LETTER GRADE CONVERSION CHART* Ethan Frome Film and Text Comparative Essay A: 9-8 o The writers of these well-constructed essays discuss the differences between the text and film version of Ethan Frome by ably demonstrating what may have accounted for these differences and how those differences are manifested in the film. Having fashioned a convincing thesis about the director’s motivations for changing the film to suit more modern audiences (or its converse by discussing Wharton’s task of creating for a traditional literary audience), these writers support their assertions by analyzing the use of specific literary/artistic/stylistic techniques to prove their understanding of the director’s (or author’s) creative design. They make appropriate references to both the text and the film. Although not without flaws, these essays reflect the writers’ abilities to control a wide range of the elements of effect writing to provide a keen analysis of the differences between the film and text. o Developing a sound thesis, these writers discuss with clarity and conviction both how the differences are manifested what may have accounted for the differences between the film and text. These essays may not be entirely responsive to the rich suggestiveness of the film version or as precise in describing why differences exist. Although they provide specific references to the text, the analysis is less persuasive and perhaps less sophisticated than papers in the 9-8 range; they seem less insightful or less controlled, they develop fewer techniques, or their discussion of details may be more limited. Nonetheless, they confirm the writer’s ability to read literary texts and watch films analytically with comprehension and to write with organization and control. o These essays construct a reasonable if reductive thesis; they attempt to link the author/director’s techniques to the reader’s/watcher’s understanding of the differences between the text and film version and what may account for those differences. However, the discussion may be superficial, pedestrian, and/or lacking in consistent control. The organization may be ineffective or not fully realized. The analysis is less developed, less precise, and less convincing than that of upper half essays, misinterpretations of particular references or illustrations may detract from the overall effect. o These essays attempt to discuss the differences between the text and film version of Ethan Frome—and perhaps one or more techniques used by the director. The discussion, however, may be inaccurate or undeveloped. These writers may misread the text (or misinterpret the film) in an essential way, rely on paraphrase, or provide only limited attention to technique. Illustrations from the text/film tend to be misconstrued, inexact, or omitted altogether. The writing may be sufficient to convey ideas, although typically it is characterized by weak diction, syntax, grammar, or organization. Essays scored three are even less able and may not refer to technique at all. o These essays fail to respond adequately to the question. They may demonstrate confused thinking and/or consistent weaknesses in grammar or another basic element of composition. They are often unacceptably brief. Although the writer may have made some attempt to answer the question, the views presented have little clarity or coherence; significant problems with reading comprehension or film interpretation seem evident. Essays that are especially inexact, vacuous, and/or mechanically unsound should be scored 1. o A response with no more than a reference to the task o A blank paper of completely off-topic response B: 7-6 C: 5 D:4-3 F: 2-1 0 -*Please note that the above description is heavily lifted from the College Board’s Advanced Placement Program: Professional Development for English Literature and Composition book. This was to ensure the scoring aptly matches that of the exam you will take in May.