STUDENT: SECTION: ASSIGNMENT: GRADE: Official Grading Rubric for UWG English Department’s First-Year Writing Program C B A D F To earn a “C” on an essay, a student must 1. Respond to the constraints of the assignment. 2. a. Focus on the topic. b. Order the parts logically. c. Develop the parts with sufficient detail. d. Divide the whole into logical paragraphs. e. Develop one clear assertion in each paragraph. 3. Provide a clear thesis. 4. Have a beginning, middle, and end. 5. Provide enough elaboration with appropriate examples and analysis to make the intent understandable. 6. Have sufficient control of standard written English that errors, including grammar, punctuation, and spelling, if present, do not cause serious confusion. To earn a “B” on an essay, a student must do 1 and 2 above and 7. Provide strong opening and closing paragraphs, with a clear purpose and a sophisticated thesis. 8. Recognize complexities and show evidence of serious consideration of the topic. 9. Support most points with appropriate, well-analyzed examples and intelligent arguments. 10. Show clear logical development and organization throughout. 11. Have few errors. If present, they must not interfere with communication. To earn an “A” on an essay, a student must do 1, 2, 7, and 8 above and 12. Support all points with appropriate, fully analyzed examples and compelling, insightful arguments. 13. Show persuasive logical development and organization throughout. 14. Maintain a distinctive voice and consistent viewpoint. 15. Have interesting, varied, logical sentences. 16. Have nearly error-free writing. A “D” grade results from Failing to clearly respond to the assignment, or A lack of qualities listed in 2 and 3 above, or Errors that cause substantial confusion or incoherence. An “F” grade results from Two or more of the faults listed in “D” above. Constraints of the assignment include the following: Required topic/text. MLA Style Strong, analytical thesis Strong, assertive topic sentences Textual support for argument Sufficient workshop draft submitted? yes / no Workshop attended? yes / no Some Grading Notations Agreement error: subject/verb or pronoun agreement Agr. Awkward sentence construction Awk Argument does not advance due to error in logic or in Argu. BQ CS Cliché Contr. DM Diction Frag FQ Integ. LC or UC MLA Overgeneralization Poss. PV Punc Ref RO Slang Sp So What? SS Syn. TS Trans VT WW WC O √ ║ ^ ??? organization. Put in block quote: four lines or more of quote go in block quote format. pp.263; Ch.61 Comma splice pp.453-59, 515 Overused expression or idea Be careful about contractions; know your audience (p.523) Dangling Modifier Problems with phrase or clause Fragment pp.446-52 Floating Quote: All quotes must be introduced, cited and analyzed. Quote not integrated correctly. pp.261-264 Wrong case: Lower or upper case Not MLA format. Tab 6. Broad application of an idea—stereotyping and/or assumptions not based in fact Possessive form of word; pp.520-522 Passive voice creates wordy sentences—use active voice; pp.395, 417-418 Error in punctuation. Ch 57-62 Unclear pronoun antecedent—not clear to whom your pronoun refer; pp.478-82 Run-on sentence; pp.453-458 See Ch. 47 for advice about appropriate language Spelling error Your thesis is not fully developed. You are missing your stance on the argument. Sentence Structure Error Syntax error Topic Sentence needs revising. TS must be a claim. Transition missing or needs more development (between sentences and between paragraphs); pp.83-85, chart on p.457 Verb tense error; pp.400-401 Wrong word/usage problem; Chapters 47-49 Word choice; Chapters 47-49 Circled information needs to be revised or deleted. Any “It is” or “There are” phrases, or any variation thereof, need to be deleted from formal writing. Ch 38. Insightful remark Move item (usually punctuation or quote marks) Parallelism: Make sentence parallel for clarity Insert here: usually a missing word or punctuation Meaning is unclear Delete Close up space ADDITIONAL COMMENTS: