Dialectical Journal Peer Edit QUOTES • There should be two quotes. If one is missing write MISSING QUOTES • Missing setup? Write NO SETUP • Missing line #? Write LINE #?? • Punctuation leading into the quote? If incorrect or missing, circle and fix it for them. • Incorrect formatting? Circle and write NEED TO FIX – “Suddenly I realize/ That…I would break/ Into blossom” (ll. 22-24). QUOTES • Does the quote/example support • the topic? If not write DOES NOT SUPPORT TOPIC If the setup is weak or the quote could be blended more, write WORK ON SETUP ANALYSIS • Each quote should be followed by at least two sentences of analysis. If not, write TOO SHORT • If the sentence is incomplete or a fragment write AWK • if I, me, my, we, us, our or you is used circle it ANALYSIS • Are there key words from the question in the analysis? If not write ADD KEY WORDS FROM QUESTION • Does the analysis make sense and explain: 1. How Wright used imagery? • 2. How that image shows joy?