Differentiated Instruction Three-Part Lesson Plan SUBJECT: Grade 11 English Suggested Time: 75 minutes COURSE: EPS30 – Presentation and Speaking Skills, Open LESSON TITLE: How do speeches use rhetorical devices to persuade? CULMINATING ACTIVITY: This lesson takes place toward the end of the unit Speaking to Persuade. The culminating activity for the unit will be a 3-5 minute persuasive speech, rap, story or song on something students would like to change at school or in society. They can perform their work live in class or they can film it first. While more work, the filming option would allow for editing, which some students – particularly English language learners and those who are shy – may prefer. Furthermore, the culminating activity for the course is a multimedia CV, featuring a persuasive and memorable opening speech. This unit will give students the skills to persuade when speaking and presenting. CONNECTION to Culminating Activity: By the end of this lesson, students will be able to analyse the overall rhetorical effects of a political speech or song. They will have progressed from knowledge to analysis. Students will have: Experienced how rhetoric makes an argument more persuasive; Demonstrated their understanding of common rhetorical devices; Identified rhetorical devices in a speech; Summarized how these rhetorical devices make speeches and songs memorable and powerful; and Applied their knowledge of rhetorical devices to modern music. As a result, students will have the knowledge and skills they need to infuse their speech/rap/story/song with effective and appropriate rhetorical devices, which will make it more captivating, memorable and – therefore – more persuasive. Planning Information: Curriculum Connections Overall Expectations: 1. Identifying Elements of Effective Presentations: identify and analyse the characteristics of effective presentations; 2. Assessing Presentations: produce critical assessments of a variety of presentations. Specific Expectations: 1.2: Identify elements of style, stylistic devices, and organization in selected speeches or debates by famous orators (e.g., identify examples of repetition, rhetorical questions, and climactic order in excerpts from selected speeches; identify how a speaker uses tone to engage an audience; identify the use of repetition for emphasis in an anecdote). 2.2: Assess the appropriateness of the chosen form and the effectiveness of a presenter's ideas, in view of the topic, audience, and purpose of the presentation (e.g., assess the extent to which the needs of the audience have been met by the content and form of a presentation; use an evaluation checklist to assess clarity of arguments, persuasiveness, and quality of refutations in a speech). 2.3: Assess the style and organization of a presentation (e.g., assess the structure of a presentation; assess the use of stylistic elements, such as humour and tone, to engage an audience). Learning Goals: Understand how rhetorical devices make speeches more persuasive (know) Spot rhetorical devices and explain what they do (do) Explain why rhetoric matters now – in nearly all forms of persuasion (know) Explore when and where ancient rhetorical devices pop up in modern music (do) Recognize rhetorical devices in a speech or song and examine the effect they have on how much we remember and what we think or do (do) Essential Questions: What are common rhetorical devices used in speeches? (knowledge) How do rhetorical devices make speeches captivating and memorable? (comprehension) How do ancient rhetorical devices relate to modern music? (application) What is the overall effect of rhetorical devices in a speech or song? (analysis) Assessment and Evaluation Assessment/Success Criteria Knowledge and understanding Understanding of content (e.g., concepts, opinions, uses of literary devices) Students will understand the persuasive power of rhetoric and common rhetorical devices. Assessment Tools Informal assessment as learning: think-pairshare; question and answer; summarizing. Thinking Use of critical thinking processes (e.g., critical analysis) Students will critique the persuasiveness of a speech vs. a plain, spoken argument. Use of processing skills (e.g., analysing) Students will be able to identify and analyse rhetorical devices in speeches and songs. Application Transfer of knowledge and skills (e.g., concepts, processes) to new contexts Students will be able to transfer their knowledge of rhetorical devices used in speeches to songs. Differentiated Instruction Details Informal assessment as learning: graphic organizer; think-pairshare; question and answer; summarizing, Informal assessment of learning with the homework exercise that will be submitted the next day. Informal assessment as learning with the consolidating “six corners” exercise. How will you differentiate your lesson? Provide details Knowledge of Students Differentiation based on student: Interests Learner Profile: Styles (kinesthetic, visual/spatial, musical, linguistic, interpersonal) Differentiated Instruction Response Learning materials (content) Ways of learning (process) Ways of demonstrating learning (product) Necessary Prior Knowledge & Skills This lesson focuses on rhetorical devices that make persuasive arguments captivating and memorable. Therefore, students will already understand the elements of persuasion and have the skills to both analyse and construct a persuasive argument. Specifically they should have: Knowledge of the concepts of persuasion, purpose, audience, reason, ethics and pathos. Familiarity with the concept of a speech. Skills required to analyse the audience, speaker, purpose, reason, ethics and pathos in a persuasive argument. (In this lesson, we’ll extend this to a speech.) Materials & Resources Materials: Handouts (listed under appendices) Computer, speakers, projector Chalk for blackboard Signs for four corners exercise (see appendix) Appendices: A: “Yes We Can” B: “Why You Should Vote for Obama in 2008” C: Graphic Organizer D: Common Rhetorical Devices E: Ancient Rhetoric, Modern Music F: Homework Options Internet Resources: Six Minutes by Andrew Dlugan: http://sixminutes.dlugan.com/speechpreparation-6-rhetorical-devices/ A Handbook of Rhetorical Devices by Robert A Harris: http://www.virtualsalt.com/rhetoric.htm Agenda (to be listed on blackboard, in student language) How do speeches use rhetorical devices to persuade? 1. Find the purpose, audience, speaker, reason, ethics, and pathos in a speech 2. Which piece of persuasion gets your vote and why? 3. Common rhetorical devices and how to identify them 4. Why use rhetoric today? 5. Ancient rhetoric in modern music 6. Homework Minds On (Hook) Connections Establishing a positive learning environment Connecting to prior learning and/or experiences Setting the context for learning/ Sharing learning goals/essential questions L: Literacy AfL, AoL: Assessment for/of Learning Strategy/Assessment Tool Welcome and Essential Question (2 minutes) Welcome the class. Remind them that until now we’ve been considering the importance of audience, speaker, purpose and evidence (reason/ethics/emotion) when persuading. We’ve also considered how body language, tone of voice and pacing can make us more persuasive when speaking. And we’ve applied our persuasion skills to different forms like debates, panel discussions, storytelling, recitations, and interviews. “In the next couple of classes, we’ll finally consider one of the most famous forms of speaking to persuade: the speech. Today, our essential question is: How do speeches use different rhetorical devices to persuade?” Getting our “minds on” persuasive speeches: Video and graphic organizer (15 minutes) This will activate the students’ prior knowledge of the importance of audience, speaker, purpose and evidence to persuasion. It will also ask them to use their identification and analysis skills to evaluate a new form of persuasive speaking. This exercise will function as assessment as learning because they’ll be assessing how persuasive a speech is. This exercise will engage linguistic, visual and musical learners. 1. Tell them we’re going to watch a video of a speech, and hand out a graphic organizer and the text of the speech. 2. Ask them to note the speaker, audience, purpose, reason, ethics and emotion on a graphic organizer after the speech. Assessment as Learning 3. Play Will.i.am’s “Yes We Can.” After the video, let students know that this was a speech given by Obama that was set to music. Tell them that many of the same tricks – or rhetorical devices – speechwriters use are also used by songwriters. 4. Read aloud “Why You Should Vote for Obama in 2008,” and provide students with the text. Ask them to fill in the second part of the graphic organizer identifying the audience, speaker, purpose, reason, ethics and emotion. Action Introducing new learning or extending/reinforcing prior learning Providing opportunities for practice and application of learning (guided > independent) Strategy/Assessment Tool Why is one more persuasive than the other? Think-pair-share (15 minutes) Now ask students to compare the speech to the spoken argument and determine which is more persuasive. This activity will function as assessment as learning because students will assess the merits of the speech against the argument. This exercise will engage linguistic, visual, and interpersonal learning styles. Assessment as Learning 1. Ask students to determine which speech is more persuasive, filling in the “other” section of their charts. Here they will note anything that set each apart as better or worse. 2. Next ask students to share this with the person they sit beside, and ask them to come to an agreement about which is more persuasive. 3. Finally, ask the pairs to consult their tables of six to come to a consensus about which was more persuasive. 4. Each table will then share and defend their decision. 5. As tables share why they selected one or the other, I will write on the board some of the effects they noticed that made one more persuasive than the other. 6. I expect most students will select “Yes We Can.” I’ll identify some of the “other” persuasive elements students listed as rhetorical devices (e.g., how it reminds them of a song with a chorus = refrain, etc.). What are rhetorical devices? Modelling, Question and Answer (20 minutes) Next, I’ll broaden our sharing into a discussion of rhetorical devices. I’ll explain that rhetoric is the ancient art of argumentation, going back to the Greeks and Romans. Famous speeches and quotes by Roman and Greek orators use rhetorical devices. Some similar devices have been used in other ancient cultures around the world (e.g., African oral storytelling, Eastern storytelling, Aboriginal storytelling). I’ll then define and model how to identify a rhetorical device by prompting students to return to the speech. This exercise will define rhetorical devices for students, and it will model how to rhetorically analyze a speech. It should engage linguistic, auditory and possibly visual learners (by organizing the answers on the board). This will function loosely as assessment as learning because students will be prompted to assess the speech for a rhetorical device and learn the definition of it in the process. Assessment as Learning 1. Ask students a series of questions, starting with: Do any sentences from the speech start with the same words? That’s called anaphora. What effect does this device have on the listener? Consider how repetition emphasizes and adds rhythm and movement. Write the students’ answers on the board. 2. Follow the same format for the rest of the devices. See the appendix for the rhetorical devices, including examples from the speech. These will prompt the rest of the questions. 3. At the end of the exercise, provide students with a handout on rhetorical devices, including some of the examples we just identified. What do these ancient rhetorical devices have to do with my life? Summarizing (10 minutes) This brief exercise will reinforce the students’ understanding and give them a reason to want to remember. This exercise will engage linguistic, auditory and visual learning styles. 1. Explain that these devices help to make one’s argument more memorable and captivating. Therefore, they’re often used in song and other forms of persuasive speaking where motivating people long after you have spoken is very important. And in this day and age when everyone’s so busy, you need to stand out from the noise if you want to persuade. 2. Project the following quote on the value of rhetoric, asking different students to read each paragraph: “Good writing [or persuasive speaking] depends upon more than making a collection of statements worthy of belief, because writing is intended to be read by others, with minds different from your own. If your writing is to get through to them, it must be interesting, clear, persuasive, and memorable, so that they will pay attention to, understand, believe, and remember the ideas it communicates. To fulfill these requirements successfully, your work must have an appropriate and clear thesis, sufficient arguments and reasons supporting the thesis, a logical and progressive arrangement, and, importantly, an effective style. Play with them: keeping the reader focused with anaphora, emphasizing a point with an expletive, explaining with a metaphor or simile, organizing your work in his mind with metabasis, balancing possibilities with antithesis. You will have gone a long way toward fulfilling the four requirements mentioned at the beginning: the devices of decoration and variety will help make your reader pay attention, the devices of organization and clarification will help her understand your points, the devices of association will help her believe you, and the devices of emphasis, association, beauty, and organization will help him remember.” (Robert A. Harris, A Handbook of Rhetorical Devices) 3. Ask another five students to briefly explain each paragraph in their own words. Assessment as Learning 4. Next, tell them there is a pop quiz, and that they can choose quiz a) or quiz b), but that I can’t reveal the contents of the quiz till they’ve chosen. 5. Project quiz a: “Write down two elements of African oral storytelling, or Orature.” 6. Project quiz b: “Write down four lines from a song by K’naan, who is considered an African-Canadian troubadour.” 7. Inform the class that the quiz was just a joke. But note how many of them knew four – if not more – lines from a song by K’naan, while very few could think of two elements of Orature, which we studied last week. 8. Explain that one of the reasons – beyond the melody and the fact that they’ve likely listened to the song more often than they studied their notes – is the use of rhetorical devices, which make a song memorable long after it has been played. Consolidation and Connection Helping students demonstrate what they have learned Providing opportunities for consolidation and reflection How do songwriters use rhetorical devices to captivate an audience and make their songs memorable? “Six Corners” (12 minutes) To consolidate the students’ understanding of rhetoric, we’ll look at how these same rhetorical devices often appear in songs. This activity is designed to diagnose how familiar students are with some of the rhetorical devices I introduced. And it asks them to apply ancient rhetorical devices to modern song. This exercise will engage kinesthetic, musical, visual and linguistic learners. Strategy/Assessment Tool Assessment as Learning 1. Six pieces of paper will be labeled with the words: Anaphora, Allusion, Asyndeton, Metaphor, Simile, and Alliteration. The pieces of paper will be posted in six spots around the classroom. 2. Students will listen to a 20 second clip from a popular song. The lyrics will also be projected. After each clip, students will be asked to go to one of the corners, which represent the rhetorical device used in the song. 3. Explain that it’s possible for a clip to include more than one device, but ask students to choose one for the exercise. 4. Quickly debrief after each selection, indicating what the device was, whether more than one device was used. Also draw out the effect of the device on the students’ past experience of the song. What is the overall effect of the rhetorical devices in a song or speech? (2 minutes) For homework, ask students to select a song or speech posted on the class web page – or to choose their own – and analyse its use of rhetoric. (See appendix for options.) They must identify at least five rhetorical devices it uses, and write a paragraph that discusses the overall effects of these devices on how they experienced the song or speech. Students will have 2 days to complete the assignment, with part of the next day’s class to write the paragraph. Assessment of Learning – students will submit this exercise for evaluation two days later Accommodations/Special Needs: (this may have been identified above in DI section) How will you accommodate for students with IEPs, ELLs etc.? Throughout, the lesson I will try to use the simplest language possible to explain rhetorical devices to ELLs. The lesson will incorporate music and visuals (video) to help convey meaning. Examples will be as accessible as possible to a teen’s experience, including popular music. And all songs and speeches will also be available in text format. ELLs will be able to pick a speech or song with words and lyrics that are accessible to them. They will also be required to analyse four rather than five rhetorical devices. ELLs also have the option – like the rest of the class – of submitting their culminating assignment via video rather than perform it live. Teacher Reflection on Lesson: (to be completed after teaching, you do not need to fill this out for this assignment, just an FYI for reflective practice) Aspects that worked: Changes for next time: Appendix A Yes We Can by Barack Obama; arranged by Will.i.am It was a creed written into the founding documents that declared the destiny of a nation. Yes we can. It was whispered by slaves and abolitionists as they blazed a trail toward freedom. Yes we can. Yes we can. It was sung by immigrants as they struck out from distant shores and pioneers who pushed westward against an unforgiving wilderness. Yes we can. Yes we can. It was the call of workers who organized; women who reached for the ballots; a President who chose the moon as our new frontier; and a King who took us to the mountain-top and pointed the way to the Promised Land. Yes we can to justice and equality. (yes we can, yes we can, yes we can, yes we can...) Yes we can to opportunity and prosperity. Yes we can to opportunity and prosperity. Yes we can heal this nation. Yes we can repair this world. Yes we can. Si Se Puede (yes we can, yes we can, yes we can, yes we can...) We know the battle ahead will be long, but always remember that no matter what obstacles stand in our way, nothing can stand in the way of the power of millions of voices calling for change. We want change! (We want change! We want change! We want change...) We have been told we cannot do this by a chorus of cynics who will only grow louder and more dissonant. We've been asked to pause for a reality check. We've been warned against offering the people of this nation false hope. But in the unlikely story that is America, there has never been anything false about hope. We want change! (We want change! I want change! We want change! I want change...) The hopes of the little girl who goes to a crumbling school in Dillon are the same as the dreams of the boy who learns on the streets of LA; we will remember that there is something happening in America; that we are not as divided as our politics suggests; that we are one people; we are one nation; and together, we will begin the next great chapter in America's story with three words that will ring from coast to coast; from sea to shining sea - Yes. We. Can. (yes we can, yes we can, yes we can, yes we can, yes we can, yes we can, yes we can, yes we can...) Appendix B Why You Should Vote for Obama in 2008 (www.obamapedia.org) Obama's campaign for President is built on the premise that the Democrats must "disagree without being disagreeable" and unite America to solve issues of historic importance. He focuses on his ability to overcome partisan bickering, to work across the aisle, and to produce real results. The idea that someone would be able to unite America and get the government to productively work on important issues sounds idealistic. Understanding that cynicism, Obama stresses that Americans must embrace the 'audacity of hope.' Hope is an irrational belief, a faith in optimism, but hope is also a unifying emotion, one that resonates with people across the globe. By emphasizing that we should all believe in the possibility of a new type of politics, Obama has converted many people, including Republicans, to believe in the possibility of the anti-Bush, a non-ideological leader that respects those who disagree with him and works to find not the Democratic solution, not the Republican solution, but the best solution. Campaigning to replace Bush with a unifying leader, he has struck a chord across the country—as shown by polls, book sales, enormous crowds, and website groups. In this crucial juncture in history, he has the potential to improve how Americans perceive politics, leading to more trust in government and solving some very difficult problems. Appendix C Persuasive Elements Speaker Audience Purpose Appeal to Reason Appeal to Ethics Appeal to Emotions Other “Yes We Can” “Why You Should Vote for Obama in 2008” Appendix D Common Rhetorical Devices (from Andrew Dlugan and Robert A. Harris) *Note that examples from Will.i.am’s arrangement of Obama’s speech are listed as YWC Alliteration – repetition of the same sounds at the beginning of nearby words; look for the same letter appearing a few times in a sentence. Examples: Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers. YWC: “declared the destiny” Assonance — repetition of the same vowel sounds in nearby words. Example: “How now brown cow” Anaphora — repetition of a word or phrase at the start of successive clauses or sentences. Examples: Winston Churchill: “We shall not flag or fail. We shall go on to the end. We shall fight in France ….” YWC: “It was a creed…/It was whispered by slaves…/It was sung by immigrants….” Epistrophe — repetition of a word or phrase at the end of successive clauses or sentences. Examples: Emerson: “What lies behind us and what lies before us are tiny compared to what lies within us.” YWC: “We've been warned against offering the people of this nation false hope. But in the unlikely story that is America, there has never been anything false about hope. Refrain – a phrase or verse that recurs at intervals. Examples: Martin Luther King Jr.: “I have a dream.” YWC: “Yes we can.” Personification — giving human qualities to abstract ideas, inanimate objects, plants, or animals. Example: “The trees called out to me.” Metaphor — compares two different things by speaking of one in terms of the other. Unlike a simile or analogy, metaphor says that one thing is another thing, not just that one is like another. Examples: “Life is a highway.” YWC: “We know the battle ahead will be long” – Battle is a metaphor for the election race. Simile — compares two different things using “like” or “as.” Example: “Life is like a box of chocolates.” Antithesis – when a word, phrase, or sentence opposes the original proposition. Examples: Martin Luther King Jr: “I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.” YWC: “We've been warned against offering the people of this nation false hope. But in the unlikely story that is America, there has never been anything false about hope.” Asyndeton – excluding conjunctions (like “and”), which helps to increase the tempo and highlight a specific idea. Examples: Abraham Lincoln: “…And that government of the people, by the people, for the people shall not perish from the earth.” YWC: “We will remember that there is something happening in America; that we are not as divided as our politics suggests; that we are one people.” Paronomasia – or a pun – using a word that sounds alike but has a different meaning. Examples: “Kings worry about a receding heir line.” YWC: “and a King who took us to the mountain-top and pointed the way to the Promised Land” – here the king is not the leader of a nation, but Martin Luther King Jr. Allusion – a short, informal reference to a famous person or event. Examples: Martin Luther King Jr.: “five score years ago” – reference to Abraham Lincoln YWC: “from sea to shining sea” – allusion to God Bless America Parallelism – when parts of a sentence or sentences are expressed similarly to show that the ideas are equally important. Parallelism adds balance and rhythm and, most importantly, clarity to the sentence. Examples: “To think accurately and to write precisely are related goals.” YWC: “It was whispered by slaves and abolitionists as they blazed a trail toward freedom. It was sung by immigrants as they struck out from distant shores.” Appendix E Ancient Rhetoric in Modern Music Aretha Franklin (anaphora): What you want (oo) Baby, I got (oo) What you need (oo) Do you know I got it? (oo) All I'm askin' (oo) Is for a little respect when you come home (just a little bit) Hey baby (just a little bit) when you get home (just a little bit) mister (just a little bit) Justin Bieber (asyndeton): Baby, baby, baby oooh Like baby, baby, baby nooo Like baby, baby, baby oooh I thought you'd always be mine (mine). Jordin Sparks (simile): “Why does love always feel like a battlefield? A battlefield? A battlefield? B.O.B (alliteration, simile): “Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are like shooting stars? I could really use a wish right now Wish right now, wish right now.” Drake (allusion, alliteration): “I really can’t complain everything is kosher Two thumbs up, Ebert and Roper.” Drake Arcade Fire (metaphor, anaphora): “I used to write letters; I used to sign my name I used to sleep at night Before the flashing lights settled deep in my brain” ~ flashing lights are a metaphor for anxiety Appendix F Extension: Analysing rhetorical devices in famous speeches and songs Please select one speech or song to analyse for homework. You may also select your own. Speeches: Ain’t I a Woman? by Sojourner Truth I Have a Dream by Martin Luther King, Jr. Inaugural Address by JFK Tryst with Destiny by Jawaharlal Nehru Women's Rights to the Suffrage, 1873 by Susan B. Anthony Speech at Tilbury by Queen Elizabeth I Songs: Escarpment Blues by Sarah Harmer Keep on Rockin’ in the Free World by Neil Young Wavin’ Flag by K’naan Sunday, Bloody Sunday by U2 Pearls by India.Aire What’s Goin’ On? By Marvin Gaye