(COVER PAGE EXAMPLE) Sixth Grade Research Paper Erin McNally Amelia Earhart Mrs. McNally’s Class Writing Period 4 February 2012 1 X X X X X (11 Spaces = 11 Enter/Returns) X X X X X (at this point, change to double-spacing) Sixth Grade Research Paper (TITLE) Erin McNally (YOUR NAME) Amelia Earhart (RESEARCH TOPIC) Ms. McNally’s Class (TEACHER’S NAME) Writing Period 4(CLASS NAME & PERIOD) February 2012 (MONTH & YEAR) Remember: Font size: 12 pt. Font: Times New Roman or Arial Double Spaced 2 RESEARCH PAPER GRADE SHEET Topic Selection: _____ (5 points pts – selected & signed) Note Cards: _____ (75points – 1 pt/card (60 total) & 5 points if on time) _____ _____ _____ Sub Topics/Web of Ideas: _____ (12 pts – 3 pts/subtopic) _____ _____ _____ (Note cards need to categorized by subtopic and organized within subtopics) Works Cited Required Forms: _____ (20 pts – 5 pts each) Materials Brought to Class: _____ (10 pts) __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __ __ Taxonomy _____ (5 pts) ___ ___ ___ ___ Impact Summary/Impact Frame (in packet) _____ (25 pts) (Note cards need to categorized by subtopic and organized within subtopics. Also, use the “Research Paper Frame” as a guideline! Re-write your own intro and conclusion on the Outline page and add other topics, if needed, to the tree map. As you type your paper from the Research Paper Frame, you should change the sentences and structure of the paper to make it your own.) Outline (choose one: tree map or outline)_____ (25 pts) ► Adult Signature: _____ (5 pts) Signature: ______________________________ Parents/guardians, please review with your student the Taxonomy, Impact Summary and Outline (also, this review should include how the student is doing in the research process thus far). Title Page: _____ (6 pts – 1 pt/line) Works Cited Page: _____ (20 pts – 5 pts each) Conventions: _____ (15 pts – (1) peer edit, (2) adult edit w/ sig., (3) selfevaluation) (1)_____ (2)_____ (3)_____ ► Parent Signature: ___ ___ ___ ___ ___ _____ (5 pts) Signature: (on Adult Edit form) Final Paper Content: _____ (91 pts) Presentation: _____ (20 pts) 3 SEQUENCE & FLOW OF THE RESEARCH PAPER Topic Selection with Parent Signature & Pre-Research Choose Top 5 with Parent Signature Note Cards (Total: 60) 20 20 1 Internet Source w/ highlights Taxonomy (in packet) Works Cited Forms 4 Required forms (& any add’l forms in packet) 20 Impact Frame Outline (Tree Map) & organize note cards Complete Impact page in packet See Example in packet Typed Title Page Type First Draft 2nd Parent Signature & Adult Edit Set up Word document Must be at least 2 full typed pages & Works Cited Turn in Final Draft Presentation Preparation 1st Parent Signature Edit & Revise Presentations Includes: title page, 2 page paper & works cited 4 WHAT SHOULD MY RESEARCH PAPER LOOK LIKE? Title Page 1st Page (includes intro paragraph, etc) Works Cited (At least 4 sources: 1 book, 2 internet, and 1 of your choice in alphabetical order) Works Cited (if necessary) 2nd page Page 3 (optional, but no more than 3 typed pages) Research papers should consist of: Title Page (should look like the cover of the packet) Body of paper is at least 2 full pages typed and double-spaced, but no more than 3 typed pages Work Cited page (with at least 4 required resources in alphabetical order) Word Processing Guidelines: 12 point font size Font: Times New Roman or Arial Double Spaced No extra spaces between paragraphs (only hit return/enter once) Paper does not conclude with “the End” nor does it contain “No-No” words – see list near the end of this packet Your paper should be saved in your Novell folder on the school’s server in a file folder labeled “Research Paper” 5 Book: Works Cited Form (SAMPLE) 1 Source #: _________ Bolden, Tanya Author: ______________________________________________ none Editor: _______________________________________________ Portraits of African-American Heroes Title: ________________________________________________ New York City of Publication: ______________________________________ Scholastic, Inc. Name of Publisher: ______________________________________ 2003 Copyright Date: ________________________________________ WORKS CITED (SAMPLE OF WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE WHEN TYPED) Bolden, Tanya. Portraits of African-American Heroes. New York: Scholastic, Inc. 2003. SAMPLE NOTE CARD Informational notes taken on note cards need to be written in YOUR OWN WORDS (which is paraphrasing) and each note card should contain only one idea/complete thought. Write the page number from the source you found this information here Write your name (first & last) in the upper left-hand corner of the note card Write the source number here (from your packet) 1 Amanda Miller Page 10 Matthew Henson was born in Maryland in 1866, just after the Civil War; his parents were poor farmers* Early Life After you have all 60 note cards (or more) you will separate them into subtopics; write the subtopic title here Write your notes here (reminder: all notes must be written in YOUR OWN WORDS) * 2-3 facts per note card 6 WORKS CITED FORMS 1 Book: Works Cited Form (REQUIRED) Source #: _________ Author: ______________________________________________ Editor: _______________________________________________ Title: ________________________________________________ City of Publication: ______________________________________ Name of Publisher: ______________________________________ Copyright Date: ________________________________________ Author or Editor (last name first, then first name). Title. City where the book was published: Publisher, copyright date. 2 Internet: Works Cited Form (REQUIRED) Source #: _________ Author or editor (if available):_______________________________ “Page Title”:___________________________________________ Site Title: _____________________________________________ Name of sponsor/publisher (if available):_______________________ Date Published (if available):_______________________________ Date of Access (date on which you accessed the website for the information): ________________________________________ URL/Web Address: ______________________________________ Online Article Author (if available). “Page title.” Site title. Name of sponsor/publisher. Date published. Date of Access <http://www.addressofsite.com>. Online Book Author or editor (if available). Name of Book. Site title. Publisher, year. Date of access (day month year) < http://www.addressofsite.com>. Web Site Site title. Author/web manager, title. Date published. Site sponsor. Date of access (day month year) http://www.addressofsite.com>. 7 WORKS CITED FORMS (CONTINUED) 3 Internet: Works Cited Form (REQUIRED) Source #: _________ Author (if available):______________________________________ “Page Title”:___________________________________________ Site Title: _____________________________________________ Name of sponsor/publisher (if available):_______________________ Date Published (if available):_______________________________ Date of Access (date on which you accessed the website for the information): ________________________________________ URL/Web Address: ______________________________________ 4 Your Choice: Works Cited Form (REQUIRED) Source #: _________ Author: ______________________________________________ Editor: _______________________________________________ Title of Article: _________________________________________ Source Title: ___________________________________________ City of Publication: ______________________________________ Name of Publisher: ______________________________________ Copyright Date: ________________________________________ Edition: __________________ Volume: ___________________ Date of Access: _______________________ URL/web address: ___________________________________________ 8 WORKS CITED FORM (CONTINUED) __________________: Works Cited Form (EXTRA) Source #: _________ Author: ______________________________________________ Editor: _______________________________________________ Title of Article: _________________________________________ Source Title: ___________________________________________ City of Publication: ______________________________________ Name of Publisher: ______________________________________ Copyright Date: ________________________________________ Edition: __________________ Volume: ___________________ Date of Access: _______________________ URL (web address): ___________________________________________ ____________________: Works Cited Form (EXTRA) Source #: _________ Author: ______________________________________________ Editor: _______________________________________________ Title of Article: _________________________________________ Source Title: ___________________________________________ City of Publication: ______________________________________ Name of Publisher: ______________________________________ Copyright Date: ________________________________________ Edition: __________________ Volume: ___________________ Date of Access: _______________________ URL (web address): ___________________________________________ Use additional works cited form worksheets, if needed. 9 Taxonomy of _____________ A N B O C P D Q E R F S G T H U I V J W K X L Y M Z 10 WEB OF IDEAS SUBTOPIC #1 SUBTOPIC #2 TOPIC SUBTOPIC #3 11 RESEARCH PAPER FRAME Focus Questions: Why should this person be remembered? What led this person to become who he/she became? What happened in his/her life to cause him/her to become the person he/she became? What did he/she have to overcome? What led to his/her success? What was his/her impact? Why should people know about him/her? Intro: ________________________ (name of person – full name) was/is a/an ______________ (identity of accomplishment – leader, writer, teacher, president, activist, musician sports hero/legend, etc.) who __________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________(changed/improved/invented, etc.). ______________ (last name of person) lived _________________________________________ ___________________________________ (describe the time in which the person lived, so the reader can better understand what life was like during this time). In order to succeed, ____ (he/she) had to overcome ________________________________________________________. Because of __________________________ (last name of person) ______________________ ________________________________________________________ (what changed in the world because of him/her?). Background Biography Information: ______________________ (last name of person) was born in __________ (year) in __________________ (major city, state, country, if necessary). (Explain what life was like during this time for this person & how did what was happening affect him/her? For example, was there a war going on? Was he/she facing racial boundaries? Was he/she raised in a family where they didn’t have a lot? Etc.): _________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________. (Describe family life, education, struggles he/she faced, success at an early age, is there another 12 person who helped this person overcome any hardships? etc., only the most important information!): __________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________. Because ___________________ (last name of person) faced _____________________________ ______ (he/she) decided__________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________(what was his/her goal?). Body Paragraph: Topic: Accomplishment & Achievements Details: 1. 2. 3. Body Paragraph: Topic: Impact on Society Details: 1. 2. 3. Conclusion: _______________________ (last name of person) has proven that _________________ ___________________________________________________________ (what did he/she accomplish & how did he/she do so?). Early in life, _______________________ (last name of person) _____________________________________________ (what did he/she have to overcome?). Because of _______(his/her) _________________ (trait that describes the person: perseverance, intelligence, ability, risk-taking, talent, etc.) ____________________(last name of person) was able to _________________________________ (how would you describe his/her success?). _________________________________________________________ (describe the impact this person has made). 13 OUTLINE – Classifying Information (Tree Map) *You must choose one outline to complete Introduction Conclusion 14 Name________________Core___ OUTLINE *You must choose one outline to complete Introduction paragraph: Grabber___________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Sentence about 1st body paragraph_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Sentence about 2nd body paragraph_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Sentence about 3rd body paragraph_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Clincher(restate topic sentence__________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Body Paragraph 1: Topic Sentence:_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Closing Sentence (transitional Sentence)_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Body Paragraph 2: Topic Sentence:_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ 15 Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Closing Sentence (transitional Sentence)_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Body Paragraph 3: Topic Sentence:_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Detail/Example_____________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ _______________________ Closing Sentence (transitional Sentence)_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Conclusion: Rephrase the main idea______________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Summarize 1st body paragraph_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Summarize 1st body paragraph_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Summarize 1st body paragraph_________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________ Closing sentence (give opinion)___________________________________________________ 16 “No-No” WORDS FOR FORMAL WRITING As you edit your paper, circle any of these words – if you find them in your paper – and make sure to change and replace them for the final copy. Add a tally mark(s) to the words/phrases you found – and then be sure to change them! Me I You In this paragraph I will… Let’s read on to find out… My paper is about… My story is about…. Let me tell you about…. This paper is about… Here is some information on… Don’t you want to read about… I hope you enjoyed my paper… I tried to tell you… And that was my paper… The End We Remember, in a research paper: No feelings or opinions should be expressed (i.e. Annie Oakley was awesome; or, Annie Oakley was the greatest woman to ever shoot a rifle...unless it’s proved in your research!) No pronouns (I, me, you, we, etc.) AUTHOR’S EDIT & EVALUATION 1 = Not Yet; 2 = Emerging; 3 = Developing; 4 = Maturing; 5 = WOW! Strong Content: Organization & Ideas Proper title page Opening paragraph introduced the topic Facts are stated in your own words Topic sentences include the main idea Details in paragraphs support main idea Paper highlights IMPACT Concluding paragraphs sums up report 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 3 3 3 3 3 3 3 4 4 4 4 4 4 4 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 Grammar, Mechanics & Word Choice Avoids “No-No” words Uses paragraphs, indents Uses variety of sentence lengths Starts sentences with a variety of words No spelling errors Capitalized and punctuated correctly Works cited in correct format 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 2 2 2 2 2 2 2 3 3 3 3 3 3 3 4 4 4 4 4 4 4 5 5 5 5 5 5 5 17 RESEARCH PAPER CALENDAR & DUE DATES February – March 2012 Monday 1/30 Tuesday 1/31 Wednesday 2/1 Thursday 2/2 Topic Selection Sheet Handed Out Friday 2/3 - 2/6 2/7 Intro to Note 2/8 Topic Selection Sheet due - taking *M.C Presentation 2/13- 2/14 2/15 2/16 2/17 Classroom: Research -Start Taxonomy *You will need your supplies today Classroom and M.C: Research 1st 20 Note cards due M.C and classroom research Classroom: organize notecards - 2nd 20 Note cards due (Total: 40) 2/20 2/21 2/22 2/23 2/24 No School Classroom - Finish Taxonomy - Begin Impact & Sub Topics (Idea Web) *Classroom - Continue Impact & Sub Topics (Idea Web) -Begin Outline *Classroom - Continue Outline - Works Cited Forms Completed (in packet) -3rd 20 Note cards due (Total: 60) - Format title page, spacing, etc. typed Transition sentences -Due: Impact, Research Frame, Outline & 1st Parent Signature 2/28 2/29 3/1 *C. L - Type rough draft and Works Cited page Peer Edit *C. L - Parent Edit of Rough Draft with 2nd Parent Signature Due -Typing 3/2*C L -last day to type final paper 3/6 3/7 3/8 3/9 *CLASSROOM Presentations *CLASSROOM Presentations 3/15 *CLASSROOM Presentations 3/17 *CLASSROOM Presentations 2/27 *C.L - Type Rough Draft 3/5 2/9 Note taking Note taking – overview of filling out note cards -Packet handed out w/ calendar Final paper due 2/10 Continue to research in Science class Classroom presentation Overview 3/12 3/13 3/14 *CLASSROOM Presentations *CLASSROOM Presentations *CLASSROOM Presentations M.C. = Media Center C.L. = Computer Lab P = Presentation 18