Deconstructing “Goblin” by Christina Rosetti 1. First Impressions of the title We think the title means that goblins are running a market or that they are selling goblins Some goblins have a market Market place of goblins - where they all meet up Market place where people are selling things Such as fruit and vegetables Goblins are being sold Goblins selling items Could be a metaphor for something A market that sells goblins Black market – sells illegal things Not a good/safe type of market A rare treasure market, full of valuables. 2. New/ Interesting words Word Denotation Trudged walking with slow heavy steps Goblin ugly mischievous creature Pellucid translucent Wine alcoholic beverage made of fermented grapes or other fruits Scratch (390) tear or dig into with nails or claws Lashing (398) a whipping, especially as punishment. Elbowed (400) Jostled (400) Clawed (401) Stamped (405) Dewberries Veiled Bilberries Tendrils – push with the elbow to crowd, shove, or push against scratch or tear something with the claws or the fingernails. bring down ones foot heavily on the ground or something on the ground European bramble with soft prickles and edible fruit which has a dewy white blossom on its skin. Covered with, or as through with a veil. Hardly dwarf shrub closely related to blueberries with drooping red flowers and dark blue edible berries. a slender thread like appendage of a climbing plant, often growing in spiral Connotation to walk laborious or wearily small, annoying creatures clear liquor To itch or dig into. hurting her with words or with their tails. purposely hit with her their elbows. – shoving and ganging up on her. ripped or torn away. stamped on her foot, leaving a mark there. some sort of berry you find in the morning Hidden. another type of berry tentacle like, something that wraps around an object Pellucid Forbore Maiden (144) Cankerous (484) Furze (325) Quaint (553) Heath (325) Breast: Melon Thrust Kiss Squeeze form and stretching out and twines around any suitable support. translucently clear Jump to, Navigation unmarried young woman/girl or virgin affected with, caused by or like “canker” low, prickly European evergreen shrub strange or odd in an interesting, pleasing, or amusing way – open wasteland, usually having sandy acid soil and scrubby vegetation The front part of the body between the neck and the abdomen; the chest. A large round or oval fruit with a hard rind, sweet juicy edible flesh and a central cavity packed with many seeds. To press or force the acceptance of (somebody or something) on or upon somebody To touch or press with the lips slightly pursed To extract ( liquid, etc.) from something by pressure in control To own/ get there first Innocent, beautiful, unmarried young woman bad bushes small, traditional, simple fire pit We think of women Some would think of Breasts To push Movement of the lips to show affection Crushing motion 3. Grammar/ Punctuation The author uses punctuation, periods, commas, colons, and quotation marks. Each first word in a line is capitalized. There are run on sentences, there are no indentations, and there are many stanzas. Uses lots of run on sentences so you can’t pause until a comma or period. She uses commas, periods, semi colons, colons, brackets, quotation marks, question marks, dash, exclamation mark. No indentations Commas at the end of mostly every line 27 stanzas 4. Devices Allegory: because Laura represents Eve, the first person to eat the forbidden fruit and Lizzie acts as a Christ figure by forgiving her for her actions. Alliteration: “Look, Lizzie, look, Lizzie,” (54) “She sucked until her lips were sore” (136) The three “S” sounds. Allusion: “Or like a flying flag when armies run.” (506) “Like two wands of ivory tipped with gold for awful kings.” (190-191) Ambiguity: stamped (405), tears (486) Cherry” (354) and “Melons” (8) They’re both fruit but have references to female genitalia Animism – “Bloom-down-cheeked peaches,/Swart-headed mulberries,/Wild free-born cranberries,” (9-11); “Her locks streamed like the torch borne by a racer at full speed, or like the mane of horses in their flight, or like an eagle when she stems the light straight toward the sun, or like a caged thing freed, or like a flying flag when armies run.” (500-506) Assonance: kick and knocked her, mauled and mocked her (428-429) Consonance: “Pluck them and suck them” (361) Because of the “K” sounds. Hyperbole: “Counted her pulse’s flagging stir,” (526) Imagery: Lashing their tails . . . Stamped upon her tender feet (398-405), Which an earthquake shatters down, like a lightening-stricken mast (515-516); “But when the first birds chirped about their eaves,” (530) Juxtaposition: Flung back her penny, kicked her fruit (439) The comparison between Goblin and men based on their sex. Because the Goblin’s in both Lizzie and Laura’s mind that they are ungentle man like. Metaphor: A metaphor is used throughout lines 120 to 127 talking about gold. Laura says that the only gold she has is the golden flowers that grow on the furze. The goblins point out that if the gold on the furze counts why not the gold on her head, which is her blonde hair, she makes this metaphor literal when she snips off a piece of her “golden” hair to use as money. This is sinful because money is the root of all evil, and this story has to do this sin and following the story of Adam and Eve in the bible. “That juice was like wormwood to her tongue,” (494) Onomatopoeia: purring (391), jingle (452) The word “Suck” (136) The word sounds like their meaning Point of view – third person / Omniscient because the reader knows the mind of both Lizzie and Laura. Repetition – “Come buy, come buy:” (4), “She sucked and sucked and sucked the more” (134), “half their bloom would fly, half their dew would dry, half their flavor would pass by” (375) Rhyme – “Apples and quinces/Lemons and oranges,/Plump unpecked cherries,…” (3-14) “Our grapes fresh from the vine,/Pomegranates full and fine,” (20-21) Simile – “One crawled like a snail,/One like a wombat prowled obtuse and furry,/One like a ratel tumbled hurry-skurry.” (74-76) “Laura stretched her gleaming neck/Like a rush-imbedded swan,…” (81-85) “Like two blossoms on one stem” (188) A sexual reference to the male genitalia. Symbol- “One began to weave a crown” – a symbol of power Speaker: The writer takes on as the narrator of the story 5. Paraphrase This poem is about a girl named Laura who bought fruit from the goblin market after they had called out to her. Her sister lizzie told her to ignore them, but Laura went ahead and traded her hair for some fruit. When she got back, her sister reminded her about Jeanie who had ate the fruit, searched for more until her hair turned grey, and then died. Laura looked for the goblin market for days and nights until her hair turned grey. Her sister Lizzie goes out to try and cure her sister, and the goblins try to make her eat the fruit, but the juice gets all over her instead. Lizzie goes home and Laura kisses the juice off of her sister, and she is cured. They both become wives and mothers, and tell their children about the goblin market. Goblins have many temptations and don’t know how to control them, so two girls show up they lure them in. They give them the fruit which makes the girls more prone to accepting what the goblins want from them. Laura takes the fruit even though she knows she shouldn’t and the goblins take advantage of her. Laura is now in bad shape and Lizzie goes to find the goblins to see what they had done to her sister. The goblins then try to seduce Lizzie as well but she resists all of their attempts and struggles through the abuse and manages to escape. When Lizzie returns home, Laura is enlightened by how brave her sister is and she is then inspired to get better by the courage of her sister. They then both move on to becomes wives and mothers and remember how each other’s strength got them through tough times to be able to live the life they have today The poem is about a girl named Lizzie, who represents Eve in this story how the first person to cross the line and eat the forbidden fruit, like the story in the bible. Laura is like god, who forgives her for the sin anyhow. The goblins with the fruit in the poem represent the snake in the story, as the devil going against god. And this all ties together as sin, because that was the first “sin” in the bible. First page:Explained the goblins, and how they try to get Lizzie and Laura to buy their fruit. Suggested Laura was interested in the goblins or their fruit, despite Lizzie’s warning. Second page: Laura ended up eating the goblins’ fruit. Lizzie tells her she made a mistake. They go to bed. Third page Implying Lizzie and Laura sleep in the same bed (198) Lizzie and Laura wake up and do their chores Laura noticed the goblins weren’t around anymore Lizzie hears the goblins, but Laura doesn’t Fourth page Laura is dying from eating the goblins’ fruit, and Lizzie tries to help her by going to the goblins to buy their fruit Goblins explain what they have, they ask Lizzie to stay Fifth page The goblins attack Lizzie They laughed and left Lizzie got up and left to save her sister Lizzie gets Laura to drink the goblin fruit juice Sixth page Laura is worried Lizzie will turn into what she turned into The fruit juices cure her Lizzie and Laura both end up getting married years later Laura tells her children to not trust goblin men All times of the day you can hear Goblin’s shouting come buy our goods. During the evenings Laura and Lizzie go down to the Brookside. Laura and Lizzie then hear the Goblins cry and Laura gets tempted to follow them. Lizzie begs her not to but Laura goes anyway. After Laura eats the Goblins fruit she can no longer hear the Goblins cries. Afterwards Laura acts like she has a secret she doesn’t want Lizzie to know. For Laura’s sake and health Lizzie set off to buy some of the Goblin’s fruit. The Goblin’s won’t let her take the fruit back to Laura so they beat her. Lizzie runs away and returns home with some of their fruit. She gives the fruit to Laura and by the next morning everything is back to normal. As the years pass Laura tells the children not to follow the Goblins because they were bad people. 6. Mood/Tone Tone: The author seems upset with the events in the poem towards the violence, which is mostly from the goblins towards Lizzie. Mood: Feel sad towards the girls who were abused, and a bit angry. The tone of the poem is trying to teach a lesson. Lizzie almost died when she ate the fruit she badly wanted to eat. It sets a tone of awareness and sadness because she almost died because of her ignorance to her sister. The tone of the poem is dark, but the writer put the content in lighter words The mood of the poem is disturbing, and also confusing with many possible hidden messages. Even though the poem has a dark meaning (the Goblins lure and beat women if they refuse the fruit) it is portrayed as a happy, lighthearted poem. 7. Thoughts on title after deconstruction: Goblin Market = a place where men abuse women or girls by luring them in with valuable things and false promises. The goblins were the devil, selling her soul and tempting the main girl in the poem with their fresh fruit at the market. The goblin market could represent the danger the two sisters were faced with, considering markets are usually supposed to be fun and safe places. The goblins that ran the market saw the women as easy targets (naïve) and took advantage of the fact that they were women. Lizzie and Laura were portrayed as naïve by always going back to the goblins even after they showed they could be dangerous This can be considered a stereotype towards women by saying they are easily tricked and see the good in everything Also shows the bond women can make and hold onto even when times get tough, whether they’re sisters or just friends We think the title of the poem has a secret meaning. Which is that the Goblins are basically sexual predators who prey on women. While Lizzie and Laura are tricked into the “trade.” We think the Goblins run a sex trade business and Laura and Lizzie get lured into the business by the Goblins who are using the fruit as bait to get the women.