Name Subway Poem Checklist and Rubric Self Checklist __ gives physical description of the character(s) __ gives psychological description of the character(s) (write “P” by description on rough draft) __ give social description of the character(s) (write “S” by description on rough draft) __ has minimum number of lines #_____ __ deals with race relations and/or stereotypes (underline) Point of View Poem 45 Points Below Standard Approaches Standard Length – Line length minimum = 5 words per line (10 pts) Physical Descriptions (5 pts) 10-14 lines: Lines do not meet minimum length (6 pts) 15-19 lines: Lines do not meet the minimum length (7 pts) 20-24 lines. Each line meets the minimum length. (9 pts) Missing (0 pts) 1-2 concrete details describing clothes, body, race, face, age or hair. (2pts) 3-4 concrete details describing clothes, body, race, face, age, or hair. (4 pts) Psychological Description (10pts) Vague or unclear emotion/feeling, thoughts or judgments (5pts) 1 clear thought, emotion/feeling, or judgment (7 pts) 2 clear thoughts, emotions/feelings, or judgments (9 pts) 3 or more clear thoughts, emotions/feelings, or judgments (10 pts) Missing concrete details that are linked to status/class (0 pt) Missing references to race or stereotypes (0 pt) Missing rough draft (0 pts) 1 concrete detail that indicate social class/status (3 pts) 1 vague reference to racism or stereotypes (2 pts) Final draft is missing highlighting and rough draft is missing most marks from the checklist. (2pts) 2 concrete details that indicate social class/status (4 pts) 1 clear references to racism or stereotypes (4pts) Final draft has proper highlighting. Rough draft has most marks from self checklist. (4 pts) 3 or more concrete details that indicate social class/status (5 pts) 2 or more clear references to racism or stereotypes (5pts) Final draft has proper highlighting. Rough draft has all the appropriate marks listed on the self checklist. (5pts) 5 or more spelling or grammar errors (2pts) 3-4 spelling or grammar errors (3pts) 1-2 spelling or grammar errors (4pts) 0 spelling or grammar errors (5pts) Thoughts could start “I wonder/imagine” Social Description (5 pts) Stereotype/Race Relations (5 pts) Writing process (5 pts) Conventions (5 pts) Meets Standard Exceeds Standards 25 or more lines: Lines are numbered/separated by 5s. Each line meets the minimum length. (10 pts) 5 or more concrete details describing clothes, body, race, face, age, or hair. (5pts) Name Personal Poem Checklist and Rubric Self Checklist __ gives physical description of the character(s) __ gives psychological description of the character(s) (write “P” by description on rough draft) __ give social description of the character(s) (write “S” by description on rough draft) __ has minimum number of lines #_____ __ deals with race relations and/or stereotypes or judgments (underline) Personal Poem 45 Points Below Standard Approaches Standard Length – Line length minimum = 5 words per line (10 pts) 10-14 lines: Lines do not meet minimum length (6 pts) 15-19 lines: Lines do not meet the minimum length (7 pts) 20-24 lines. Each line meets the minimum length. (9 pts) 25 or more lines: Lines are numbered/separated by 5s. Each line meets the minimum length. (10 pts) Physical Descriptions (10 pts) Missing (0 pts) 1-2 concrete details describing clothes, body, race, face, age or hair. (7 pts) 3-4 concrete details describing clothes, body, race, face, age, or hair. (8 pts) 5 or more concrete details describing clothes, body, race, face, age, or hair. (10 pts) Psychological Description (10pts) Vague or unclear emotion/feeling, thoughts or judgments (5pts) 1 clear thought, emotion/feeling, or judgment (7 pts) 2 clear thoughts, emotions/feelings, or judgments (9 pts) 3 or more clear thoughts, emotions/feelings, or judgments (10 pts) Social Description (5 pts) Missing concrete details that are linked to status/class (0 pt) 1 concrete detail that indicate social class/status (3 pts) 2 concrete details that indicate social class/status (4 pts) 3 or more concrete details that indicate social class/status (5 pts) Conflict – race, judgments, or stereotypes (5 pts) Missing references to race or stereotypes (0 pt) 1 vague reference to a conflict related to racism or stereotypes (2 pts) 1 clear reference to a conflict related to racism or stereotypes (4pts) 2 or more clear references related to racism or stereotypes (5pts) Writing process (5 pts) Missing rough draft (0 pts) Final draft is missing highlighting and rough draft is missing most marks from the checklist. (2pts) Final draft has proper highlighting. Rough draft has most marks from self checklist. (4 pts) Final draft has proper highlighting. Rough draft has all the appropriate marks listed on the self checklist. (5pts) Thoughts could start “I wonder/imagine” Meets Standard Exceeds Standards