Peter Pettorini Amy Magnafichi-Lucas ENG 409.05 Curriculum Unit: Reading and Writing the Rhetorical World of Satire Theoretical Overview First, we would like to thank you for attending to our AP Senior English class for the next 10 days. We feel that it might make this endeavor more meaningful and more manageable if we gave you a brief overview of the lessons and our rationale for including this unit in our curriculum. The Ancient Greeks introduced rhetoric to the world, and it predominately focused on oral persuasion. This rhetorical method was used to communicate specific points of view, persuade audiences regarding legal matters, and inform intimate groups of the latest and greatest in philosophical thought. Much has changed since then as rhetoric has taken various forms. The term, rhetoric, has also assumed multiple meanings. Rhetoric’s usage and modification really took off in the 60’s and 70’s when it was established as an academic field, not solely on its own, but as a branch of English studies (Enos, Miller and McCracken 89). But before its rise, there was some trepidation since rhetorical thought from the 50’s and 60’s, which was not recognized as an established academic field of its own, challenged the conventional views, particularly those of thought, discourse, and the nature of reasoning, and even the nature of knowledge. Interest grew and several “grass roots” groups formed to further explore and advance rhetoric as its own pursuit. Soon rhetorical analysis made the leap from traditional applications to consideration of the rhetorical situation, even authorial voice. During the 70’s, academia focused on four aims of discourse: expressive, persuasive, referential, and literary, and soon process pedagogy followed (Enos, Miller and McCracken 104). Writing was initiated with issues or questions; it explored, analyzed audiences, and formed judgments – a more heuristic method. Rhetorical method also needed to be comprehensive enough to include all features of composition. The late 70’s brought us writing for invention, consideration of audience, and ethos; it also established several doctoral programs in rhetoric and composition. The period from the 80’s through today has witnessed another surge of rhetorical activity, as graduate students, teachers, and students alike, explored meaning in their writing and focused more on process than product, continuing with purpose, audience, and effect from the 70’s (Enos, Miller and McCracken 115). The more we’ve learned of rhetoric the quicker we realized that every writing task and even every communicative act could be considered a rhetorical situation. Any interaction that is unique and communicates something has its own set of specific rhetorical attributes. Communicating electronically via text message or instant message brings forth a new rhetoric predominately utilized by the young. And although they are not aware of this, they are using rhetoric in their own unique way. Rhetoric is omni-present at all times; it is in everything we say, do, write, and learn. In this way, rhetoric is everywhere and it is up to us, teachers, to use it effectively to help prepare our students for the future. Since this unit takes place during the second semester, these AP Literature students have had the opportunity to spend the first semester honing their reading and writing skills based on rhetorical situations. Throughout our reading of short stories, essays, novels and poetry, a major focus has been the rhetoric found in each piece. The class has discussed in detail the audience, purpose and literary devices the author uses in order to convey his message or to create a specific effect on the audience. Each piece of literature we have studied has become subsequently more difficult as the year has progressed, thus leading to the challenge of discussing the rhetorical situation and rhetorical value of satire. Likewise, since the beginning of the school year, our students have been involved in a writing process that has not only included writing for the AP exam, but also for a variety of rhetorical situations. Each piece our students draft includes a statement of audience, purpose, and format. Instilling in our students the need to be aware of the effect they wish to have on their audience and the way to accomplish that effect has been essential in our writing instruction. We have also utilized peer-led writing workshops as a way to provide facilitative feedback. As this unit progresses, the tasks the students will be involved in are nothing new to them, just more difficult. Satire is a genre our students haven’t knowingly experienced. It can be assumed that several, if not all, students have experienced satire, but were unable to recognize it; in fact most popular films utilize satire within their story lines. Students often miss the nuance of satire and the potential it holds in influencing social and political change. As far as writing goes, none of our students have written satire previously. It is our intention that by engaging our students in this unit, they will become more adept at recognizing satire and its rhetorical relevance and will be able to include it in their repertoire of writing. We have chosen to present the satire readings in chronological order, and to move from written rhetoric to visual rhetoric. We have also chosen pieces of satire that have a direct political and social message with a call to action, as well as satire presented under the guise of humor in order to expose the human condition. Discussion ensues as we read or view each selection of satire. The discussion will be quite Socratic in nature, allowing students to lead or respond on topics developed by them. All year, our students’ thoughts and ideas have been valued, and it is our contention that allowing students to explore ideas in their own terms brings about deeper understanding. This Socratic discussion is a form of rhetoric all its own, and can engender growth in the understanding of the satire being analyzed, as well as improve the students’ ability to write satire. Although students should be left to lead the discussion as much as possible, it may become necessary to intervene when the discussion is off topic or eventually needs to be refocused on the rhetorical situation and rhetorical devices of the piece at hand. Some questions that may help guide you when the discussion ensues could include: What was the purpose of the piece? What effect did it have on you as a reader? How did the author convey their message or create this effect? Was the piece social or political in nature? Was there a call to action? This process will be utilized after reading or viewing each piece of satire. The writing portion of this unit will be continual, as students are expected to interact with, respond to, and inquire about texts while reading them. These responses, questions, and inquiries, are the basis for the Socratic discussions. These reading responses will be recorded in the students’ writing notebooks which have been used all year. These musings may actually inspire formal pieces of writing from our students. The culminating project for our satire unit is to have students create an original piece of satire, which accomplishes one of the two purposes of satire: social and political change or the use of humor to expose the human condition. Students also have a choice between creating a text or a visual piece of satire. Finished projects will be presented to the class which is the intended audience of their piece. The world does not discriminate; it will present information in all forms, including satire, regardless of your ability to read and understand it. In light of this, it is our obligation to arm students with a deep understanding of rhetoric and its ever-changing forms to better equip them to “read” the world in which they live. Though satire is just one type of rhetoric students will encounter, it is a difficult rhetoric to recognize and decipher. By encouraging students to work with satire, we will be providing them with the tools they will, need when they come across other difficult rhetorical texts, whether they are written or visual, in the future. Standards Goal 1: Reading A. Apply word analysis and vocabulary skills to comprehend selections. 1.A.5b Analyze the meaning of abstract concepts and the effects of particular word and phrase choices. B. Apply reading strategies to improve understanding and fluency. 1.B.5a Relate reading to prior knowledge and experience and make connections to related information. 1.B.5b Analyze the defining characteristics and structures of a variety of complex literary genres and describe how genre affects the meaning and function of the texts. 1.B.5c Evaluate a variety of compositions for purpose, structure, content and details for use in school or at work. 1.B.5d Read age-appropriate material with fluency and accuracy. C. Comprehend a broad range of reading materials 1.C.5a Use questions and predictions to guide reading across complex materials. 1.C.5b Analyze and defend an interpretation of text. 1.C.5c Critically evaluate information from multiple sources 1.C.5d Summarize and make generalizations from content and relate them to the purpose of the material. 1.C.5e Evaluate how authors and illustrators use text and art across materials to express their ideas (e.g., complex dialogue, persuasive techniques). Goal 2: Literature A. Understand how literary elements and techniques are used to convey meaning. 2.A.5a Compare and evaluate oral, written or viewed works from various eras and traditions and analyze complex literary devices (e.g., structures, images, forms, foreshadowing, flashbacks, stream of consciousness). 2.A.5c Analyze the development of form (e.g., short stories, essays, speeches, poetry, plays, novels) and purpose in American literature and literature of other countries. 2.A.5d Evaluate the influence of historical context on form, style and point of view for a variety of literary works. B. Read and interpret a variety of literary works. 2.B.5a Analyze and express an interpretation of a literary work. 2.B.5b Apply knowledge gained from literature as a means of understanding contemporary and historical economic, social and political issues and perspectives. Goal 3: Writing A. Use correct grammar, spelling, punctuation, capitalization and structure. B. Compose well-organized and coherent writing for specific purposes and audiences. 3.B.5 Using contemporary technology, produce documents of publication quality for specific purposes and audiences; exhibit clarity of focus, logic of organization, appropriate elaboration and support and overall coherence C. Communicate ideas in writing to accomplish a variety of purposes. 3.C.5a Communicate information and ideas in narrative, informative and persuasive writing with clarity and effectiveness in a variety of written forms using appropriate traditional and/or electronic formats; adapt content, vocabulary, voice and tone to the audience, purpose and situation. 3.C.5b Write for real or potentially real situations in academic, professional and civic contexts (e.g., applications, job applications, business letters, resume, petitions). Goal 4: Listening and Speaking A. Listen effectively in formal and informal situations. 4.A.5b Use techniques for analysis, synthesis, and evaluation of oral messages B. Speak effectively using language appropriate to the situation and audience. 4.B.5b Use speaking skills to participate in and lead group discussions; analyze the effectiveness of the spoken interactions based upon the ability of the group to achieve its goals. List of Materials Notes about satire and Swift background Copies of Jonathan Swift, “A Modest Proposal” Notes about Twain Copies of Mark Twain, “The Damned Human Race” Copies of two articles from the Onion DVD of Simpsons episode Students need their writing notebooks Handouts Project hand out Scoring sheet for written satire project Scoring sheet for visual satire project Context of Unit This unit takes places early in the second semester of the school year. Prior to the Satire unit, students have engaged in the literary analysis of short stories, novels and a plays. Each day we have engaged in reading, writing, and discussing literature and its tie to cultural studies. Although many topics and themes have come up during the course of the year, we have worked under an over arching frame of identity and social justice/consciousness in each unit in order to analyze and compare and contrast the idea of identity and social justice across time periods and across cultures. Prior to the Satire Unit, students read Kurt Vonnegut’s “Harrison Bergeron” as part of our short story unit. They had a brief introduction to satire at this time, and although we are going to look at satire in greater detail now, we can refer to “Harrison Bergeron” for a frame of reference. After reading, viewing, and discussing each of the satirical pieces in this unit, the students will be choosing to either write a piece of satire individually or to create a visual piece of satire in a small group of no more than four students. All pieces will be presented to the class with a discussion of the techniques they used to convey their satirical message. Daily Lesson Plans (45 minute class periods) Day 1: Introduction to Satire Provide students with background notes concerning the earliest forms of satire and the two types of traditional Greek satire. The rhetorical situations for satire will be discussed as well. The students should engage in a prior knowledge discussion of satire. Now that they have a working definition, have they encountered satire? Provide a brief background of Swift and the historical context for the reading of “A Modest Proposal.” Homework: Students are to read “A Modest Proposal” and write a response to the reading in their writer’s notebooks. Their responses should include who they believe the intended audience for the piece is, and the purpose and effect it might have had. This response should follow the guidelines set up at the beginning of the school year: a minimum one written page. Also, students should be using some form of annotation while reading, either with post-it notes or writing on the text itself. Day 2: Discussion of Swift Utilizing their annotations and their reading responses, students will engage in a Socratic style discussion of “A Modest Proposal.” The discussion should be led by the students with teacher intervention when the discussion gets off topic or if the teacher wants to ensure a certain aspect of the text is discussed. This discussion will more than likely take the entire period. Homework: Students are to re-respond to the original reading response they composed in their writers’ notebooks concerning the reading by Swift. They could focus on the following: do you view the piece differently in light of the discussion, other people’s views, any new insights you may have. A brief skim of the material might be necessary. Day 3: Introduce Twain A brief review of humor as satire rather than for political change will take place to start the period. Students will be provided a background of Twain’s essays as opposed to his fiction. Students will then receive the packet “The Damned Human Race.” They may begin reading in class, again annotating as they read. Homework: Students should complete their reading of Twain and complete a reading response in their notebooks, again, including the rhetorical situation for the piece, for tomorrow’s class. Day 4: Discussion of Twain Utilizing their annotations and their reading responses, students will engage in a Socratic style discussion of “The Damned Human Race.” The discussion should be led by the students with teacher intervention when the discussion gets off topic or if the teacher wants to ensure a certain aspect of the text is discussed. This discussion will more than likely take the entire period. Homework: Students are to re-respond to the original reading response they composed in their writer’s notebook concerning the reading of Twain. They could focus on the following: do you view the piece differently in light of the discussion, other people’s views, any new insights you may have. They should also pay attention to differences between the satire of Twain versus the satire of Swift. A brief skim of the material might be necessary. Students will also receive the two Onion articles to read and annotate for tomorrow. They should also complete a reading response to the articles as well. Day 5: Onion Satire: Circle Discussion The class will be broken into two groups creating an inner circle and an outer circle. Utilizing their annotations and their reading responses, students in the inner circle will engage in a Socratic style discussion of the Onion articles. While they discuss, the outer circle of students sitting around them will not speak during this discussion but rather respond via writing in their writer’s notebooks taking note of what they agree with, other points they would like to make and any observations of the discussion. After 15 minutes, the two circles will switch positions. The new inner group will pick up the discussion based on their notes and observations, while the new outer group takes notes on the discussion. After 15 minutes, the entire group will come together for a discussion. Homework: Students will write a follow up response to the Onion articles based on the circle discussion from class. Day 6: Visual Media and Satire: The Simpsons To build on prior knowledge, utilizing the Socratic method of discussion, the class will discuss the common threads they found in the written satire we have studied. The will create a list of common elements in their writer’s notebook. Next, the class will discuss visual satire in order to see if they can connect what they have learned concerning satire to visual media and satire. The discussion may include references to cartoons, film, commercials, etc. For the last 20 minutes of class, the students will view an episode of The Simpsons. They should annotate their viewing in their notebooks in order to create a viewer response later on. Homework: Students should write a response to the viewing of the episode paying particular attention to the devices used to create satire visually. The rhetorical situation should be noted, and they should also include any similarities and differences between written satire and visual satire. Day 7: The Simpsons Discussion Utilizing their annotations and their reading responses, students will engage in a Socratic style discussion of The Simpsons. The discussion should be led by the students with teacher intervention when the discussion gets off topic or if the teacher wants to ensure a certain aspect of the episode is discussed. This discussion will more than likely take the entire period. Homework: As a culminating response, students are to write in their writer’s notebooks how they view satire and their reaction to the value of satire as a whole. Which did they prefer, written or visual satire? Can they think of any other examples of satire they have encountered? Can they think of anything they would like to satirize either for humor or for social/political change? Day 8: Culminating Discussion Students will engage in a final discussion of rhetoric and satire. They will add to the list of characteristics for written satire that they started in their writer’s notebooks by creating a list of characteristics for visual satire. Topics for discussion can include but are not limited to: humor, visual devices, written devices, social/political action. The handout for the final project will be passed out and discussed, and students will have an opportunity to talk in small groups if they are thinking of doing a group project. Homework: Students should brainstorm a list of possible satire topics they would be interested in writing about. Days 9 & 10: Planning and Drafting Writing Students will be given two class periods to work on planning and drafting either an individual piece of satire writing or a small group visual media satire piece. For the small group project, a script must be drafted. A draft must be complete by Day 11 (which will fall on a Monday). Attached as a cover to this draft, students should include a sheet that answers the following categories: Audience Purpose Type of satire: humor or social/political change I see this satire being published in: I would like you to concentrate on: Days 11 & 12: Peer Run Writers Workshop During these two class periods, students will utilize peer reading and revision. Each student or group should have at least three others read and respond to their work. They have been practicing this technique all year. Having three others read and respond to their work should take some time if they are doing a thorough job. This may take two class periods. Those who might finish early can move on to Days 13 & 14 activities. Days 13 & 14: Finishing and Polishing During these days, students will have the opportunity to finalize their piece. If they need to use the computer lab they may. Those who need to complete any filming may do so as well. All students should be prepared to present their work on Day 15. Day 15: Satire Presentation Day All students will present their pieces by either reading them or showing their finished film. Homework: Students will write a letter to us reflecting on the satire unit as a whole. They should share what they have learned, what they found easy, what they found difficult, and anything else they feel is significant in terms of rhetoric and satire. This letter is due on Day 16, which will fall on a Monday. Resources Buckner, Aimee. Notebook Know-How: Strategies for the Writer’s Notebook. Portland: Stenhouse, 2005. Copeland, Matt. Socratic Circles: Fostering Critical and Creative Thinking in Middle and High School. Portland: Stenhouse, 2005. Enos, Miller, and McCracken. Beyond Postprocess and Postmodernism: Essays on the Spaciousness of Rhetoric. Mahwah: Lawrence Erlbaum Associates, 2003. Fletcher, Ralph, and JoAnn Portalupi. Writing Workshop: The Essential Guide. Portsmouth: Heinemann, 2001. Probst, Robert E. Response & Analysis: Teaching Literature in Secondary School. Portsmouth: Heinemann, 2004. Satire Final Project English 4-AP The purpose of this project is to give you an opportunity to create a satire. Guidelines Using a satire style of your choosing, you will create a satirical piece. Once you have decided on a topic, you will create one of the following to present your satire: Movie: create a video that depicts your satire. You can create a television show to present your information if you choose. Writing: compose an individual piece of satirical writing. This can take the form of an essay, letter, editorial, etc. Grading You will be graded on the following: Satirical elements Creativity Class participation: you will earn daily points for working Final presentation Please do not parody any faculty or staff in the school. Due Date BE BRILLIANT!! Satire Final Project English 4-AP Visual Project Rubric Students: Title: Content /30 Elements of satire present Met the length requirement – minimum 15 minutes Had a clear audience and purpose Comments: Presentation Visually appealing Organized – easy to follow All group members played an active role Creative – props, costumes, etc. Comments: TOTAL /20 /50 Satire Final Project English 4-AP Writing Project Rubric Student: Title: Content Elements of satire present Ideas well developed Had a clear audience and purpose Comments: /30 Organization Piece had a sense of direction Easy to follow Transitions Comments: /10 Conventions /10 Sentence variety Clean copy: spelling, mechanics, usage mistakes are at a minimum Comments: TOTAL /50