderstandings just for the sake of entertainment? Are there times when it is necessary to keep the entertainment value of the movie flowing? Is the movies first priority to entertain or to be true to the book? Should movies and books be compared to one another or should they be separate entities and enjoyed for their own values and uniqueness? Go to http://www.filmscriptwriting.com/conflictinscriptwriting.html. Visit this web site for some background reading on conflict. Respond to 2+ Reading: Go to http://www.scriptologist.com/Directory/Filmmaking/Screenplays/Screenpla ysB/screenplaysb.html Find a movie that is appropriate and one that you are very familiar with. Open the script and read through at least the first 1520 min of the movie. Pay attention to the abbreviations, the layout of the script, all the script writing procedures. Think about how your script will be similar to this. What techniques can you apply from the script you are reading to the script you are writing? Show What You Know: Give an overview of your project. What techniques are you incorporating to create the pace you are looking for? Express concerns and questions you have. Express what you feel confident about. Explain how things are going. You should be finishing up with your storyboard for this week. Post all “creative work” at this point – view others and respond to at least 2 with constructive criticism. Wk 8: How’s it going? Use this week to seriously work on your projects. Submit a post that explains how things are going and where your at in the process. If you have questions or want feedback on anything – this is the time to ask for help/comments/suggestions from your peers. Respond to 2+ Wk 9: Is the screen business for you? Intro: You have spent the past weeks being a book/movie critic and will be trying your hand at script writing. Have you thought about any of these as a career position or what a career may be like in these positions? Today’s forum looks at questions related to this topic. Guiding Question: Book/movie review writers, Screen writers, Directors. . . which can you relate more closely to? Why? Could you make a career at any of these or would you like to try your hand at them? What do you think are the pros/cons of each? Difficulties/Challenges? What rewards do you see in these positions? Respond to 2+ Show What You Know: This is your final week... you have put in a lot of time and effort discussing book adaptation issues. You should have a better understanding of the topic and hopefully had some fun experimenting with critique/script writing. Good Job! See you at the final Face 2 Face meeting with your final project. Complete your script, storyboard and your presentation. Show it to at least one other person and receive their constructive criticism. Assess your work against the rubric. Be prepared to present your work to the class. Can’t wait to see them!! Benchmarks: 72. Almost all of the responses were thoughtful, reflective and/or insightful and clearly communicated with the intended audience. This student made it a point to respond to others. FORUM RESPONSES 74. Students’ responses and assignments followed directions and met set deadlines. SHOW WHAT YOU KNOW 18. The student envisioned items, sounds, places or events in his/her mind, which helped him/her to add detail and quality to his/her end product. CHARACTER CREATION 27. The student judged his or her own creations and also enlisted critiques from others. FILM PROJECT 28. The student revised original/traditional formats or work to produce new concepts, art and/or products FILM PROJECT 37. The student defined and persuasively articulated his/her own perspective on key topics, which led to a more personalized writing voice and /or artistic style. FORUM RESPONSES 78. Through highly effective questioning, this curious student developed well thought-out ideas, which demonstrated an understanding of alternative viewpoints from their own. FORUM RESPONSES