Scoring Criteria for Paper Adapted from CSU Student Name: ___________________________________ Topic: __________________________________________ Criterion Thesis 10 pts Structure 15 pts Use of Sources 20 pts Logic and Argumentation 15 pts Mechanics 10 pts Unacceptable Acceptable Good Excellent 8 pts Promising, but may be slightly unclear, or lacking in insight or originality. Paper title does not connect well with thesis. 9-10 pts Easily identifiable, plausible, novel, sophisticated, insightful, crystal clear. Connect well with paper title. 12-13 pts Generally clear and appropriate, though may wander occasionally. May have a few unclear transitions, or a few paragraphs without strong topic sentences. 14-15 pts Evident, understandable, appropriate for thesis. Excellent transitions from point to point. Work displays critical thinking and avoids simplistic description or summary of information. 0-11 pts Insufficient number or inappropriate sources. Many citations are secondary source. Failure to support statements, or literature is provided that does not support any statement. Quotes not integrated into sentences; “plopped in” improperly. Does not properly use intext citations. Over use of second hand references. Many citations missing in reference section. 0-8 pts Ideas do not flow at all. Paper is very choppy. Does not lead to logically to conclusion. 6-7 pts May be unclear (vague), appear unoriginal, or offer relatively little insight, provides little around which to structure the paper. Paper title and thesis do not connect well. 9-11 pts Generally unclear, often wanders or jumps around. Few or weak transitions, many paragraphs without topic sentences. Quotes appear without analysis relating them to the topic, or analysis offers nothing beyond the quote. 12-15 pts Sources used to support some points. Points often lack supporting literature, or literature used where inappropriate (may be no clear point). Some citations are secondary source. Over-reliance on quotes which may be poorly integrated into sentences. In-text citations used with minor errors or may be missing in references. 9-11 pts Logic may often fail or argument is unclear. No connection between ideas and thesis. 16-17 pts Sources used to support most points. Some sources do not support point, or may appear where inappropriate. Mostly primary sources are used. Direct quotes rarely used and only to make stylistic point. Paraphrasing properly used throughout. Demonstrates indepth understanding of the topic. Good use of in-text citations. Nearly all citations listed in reference section. 18-20 pts Primary sources used to support every point. Quotes used sparingly if at all. Cited material wellparaphrased throughout. Demonstrates in-depth understanding of topic. Excellent use of in-text citations. All citations included in the reference section and all referenced materials properly cited. 12-13 pts The paper is clearly analytical or argumentative. Paper usually flows logically and conclusions are clearly drawn from ideas presented. 0-5 pts Serious problems in sentences structure and grammar. Frequent major errors in citation style, punctuation, and spelling. May have many run-on sentences. Errors are so great that paper is difficult to comprehend. 6-7 pts Some problems in sentence structure and grammar. Some errors in punctuation, citation style, and spelling. May have some run-on sentences. Some mistakes get in the way of comprehension. 8 pts Sentence structure and grammar strong despite occasional errors. Punctuation and citation style usually correct. Some minor spelling errors or occasional run-on sentence. Minor errors do not prevent comprehension. 14-15 pts The paper is clearly analytical or argumentative. All ideas in the paper flow logically. If argumentative, the argument is identifiable, and conclusions are sound. 9-10 pts Sentence structure and grammar excellent. Correct use of punctuation and citation style, minimal or no spelling errors. No runon sentences. No errors that interfere with comprehension. 0-5pts Difficult to identify at all. May be bland restatement of obvious point 0-8 pts Unclear, often because thesis is weak or nonexistent. Transitions confusing and unclear. No clear sections. Very little or very weak attempt to relate literature to argument. More description than critical thinking. Score Reference List/Resources 15 pts 0-8 pts References are of insufficient number, incorrectly formatted, or from unapproved sources (e.g., lay magazines, online news sites). APA Style (not including in-text citations) 15 pts 0-8 pts Is not APA formatted or contains numerous serious formatting errors. Deductions 0-100 -100 pts Plagiarized Total Comments 9-11 pts Met minimum number of sources, but may not be in proper APA format. Some minor citation errors. Lack of professional sources or only very old sources used. 9-11 pts APA style but numerous serious errors such as headings/subheadings, justification, font size, headers, etc. -50 pts At least 2/3rds of paper not original work. 12-13 pts Properly APA formatted with only minor errors. Most sources from professional journals. Up to date and reputable sources mostly used. At least minimum number of acceptable sources used. 12-13 pts APA style with only minor errors. Includes proper cover page, section headings, font size, headers, etc. 14-15 pts Mostly sound reputable sources (professional journals) and properly APA formatted. Clearly identified recent research on the topic. More than sufficient number of sources to make the point. 14-15 pts. Publishable in style. Includes proper title page, section headings, font size, headers, etc. -10 pts Substantial portion of paper quoted or more than 1 week late. -5 pts Unexcused late penalty of less than 1 week.