Paraphrasing Tips
What Is a Paraphrase? A paraphrase is a rewording of another writer's text, explanation, argument, or narrative. It is about
the same length as the original, but is substantially different in wording and sentence structure.
Why Paraphrase? If your purpose is one of the following, you may wish to paraphrase a portion of a text:
to make sure that you fully understand what the text says (for example, a poem or a Bible verse or a speech from a play by
Shakespeare);
to discuss someone's argument or text directly;
to use as expert evidence for a point you are making in your own argumentative text;
to present an opposing point of view that you wish to refute.
How to Paraphrase a Text
Use alternative wording to the author’s throughout your paraphrase.
If you use the author’s words to name important ideas, enclose his or her phrases in quotation marks.
Present the ideas of the original using your own sentence structure as well as your own word choice. Following the author’s
sentence structure, even if you use alternative wording, is considered plagiarizing.
Cite your source, even if you do not use a direct quotation from the source.
When including a paraphrase in your text, introduce the topic in your own words, but make it clear that you are presenting
someone else’s ideas with wording like “H. H. Smith argues that . . .” or “According to medical researcher Donald Smith, . . .” or
“Smith also claims that . . .”.
Original Text
Paraphrase
"If you're coping with an illness or want to exchange views about
a medical topic, you'll want to find your way to a newsgroup.
Despite the name, these are not collections of news items. They
are, in effect, virtual bulletin boards open to anyone who cares to
participate. The messages generally consist of plain text"
(Schwartz 28).
In a recent Consumer Reports article, the author suggests
finding a relevant newsgroup if you have a particular
medical problem or if you want to talk with others about a
medical subject. Newsgroups are online bulletin boards that
are available to anyone; in spite of their name, they are not
news reports. Anyone who wishes to may join in a
newsgroup discussion (Schwartz 28).
Original Text
Paraphrase
“In some respects, the increasing frequency of mountain lion
encounters in California has as much to do with a growing human
population as it does with rising mountain lion numbers. The
scenic solitude of the western ranges is prime cougar habitat, and
it is falling swiftly to the developer’s spade. Meanwhile, with
their ideal habitat already at its carrying capacity, mountain lions
are forcing younger cats into less suitable terrain, including
residential areas. Add that cougars have generally grown bolder
under a lengthy ban on their being hunted, and an unsettling
scenario begins to emerge” (Rychnovsky, “Clawing into
Controversy,” p. 40)
Californians are encountering mountain lions more
frequently because increasing numbers of humans and a
rising population of lions is competing for the same
territory. Humans have moved into mountainous regions
once dominated by the lions, and the wild habitat that is left
cannot sustain the current lion population. Therefore, the
older lions are forcing younger lions out of the wilderness
and into residential areas. And because of a ban on hunting,
these younger lions have become bolder—less fearful of
encounters with humans.
Hult, Christine A., and Thomas N. Huckin. The New Century Handbook. Boston: Allyn & Bacon, 1999. 207-208.
Hacker, Diana. Rules for Writers. 5th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2004. 398-399.
© By Alice L. Trupe, updated August 22, 2005
Bridgewater College Writing Center