DEFINITION Define what your term means -- to you. o Your perspective, opinion, experience… Discuss your 3 most significant characteristics, aspects, features, traits – to you. o Positive or negative. o Strengths or weaknesses. kindness, compassion, thoughtfulness, gentleness, generosity humanity, sympathy, empathy, charity, open-mindedness intelligence, aptitude, ingenuity, athleticism honesty, sincerity, perseverance, hard-work, drive, family, love, warmth, self-sacrifice, God, holiness, tradition selfishness, egocentricity, narcissism, materialism viciousness, vindictiveness, dishonesty, lying, cheating, stealing depression, loneliness, isolation, debt, greed, gluttony, indulgence, waste, decadence *** The list of abstractions on the PowerPoint can be used as a “checklist” for this essay. That is, if you are having a difficult time thinking of traits to describe your term, you can use that list to help you find characteristics that define it. *** This is NOT a “reasons” essay or a “types” essay; o Instead, it IS a “characteristics” paper in which you are defining a term through your personal understanding. This is NOT a research paper, either. o Use your own beliefs, feelings, and experiences. o If you use a quote from a song, place quotation marks around it and place the band in the parenthetical. __________________________________________________________________________________________ OUTLINE I. INTRODUCTION: Opening generalization or quote deductively narrow toward Thesis tip your hat to the minor characteristics Thesis = Definition o personal understanding of the term o TERM + CLASS + CHARACTERISTICS o *characteristics = “3 of a kind” 3 nouns OR 3 adjectives Don’t mix = faulty parallelism o However, the term can be defined in terms of (3 most important, defining traits). o However, the three most significant traits of the term are…. II. BODY: each paragraph = 1 characteristic, trait, feature, attribute (3 traits total = 3 Body paragraphs) (save the “best” for last – emphatic order) (1) NAME the trait in a strong Topic Sentence o One characteristic of (the term) is ________. o While __ and __ are major characteristics of me, __ is truly the most significant. (2) EXPLAIN briefly the trait o Briefly clarify what you mean by the trait 3 – 3 characteristics o That is to say, …. 2 – 2 examples per characteristic (3) ILLUSTRATE the trait 1 – 1 characteristic per paragraph o Use descriptive examples BE SPECIFIC: relate a specific, detailed instance in which your thoughts, words, or actions clearly illustrate the trait you are discussing in a paragraph o 2 detailed instances per trait ** o This is the biggest part of the paragraph. o For instance, For example (4) END the paragraph with a Clincher Sentence/Warrant Statement o Reiterate your Topic Sentence (not verbatim) o Thus, Therefore III. CONCLUSION: Bring the essay full-circle Repeat the opening gambit Repeat the minor characteristics Repeat the major characteristics SO WHAT?! o What does this definition mean, teach you about the term? End with a Clincher Sentence