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Correct the following paragraph. Add to each sentence (neatly and clearly)
whatever punctuation is necessary. Do not add words and do not change or add
any end punctuation.
Carina and Julie went to see the newest art exhibit on Vincent Van Gogh at
the Los Angeles Museum for they both had artistic talent. Clearly if only one of
them had gone then the other would have felt that she had missed a great
opportunity. After they returned home they enthusiastically discussed what they
had seen then they decided to do their next art project together. Carina knew that
Julie wanted to do a photography project Julie knew however that Carina wanted to
do a scrapbooking project. Consequently Julies suggestion concentrated on several
optical designs. Obviously Julie and Carina finally realized what the other person
was doing so they laughed and decided to do both projects together. When their
instructor returned the projects both Carina and Julie were elated. Without a doubt
each was pleased about the evaluations the instructor had given glowing
comments. Yes both projects received an "A".
Correct the following paragraph. Add to each sentence (neatly and clearly)
whatever punctuation is necessary. Do not add words and do not change or add
any end punctuation.
Carl Pete and Tom decided to go camping however only Tom has any
camping experience. Pete who is Toms best friend is from Chicago Illinois Carl
who just recently met Peter is from Newport Rhode Island. The three guys plans
include two weeks in Yellowstone National Park one of the nations most
spectacular vacation areas.
Although Carl and Peter have begun counting the days until the trip begins
they can't help wondering whether they are in shape for the rigorous activities.
Regrettably both failed to follow Toms advice on getting in shape furthermore both
guys smoke so they expect Tom will constantly be waiting for them to catch up.
Tom on the other hand is fit and ready for the trip and its challenges. On the
first day of their vacation the trio plans to go on a ten mile hike and each will be
weighted down by several pounds of gear. Tom has reassured Carl and Pete that
the week of backpacking mountain climbing and sleeping under the stars will be a
fantastic experience.
Correct the following paragraph. Add to each sentence (neatly and clearly)
whatever punctuation is necessary. Do not add words and do not change or add
any end punctuation.
Carol Sue and Jane are best of friends yet its not often that they get
together. Carol who is a librarian lives in Santa Ana Sue who works for a travel
agency resides in San Pedro Jane who is a stewardess just bought a condominium
one mile north of Los Angeles Airport. If all three women want to get together
they have to plan weeks in advance and they must consider each persons schedule.
Furthermore each womans preferences for activities must get considered. Carol
for example enjoys going to movies but Sue and Jane prefer live theater with all
its spontaneity and excitement. Clearly they will enjoy one anothers company and
will without a doubt look forward to their next social event. Certainly all three
have their friends interests and concerns at heart.
Correct the following paragraph. Add to each sentence (neatly and clearly)
whatever punctuation is necessary. Do not add words and do not change or add
any end punctuation.
Sarah and Mary are best friends but its not certain if they will be able to
spend much time together next year. The college which Mary has chosen is in
Burlington Vermont Sarahs college however is in Tampa Florida and the cost of
an airline ticket to there is quite high. Therefore in order to keep up their
friendship the two plan to meet at each girls home during school breaks. Clearly
both homes have plenty of rooms and the girls will be assured of a good time.
Both are without a doubt looking forward to the coming year and its excitement.
Mary for example will be an engineering major furthermore she will be working to
earn extra money for travel Sarah on the other hand will be an English major then
she will continue on to graduate school. Certainly both have their parents and
their friends support and love.