GED (for ESL): Writing Rubric: Business Letters Exceptional Competent Purpose Unity Coherence Details Grammar/Vocabulary Format Developing Beginning (4) Thesis statement has specific main & controlling ideas. Concluding statement is similar to thesis statement. Topic sentences (of body paragraphs) have specific main & controlling ideas. (3) Thesis statement has main & controlling ideas. Concluding statement is similar to thesis statement. Topic sentences (of body paragraphs) have main & controlling ideas. (2) Thesis statement may be missing controlling idea/main idea may be too general. Concluding statement may be missing or incomplete. Topic sentences (of body paragraphs) may be missing controlling ideas. (1) Thesis &/or concluding statements are missing. Topic sentences are missing. (4) All support paragraphs exactly focus on the thesis statement. All support sentences in body paragraphs focus on the topic sentence. (3) All support paragraphs focus on the thesis statement. All support sentences in body paragraphs focus on the topic sentence. (2) Support paragraphs may not focus on the thesis statement. Some support sentences in body paragraphs do not focus on the topic sentence. (1) Support paragraphs do not match thesis statement &/or support sentences in body paragraphs do not focus on the topic sentence. (4) A variety of connectors are used appropriately (between paragraphs & within paragraphs). (3) Connectors are used appropriately (between paragraphs & within paragraphs). (2) Some connectors are used, but more are needed (between paragraphs &/or within paragraphs). (1) Connectors are missing. (4) A variety of details are given: explanation, examples, etc. There are 3 or more body paragraphs (6 or more sentences each). (3) Enough details are given. There are 2 body paragraphs (4 or more sentences each). (2) More details are needed. There are 2 body paragraphs, but they are short (under 4 sentences). (1) Not enough details are given—paragraph is too short. There is only 1 body paragraph & it may be short (under 4 sentences). (4) Grammar (verb tense, subject/verb agreement, articles, word order, etc.), complex sentences & vocabulary are used appropriately & correctly (3) Grammar (verb tense, subject/verb agreement, articles, word order, etc.), complex sentences & vocabulary are generally used appropriately & correctly. (2) Grammar (verb tense, subject/verb agreement, articles, word order, etc.), complex sentences & vocabulary are awkward, but overall meaning is understood. (1) Use of grammar & vocabulary is awkward; overall meaning can not be understood. (2) Nothing is indented. One space is skipped between paragraphs. Everything is aligned along the left margin. Typed papers: single-spaced paragraphs, 1-inch margins are used. Handwritten: red-line margins are used; Writing begins on the first line. (0) All or some of the following occur: Paragraphs &/or sentences are indented. There is no space between paragraphs. Typed Papers: double-spaced, margins are bigger/smaller than 1 inch. Handwritten papers: red-lined margins are not used; writing begins on the back or bottom of the paper