Ocean City School District Editing Symbols – High School Mark agr awk Instruction Example ___________________________________________________________________________ check agreement of subject / verb, pronoun / antecedent The student lost their book. ___________________________________________________________________________ awkward expression The storm had the effect of causing millions of dollars in damage. ____________________________________________________________________________ Capital letter needed ____________________________________________________________________________ / lower case letter needed ____________________________________________________________________________ not clear She liked pears with apples but not apples. NC ____________________________________________________________________________ avoid clichés “Keep your nose to the grindstone.” (a popular saying, expression, etc.) ____________________________________________________________________________ NC CL close up this space ____________________________________________________________________________ frag ˄ insert a word, letter, punctuation ____________________________________________________________________________ parallel structure needed My income is bigger than my wife. ____________________________________________________________________________ // prep · delete ____________________________________________________________________________ sentence fragment Simon and his roommate from college. frag ____________________________________________________________________________ or ̓ rep RO / // new paragraph needed ____________________________________________________________________________ avoid prepositions at the end of a sentence That is a situation that I had not thought of. ____________________________________________________________________________ punctuation mark incorrect or missing ____________________________________________________________________________ use quotation marks ____________________________________________________________________________ repetitious use of a word or expression The car was blue in color. ____________________________________________________________________________ run-on sentence Mary came to the party she brought her sister Janet. RO ____________________________________________________________________________ space needed between words Mark reads a/lot of books. ____________________________________________________________________________ spelling is incorrect Anne invited all her freinds to the party. ____________________________________________________________________________ TS WC transpose letters or words ____________________________________________________________________________ tense shift John runs the marathon yesterday. TS ____________________________________________________________________________ word choice needs improvement Todd did good and felt well. WC WC ____________________________________________________________________________ DQ J LD MS Pass QI T S direct quote is needed junk list word lacks development / support of ideas manuscript error passive voice quote incorporation is weak transitional word or phrase needed streamline / condense