Ms. Rosey’s
Guidebook for Success in
Dual Enrollment English I
(also known as ENC 1101):
Fall 2014 Version
Warning: Reading of this guidebook (and completion of all activities herein) will definitely increase
student’s intelligence. Use with extreme caution.
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Table of Contents
Syllabus for ENC 1101
Journal Checklist
Notebook Checklist
The Last Lecture Topics of Discussion
The Last Lecture Homework on Dreams
The Last Lecture Cooperative Learning Activity
Commencement Address by David McCullough, Jr
Advice to High-School Graduates: ‘You Are Not Special’
Illustrative Exemplification Essay on The Last Lecture
Causal Analysis Essay Instructions
Wadsworth: Writing Paragraphs
Wadsworth: Thesis Statements and Formal Outlines
Wadsworth: Commas/Evaluating Sources
Wadsworth: Using Other Punctuation Marks
Wadsworth: Chapter 9 “Using Logic,” Chapter 10
“Writing Argumentative Essays,” and Chapter
41: “Revising Run-Ons”
Wadsworth: True/False on Writing a Research Paper
Wadsworth: Evaluating Internet Sources and Writing
a Research Paper
Template for Index on The Canterbury Tales
Notes on The Canterbury Tales
Creative Project/ Chaucerian Food Celebration
The Best Storyteller on The Canterbury Tales
The Canterbury Tales BINGO
Classify and Divide Your Pilgrims!
Classification/Division Essay Topics
Due Dates for Florida Social Issue Paper
Template for Florida Social Issue Paper
Checklist of What to Fix for F.D. of Florida Social Issue Paper
Argument Essay Instructions
Scarevenger Hunt Instructions
Read like a Rock Star Assignments
Jigsaw Review of Articles in Readings for Writers
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FALL 2014
SOUTH FLORIDA COMMUNITY COLLEGE
DIVISION OF ARTS AND SCIENCES
COURSE SYLLABUS
ENC 1101—FRESHMAN ENGLISH I
COURSE TITLE:
ENC 1101 FRESHMAN ENGLISH I
3 CREDIT HOURS*
* This credit is what you would receive at SFSC, not the credit accorded at SHS.
CATALOG DESCRIPTION: A study of the forms of discourse, as illustrated in contemporary essays, designed to train
you in methods of forceful expression, logical thinking, and intelligent reading. The course includes intensive study and
practice in the mechanics of composition including a research paper. Prerequisite: Acceptable scores on placement test.
Gordon Rule: requires college-level writing in multiple assignments. (TR)
PREREQUISITES: Acceptable scores on placement test.
COURSE MATERIALS:
Chaucer, Geoffrey. The Canterbury Tales. Evanston, IL: McDougal Littell, 1997. Print.
Holt McDougal. The Elements of Literature. Sixth Course. Austin: Holt McDougal, 2009. Print. (Online version
found at my.hrw.com. My Username is _______________________ and my password is _____________.)
Kirszner, Laurie, and Stephen Mandell. The Wadsworth Handbook. 10th ed. Boston: Cengage Learning 2014. Print.
McCuen-Metherell, Jo Ray, and Anthony Winkler. Readings for Writers. 14th ed. Boston: Cengage Learning, 2013.
Print.
Pausch, Randy. The Last Lecture. New York: Hyperion, 2008. Print.
Supplementary photocopied, audiovisual, reserve, or internet materials may be used. Additional novels may be used
as well.
INSTRUCTIONAL METHODS: Lecture; small group discussion and oral report; large group discussion; online research;
library research; Turnitin.com.
STUDENT LEARNING OUTCOMES:
This Course Supports The Following College-Wide Student Learning Outcomes:
1. Students will demonstrate the ability to communicate (read, write, speak, and listen) effectively.
2. Students will demonstrate the ability to reflect, analyze, synthesize and apply knowledge.
4. Students will demonstrate the ability to find, evaluate, organize, and use information.
5. Prepare students to participate actively as informed and responsible citizens in social, cultural, global and
environmental matters.
SPECIFIC COURSE OUTCOMES:
1. Students entering Freshman English I (ENC 1101) have basic skills in grammar, sentence and paragraph
structure, punctuation, capitalization, and spelling; however, the more important of these skills will be
reviewed and practiced (with exercises) to enable successful completion of this course.
2. Students will develop writing skills in some of the following paragraph modes or essay formats—narration,
description, classification, exemplification, definition, comparison/contrast, process analysis, causal
analysis, and argument.
3. Students will demonstrate in their writing parallelism, subordination, conciseness, variety and emphasis in
sentence structure, the effective use of figurative language and concrete details, and the formal level of
diction appropriate to standard written American English.
4. Students will write a formal research paper, demonstrating proper research methods, including the
evaluation of evidence and sources; the use of direct quotations, paraphrases, and summaries, and the use of
proper documentation formats.
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Students will demonstrate the correct use of research tools (including the Internet) in the LRC and at home,
if the student has his or her own Internet service provider (ISP).
Students will, individually and in small-group settings, develop analytical, conceptual, and creative
thinking skills which will enable them to more coherently and clearly express their thoughts in both oral
and written formats, thereby demonstrating the process of moving from analytical thinking and writing to
that of synthesis in longer and more complex essays.
Reading, active learning exercises, and research topics will be selected so that students develop a greater
awareness of cultural, gender, and social issues.
Students are expected to apply the knowledge and skills gained in this course to other college courses,
present or future work experience, and everyday life.
ONLINE RESOURCES – You may find the URLs listed here useful for this course. Their relevance and utility will be
discussed during the introduction/orientation session.
 Turnitin.com (http://www.turnitin.com) to help proof your papers for use of sources BEFORE you hand
them in to the instructor.
 Purdue Online Writing Lab (http://owl.english.purdue.edu/) to brush up on grammar, punctuation, and
MLA documentation format and style.
 Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum Project. (Longview Community College, Missouri).
(http://mcckc.edu/longview/ctac/) for further explanation on logical fallacies.
 Mission Critical: The Critical Thinking Home Page. (San Jose State University).
(http://www.sjsu.edu/depts/itl/graphics/main.html) for further explanation on logical fallacies
ARTS AND SCIENCES POLICIES:
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ATTENDANCE (The Arts and Sciences Guideline)– Consistent and timely attendance correlates directly with successful
learning. In the School of Arts and Sciences, students could be withdrawn by the instructor if they miss more than a total of
four (4) class hours. Individual instructors may publish their own attendance policies. Given the College policy that students
be warned before being withdrawn by the instructor for excessive absences, the publication of an attendance policy in the
syllabus constitutes the first warning; the second will be mailed from the Registrar’s Office. Students will have seven days to
contact the instructor to discuss their continued presence in the class. It is highly recommended that students understand the
significance of the last day to withdraw with a grade of W. Dual Enrollment students are expected to abide by their
district’s Code of Conduct.
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CODE OF CONDUCT: When students are admitted to South Florida Community College they are subject to the
jurisdiction of the College during their enrollment. As members of the college community, students are expected to act
responsibly in all areas of personal and social conduct. Students are responsible for the observance of all Board policies and
procedures as published in the College Catalog, the Student Handbook, and other College information bulletins. Violation of
any of these rules may lead to disciplinary action in accordance with prescribed procedures for the handling of disciplinary
cases and may range from reprimand to expulsion from the College.
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DISABLED STUDENT SERVICES: SFCC offers full educational services to disabled students. However, in order to
provide reasonable services and appropriate accommodations, students must self identify to the Disabilities Specialist and
provide documentation of the disabling or limiting condition. Services are varied and include, but are not limited to
admission and registration assistance, special campus orientation, note taking, tutoring, testing, audiovisual aids, readers, and
mobility aids. Disabled Student Services (DSS) is a unit of SFCC Student Services in compliance with Section 504 of the
Rehabilitation Act of 1973, as amended, and the Americans with Disabilities Act of 1990. The purpose of DSS is to provide
services to students with disabilities. These services permit students access to the same educational opportunities as their
non-disabled peers and are offered within the institution’s philosophical framework that stresses student independence and
self-reliance. DSS operates in cooperation and conjunction with other units in Student Services (Assessment Center and
Student Support Services) to ensure continuity of services. In addition, DSS works closely with other public and private
rehabilitation agencies to facilitate the coordination of service delivery. Inquiries should be directed to the Disabilities
Specialist, Student Services/Classroom Complex Suite B152, Avon Park.
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INCOMPLETE GRADES: If you have participated throughout the term but are unable to complete all course requirements
(such as a term paper, project or final exam) because of illness or other extenuating circumstances, you may request a grade
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of incomplete. If you receive an I grade, you have six weeks from the beginning of the next college enrollment period to
make up the work in the course as outlined on the incomplete form. If you do not complete the assigned work, the grade is
automatically changed to the grade assigned by the instructor. Incomplete grades in competency-based programs are
governed by the appropriate departmental policies. Dual Enrollment students are expected to abide by their district’s Code of
Conduct.
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ONLINE COMMUNICATION: Students should check email at least twice a week. Email communication is most suitable
for personal questions between you and the instructor or you and a few other people. In all online communication, it is
expected that all students will follow rules of online netiquette. See details at http://www.albion.com/netiquette/index.html.
Being disruptive or breaking the rules of netiquette may result in revocation of access privileges. Read over your emails
before you send them. Be clear enough so that people can understand you without your body language to add clarity; use
good English and full sentences, not texting shorthand.
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PLAGIARISM AND CHEATING: Plagiarism is the use of another individual’s words, phrases, sentences, or ideas
(whether taken word for word, in summary form, or as a paraphrase), without giving credit to the source from which they
come (without proper documentation). This also includes handing in another student’s writing (original or researched) as
your own. The first offense of willful plagiarism or cheating (verified by the instructor) will result in a grade of “F” (0 value)
for the specific assignment. Second offenses are grounds for suspension from the class with a grade of “F”. All instances of
plagiarism and other forms of cheating will be referred to the appropriate instructional supervisor, Dean and the Dean of
Students. Research papers from other courses will not be accepted in this course.
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RELIGIOUS HOLIDAYS: Students who must miss class in order to observe a religious holiday must notify the instructor
at least seven (7) days in advance of the day(s) to be missed and shall have until the next class meeting after the
observance/holiday to make up missed assignments and/or exams. Dual Enrollment students are expected to abide by their
district’s Code of Conduct.
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TUTORING: SFCC is committed to student success and, therefore, provides several tutoring services. The Tutoring and
Learning Center is located on the first floor of the LRC and offers free tutoring, mainly in Math and Writing. Hours may
vary. For online students who have paid a fee to register for the class, the online tutoring service Smarthinking will be
available for a specific number of hours (designated for each online class); beyond the set number of hours for the class,
students may wish to pay for further Smarthinking tutoring on their own.
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NAME OF INSTRUCTOR: Cheryl A. Rosenbaum
WEBSITE: http://highmail.highlands.k12.fl.us/~rosenbac/
TELEPHONE: 471-5500 ext. 277
E-MAIL: rosenbac@highlands.k12.fl.us
WELCOME STATEMENT: Welcome to Freshman English I (ENC 1101), a required course for all A.A. and some A.S.
degree programs at South Florida State College. The major purpose of this course is to upgrade language and writing skills at
the formal level of Standard American English for use not only in college level courses but also in each student’s future
career and to learn the process of writing a research paper.
COURSE REQUIREMENTS:
Students will complete a variety of practice writing both in and out of class to meet the Gordon Rule requirement:
paragraphs, free writing, journal writing, and rough drafts. In addition, students will submit at least four 500-word essays for
formal grading by the instructor per semester. A 1,200-1,500 word research paper will also be required of all students as the
accountability part of the research component of this course per semester. Final drafts of essays must meet all MLA writing
guidelines both for format and documentation, as applicable to the essay type.
DESCRIPTION OF REQUIREMENTS
JOURNALS:
These must be a minimum of 250-350 words per week. These papers will be written using personal experience. No sources
or bibliography will be required; however, you may at times find it helpful to do some research to acquaint you better with
your topic. If such is the case, remember to use proper documentation whenever you paraphrase, summarize, or directly
quote outside sources. See your handout on Journals for more specific information.
MIDTERM AND FINAL EXAMINATIONS:
The midterm and final exams will be a combination of objective/subjective items and may include: multiple choice, T & F,
completion, short answer, and essay. More specific information will be given closer to the exam date. You should be
aware that your final exam with your responses will be submitted to the dean at SFCC to ensure the validity of this
dual enrollment class.
RESEARCH PAPERS:
A research paper must be a minimum of 1,200 word, typed, double-spaced, using MLA format (See Wadsworth). We will
complete a research paper, in addition to other essays, each semester. Topics will be selected by the students but must be
approved by the instructor. It is strongly encouraged that the student selects a topic in which he or she is interested. The
paper will include a minimum of seven (7) sources and a bibliography page. Because this paper will require much structural
and grammatical revision, it is imperative that the student complete the rough draft of this project in a timely manner.
RESEARCH PAPER PRESENTATIONS:
Upon completion of the research paper, students will work collaboratively to present an abstract of their research papers. To
this end, students are encouraged to use a variety of media, such as Power Point, web pages, and other visual aids. Students
must participate in this activity to receive full credit for the research paper.
IN-CLASS WRITING:
These in-class exercises will be graded largely upon the student’s understanding of the rhetorical concept.
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COURSE EXPECTATIONS:
1. You will be expected to be WELL PREPARED FOR AND TAKE AN ACTIVE ROLE in class sessions. IF YOU DO
NOT UNDERSTAND SOMETHING, ASK! It is preferable that you speak up and are wrong than for you not to speak at all.
You will need to have all reading and work done at the assigned time or else. Since so much of what we learn in here will be
through group discussion, peer editing, and other such cooperative learning activities, this is the year to come out of your
shell!
2. Late work is not accepted.*
3. Make-up work is your responsibility. When you return from an EXCUSED absence look over my agendas for the days
you missed. Then speak to me about making up the work. If you do not speak to me, I will simply assume you want a 0 for
the assignment we did the day you were absent. I will not remind you if you need to make-up a test or quiz. You need to
get your make-up work into me in a reasonable amount of time. For example, if you were absent on Monday, get your
make-up assignment on Tuesday, and turn it in on Wednesday.
4. If a student knows ahead of time that he or she will be absent on a day when an assignment is due (for example, a
pre-arranged absence or field trip), it is the student’s responsibility to turn in the assignment prior to the due date,
or send the assignment to the teacher with another student or a parent. Any work may be taken to the school’s office
and put in the teacher’s mailbox.
If a student misses class the day an assignment is due but is on campus at any time during that day (for example,
missing part of the day due to a half-day field trip), the student is responsible for bringing the assignment to the
teacher or getting it to the teacher. Failure to do so will result in a grade of 0.
*WHOOPS PASS PROCEDURES
Each nine weeks, I allow you to turn in one assignment late within 24 hours without penalty. You must complete an
explanation on why it is late plus a 250 word response to a question PLUS the assignment itself within 24 hours to
www.turnitin.com. The instructions for the Whoops! Pass are given in detail on my website under the heading “Additional
Helpful Information” toward the bottom of my webpage. If you do not use it, you will receive 10 points extra credit at the
end of the nine weeks.
Remind101 SIGN-UP PROCEDURES
Another method to ensure you remember all major due dates I have incorporated is the use of Remind101, which is a tool
that allows me to send you a text message to your phone to remind you of major due dates. (But please keep in mind when
you sign up I will not actually know your phone number NOR—more importantly—will you know mine. It is a computer
program that allows me to send you a message.) You can sign-up for this by doing the following:
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Send a text message to 832-900-2489 with the message: @msrosey
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Once you do this, you will be prompted to give your name
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Once you send back the second message, you are registered with the class
GRADING:
All grades are done on a point system. In-class assignments and some homework assignments are given a check plus (10
points), a check (8 points), check minus (5 points), or 0; if it is to be worth more I will warn you ahead of time. Your weekly
journal assignment is worth 10 points, but is calculated as part of your notebook grade. Group activities are usually worth 25
points. Quizzes are worth 50 points (KEEP IN MIND THAT POP QUIZZES ARE ALWAYS A POSSIBILITY). A
participation grade is worth 100 points per nine weeks. Tests are worth 100 points or more. Notebooks are worth at least
100 points each time they are collected. In-class essays and short essays are worth 75 points. Longer essays and research
papers will be worth 150-200 points.
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NOTEBOOKS:
You are required to have a notebook that you bring to class every day. Blank paper must be kept in the notebook for journal
entries, lecture notes, vocabulary and writing assignments. All other class handouts must be kept in the notebook. I will
collect these notebooks at the end of each nine weeks. You will need a one-inch three ring binder. The notebook is worth 25
points each time it is collected. The notebook will be collected as followed:
Notebook for 1st Nine Weeks- due October 20 (for __ day) or October 21 (for __ day)
Notebook for 2nd Nine Weeks- due January 8 (for ___ day) or January 9 (for ___ day)
Requirements for the Notebook:
1. Notebook must be a folder with three brackets and pockets.
2. The notebook must contain notebook paper divided by tabs into these sections:
A) HANDOUTS- Your guidebook should be in your handout section.
B) ASSIGNMENTS--includes homework, vocabulary, in-class work, tests, quizzes, and essays.
3. Your front pocket should hold your Journal Checklists (which needs to be filled out BY YOU at the end of each
nine weeks) and your Notebook Checklists (which will be filled out BY ME when I grade your notebook). It should
be labeled Journal/Notebook Checklists.
4. The front of the notebook must be clearly marked in the upper right hand corner with the following:
A) Name
B) Subject
C) Period
FORMATTING OF PAPERS (including in-class writings, assignments, formal essays, and journals)
All papers turned in must have the following in the upper left hand corner of the paper:
A) Your Name*
B) Ms. Rosenbaum
C) Class Name- Period
D) Date Due
All papers must have a title for the assignment centered on the page. The title should not be underlined, in bold, or in italics.
You should have a creative, appropriate, and specific title for each assignment.
Any typed assignment for this class should be done in Times New Roman 12 point font, be double spaced, have one inch
margins around the entire page, and have a heading in the upper right hand corner with your last name and page number of
the assignment.
All formal essays, journals, and many other assignments will be turned into www.turnitin.com. You will do peer editing of
essays using turnitin. The discussion board feature of turnitin will also be used for certain situations. Finally, all papers will
be graded directly on turnitin using its GradeMark feature. Unless I tell you otherwise, you will not need to print off a copy
of any assignment turned in to turnitin. I will warn you ahead of time what assignments should be turned into
www.turnitin.com. (Note: Make sure when you submit an assignment to www.turnitin.com that you choose
UPLOAD DOCUMENT rather than copy and paste. If you upload your document, it will appear EXACTLY the
same as it did on your computer. When you copy and paste, it changes the font to a notepad document, and this will
lower your grade for not having your paper properly formatted.)
You need to sign-up for the class by going to www.turnitin.com and entering the following:
Class id: 7938290
Password: awesome
*Note: Since you are allowed to be anonymous as you peer edit a classmate’s essay on turnitin, I will allow you to make up a
pseudonym when you submit a draft of an essay that will be peer edited on www.turnitin.com. I will warn you ahead of time
if what you submit will be peer edited.
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RULES:
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Follow directions first time given.
Be prepared: in seat, on time, with materials.
Show respect for the rights, property, and feelings of others.
Stay on task.
Speak only at appropriate times.
NEGATIVE CONSEQUENCE
1st time—Warning
2nd time--One detention
3rd time--Two detentions and parental contact
4th time--Referral to office
Severe Clause--Immediate Referral to office
REWARDS
Verbal praise
Written praise
Stickers
GRADING SCALE
90-100=A
80-89= B
70-79= C
60-69= D
0-59= F
ASSISTANCE
If at any time you need help, please feel free to make an appointment to speak with me or e-mail me.
COURSE SCHEDULE:
First Nine Weeks:
Week One (Aug 20-22):
-Course Rules/Notebook/Journal
-Turn in Summer Reading Journal
-Summer Reading Quiz
-Assign and work on rough draft/peer edit of Illustration/Exemplification Essay based on The Last Lecture
-Discussion/Assignment on The Last Lecture
-The Wadsworth Handbook Chapter 7: Writing Paragraphs 75-100; in-class we will do ex. 2B on p. 84 and ex. 8 on p. 95
with a partner; we will do handout on paragraphs individually
(Note in regards to Wadsworth Handbook: In general you will be responsible for bringing this book to class every other
week on the last day your class meets that week. Your bi-weekly reading in Wadsworth SHOULD BE COMPLETED AHEAD
OF TIME. Wadsworth should be a review of concepts already familiar to you, so some chapters you will be able to skim in
preparation of your assignment. I will give pop mini-quizzes and exercises on the chapters, so you must have read them
before class begins.)
Week Two (Aug 25-29):
-Continue activities and assignments on The Last Lecture
-Work on rough draft and peer editing of The Last Lecture Essay
-Explain Research Paper for 1st semester, process for using library at SFSC
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-Readings for Writers Selections/Assignment/Discussion: Chapter One: “Reading Critically” 3-12 (in class), Chapter 2:
“Rhetoric: The Art of Persuasion” 18-41; “What—and How—to Write When You Have No Time to Write,” 42-45; “How to
Say Nothing in 500 Words” 101-111; “Assignment 1: The Research Paper,” 710-749; Chapter 11: “Illustration and
Exemplification” 370-374; “Mirror, Mirror on the Wall…” 386-389; “How We Get Addicted” 392-398; “Drugs” 399-401
(Note in regards to Readings for Writers: In general you will be responsible for bringing this book every other week. We
will read the selections noted on the syllabus in class on the last day of that school week and discuss them; I will let you know
in class that day if you are to read selections we did not get to in class for homework. On occasion, you may be asked to
read a selection ahead of time or we may read a different selection than those noted on the syllabus.)
Week Three (Sept 2-5):
-Continue group and individual activities and assignments on The Last Lecture
-Read “You Are Not Special” and do activity on it (possibly Socratic Seminar on it)
-Complete final draft of The Last Lecture essay
-The Wadsworth Handbook “Constructing an Informal Outline,” 48-49; Chapter 54 “Using Semicolons” 686-691; In-class
we will create an informal outline on our research paper essay; do ex. 2 (p. 687), ex. 3(p. 688), ex. 5 (p. 690) on own; do ex. 6
(p. 691-692) with a partner
Week Four (Sept 8-12):
-Complete activities; group assignment on The Last Lecture
-Assign and work on rough draft of causal analysis essay
- Readings for Writers Selections/Assignment/Discussion: Chapter 15 “Causal Analysis” 555-559; “Bricklayer’s Boy” 573577; “The New Feminism” 594-597; Chapter 5: “The Writer’s Thesis” 133-143; Chapter 6: “Organizing Ideas” 171-181;
“Rules for Aging,” 188-190; “The Editing Booth,” 695-718
Week Five (Sept 15-19):
-Pass out review guide to next week’s Mid-Midterm Test
-Complete peer editing and final draft of causal analysis essay
-Assign The Canterbury Tales outside reading and index- due ________
-go over template for index (available on my website)
-go over background information
-listen to audio of lines 547-568 of Prologue at:
http://www.wwnorton.com/college/english/nael/noa/audio.htm
Readings for Writers Selection/Assignment/Discussion: Chapter 4: “The Writer’s Voice” 95-100; “Tone: The Writer’s
Voice in the Reader’s Mind” 111-116; “The Waltz” 116-121; “Division/Classification,” 510-514; “Move Over Teams” 514519, “Incidents with White People,” 542-545; “Warriors Don’t Cry” 537-541
Week Six (Sept 22-26):
-Mid-MidtermTest on The Last Lecture, plus concepts/articles related to Wadsworth and Readings for Writers (worth 200
points)
-Work on The Canterbury Tales reading/index/creative activities/cooperative learning activities
-Read “The Life and Times of Chaucer” p. 271
-The Wadsworth Handbook Chapter 12 “Writing a Research Paper” 148-174; Chapter 13, “Finding Information” 175-201;
Chapter 14, “Evaluating Sources” 202-211; complete an assignment in-class on writing a research paper, picking out a topic,
and finding sources
Week Seven (Sept 30-Oct 3):
-Work on index/creative activities/cooperative learning activities for The Canterbury Tales
- Readings for Writers Selections/Assignment/Discussion: “Annotated Student Research Paper: Modern Language
Association (MLA) Style on Choosing Single Motherhood: A Sign of Modern Times?” 731-749; Chapter 16 “Argument
and Persuasion,” 609-656; “Why Don’t We Complain?” 616-622; “A Nation in Need of a Vacation” 630-633
Week Eight (Oct 6-10):
-Turn in index and take quiz on The Canterbury Tales
-Complete Great Story Tellers activity; Chaucerian Food Celebration; SHS Pilgrimage
-Assign and work on rough draft/peer edit of Division/Classification on The Canterbury Tale s (or other topic)-final draft
due ________
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-Complete brainstorming activity on Classifying and Dividing Pilgrims
-The Wadsworth Handbook Chapter 15: “Summarizing, Paraphrasing, and Quoting Sources,” 212-221; Chapter 16
“Synthesizing Sources” 222-235; Chapter 9 “Using Logic,” 109-120; Chapter 53 “Using Commas,” 672-685
Week Nine (Oct 14-17):
-Work on rough draft of division/classification essay - due end of week
-Write a riddle and share
-Notebook due October 16 or 17; Favorite Journal due to www.turnitin.com Discussion Board this week; Comment on
Someone’s Journal due to www.turnitin.com Discussion Board this week
Second Nine Weeks:
Week One (Oct 20-24):
-Complete peer editing and final draft of division/classification essay on The Canterbury Tales
-Assign Research Paper on Florida Social Issue; go over template for research paper (available on my website)
-Assign outside reading on Read like a Rock Star Book
-Watch performance of The Reduced Shakespeare Company
Week Two (Oct 27-31):
-Scarevenger Hunt
-Midterm Test on The Canterbury Tales, Readings for Writers selections, and The Wadsworth Handbook selections
-Work on researching Florida Social Issue paper using Panther Central
-Paper proposal of research paper on Florida Social issue is due to Discussion Board of www.turnitin.com; write a response
to someone’s paper proposal on www.turnitin.com
-Readings for Writers Selection/Assignment/Discussion: Articles on “Issue for Critical Thinking and Debate:
Homelessness,” 640-649, IG-27, IG-28, IG-29; “The View from Eighty,” 352-357
Week Three (Nov 3-7):
-Hyperlinks of at least six sources for Florida Social Issue research paper due to www.turnitin.com by _________; it needs to
be a valid source from 2012-present
-Book checked out from SFCC related to Florida Social Issue research paper due ________
-Quiz on MLA Documentation Style (results of which are given to SFSC)
-The Wadsworth Handbook Chapter 10 “Writing Argumentative Essays,” 121-137; Chapter 41 “Revising Run-ons,” 576580; Chapter 57 “Using Other Punctuation Marks” 707-715; Chapter 17 “Avoiding Plagiarism,” 236-248; Chapter 18 “MLA
Documentation Style” 254-298
Week Four (Nov 10-14):
-Annotated Works Cited and Outline/Formal Brainstorming due for research paper is due to www.turnitin.com by ________
-Readings for Writers Selections/Assignment/Discussion: “In Praise of the Humble Comma,” 425-428; “Shame,” 249-253;
“Of Altruism, Heroism, and Nature’s Gifts,” 414-419; “Wide Open Spaces,” 445-449
-Complete argument essay in-class under timed pressure
Week Five (Nov 17-21):
-Work on Rough Draft for Research Paper; it is due to www.turnitin.com by ____
-Peer Editing of rough draft done in class
-Work on completing activities for Read like a Rock Star Book
-The Wadsworth Handbook Chapter 49 “Using Verbs” 636-649; Chapter 50 “Revising Agreement Errors,” 650-658
Week Six (Dec 1-5):
-Work on revision of rough draft of research paper
-3/4 Term Test is given on Readings for Writers passages and The Wadsworth Handbook concepts we have covered- worth
200 points
-Work on projects/assignments for Read like a Rock Star Book
-Readings for Writers Selections/Assignment/Discussion “Terrorism,” 633; “Body Image” 636; Ageism,” 639; “Status of
Women,” 655; Class Choice
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Week Seven (Dec 8-12):
-In-class time to work on final draft and Read like a Rock Star assignments
-Final Draft due for Research Paper to www.turnitin.com by ________
-The Wadsworth Handbook Chapter 56 “Using Quotation Marks,” 699-706
Week Eight (Dec 15-19):
-Book Talk, assignments, Narration Essay, and other activities for Read like a Rock Star Book
-Work on research paper presentations
-The Wadsworth Handbook –Chapter 19 “APA Documentation Style” 302-329; complete activities on using APA style
Week Nine (Jan 6-9):
-Research Paper Presentations (done in PowerPoint or other acceptable format)
-Notebook due January 8 or January 9; Favorite Journal due to www.turnitin.com Discussion Board by _____; Comment on
Someone’s Journal due to www.turnitin.com Discussion Board by _______
Exam Week (Jan 12-16):
-Take final exam for ENC 1101 (This final exam will be comprehensive and your responses will be submitted to SFSC.)
NOTE: THIS OUTLINE DOES NOT REFLECT THE ADDITIONAL READINGS, ESSAYS, TESTS, OR HOMEWORK
ASSIGNMENTS THAT MIGHT BE ADDED DURING THE COURSE OF THE YEAR BASED ON THE NEEDS OF
THE CLASS. ASSIGNMENTS ON SYLLABUS ARE TENTATIVE AND REPRESENT THE EARLIEST DUE DATE
FOR AN ASSIGNMENT. THE INSTRUCTOR RESERVES THE RIGHT TO DELAY ASSIGNMENTS BASED ON
CLASS PACE.
JOURNAL ASSIGNMENT:
Directions: Your journal will be due on Friday of every school week by 11:59 pm to www.turnitin.com. Each week you
need to write between 250-350 words. You may choose between one to three topics per week, but you should not repeat any
topic during the school year. You need to have a heading on your paper listing the journal #, then write the number of the
question, then your entry. You may choose to work ahead (since all the journals for the year are already listed on
www.turnitin.com), but you must make sure you submit your journal every Friday for the correct date (regardless if you were
absent or not on that day—this is a college class!) in order to get your 10 points credit per week toward your notebook grade.
I will read these journal entries directly off of www.turnitin.com. At the end of each nine weeks you will turn in a copy of
your Journal Checklist for the nine weeks when your turn in your notebook (which will be a 3 prong or ring folder).
These journals will be a way for you to creatively express yourself and practice writing fluency. It should be an enjoyable
experience (except for those of you who choose to start writing your weekly journal at 11:54 pm the night it is due). You
should also keep in mind that you will eventually use these journal entries in your writing portfolio, which is a collection of
your best writings of the year, and you will also be sharing your favorite journals with your classmates on the Discussion
Board of www.turnitin.com.
The individual journals will be due for the school year as followed:
JOURNAL # 1 due August 29
JOURNAL # 2 due September 5
JOURNAL # 3 due September 12
JOURNAL # 4 due September 19
JOURNAL # 5 due September 26
JOURNAL # 6 due October 3
JOURNAL # 7 due October 10
JOURNAL # 8 due October 17
JOURNAL # 9 due October 24
JOURNAL # 10 due October 31
JOURNAL # 11 due November 7
JOURNAL # 12 due November 14
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JOURNAL # 13 due November 21
JOURNAL # 14 due December 5
JOURNAL # 15 due December 12
JOURNAL # 16 due December 19
Your journal topics are as followed:
1. Describe your first brush with danger.
2. Tell the story of a job interview that goes badly. (The more your character wants the job, the better the story will
be.)
3. According to officials at Graceland, Elvis Presley receives an estimated one hundred valentines every year.
Write a story about one.
4. Write an argument between two characters that begins in the middle of the argument.
5. Imagine that you could wake up tomorrow in someone else’s body. Whose would it be? How would your life
change? What are some of the first things you’d do?
6. Write about a near-death experience.
7. Write a story about the 1980s (or any other time period in the past). Use as many period elements as you can.
8. Since 1980, more than fifty forgeries have been discovered at the Metropolitan Museum of Art. Write about one
of them.
9. Write about the biggest secret you failed to keep.
10. Write a story set in the kitchen of a fast-food restaurant.
11. According to the National Coffee Association, there are more than 300,000 Americans who drink more than ten
cups of coffee a day. Describe one of them.
12. Chronicle the longest amount of time you’ve ever gone without sleeping.
13. Write about your first artistic expression.
14. Describe the most disappointing gift you have ever received. What did the gift reveal about the giver?
15. Describe the worst driver you have ever known.
16. Think of a person you don’t like, and describe what you might say if you had to share an elevator ride together
with this person. Then describe what happens when the elevator breaks down. For six hours.
17. Tell a story that begins with the discovery of a ransom note.
18. Write a story in the form of a political apology.
19. Describe the worst time you ever put your foot in your mouth.
20. Seventeen percent of Americans claim they have seen a ghost. Describe one of their encounter, or one of your
own.
21. Describe the youngest baby you ever felt, and how he or she felt in your arms.
22. Write about a time you’ve been lost.
23. Write about a beauty pageant without using stereotypes.
24. Describe the worst date of your life.
25. By the early 1990s more than 30,000 Americans held reservations from Pan-Am airlines for a trip to the moon.
Write about one of these people.
26. Set a small mirror beside your desk and write about your reflection. Describe how you might be perceived by a
stranger passing you on the street—what assumptions might he or she make about you, based on your appearance?
27. Describe the largest crowd you’ve ever been a part of.
28. Write a story that begins with the words, “Why didn’t you call me?”
29. Tell a story in the form of a prayer.
30. More than 10 million prescription medications are filled incorrectly every year. Write about one of them.
31. If you were going to be marooned on a tropical island with one person, who would you want it to be? Write
scenes that take place five hours after the shipwreck, five weeks after the shipwreck, and five years after the
shipwreck.
32. Describe the last time you were physically involved in a fight.
33. Begin a story with a character who has lost something important to them.
34. Invent a character who has won 76 million dollars in the Florida State Lottery. What is the first thing he or she
buys? How much is given to charity? How long before an ex-boyfriend or ex-girlfriend re-enters their lives?
35. Describe the most boring event you have ever suffered through.
36. Write from the point-of-view of someone who committed murder today. Do not mention the murder.
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37. Write about the first time you defied your parents.
38. Tell the story of how your parents became engaged.
39. Write about your worst habit.
40. Create a character who is trying to gain access to a club or organization.
41. Create a character who is falsely accused of a crime.
42. Update a classic fairy tale for readers of the 21 st century.
43. Write about the black sheep in your family. What is your opinion of him or her?
44. How well do you respond to criticism?
45. Describe your most embarrassing experience.
46. Trace the journey of a five dollar bill through the lives of five different owners. What was exchanged during
the transactions? How much (or how little) did these transactions mean to each of the people involved?
47. Tell the story about “the one who got away.”
48. Write about a physical trait you would have loved to have changed in middle school.
49. According to the Florida Department of Corrections, more than 100 people have registered on a waiting list to
see an execution. Write about one of them.
50. Describe a time when you pretended to be someone you are not.
51. Describe the biggest risk you have ever taken.
52. Write a story that begins, “The last time I saw my mother was fifteen years ago…”
53. Write a story that begins, “Three days passed before they found the body…”
54. Write about the worst driving you’ve ever done.
55. Thirty-four percent of new American school teachers say they plan to quit their profession within their first five
years. Write about one of them.
56. Invent a character that must choose between the lesser of two evils.
57. Write a love story in MySpace. Have the story consist entirely of alternating messages.
58. Describe a time you’ve settled an argument between two friends.
59. Write about a library or bookstore that has a special significance to you. What authors did you discover there?
60. Invent a character whose life is governed by Murphy’s Law (that is, anything that can go wrong will go wrong).
61. Write a story about a phone call that begins at three o’clock in the morning?
62. Write about the worst lie you ever told someone? Did they find out? What was the result?
63. Write from the point of view of a character on his or her deathbed.
64. Write about your favorite childhood toy.
65. Write about a character that is granted three wishes.
66. Write about a victim of “year-end fiscal cutbacks and corporate downsizing.”
67. Write about a wedding in which the bride or groom changes their mind.
68. Tell a story in the form of a love letter.
69. Tell a story that centers around a recipe.
70. Describe an encounter with a celebrity.
71. Write about the most serious injury or illness you have ever faced.
72. Invent a character that sees a phone number on the wall of a bathroom. Describe what happens when he or she
dials the number.
73. Describe the most meaningful gift you have ever received. What does it reveal about your relationship to the
giver?
74. Describe your favorite experience with Mother Nature.
75. Describe the secret life of a school bus driver.
76. More than 25,000 Americans seek help each year with gambling addiction. Write about one of them.
77. Describe your favorite family holiday, and explain what made it so special for you.
78. Describe a bad hair day.
79. According to the Gallup Organization, more than one million American dogs have been named as beneficiaries
in a will. Write about one of their owners.
80. Write about your earliest childhood memory.
81. There are approximately 3500 members of the International Flat Earth Society (people who insist the Earth is
flat). Write about one of them.
82. Write about the most important event you have ever been late to.
83. Tell the story behind your nickname or the most unusual nickname you have ever heard.
84. Write about your greatest childhood fear.
85. If you could script the plot for the dream you will have tonight, what would it be?
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86. Write a dialogue between a radio talk show host and a troubled caller.
87. Every year, more than four hundred Americans are injured or killed by lightning. Write about one of them.
88. Write about a childhood experience that made you cry.
89. Write about the most difficult phone call you’ve ever had to make.
90. Write about a dream or goal you failed to achieve. What went wrong? How did this experience change you?
91. Check the horoscope in today’s newspaper, and use any of the twelve forecasts as a basis for a character.
92. Describe the unhealthiest meal you’ve ever eaten, and how you felt after eating it.
93. Write a description of your dream automobile.
94. Write a story that begins with an explosion.
95. If you won the Texas lottery, what would you do?
96. Why do you think some people don't exercise their right to vote?
97. What is your favorite Disney character or movie and why is it your favorite?
98. My full name and how it was decided on
99. I am the one who....
100. First Grade Memories
101. In the left corner, behind the filing cabinet.....
102. The Holiday I Wish We Had
103. Summer Memories
104. My Dad
105. My Mom
106. My Grandma
107. My Grandpa
108. If I was President of the United States...
109. Bugs
110. In 20 Years I'd Like to Be....
111. It was so funny when...
112. Good things about me
113. When I get to college, I will....
114. The best book I ever read...
115. I'm thankful for...
116. My hero
117. I wish I was there when....
118. What My Best Friend and I Have in Common
119. Something people usually don't notice about me is...
120. You are a small animal at a historical event. Tell what is happening.
121. Write an alphabet journal entry 26 sentences long, with each sentence starting with the alphabet letter as it
appears in sequence.
122. Make a list of all the words that are related to or describe heat. Write a story about Florida in the summer using
these words.
123. Write about places you have never been to, but want to go to.
124. Write about people you don't know, but would like to know.
125. Write about things you have never done, but would like to do (conduct an orchestra, etc.)
126. What if our school classes only went until noon each day?
127. I Did Something Really Nice
128. Observe at least 5 things you see happen on your way home from school. Write about them.
129. What does a classroom sound like?
130. What is a typical day in the school cafeteria?
131. Write about a perfect day.
132. What I Would Change About My School
133. What I Would Change About My World
134. Where Would I Go in a Time Machine
135. Give advice to a new student who will start school at SHS next year
136. I'll never forget the day ______(teacher's name) did __________
137. Some of the richest times in your life can come from your quiet thinking and/or praying alone time. Discuss
these times in your life.
138. Review the last movie you saw.
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139. Describe the BEST ice cream and tell why you feel that way
140. What is an experience you would hate to repeat?
141. What is the ideal age to be? Why?
142. Do you accept yourself as you are, or would you like to be someone else?
143. Answer this question," Have I in any way done something that has hurt my parents?"
144. "How I think will determine how I live." Do you agree or disagree? Explain
145. Describe a summer thunderstorm
146. Describe the plight of an animal caught in a forest fire.
147. Tell abut a ride on the most exciting amusement park ride you have ever ridden.
148. Write about an Old West shoot-out in the streets of a western town
149. How might an astronaut feel that discovers that he/she will have to return to earth early because of a rocket
malfunction?
150. Describe the actions of a person who has just hit his or her thumb with a hammer
151. Describe the feeling of being chased in a dream
152. Tell about the moment when a person realizes that he or she has forgotten to do a major assignment that is due
today.
153. Describe the actions of an athlete in the final moments of a close contest when he or she makes a winning (or
losing) shot, play, move, or effort.
154. It isn't fair....
155. Write about some compliments people have given you
156. Write about some compliments you have given others recently.
157. Create a menu from a fictitious restaurant and describe the entrees.
158. The dispute over comic books. Are they good or bad?
159. Should grocery stores continue to throw away good food each day?
160. Do you get enough sleep? How or why not?
161. A horrible babysitting experience was when…
162. What one non-living item would you take from your house if it caught on fire?
163. You’ve landed on another planet. Tell the inhabitants all about earth.
164. If you were your teacher, how would you treat you?
165. What if your teacher fell asleep in class.
166. How would you think your parents’ view would change if they walked in your shoes for a week?
167. List 25 uses for a toothbrush.
168. Assume you are the last person on Earth and you have been granted one wish. What would it be?
169. Imagine a world that contained no written language. What would be different?
170. If you could step back in time to re-live one day, what would you do differently?
171. Imagine you are 25 years old. How will you describe yourself as you are today?
172. Imagine you had a hundred dollars, but you couldn't keep it. You had to give it away to a person or charity.
Who would you give it to? What would you want them to do with it?
173. Describe one time when you were brave.
174. If you could cook any meal for your family, what would you cook? Describe the meal and tell how you would
make it.
175. Describe your favorite character from a book, a movie, or television.
176. If you could have any animal for a pet, what would it be? Describe the pet and how you would take care of it.
177. Do you have any brothers or sisters? If you do, tell what they're like. If not, tell whether or not you would like
to have a brother or sister.
178. If you could have lunch with any famous person who would it be? What would you talk about with this person?
179. Describe the oldest person you know.
180. Describe the youngest person you know.
181. Do you think a monkey would make a good pet? Explain why or why not.
182. How old were you four years ago? Describe some things you can do now that you could not do then.
183. Imagine you worked at a football stadium. What would your job be? (examples: quarterback, cheerleader,
coach, referee, ticket seller) Describe what you would do while you were on the job.
184. What do you like best about your home?
185. If you could be on any game show, what would it be? Describe what happens when you're on the show.
186. Describe your favorite season (fall, spring, summer, or winter). Tell what kinds of things you like to do during
that season.
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187. If you could spend an afternoon with one member of your extended family, who would it be? Tell why you
chose this person and tell what you do together.
188. Which superpower would you most like to have-- invisibility, super strength, or the ability to fly? Describe
what kids of things you would do with your powers.
189. Think of a time when you've won something. Tell what you won and how you won it.
190. Invent a new kind of sandwich. Describe what is on it and how you would make it.
191. Describe one thing you're really good at.
192. Imagine you were twenty feet tall. Describe what life would be like.
193. Take out a photo album or magazine. Find the 14 th photo (counting any way you like) and write the story of
that photo.
194. Find a poem that you like. Make the last line of that poem the first line of your poem.
195. Make a list of 40 things that have happened to you this month.
196. Write a story about someone you know who is weird.
197. Where do you go when you want to get away from the pressures of life?
198. Rewrite “Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs” from the perspective of one of the dwarfs.
199. Imagine your life is now a book. Write a blurb for the back cover.
200. Write about the easiest decision you ever had to make.
201. Write an excuse for not working today.
202. Use the following words in a story: hypocrite, cookie jar, telephone, city, onomatopoeia
203. List fifteen simple pleasures. Pick one and write about it.
204. Begin a story with “I wish someone had told me…”
205. List 50 things you’d never do.
206. Write a pure dialogue story. No narration, no description, just dialogue.
207. Write a story 200 years from now about a day in the life of a window washer.
208. Write a feature story about the following: Giant Flies Invade Norway!
209. Write a story about a beggar who loves to hear himself sing.
Bibliography:
Topics 1-94 are from The Writer’s Block by Jason Rehkulak
Topics 95-161 are from http://www.angelfire.com/ok/freshenglish/250journaltopics.html
Topics 162-171 are from http://712educators.about.com/cs/writingresources/l/bljrnlspec.html
Topics 172-192 are from http://www.superteacherworksheets.com/journal-prompts.html
Topics 192-209 are from http://www.creativewritingprompts.com
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JOURNAL Checklist for 1st Nine Weeks
Directions: Take the following four pages and put it into the JOURNAL Checklist section of
your notebook. This will be used to grade your notebook every nine weeks and will help you
keep track of the Journal and Quote topics you have completed. Keep in mind that your word
count will be individually verified by me (and a teaching assistant who will help me grade these),
so if you give an inaccurate word count it will affect your grade.
Weekly JOURNALS:
JOURNAL # 1 due August 29
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _____;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 2 due September 5
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _____;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 3 due September 12
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 4 due September 19
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 5 due September 26
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 6 due October 3
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 7 due October 10
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 8 due October 17
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
Remember your notebook is due October 20 (for __ Day) or October 21 (for __
Day)!
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JOURNAL Checklist for Second Nine Weeks
JOURNAL # 9 due October 24
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 10 due October 31
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 11 due November 7
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 12 due November 14
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 13 due November 21
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 14 due December 5
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 15 due December 12
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
JOURNAL # 16 due December 19
-I did / did not complete this JOURNAL. I wrote on journal topic/s _______;
my word count is ______.
Remember your notebook is due January 8 (for ___ day) or January 9 (for ___ day)!
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NOTEBOOK CHECKLIST
1st 9 WEEKS NOTEBOOK CHECK ON OCTOBER 20 (for __ day) or OCTOBER 21 (for
___ day):
(Warning: This checklist will be filled out by the teacher or teacher assistant, so please leave
it blank. Remember your JOURNALs will be graded for proper formatting, word length, and
intelligence of your responses.)
JOURNAL #1= ______/10points
JOURNAL #2= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #3= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #4= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #5= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #6= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #7= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #8= ______/10 points
Name/Subject/Period on Cover=______/2 points
Notebook is divided and labeled with two
tabs entitled (in this order: Handouts,
Assignments)
=______ /3 points
Guidebook is in Handout Section=______/5 points
JOURNAL Checklist is filled out properly=______/10 points
Proper Papers in Each Section=______/10 points
TOTAL GRADE FOR NOTEBOOK=_______/110 POINTS
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2ND 9 WEEKS NOTEBOOK CHECK ON JANUARY 8 (for __ Day) or JANUARY 9 (for
___ Day):
(Warning: This checklist will be filled out by the teacher or teacher assistant, so please leave
it blank. Remember your JOURNALs will be graded for proper formatting, word length, and
intelligence of your responses.)
JOURNAL #9= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #10= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #11= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #12= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #13= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #14= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #15= ______/10 points
JOURNAL #16= ______/10 points
Name/Subject/Period on Cover=______/2 points
Notebook is divided and labeled with two
tabs entitled (in this order: Handouts,
Assignments)
=______ /3 points
Guidebook is in Handout Section=______/5 points
JOURNAL Checklist is filled out properly=______/10 points
Proper Papers in Each Section=______/10 points
TOTAL GRADE FOR NOTEBOOK=_______/110 POINTS
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The Last Lecture Topics of Discussion:
Author Randy Pausch:
Randy Pausch was a professor of Computer Science, Human Computer Interaction, and Design at
Carnegie Mellon University. From 1988 to 1997, he taught at the University of Virginia. He was an
award-winning teacher and researcher, and worked with Adobe, Google, Electronic Arts (EA), and Walt
Disney Imagineering, and pioneered the non-profit Alice project. (Alice is an innovative 3-D environment
that teaches programming to young people via storytelling and interactive game-playing.) He also cofounded The Entertainment Technology Center at Carnegie Mellon with Don Marinelli. (ETC is the
premier professional graduate program for interactive entertainment as it is applies across a variety of
fields.) Randy lost his battle with pancreatic cancer on July 25th, 2008. (Source:
www.thelastlecture.com)
Important People Mentioned in Pausch’s book:
Jai-his wife
Dylan, Logan, and Chloe- his 3 children
Jeffrey Zaslow- This is who Randy Pausch would tell his story to on his daily bike rides; Zaslow adapted
these stories into The Last Lecture.
Michele Reiss- Jai and Randy’s psychotherapist, who specialized in treating couples in which
one
member is terminally ill
Steve Seabolt- close friend of Randy’s
Randy’s father- tough WWII veteran; founded a nonprofit group to help immigrant kids’ learn
English; sold auto insurance; Randy considered him a smart man and followed his advice his
whole life
Randy’s mother- a former no-nonsense English teacher
Tammy- Randy’s sister, who is 2 years older than him.
Jack Sheriff- friend who helps paint Randy’s room when he is a child
Jim Graham- Randy’s high school football coach, encouraged the fundamentals
Chip Walter- co-wrote a book with William Shatner on scientific breakthroughs first mention in Star
Trek; this indirectly led to Randy meeting Shatner
Jon Snoddy- imaginer in charge of Disney Aladdin virtual reality ride
Jessica Hodgins- co-worker of Randy he occasionally brought with him to doctor’s appointments
Dr. Herb Zeh- one of Randy’s doctors
Dr. Robert Woolf- Randy’s oncologist; Randy was very impressed by the way he delivered bad news
Robbee Kosak- Randy’s co-worker who sees him happy in his car and sends him an email
Andy van Dam- Randy is a teaching assistant to him; Andy gives him great advice by telling
him,
“Randy, it’s such a shame that people perceive you as being so arrogant, because it’s
going to limit
what you’re going to be able to accomplish in life.” (p. 68)
Chris and Laura- his sister’ children
Tommy Burnett- achieved his childhood dream of working on a Star Wars film
Don Marinelli- a drama professor at Carnegie Mellon who co-founded the Entertainment Technology
Center with Randy
Dennis Kosgrove- Alice’s lead designer
Caitlin Kelleher- a professor working getting girls more interested in computer programming through
story telling
Sandy Blatt- Randy’s former landlord who was a paraplegic
Jackie Robinson- first African-American to play Major League Baseball; Randy had a photo of him in
his office and Randy was surprised that few students knew his story
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Dennis Cosgrove- Randy fights for him to not get kicked out of school after he makes an F;
eventually he takes charge of the Alice project
Norman Meyrowitz- brought a lightbulb to class, which really impressed Randy
Nico Habermann- an interview with this man got Randy into the PhD program at Carnegie Mellon
Fred Brooks, Jr.- a highly respected computer scientist who was a lifelong mentor to Randy
Jared Cohon- president of Carnegie Mellon
Scott Sherman- Randy’s college roommate he goes on a scuba diving trip with
The Last Lecture Discussion Questions:
Overall Questions:
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Why do you think this lecture/book struck a cord with so many people?
Where is the speaker/author “coming from”?
What are my childhood dreams? How might I achieve them?
What were the dreams my parents had and how did they fulfill them?
Who are the mentors I can turn to? What lessons have they taught me?
And what wisdom would I choose to impart to the world if it was my last chance? What
are the lessons of my life?
Introduction:
Randy Pausch describes his cancer as “an engineering problem.” How was this a helpful way to
look at his illness?
He talks about the lecture as a means of expression, and a way to reach his kids: “If I were a
painter, I would have painted for them. If I were a musician, I would have composed music. But I am a
lecturer. So I lectured.” There are so many ways to communicate. What are your own avenues for selfexpression?
Randy has always recognized the importance of time management. What did you think of his
decision to work on the book while riding his bike?
Chapter 1: An Injured Lion Still Wants to Roar
Randy almost didn’t go to Pittsburg to deliver his last lecture. His wife Jai had wanted him to
stay home with her and the kids. What did you learn from his discussion with her about this?
Randy chose “Really Achieving Your Childhood Dreams: as the topic for his lecture. In what
ways would this allow him to tell the story of his life, and to enable the dreams of others?
Chapter 3: The Elephant in the Room
Randy decided to begin his talk in a specific way—showing his CT scans, introducing “the
elephant in the room,” assuring everyone he’s not in denial, and doing push-ups. What made this
effective? What were you thinking watching this for the first time via video?
Chapter 4: The Parent Lottery
Randy said he realized many of his dreams because he had terrific parents. What details from his
childhood do you think led to the successes he had later in life? Are there lessons in Randy’s story for
people who’ve had less fulfilling childhoods, or absentee parents? What advice might you give to those
who didn’t win “the parent lottery”?
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Chapter 5: The Elevator in the Ranch House
In his talk, Randy encouraged parents to allow their children to paint on their bedroom walls, “As
a favor to me,” he said, “let ‘em do it. Don’t worry about the home’s resale value.” The real message he
says he was trying to give was this: Find ways to help your kids be creative. Nurture those instincts in
them.
What would you paint on your bedroom walls if you were given permission to do so? What other
creative outlet would you like to pursue, if your parents gave the OK?
Chapter 6: Getting to Zero G
The chapter ends with the line: “If you can find an opening, you can probably find a way to float
through it.” What’s the lesson to be learned from Randy’s attempts to get onto that “Vomit Comet”?
Chapter 7: I Never Made It to the NFL
This is a chapter about football, but so many of the lessons in it can apply elsewhere in our lives:
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Talk about ways fundamentals are important off the playing field, too.
Randy believed our critics are often the ones saying they still care about us. How in your
own life has a critic helped you become a better person?
Randy loved using “head fakes.” What are some other head fakes that teachers and
parents have used?
Chapter 11: The Happiest Place on Earth
Throughout the book, Randy says: “Brick walls are there for a reason. They’re not there to keep
us out. The brick walls are there to give us a chance to show how badly we want something.”
What are the brick walls you’ve faced in your own life? How did you get over them?
Chapter 12: The Park Is Open Until 8 p.m.
In this chapter, we see Randy as an advocate for his own medical care. We also get a sense of
how he decided to adopt a positive attitude. Have there been people in your own life who’ve faced the
challenges of serious illness? What did you learn from them? How has Randy’s journey made you
consider how you’ll approach your own mortality?
Chapter 14: The Dutch Uncle
Randy credits his professor Andy van Dam with telling him the tough-love things he needed to
hear. What was it about Dr. van Dam’s delivery and message that resonated with Randy? Who in your
own life has told you things about yourself that made you reconsider your actions or behavior?
Chapter 15: Pouring Soda in the Backseat
Throughout the book, Randy makes a distinction between “people” and “things.” What did you
think of his decision to empty that can of soda in the backseat of his car?
Chapter 17: Not All Fairy Tales End Smoothly
In this chapter and chapter 19 (about the birth of his son) Randy reminds readers that even
wonderful life events—such as a wedding or the birth of a child—are fraught with unexpected dangers.
What did you learn from the way Randy and Jai handled the problems before them in these chapters?
Chapter 18: Lucy, I’m Home
Was Randy right? Was there no need to fix the dents in those two damaged cars?
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Chapter 21: Jai
It is clear in the book that Randy and Jai have a deep love for one another. And yet, like other
married couples, they’ve had to work hard on their relationship. Randy’s illness created additional
challenges. By reading about how they’ve faced the issues between them, what did you learn about
getting along with others, about mutual respect, and about the power of love?
Chapter 23: I’m on My Honeymoon, But If You Need Me…
What do you think of Randy’s time-management tips? Would you have walked out of that
grocery store, knowing you overpaid by $16.55? Do you have to-do lists?
Chapter 24: A Recovering Jerk
Randy believes the number one goal for educators should be helping students learn how to judge
themselves. How crucial do you think this is in the learning process? Have you relied on feedback loops
in your life? Has anyone ever told you that you were being a jerk?
Chapter 27: The Promised Land
Randy and his colleagues tried to attract girls into the field of computer science. He’s proud of
“The Alice Project,” and calls it his greatest legacy. What advice would you give to his colleagues, as
they go about trying to carry on Randy’s vision?
Chapter 28: Dream Big
Randy missed the 1969 moonwalk because he was sent to bed by camp counselors. Have you
ever wished adults in your life were less rigid? What advice would you give to adults about helping kids
to dream big?
Chapter 29: Earnest Is Better Than Hip
Do you agree with Randy? Is earnest better than hip? Is fashion truly commerce masquerading
as hip? Or can fashion be a way in which people express themselves?
Chapter 32: Don’t Complain, Just Work Harder
Randy admired Sandy Blatt and Jackie Robinson because they didn’t complain. As Randy puts
it: “Complaining is not a strategy.” Do you agree?
Chapter 35: Start by Sitting Together
Have you ever had trouble working in groups? How might Randy’s tips help you get along better
with others in the future?
Chapter 39: Be the First Penguin
Randy writes that “experience is what you get when you didn’t get what you wanted.” How do
you think his First Penguin Award was able to inspire his students?
Chapter 41: The Lost Art of Thank-You Notes
Do you agree with Randy that handwritten thank-you notes, even in our computer age, can offer a
kind of magic? When was the last time you have seen a handwritten thank-you?
Chapter 47: A Bad Apology Is Worse Than No Apology
Randy describes two “classic bad apologies.” Have you ever given someone such an apology?
How did it turn out?
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Chapter 55: All You Have to Do Is Ask
What would you like to ask for that you haven’t been able to find the courage to articulate? What
do you think will happen if you “just ask”?
Chapter 56: Make a Decision: Tigger or Eeyore
OK, so which one are you? And why? If you’d like to be more of a Tigger, how might you go
about that?
Chapter 59: Dreams for My Children
Randy says parents don’t realize the power of their words: “Depending on a child’s age and
sense of self, an offhand comment from Mom or Dad can feel like a shove from a bulldozer.” Have you
ever felt that way?
What are the vital messages to be drawn from the way Randy is saying goodbye to his kids, and
from the tangible things he is leaving behind for them?
Chapter 61: The Dreams Will Come to You
Randy realized that he didn’t give the lecture because he wanted to. He gave it because he “had
to.” Are there things inside of you that “need to come out”? As you read the final chapter of the book,
what were the emotions you were feeling? How would you describe the legacy of Randy Pausch?
(Source of These Discussion Questions: http://www.thelastlecture.com/pdf/LastLecture_EdGuide.pdf)
Article: “A Beloved Professor Delivers the Lecture of a Lifetime” by Jeffrey Zaslow, originally
published in The Wall Street Journal on September 22, 2007.
Note: This was the original article that inspired people to seek out the lecture online and made Randy
Pausch a worldwide phenomenon and inspiration.
Randy Pausch, a Carnegie Mellon University computer-science professor, was about to give a lecture
Tuesday afternoon, but before he said a word, he received a standing ovation from 400 students and
colleagues.
He motioned to them to sit down. "Make me earn it," he said.
They had come to see him give what was billed as his "last lecture." This is a common title for talks on
college campuses today. Schools such as Stanford and the University of Alabama have mounted "Last
Lecture Series," in which top professors are asked to think deeply about what matters to them and to give
hypothetical final talks. For the audience, the question to be mulled is this: What wisdom would we
impart to the world if we knew it was our last chance?
It can be an intriguing hour, watching healthy professors consider their demise and ruminate over subjects
dear to them. At the University of Northern Iowa, instructor Penny O'Connor recently titled her lecture
"Get Over Yourself." At Cornell, Ellis Hanson, who teaches a course titled "Desire," spoke about sex and
technology.
At Carnegie Mellon, however, Dr. Pausch's speech was more than just an academic exercise. The 46year-old father of three has pancreatic cancer and expects to live for just a few months. His lecture, using
images on a giant screen, turned out to be a rollicking and riveting journey through the lessons of his life.
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He began by showing his CT scans, revealing 10 tumors on his liver. But after that, he talked about living.
If anyone expected him to be morose, he said, "I'm sorry to disappoint you." He then dropped to the floor
and did one-handed pushups.
Clicking through photos of himself as a boy, he talked about his childhood dreams: to win giant stuffed
animals at carnivals, to walk in zero gravity, to design Disney rides, to write a World Book entry. By
adulthood, he had achieved each goal. As proof, he had students carry out all the huge stuffed animals
he'd won in his life, which he gave to audience members. After all, he doesn't need them anymore.
He paid tribute to his techie background. "I've experienced a deathbed conversion," he said, smiling. "I
just bought a Macintosh." Flashing his rejection letters on the screen, he talked about setbacks in his
career, repeating: "Brick walls are there for a reason. They let us prove how badly we want things." He
encouraged us to be patient with others. "Wait long enough, and people will surprise and impress you."
After showing photos of his childhood bedroom, decorated with mathematical notations he'd drawn on the
walls, he said: "If your kids want to paint their bedrooms, as a favor to me, let 'em do it."
While displaying photos of his bosses and students over the years, he said that helping others fulfill their
dreams is even more fun than achieving your own. He talked of requiring his students to create
videogames without sex and violence. "You'd be surprised how many 19-year-old boys run out of ideas
when you take those possibilities away," he said, but they all rose to the challenge.
He also saluted his parents, who let him make his childhood bedroom his domain, even if his wall
etchings hurt the home's resale value. He knew his mom was proud of him when he got his Ph.D, he said,
despite how she'd introduce him: "This is my son. He's a doctor, but not the kind who helps people."
He then spoke about his legacy. Considered one of the nation's foremost teachers of videogame and
virtual-reality technology, he helped develop "Alice," a Carnegie Mellon software project that allows
people to easily create 3-D animations. It had one million downloads in the past year, and usage is
expected to soar.
"Like Moses, I get to see the Promised Land, but I don't get to step foot in it," Dr. Pausch said. "That's
OK. I will live on in Alice."
Many people have given last speeches without realizing it. The day before he was killed, Martin Luther
King Jr. spoke prophetically: "Like anybody, I would like to live a long life. Longevity has its place." He
talked of how he had seen the Promised Land, even though "I may not get there with you."
Dr. Pausch's lecture, in the same way, became a call to his colleagues and students to go on without him
and do great things. But he was also addressing those closer to his heart.
Near the end of his talk, he had a cake brought out for his wife, whose birthday was the day before. As
she cried and they embraced on stage, the audience sang "Happy Birthday," many wiping away their own
tears.
Dr. Pausch's speech was taped so his children, ages 5, 2 and 1, can watch it when they're older. His last
words in his last lecture were simple: "This was for my kids." Then those of us in the audience rose for
one last standing ovation.
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Article: “The Professor’s Manifesto: What It Meant to Readers” by Jeffrey Zaslow, published in The
Wall Street Journal on September 27, 2007.
Note: This article was published only a few days after Zaslow’s original article as Pausch’s worldwide
recognition began to change his life.
As a boy, Randy Pausch painted an elevator door, a submarine and mathematical formulas on his
bedroom walls. His parents let him do it, encouraging his creativity.
Last week, Dr. Pausch, a computer-science professor at Carnegie Mellon University, told this story in a
lecture to 400 students and colleagues.
"If your kids want to paint their bedrooms, as a favor to me, let 'em do it," he said. "Don't worry about
resale values."
As I wrote last week, his talk was a riveting and rollicking journey through the lessons of his life. It was
also his last lecture, since he has pancreatic cancer and expects to live for just a few months.
After he spoke, his only plans were to quietly spend whatever time he has left with his wife and three
young children. He never imagined the whirlwind that would envelop him. As video clips of his speech
spread across the Internet, thousands of people contacted him to say he had made a profound impact on
their lives. Many were moved to tears by his words -- and moved to action. Parents everywhere vowed to
let their kids do what they'd like on their bedroom walls.
"I am going to go right home and let my daughter paint her wall the bright pink she has been desiring
instead of the "resalable" vanilla I wanted," Carol Castle of Spring Creek, Nev., wrote to me to forward to
Dr. Pausch
People wanted Dr. Pausch to know that his talk had inspired them to quit pitying themselves, or to move
on from divorces, or to pay more attention to their families. One woman wrote that his words had given
her the strength to leave an abusive relationship. And terminally ill people wrote that they would try to
live their lives as the 46-year-old Dr. Pausch is living his. "I'm dying and I'm having fun," he said in the
lecture. "And I'm going to keep having fun every day, because there's no other way to play it."
For Don Frankenfeld of Rapid City, S.D., watching the full lecture was "the best hour I have spent in
years." Many echoed that sentiment.
ABC News, which featured Dr. Pausch on "Good Morning America," named him its "Person of the
Week." Other media descended on him. And hundreds of bloggers world-wide wrote essays celebrating
him as their new hero. Their headlines were effusive: "Best Lecture Ever," "The Most Important Thing
I've Ever Seen," "Randy Pausch, Worth Every Second."
In his lecture, Dr. Pausch had said, "Brick walls are there for a reason. They let us prove how badly we
want things." Scores of Web sites now feature those words. Some include photos of brick walls for
emphasis. Meanwhile, rabbis and ministers shared his brick-wall metaphor in sermons this past weekend.
Some compared the lecture to Lou Gehrig's "Luckiest Man Alive" speech. Celina Levin, 15, of Marlton,
N.J., told Dr. Pausch that her AP English class had been analyzing the Gehrig speech, and "I have a
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feeling that we'll be analyzing your speech for years to come." Already, the Naperville, Ill., Central High
School speech team plans to have a student deliver the Pausch speech word for word in competition.
As Dr. Pausch's fans emailed links of his speech to friends, some were sheepish about it. "I am a deeply
cynical person who reminds people frequently not to send me those sappy feel-good emails," wrote Mark
Pfeifer, a technology project manager at a New York investment bank. "Randy Pausch's lecture moved
me deeply, and I intend to forward it on."
In Miami, retiree Ronald Trazenfeld emailed the lecture to friends with a note to "stop complaining about
bad service and shoddy merchandise." He suggested they instead hug someone they love.
Near the end of his lecture, Dr. Pausch had talked about earning his Ph.D., and how his mother would
kiddingly introduce him: "This is my son. He's a doctor, but not the kind who helps people."
It was a laugh line, but it led dozens of people to reassure Dr. Pausch: "You ARE the kind of doctor who
helps people," wrote Cheryl Davis of Oakland, Calif.
Dr. Pausch feels overwhelmed and moved that what started in a lecture hall with 400 people has now
been experienced by millions. Still, he has retained his sense of humor. "There's a limit to how many
times you can read how great you are and what an inspiration you are," he says, "but I'm not there yet."
Carnegie Mellon has a plan to honor Dr. Pausch. As a techie with the heart of a performer, he was always
a link between the arts and sciences on campus. A new computer-science building is being built, and a
footbridge will connect it to the nearby arts building. The bridge will be named the Randy Pausch
Memorial Footbridge.
"Based on your talk, we're thinking of putting a brick wall on either end," joked the university's president,
Jared Cohon, announcing the honor. He went on to say: "Randy, there will be generations of students and
faculty who will not know you, but they will cross that bridge and see your name and they'll ask those of
us who did know you. And we will tell them."
Dr. Pausch has asked Carnegie Mellon not to copyright his last lecture, and instead to leave it in the
public domain. It will remain his legacy, and his footbridge, to the world.
Article: “A Final Farewell” by Jeffrey Zaslow, published in The Wall Street Journal on May 3, 2008
Note: In this article Jeffrey Zaslow reflects on what was like knowing and writing The Last Lecture with
Randy Pausch.
Saying goodbye. It's a part of the human experience that we encounter every day, sometimes
nonchalantly, sometimes with great emotion.
Then, eventually, the time comes for the final goodbye. When death is near, how do we phrase our
words? How do we show our love?
Randy Pausch, a professor at Pittsburgh's Carnegie Mellon University, has become famous for the way in
which he chose to say goodbye to his students and colleagues. His final lecture to them, delivered last
September, turned into a phenomenon, viewed by millions on the Internet. Dying of pancreatic cancer, he
showed a love of life and an approach to death that people have found inspiring. For many of us, his
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lecture has become a reminder that our own futures are similarly -- if not as drastically -- brief. His fate is
ours, sped up.
Since the lecture, I've been privileged to spend a great deal of time with Randy, while co-writing his new
book, "The Last Lecture." I've seen how, in some ways, he is peacefully reconciled to his fate, and in
other ways, understandably, he is struggling.
The lecture was directed at his "work family," a call to them to go on without him and do great things.
But since the talk, Randy has been most focused on his actual family -- his wife, Jai, and their three
children, ages 6, 3, and 1.
For months after receiving his terminal diagnosis last August, Randy and Jai (pronounced "Jay") didn't
tell the kids he was dying. They were advised to wait until Randy was more symptomatic. "I still look
pretty healthy," he told me in December, "and so my kids remain unaware that in my every encounter
with them I'm saying goodbye. There's this sense of urgency that I try not to let them pick up on."
Through both his lecture and his life, Randy offers a realistic road map to the final farewell. His approach
-- pragmatic, heartfelt, sometimes quirky, often joyous -- can't help but leave you wondering: "How will I
say goodbye?"
Maybe 150. That's how many people Randy expected would attend his last lecture. He bet a friend $50
that he'd never fill the 400-seat auditorium. After all, it was a warm September day. He assumed people
would have better things to do than listen to a dying computer-science professor in his 40s give his final
lesson.
Randy lost his bet. The room was packed. He was thrilled by the turnout, and determined to deliver a talk
that offered all he had in him.
He arrived onstage to a standing ovation, but motioned to the audience to sit down. "Make me earn it," he
said.
He hardly mentioned his cancer. Instead, he took everyone on a rollicking journey through the lessons of
his life. He talked about the importance of childhood dreams, and the fortitude needed to overcome
setbacks. ("Brick walls are there for a reason. They let us prove how badly we want things.") He
encouraged his audience to be patient with others. ("Wait long enough, and people will surprise and
impress you.") And, to show the crowd that he wasn't ready to climb into his deathbed, he dropped to the
floor and did push-ups.
His colleagues and students sat there, buoyed by his words and startled by how the rush of one man's
passion could leave them feeling so introspective and emotionally spent -- all at once saddened and
exhilarated.
In 70 minutes onstage, he gave his audience reasons to reconsider their own ambitions, and to find new
ways to look at other people's flaws and talents. He celebrated mentors and protégés with an open heart.
And through a few simple gestures -- including a birthday cake for his wife -- he showed everyone the
depth of his love for his family. In his smiling delivery, he was so full of life that it was almost impossible
to reconcile the fact that he was near death -- that this performance was his goodbye.
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I'm a columnist for The Wall Street Journal, and a week before Randy gave the lecture, I got a heads-up
about it from the Journal's Pittsburgh bureau chief. Because my column focuses on life transitions, she
thought Randy might be fodder for a story.
I was aware that professors are often asked to give "last lectures" as an academic exercise, imagining
what wisdom they would impart if it was their final chance. In Randy's case, of course, his talk would not
be hypothetical.
I first spoke to him by phone the day before his talk, and he was so engaging that I was curious to see
what he'd be like onstage. I was slightly ill at ease in our conversation; it's hard to know what to say to a
dying man. But Randy found ways to lighten things up. He was driving his car, talking to me on his
cellphone. I didn't want him to get in an accident, so I suggested we reconnect when he got to a land line.
He laughed. "Hey, if I die in a car crash, what difference would it make?"
I almost didn't go to Pittsburgh to see him. The plane fare from my home in Detroit was a hefty $850, and
my editors said that if I wanted, I could just do a phone interview with him after the talk, asking him how
it went. In the end, I sensed that I shouldn't miss seeing his lecture in person, and so I drove the 300 miles
to Pittsburgh.
Like others in the room that day, I knew I was seeing something extraordinary. I hoped I could put
together a compelling story, but I had no expectations beyond that.
Neither did Randy. When the lecture ended, his only plan was to quietly spend whatever time he had left
with Jai and the kids. He never imagined the whirlwind that would envelop him.
The lecture had been videotaped -- WSJ.com posted highlights -- and footage began spreading across
thousands of Web sites. (The full talk can now be seen at thelastlecture.com.) Randy was soon receiving
emails from all over the world.
People wrote about how his lecture had inspired them to spend more time with loved ones, to quit pitying
themselves, or even to shake off suicidal urges. Terminally ill people said the lecture had persuaded them
to embrace their own goodbyes, and as Randy said, "to keep having fun every day I have left, because
there's no other way to play it."
In the weeks after the talk, people translated the lecture into other languages, and posted their versions
online. A university in India held a screening of the video. Hundreds of students attended and told their
friends how powerful it was; hundreds more demanded a second screening a week later.
In the U.S., Randy reprised part of his talk on "The Oprah Winfrey Show." ABC News would later name
him one of its three "Persons of the Year." Thousands of bloggers wrote essays celebrating him.
Randy was overwhelmed and moved by the response. Still, he retained his sense of humor. "There's a
limit to how many times you can read how great you are and what an inspiration you are," he said. "But
I'm not there yet."
Years ago, Jai had suggested that Randy compile his advice into a book for her and the kids. She wanted
to call it “The Manual.” Now, in the wake of the lecture, otheres were also telling Randy that he had a
book in him.
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He resisted at first. Yes, there were things he felt an urge to express. But given his prognosis, he wanted
to spend his limited time with his family.
Then he caught a break. Palliative chemotherapy stalled the growth of his tumors. “This will be the first
book to ever list the drug Gemcitabine on the acknowlegments page,” he joked. But he still didn’t want
the book to get in the way of his last months with his kids. So he came up with a plan.
Because exercise was crucial to his health, he would ride his bicycle around his neighborhood for an hour
each day. This was time he couldn’t be with his kids, anyway. He and I agreed that he would wear a
cellphone headset on these rides, and we’d talk about everything on his mind—the lecture, his life, his
dreams for his family.
Every day, as soon as his bike ride came to an end, so did our conversation. “Gotta go!” he’d say, and I
knew he felt an aching urge (and responsibility) to return to his family life.
But the next day, he’d be back on the bike, enthusiastic about the conversation. He confided in me that
since his diagnosis, he had found himself feeling saddest when he was alone, driving his car or riding his
bike. So I sensed that he enjoyed my company in his ears as he pedaled.
Randy had a way of framing human experiences in his own distinctive way, mixing humor here,
unexpected inspiration there, and wrapping it all in an uncommon optimism. In the three months after the
lecture, he went on 53 long bike rides, and the stories he told became not just his book, but also part of his
process of saying goodbye.
Right now, Randy's children -- Dylan, Logan and Chloe -- are too young to understand all the things he
yearns to share with them. "I want the kids to know what I've always believed in," he told me, "and all the
ways in which I've come to love them."
Those who die at older ages, after their children have grown to adulthood, can find comfort in the fact that
they've been a presence in their offspring's lives. "When I cry in the shower," Randy said, "I'm not usually
thinking, 'I won't get to see the kids do this' or 'I won't get to see them do that.' I'm thinking about the kids
not having a father. I'm focused more on what they're going to lose than on what I'm going to lose. Yes, a
percentage of my sadness is, 'I won't, I won't, I won't.' But a bigger part of me grieves for them. I keep
thinking, 'They won't, they won't, they won't.' "
Early on, he had vowed to do the logistical things necessary to ease his family's path into a life without
him. His minister helped him think beyond estate planning and funeral arrangements. "You have life
insurance, right?" the minister asked.
"Yes, it's all in place," Randy told him.
"Well, you also need emotional insurance," the minister explained. The premiums for that insurance
would be paid for with Randy's time, not his money. The minister suggested that Randy spend hours
making videotapes of himself with the kids. Years from now, they will be able to see how easily they
touched each other and laughed together.
Knowing his kids' memories of him could be fuzzy, Randy has been doing things with them that he hopes
they'll find unforgettable. For instance, he and Dylan, 6, went on a minivacation to swim with dolphins.
"A kid swims with dolphins, he doesn't easily forget it," Randy said. "We took lots of photos." Randy
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took Logan, 3, to Disney World to meet his hero, Mickey Mouse. "I'd met him, so I could make the
introduction."
Randy also made a point of talking to people who lost parents when they were very young. They told him
they found it consoling to learn about how much their mothers and fathers loved them. The more they
knew, the more they could still feel that love. To that end, Randy built separate lists of his memories of
each child. He also has written down his advice for them, things like: "If I could only give three words of
advice, they would be, 'Tell the truth.' If I got three more words, I'd add, 'All the time.' "
The advice he's leaving for Chloe includes this: "When men are romantically interested in you, it's really
simple. Just ignore everything they say and only pay attention to what they do." Chloe, not yet 2 years
old, may end up having no memory of her father. "But I want her to grow up knowing," Randy said, "that
I was the first man ever to fall in love with her."
Saying goodbye to a spouse requires more than just loving words. There are details that must be
addressed.
Shortly after his terminal diagnosis, Randy and his family moved from Pittsburgh to southeastern
Virginia, so that after he dies, Jai and the kids will be closer to her family for support. At first, Jai didn't
even want Randy returning to Pittsburgh to give his last lecture; she thought he should be home,
unpacking boxes or interacting with the kids. "Call me selfish," Jai told him, "but I want all of you. Any
time you'll spend working on this lecture is lost time, because it's time away from the kids and from me."
Jai finally relented when Randy explained how much he yearned to give one last talk. "An injured lion
still wants to roar," he told her.
In the months after the talk, while chemo was still keeping his tumors from growing, Randy wouldn't use
the word "lucky" to describe his situation. Still, he said, "a part of me does feel fortunate that I didn't get
hit by the proverbial bus." Cancer had given him the time to have vital conversations with Jai that
wouldn't be possible if his fate were a heart attack or car accident.
What did they talk about?
For starters, they both tried to remember that flight attendants offer terrific caregiving advice: "Put on
your own oxygen mask before assisting others."
"Jai is such a giver that she often forgets to take care of herself," Randy said. "When we become
physically or emotionally run down, we can't help anybody else, least of all small children." Randy has
reminded Jai that, once he's gone, she should give herself permission to make herself a priority.
Randy and Jai also talked about the fact that she will make mistakes in the years ahead, and she shouldn't
attribute them all to the fact that she'll be raising the kids herself. "Mistakes are part of the process of
parenting," Randy told her. "If I were able to live, we'd be making those mistakes together."
In some ways, the couple found it helpful to try to live together as if their marriage had decades to go.
"We discuss, we get frustrated, we get mad, we make up," Randy said.
At the same time, given Randy's prognosis, Jai has been trying to let little stuff slide. Randy can be
messy, with clothes everywhere. "Obviously, I ought to be neater," Randy said. "I owe Jai many
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apologies. But do we really want to spend our last months together arguing that I haven't hung up my
khakis? We do not. So now Jai kicks my clothes in a corner and moves on."
A friend suggested to Jai that she keep a daily journal. She writes in there things that get on her nerves
about Randy. He can be cocky, dismissive, a know-it-all. "Randy didn't put his plate in the dishwasher
tonight," she wrote one night. "He just left it there on the table and went to his computer." She knew he
was preoccupied, heading to the Internet to research medical treatments. Still, the dish bothered her. She
wrote about it, felt better, and they didn't need to argue over it.
There are days when Jai tells Randy things, and there's little he can say in response. She has said to him:
"I can't imagine rolling over in bed and you're not there." And: "I can't picture myself taking the kids on
vacation and you not being with us."
Randy and Jai have gone to a therapist who specializes in counseling couples in which one spouse is
terminally ill. That's been helpful. But they've still struggled. They've cried together in bed at 3 a.m.,
fallen back asleep, woken up at 4 a.m. and cried some more. "We've gotten through in part by focusing on
the tasks at hand," Randy said. "We can't fall to pieces. We've got to get some sleep because one of us has
to get up in the morning and give the kids breakfast. That person, for the record, is almost always Jai."
For Randy, part of saying goodbye is trying to remain optimistic. After his diagnosis, Randy's doctor gave
him advice: "It's important to behave as if you're going to be around awhile." Randy was already way
ahead of him: "Doc, I just bought a new convertible and got a vasectomy. What more do you want from
me?"
In December, Randy went on a short scuba-diving vacation with three close friends. The men were all
aware of the subtext; they were banding together to give Randy a farewell weekend. Still, they
successfully avoided any emotional "I love you, man" dialogue related to Randy's cancer. Instead, they
reminisced, horsed around and made fun of each other. (Actually, it was mostly the other guys making
fun of Randy for the "St. Randy of Pittsburgh" reputation he had gotten since his lecture.) Nothing was
off-limits. When Randy put on sunscreen, his friend Steve Seabolt said, "Afraid of skin cancer, Randy?
That's like putting good money after bad."
Randy loved that weekend. As he later explained it: "I am maintaining my clear-eyed sense of the
inevitable. I'm living like I'm dying. But at the same time, I'm very much living like I'm still living."
Since Randy's lecture began spreading on the Internet, he has heard from thousands of strangers, many
offering advice on how they dealt with final goodbyes.
A woman who lost her husband to pancreatic cancer said his last speech was to a small audience: her, his
children, parents and siblings. He thanked them for their guidance and love, and reminisced about places
they had gone together. Another woman, whose husband died of a brain tumor, suggested that Randy talk
to Jai about how she'll need to reassure their kids, as they get older, that they will have a normal life.
"There will be graduations, marriages, children of their own. When a parent dies at such an early age,
some children think that other normal life-cycle events may not happen for them, either."
Randy was moved by comments such as the one he received from a man with serious heart problems. The
man wrote to tell Randy about Krishnamurti, a spiritual leader in India who died in 1986. Krishnamurti
was once asked what was the most appropriate way to say goodbye to a man who was about to die. He
answered: "Tell your friend that in his death, a part of you dies and goes with him. Wherever he goes, you
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also go. He will not be alone." In his email to Randy, this man was reassuring: "I know you are not
alone."
The chemotherapy keeping Randy alive took a toll on his body. By March, he was fighting off kidney and
heart failure, along with debilitating fatigue. Still, he kept a commitment to go to Washington, D.C., to
speak before Congress on behalf of the Pancreatic Cancer Action Network.
He spoke forcefully about research needed to fight pancreatic cancer, the deadliest of all the cancers, and
then held up a large photo of Jai and the kids. When he pointed to Jai, he told the congressmen: "This is
my widow. That's not a grammatical construction you get to use every day.... Pancreatic cancer can be
beat, but it will take more courage and funding."
Randy has now stopped chemotherapy, and as he regains his strength, he hopes to begin liver-specific
treatments. He is engaged in the process, but expects no miracles. He knows his road is short.
Meanwhile, I feel forever changed by my time with Randy; I saw his love of life from a front-row seat.
He and I traded countless emails, and I've filed them all safely in my computer. His daily emails -- smart,
funny, wise -- have brightened my inbox. I dread the day I will no longer hear from him.
Randy rarely got emotional in all his hours with me. He was brave, talking about death like a scientist. In
fact, until we got to discussing what should be in the book's last chapter, he never choked up.
The last chapter, we decided, would be about the last moments of his lecture -- how he felt, what he said.
He thought hard about that, and then described for me how his emotions swelled as he took a breath and
prepared to deliver his closing lines. It was tough, he said, "because the end of the talk had to be a
distillation of how I felt about the end of my life."
In the same way, discussing the end of the book was emotional for him. I could hear his voice cracking as
we spoke. Left unsaid was the fact that this part of our journey together was ending. He no longer needed
to ride his bike, wearing that headset, while I sat at my computer, tapping away, his voice in my ears.
Within weeks, he had no energy to exercise.
Randy is thrilled that so many people are finding his lecture beneficial, and he hopes the book also will be
a meaningful legacy for him. Still, all along, he kept reminding me that he was reaching into his heart,
offering his life lessons, mostly to address an audience of three. "I'm attempting to put myself in a bottle
that will one day wash up on the beach for my children," he said.
And so despite all his goodbyes, he has found solace in the idea that he'll remain a presence. "Kids, more
than anything else, need to know their parents love them," he said. "Their parents don't have to be alive
for that to happen."
Chapter cut from the book:
Question: Why do you think this chapter was cut?
THE LOST CHAPTER
The Bridge
When I was first diagnosed with cancer, I went to see Carnegie Mellon’s president, Jared Cohon, to let
him know. He met me in his reception area, and just making small-talk, told me I looked thin and trim.
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“I see you’re down to your fighting weight,” he said.
“Well, that’s what I’ve come to talk to about,” I told him as he closed his door. “I’m thin because I have
cancer.”
He immediately vowed to do whatever he could for me, to call anyone he knew in medicine who might
help. And then he took out his business card and wrote his cell-phone number on the back of it. “This is
for Jai,” he said. “You tell her to call me, day or night, if there’s anything this university can do to help,
or anything I can do as an individual.”
President Cohon, and others at the university, did indeed make great efforts on my behalf. My surgeon
later said to me: “Every time the phone rings, it’s another person politely insinuating that you’re not the
guy to lose on the table.”
But Carnegie Mellon also had given me a break by reconsidering my graduate-school application. Then,
years later, the school hired me. Then it allowed me to set up academic programs that few other
universities would even consider. Now, once again, I felt this school rallying behind me. Let me just say
it: To the extent that a human being can love an institution, I love Carnegie Mellon.
On the day of my last lecture, I was told that President Cohon was out of town and couldn’t attend. I was
disappointed. But actually, his plan was to fly back to Pittsburgh the afternoon of the talk.
He arrived halfway through the lecture, and I saw him enter the room out of the corner of my eye. I paused
for a second. He stood against the side wall, watching me speak. I didn’t know it, but he was set to follow
me on stage.
He also had a surprise.
Less than a block from the lecture hall, a new computer-science building was under construction. A 220foot-long footbridge, three stories high, is being built to connect the computer center to the nearby arts
and drama building. President Cohon had come to announce that a decision had been made to name the
bridge “The Randy Pausch Memorial Footbridge.”
“Based on your talk,” he ad-libbed, “we’re thinking of putting a brick wall at either end. Let’s see what
our students can do with that.”
His announcement was an overwhelming moment in my life. The idea of this bridge took my breath
away.
Turned out, President Cohon wasn’t kidding about the brick walls, either. Carnegie Mellon gave its
architects and bridge designers the green light to be completely creative. They first considered having
some kind of hologram of a brick wall on the bridge, allowing students to walk right through it. Now
they’re planning to design the bridge in a way that gives pedestrians a sense that a brick wall is ahead of
them at the end.
I’ve never been a big fan of memorials or buildings being named in people’s memories. Walt Disney had
said he didn’t like the idea of statues of dead guys in the park.
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And yet, I’m a big believer in symbols as a way to communicate. The symbolism of this bridge is just
amazing to me because I've spent my career trying to be a bridge. My goal was always to connect people
from different disciplines, while helping them find their way over brick walls.
I am moved and pleased when I picture all the people who will one day cross that bridge: Jai, our kids,
my former students and colleagues, and a lot of young people with somewhere to go.
The Pausch Bridge
The Pausch Bridge connects one of the university’s fine arts bulidings, Purnell Center, with the
new Gates & Hillman Centers, the home for computer science at Carnegie Mellon.
Randy reminded students that even in dangerous waters, one penguin had to be brave enough to
take the first dive. The design of the Pausch Bridge pays tribute to all the “penguins” of the
world with abstract penguin cut-outs.
The bridge features more than 7,000 programmable (and environmentally friendly) LED lights.
During the opening, the lighting sequences are designed to represent six different visual
metaphors from Randy’s book. The light show will run about 15 minutes before repeating on a
loop.
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Pausch Bridge Lighting Description- Christopher Popowich and Cindy Limauro, Lighting
Designers
All lighting looks for the Pausch Bridge are inspired from visual metaphors in Randy’s book
The Last Lecture. The lighting will run 15 minutes before repeating on a continuous loop.
Here is a visual description.
Fun with Crayons
Randy talks about only using black and white crayons and then later on discovers color.
The bridge panels will start in darkness and will then fade up to white light. The bridge will then start
to change colors based on the favorite colors of Randy, Jai, Dylan, Logan and Chloe.
Space – The Last Frontier
Star Trek and space were another important dream for Randy. The lighting on the brick wall will
simulate a rocket blast off while the bridge panels will create a panorama of space.
Make the Most of Each Day – Time of Day Cycle
Randy lived each day to the fullest. The lighting will transition from night into dawn, daylight into
sunset.
Be the First Penguin
The lighting will create water imagery and motion to suggest the image of penguins jumping into
water.
Live your Dreams- the Elevator in Randy’s bedroom
Randy describes how important it was to be able to paint his bedroom and one strong image is the
elevator. The lighting on the bridge will create the motion of a moving elevator stopping at floors
with the wall culminating in beautiful colors to become a metaphor for Live your Dreams.
Disney and the Circus – Grand Finale
There are so many references in the book to Disney and the Circus. The ETC program that Randy
co-founded is about exploring cutting edge technologies. This section will be a grand finale of the
magic of light and will really show off the possibilities of this cutting edge lighting technology that is
being used to honor Randy’s memory.
(Source: http://www.cmu.edu/randyslecture/bridge.html)
Information from Carnegie Mellon University:
We at Carnegie Mellon have been blessed to know and work with Randy Pausch and to see the profound
influence he has had on our students, on entertainment technologies and on the teaching of computer
science. We--all of us--are fortunate that Randy has been able to record his insights into how a good life
is lived. Randy’s gifts of inspiration are no longer restricted to our lecture halls and labs; they are now
here for all to read and experience.
— Jared L. Cohon, President, Carnegie Mellon University
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Carnegie Mellon is a private research university with more than 10,000 undergraduate and graduate
students participating in a distinctive mix of programs in engineering, computer science, robotics,
business, public policy, fine arts and the humanities. A global university, Carnegie Mellon has campuses
in Pittsburgh, PA, Silicon Valley, CA, and Doha, Qatar. Carnegie Mellon also has degree-granting
programs in Asia, Australia and Europe.
Watch videos and get more information about The Last Lecture DVD, Randy's other lectures, and media
coverage for the book at Randy Pausch's Carnegie Mellon website.
The Entertainment Technology Center at Carnegie Mellon University is the premiere professional
graduate program for interactive entertainment as it is applied across a variety of fields. Co-founded by
Don Marinelli and Randy Pausch, the ETC emphasizes leadership, innovation and communication by
creating challenging experiences through which students learn how to collaborate, experiment, and iterate
solutions. Graduates are prepared for any environment where technologists and artists work closely on a
team; like theme parks, children and science museums, web sites, mobile computing, video games and
more. (Source: www.thelastlecture.com)
www.alice.org
Note: Alice is the program that Randy Pausch initiated at Carnegie Mellon. It is available to download
for free at www.alice.org. It looks pretty awesome, so if you are interested in creating animation and
video games, check it out.
Alice is an innovative 3D programming environment that makes it easy to create an animation for telling
a story, playing an interactive game, or a video to share on the web. Alice is a freely available teaching
tool designed to be a student's first exposure to object-oriented programming. It allows students to learn
fundamental programming concepts in the context of creating animated movies and simple video games.
In Alice, 3-D objects (e.g., people, animals, and vehicles) populate a virtual world and students create a
program to animate the objects.
In Alice's interactive interface, students drag and drop graphic tiles to create a program, where the
instructions correspond to standard statements in a production oriented programming language, such as
Java, C++, and C#. Alice allows students to immediately see how their animation programs run, enabling
them to easily understand the relationship between the programming statements and the behavior of
objects in their animation. By manipulating the objects in their virtual world, students gain experience
with all the programming constructs typically taught in an introductory programming course. (Source:
www.alice.org)
Article: “Shrines to Childhood” by Kate Stone Lombardi, published in The New York Times on April
5, 2009
Note: This article talks about what happens to childhood bedrooms after the child moves out. It is worth
noting since many of you will be going away to college next year, and Randy Pausch had such an
attachment to his childhood room.
MY son’s room has been described more than once as a shrine. The object of his homage? The New York
Rangers.
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We are not just talking about a few posters on the wall. Nearly every square inch trumpets Paul’s support
of the team.
A huge Rangers banner that hangs from the ceiling dominates the room. In the corner is a larger-than-life
cardboard cutout of Wayne Gretzky, hockey stick outstretched, waiting for a pass. The bed has not only a
Rangers cover and a Rangers pillow, but also sheets with hockey pucks on them.
There are signed hockey sticks over the windows, which themselves are decorated with Rangers decals.
The computer mouse pad has the team logo. There are framed, signed Rangers jerseys above the
computer.
It goes without saying that the walls are covered with posters, photographs and calendars that celebrate
the team. (Ticket stubs from games are kept in a separate box, memories too precious to stick on the
wall.)
I think you get the picture. My son is the kind of fan whose spirits rise and fall with the performance of
the team, who follows every blip of Rangers news, remains highly opinionated about the strengths and
weaknesses of each player, and who sounds to me at this point as if he’s ready to step up to the coach’s
job, in the event that the latest one doesn’t work out.
This room didn’t come together overnight, of course. The memorabilia was collected from the time he
was an early fan — back in his elementary school days — until now. Today he is a college sophomore.
He still lives and breathes hockey. But he doesn’t really live in that room anymore.
I am careful about going in there while he’s at school, because it makes me miss him too much. Just
standing in the doorway sets me back. That’s because to me this room is more than a monument to a
hockey team. It’s really a shrine to the little boy who grew up there.
Paul was placed in a crib as a newborn in that room. He spent endless hours of his childhood in there,
playing with his Matchbox cars, painstakingly organizing his hockey cards, reading and, as he got older,
studying, cramming for SATs, logging hours on Facebook with his friends and, finally, packing for
college.
When I look past all the Rangers stuff, I can still see remnants of other parts of Paul’s childhood. High up
on a shelf is the stuffed penguin he once slept with. There are a few little cars on the shelf — and of
course, a few mini-Zambonis. There are class pictures from elementary school, team pictures from high
school, soccer trophies and a program from a jazz concert he played in.
Recently, I spotted a brochure about a college study-abroad program — he hopes to spend a semester in
Spain next year. There was also a pile of clothes he had outgrown. As it is, he can barely fit his long
frame in that childhood bed.
This, I know, is a room in transition. His sister’s room is just down the hall, and farther along in the
process of transforming from a child’s room to the room of someone who once lived there.
Jeanie graduated from college two years ago. Her room, too, mirrors the girl she once was. The canopied
bed still has a Laura Ashley spread, and there are matching curtains on the windows. But there is also a
Zebra-patterned throw that appealed to her in middle school. At one point she balked at her pink walls
and carpets — now the carpet is a moss green and the walls a sky blue. It feels as if you are outside and it
also feels very much like a reflection of Jeanie’s spirit.
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Photos of laughing groups of friends are tacked on the wall, spread on the bureau and tucked into the
corners of her mirror. There are half-melted candles and countless hair accessories. The shelves and the
desk are crammed with dozens of books, ranging from childhood favorites to Michel Foucault’s “Ethics:
Subjectivity and Truth,” with plenty of trashy novels and great literature in between.
But things are also starting to disappear from that room. A lamp went to her apartment in the city. So did
some sheets and blankets. And a small painting that used to hang on her wall. And some framed photos.
It’s still my daughter’s room, but as she settles more deeply into her independent life, her essence gets
more and more stripped out of those four walls.
I would be lying to say that I miss the disorder — the scattered papers, the piles of clothes, the dirty tea
mugs — that were also very much a part of Jeanie’s occupancy. But I do miss the girl who lived there.
On a recent college vacation, Paul brought a friend home, and as they entered his room, it seemed like the
Rangers shrine had for the first time become slightly embarrassing. “It’s sort of a little boy’s room,” he
said with a small smile.
Paul will probably always root for the team and follow its fortunes. In the years to come, he will see great
players rise and fall, playoffs come and go, and coaches hired and fired. And if all the stars align, he will
see the Rangers bring home another Stanley Cup, something that will bring him enormous joy no matter
what age he’ll be. But the little-boy adoration that was reflected in his room has already been replaced
with a more nuanced understanding of professional sports.
I suspect, over time, his monument to the hockey team will slowly be dismantled. A poster here. A signed
photograph there. I doubt that the Rangers bedspread will make the move to an adult apartment, though
you never know. If it doesn’t, I doubt I will ever remove it.
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Lessons After The Last Lecture From Jai Pausch
By TESS SCOTT
May 15, 2012—
abcnews.go.com
Randy Pausch's Widow Reimagines Her Life After Loss
Jai Pausch is dreaming new dreams and rebuilding her life, one hour at a time. Jai wrote a novel
about caring for her late husband, the famed Carnegie Mellon professor Randy Pausch, who died
in 2008 after a battle with pancreatic cancer.
Jai's book, "Dream New Dreams: Reimagining My Life After Loss," provides an intimate
portrait of the family's journey through Randy's diagnosis, treatment, and death.
Randy Pausch's name ricocheted around the world after he delivered his famous Last Lecture at
Carnegie Mellon to a packed hall. Randy talked about the importance of achieving childhood
dreams despite tremendous obstacles.
"The brick walls are... there to stop the people who don't want it badly enough. They're there to
stop the other people," he said.
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In one of the most poignant moments in the lecture, Randy Pausch revealed his diagnosis of
pancreatic cancer and that he only had three to six months left to live. He then got down on the
ground and did pushups in front of the stunned audience.
"I don't know how not to have fun. I'm dying and I'm having fun," he said.
So inspiring, the lecture rocketed around the world with over ten million downloads and a NYT
bestselling book based on his talk. The book stayed on the bestseller list for 112 weeks, with
almost five million copies sold, including a new enhanced ebook
Despite Randy's impossibly sunny attitude, his wife Jai describes in her book the difficulty in
trying to cope with the cancer that would ultimately take Randy from her and their children.
"You never realize the tragedy that could befall you. And you think, like, 'this would be the
worst thing that could happen to me...' And that's when you're fooled by how limited your
imagination actually was. And something completely different, something completely worse."
The book is a sort of guidebook for caregivers, passing on intimate lessons learned from their
experience.
"I first started writing it for me. For that person who had started off in this process of being a
caretaker. Starting on this journey and looking back and thinking what I know now that I could
pass on to her."
And the book details some of the darker moments in Jai's journey, the anger she felt towards her
husband for what was happening to him and their family, and her own guilt.
"That's where I think we could step in and help caregivers and say it's normal to feel this way, it's
okay to have resentment, it's okay to have anger."
Jai describes learning to care for herself, and learning when to let go and accept Randy's death.
She remembers the advice one friend gave her.
"I have everything I need," she said.
Four years after Randy's death, the phenomenon of his life continues. Jai remembers the message
her husband left with the world: there is magic that lives in us all.
"And I came to realize, after Randy had passed, that I had the ability to make magic, too... I have
magic in me, too. And it didn't die like I thought."
A sunrise and a new day. Jai met a man online, a former submarine officer. The two recently
married.
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She writes, "...When a dream shatters, pick up the pieces and get a new one. It won't be the same
as the broken one. But one can hope it will be as vibrant and exciting. I've had to give myself
permission to let go of the old dreams."
Source: This article—a video interview—originally appeared at:
http://abcnews.go.com/US/jai-pausch-lessons-lecture/story?id=16351226#.T9K1rrBrPl4
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Jeff Zaslow's Last Lesson - CNN.com
By Bob Greene, CNN Contributor
updated 9:46 AM EST, Sun March 4, 2012
Jounalist and author Jeff Zaslow, who died in a car crash last month, brought admirable integrity to his work, says
Bob Greene.
Editor's note: Editor's note: CNN Contributor Bob Greene is a bestselling author whose books include "Late Edition:
A Love Story" and "Once Upon a Town: The Miracle of the North Platte Canteen."
(CNN) -- "What # are you at?"
The brief e-mail arrived late on the morning of January 24. I keep looking at it.
It was from Jeff Zaslow. We first became friends more than 25 years ago. We got together as often as we could
when we found ourselves in the same town, usually for long, laughter-filled dinners; Jeff, a columnist for the Wall
Street Journal, in recent years became the author of multiple big bestselling books, most of them on inspirational
themes.
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"What # are you at?"
He was going to be making appearances for his latest book, "The Magic Room," and he had looked at his schedule
and saw that he had a few days between speeches in the South. He knew that I'd been holed up in a hotel on the west
coast of Florida, trying to get some writing done. He was going to take those two days between speeches to join me
and just hang out.
So we talked on the phone, and arranged the days. Today -- Sunday, March 4 -- is the day he was to arrive.
On February 10, on his way back to his home in suburban Detroit from a book signing in Petoskey, Michigan, the
night before, Jeff was killed instantly when, according to police, his car skidded on a snowy road and was hit headon by an oncoming semitrailer truck. He was 53.
Jeff's wife, Sherry, his three daughters, Jordan, Alex and Eden, and his parents, Harry and Naomi, have suffered an
unfathomable loss. The obituaries and tributes written by his friends and colleagues have all centered on Jeff's
never-ending thoughtfulness and compassion. The tributes have been entirely accurate; the constancy of Jeff's
kindness was one of life's rarities.
Today, when Jeff should have been arriving for our time together, I'd like to pass on a lesson from him that I believe
can be used to great effect by anyone, regardless of his or her line of work.
It has to do with the book that first made him a bestselling author, "The Last Lecture," written with Professor Randy
Pausch of Carnegie Mellon University. The book was a publishing phenomenon: 5 million copies sold in the English
language alone, translations into 48 languages around the world.
Some people thought that Jeff got lucky with that book.
But luck had nothing to do with it.
In early September 2007, Jeff was working on a Wall Street Journal column about a trend he was hearing about at
U.S. universities. Professors were thinking what they might say if they had to deliver one last lecture, and were in
fact giving those lectures, summing up what had been meaningful in their lives.
As he was reporting the piece, Jeff learned that a professor at Carnegie Mellon -- Pausch -- was going to give what
might literally be his last lecture. Pausch was dying from pancreatic cancer.
It was going to be inconvenient for Jeff to go from Detroit to Pittsburgh for the speech; there was a problem with the
price of the flight, and the schedule, and he also had obligations to attend to in Michigan that day. It would have
been much easier just to call the professor and get a quote, or have the university send him an audio or video
recording of the lecture. Remember: Jeff didn't even know, at that point, whether Pausch's lecture would warrant a
whole column.
But he got up that morning in Detroit and -- Jeff being Jeff -- decided that he really ought to see for himself.
He was an established and respected Wall Street Journal staff member; no one at the paper would have faulted him
for doing a quick interview with Pausch on the phone.
Jeff got in his car and drove more than 300 miles from Detroit to Pittsburgh to sit in the audience and listen to the
speech. A five-hour drive there, and then a five-hour, 300-mile drive back.
It paid off spectacularly, of course. The column -- moving, tender, insightful -- was a sensation, and the book that he
ended up writing with Pausch gave Jeff a new career in the top echelon of American authors, and provided financial
security for his family.
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But -- and this is what is important -- it was nothing he didn't do all the time. In his work, he always went the extra
step -- the extra hundred steps. He never took the easy way.
I remember, seven or eight years ago, well before "The Last Lecture," Jeff had come to Chicago to interview an oldtime vaudeville performer. To the best of my recollection, the newspaper story was going to have something to do
with audiences, or audience reactions. The old performer was going to be one sliver of a longer piece. An easy
phone-call interview.
But Jeff didn't do things that way. He flew to Chicago and, suitcase in hand (he hadn't checked into his hotel yet),
met me at the restaurant where we had arranged to have dinner. At one point we talked about why, at this stage in
his career, he still pushed himself so hard. He said he just wanted to look into the man's eyes when he interviewed
him the next day. He felt the story would be a little better that way.
At the end of the meal we went to the coat-check window; they had taken Jeff's suitcase down a long flight of stairs
to store it on a basement level. Jeff didn't want the young woman to have to carry it up the stairs, so he went down to
get it. I stood there and watched as he came up the steep flight of stairs, visibly weary, huffing, sweating, lugging the
heavy bag; we looked at each other and both of us burst out laughing.
"Look at you," I said. "You look like 'Death of a [cuss-word-adjective] Salesman.'"
"I know," he said. "Why do I do this?"
We both knew the answer. He did it because it was the right way to do a job. And it doesn't matter what a person
does for a living. It can be the lawyer who stays late to look up a few more citations of case law, to give his client
the best possible chance. It can be the teacher who goes over the lesson plan one more time, adding something vital
to it at midnight, even though the students or the school administrators will never be aware of the effort she has put
in. It can be the factory worker who takes it upon himself to check the specifications a third and fourth time, wanting
to be absolutely certain that the product will be as close to perfect as humanly possible.
Does it always pay off, as Jeff's 10 hours on the road paid off with "The Last Lecture"? Of course not. It hardly ever
pays off that big. Most times, your boss, your colleagues, your own family will never know that you put in the extra
effort when you didn't have to.
But you'll know. That's what counts. And when the day finally comes when you have your big success, when you
get your big break, it won't be because you made the extra effort once. It will be because you made the extra effort
every time.
Jeff did. And that's the lesson I'd like to pass on for him. Especially today. The silence at the dinner hour tonight is
going to be awfully loud.
Source of this Article: http://www.cnn.com/2012/03/04/opinion/greene-zaslow/
For more information on Jeff Zaslow, visit: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jeff_Zaslow
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The Last Lecture Homework Assignment:
"If you lead your life the right way, the karma will take care of itself. The dreams will come to you."Randy Pausch
Make a list of your childhood and/or current dreams (probably you will have at least five, but I am not
requiring that you have a certain number of dreams—this is about your dreams, after all). They must fit
onto a standard piece of printer paper, and you must also include a photograph of yourself as a child. You
may also choose to creatively decorate this to fit your personality. Be forewarned that this project will be
hung up in the classroom. It should be formatted as thus:
YOUR NAME’S DREAMS
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
PHOTOGRAPH
This project will be worth 20 points.
The Last Lecture Cooperative Group Activity
One of the many wonderful points Randy Pausch made in his book was the need for his students to work
together and contribute equally. With that in mind, I am going to assign you to a group of approximately
four and give you a box of paper clips. Your goal will be to put together the biggest, best, most creative
object you can with these paper clips. When the time expires, everyone reconvenes at a predefined
location for the show-and-tell and judging process.
This in-class activity will be worth 10 points.
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Commencement Address by David McCullough, Jr. to Wellesley High School
Source: http://theswellesleyreport.com/2012/06/wellesley-high-grads-told-youre-not-special/
Hyperlink to original commencement address: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_lfxYhtf8o4
____________________________________________________________________________________
Wellesley High Grads Told: “You’re not special”
By B.B. Brown | Published: June 5, 2012
We’d been hearing good things over the weekend about Wellesley High
School English teacher David McCullough, Jr.’s faculty speech to the Class of 2012 last Friday.
Here it is, in its entirety, courtesy of Mr. McCullough:
Dr. Wong, Dr. Keough, Mrs. Novogroski, Ms. Curran, members of the board of education,
family and friends of the graduates, ladies and gentlemen of the Wellesley High School class of
2012, for the privilege of speaking to you this afternoon, I am honored and grateful. Thank you.
So here we are… commencement… life’s great forward-looking ceremony. (And don’t
say, “What about weddings?” Weddings are one-sided and insufficiently effective. Weddings
are bride-centric pageantry. Other than conceding to a list of unreasonable demands, the groom
just stands there. No stately, hey-everybody-look-at-me procession. No being given away. No
identity-changing pronouncement. And can you imagine a television show dedicated to watching
guys try on tuxedos? Their fathers sitting there misty-eyed with joy and disbelief, their brothers
lurking in the corner muttering with envy. Left to men, weddings would be, after limits-testing
procrastination, spontaneous, almost inadvertent… during halftime… on the way to the
refrigerator. And then there’s the frequency of failure: statistics tell us half of you will get
divorced. A winning percentage like that’ll get you last place in the American League East. The
Baltimore Orioles do better than weddings.)
But this ceremony… commencement… a commencement works every time. From this day
forward… truly… in sickness and in health, through financial fiascos, through midlife crises and
passably attractive sales reps at trade shows in Cincinnati, through diminishing tolerance for
annoyingness, through every difference, irreconcilable and otherwise, you will stay forever
graduated from high school, you and your diploma as one, ‘til death do you part.
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No, commencement is life’s great ceremonial beginning, with its own attendant and
highly appropriate symbolism. Fitting, for example, for this auspicious rite of passage, is where
we find ourselves this afternoon, the venue. Normally, I avoid clichés like the plague, wouldn’t
touch them with a ten-foot pole, but here we are on a literal level playing field. That matters.
That says something. And your ceremonial costume… shapeless, uniform, one-size-fits-all.
Whether male or female, tall or short, scholar or slacker, spray-tanned prom queen or
intergalactic X-Box assassin, each of you is dressed, you’ll notice, exactly the same. And your
diploma… but for your name, exactly the same.
All of this is as it should be, because none of you is special.
You are not special. You are not exceptional.
Contrary to what your u9 soccer trophy suggests, your glowing seventh grade report
card, despite every assurance of a certain corpulent purple dinosaur, that nice Mister Rogers
and your batty Aunt Sylvia, no matter how often your maternal caped crusader has swooped in
to save you… you’re nothing special.
Yes, you’ve been pampered, cosseted, doted upon, helmeted, bubble-wrapped. Yes,
capable adults with other things to do have held you, kissed you, fed you, wiped your mouth,
wiped your bottom, trained you, taught you, tutored you, coached you, listened to you, counseled
you, encouraged you, consoled you and encouraged you again. You’ve been nudged, cajoled,
wheedled and implored. You’ve been feted and fawned over and called sweetie pie. Yes, you
have. And, certainly, we’ve been to your games, your plays, your recitals, your science fairs.
Absolutely, smiles ignite when you walk into a room, and hundreds gasp with delight at your
every tweet. Why, maybe you’ve even had your picture in the Townsman! And now you’ve
conquered high school… and, indisputably, here we all have gathered for you, the pride and joy
of this fine community, the first to emerge from that magnificent new building…
But do not get the idea you’re anything special. Because you’re not.
The empirical evidence is everywhere, numbers even an English teacher can’t ignore.
Newton, Natick, Nee… I am allowed to say Needham, yes? …that has to be two thousand high
school graduates right there, give or take, and that’s just the neighborhood Ns. Across the
country no fewer than 3.2 million seniors are graduating about now from more than 37,000 high
schools. That’s 37,000 valedictorians… 37,000 class presidents… 92,000 harmonizing altos…
340,000 swaggering jocks… 2,185,967 pairs of Uggs. But why limit ourselves to high school?
After all, you’re leaving it. So think about this: even if you’re one in a million, on a planet of 6.8
billion that means there are nearly 7,000 people just like you. Imagine standing somewhere over
there on Washington Street on Marathon Monday and watching sixty-eight hundred yous go
running by. And consider for a moment the bigger picture: your planet, I’ll remind you, is not
the center of its solar system, your solar system is not the center of its galaxy, your galaxy is not
the center of the universe. In fact, astrophysicists assure us the universe has no center;
therefore, you cannot be it. Neither can Donald Trump… which someone should tell him…
although that hair is quite a phenomenon.
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“But, Dave,” you cry, “Walt Whitman tells me I’m my own version of perfection!
Epictetus tells me I have the spark of Zeus!” And I don’t disagree. So that makes 6.8 billion
examples of perfection, 6.8 billion sparks of Zeus. You see, if everyone is special, then no one
is. If everyone gets a trophy, trophies become meaningless. In our unspoken but not so subtle
Darwinian competition with one another–which springs, I think, from our fear of our own
insignificance, a subset of our dread of mortality — we have of late, we Americans, to our
detriment, come to love accolades more than genuine achievement. We have come to see them
as the point — and we’re happy to compromise standards, or ignore reality, if we suspect that’s
the quickest way, or only way, to have something to put on the mantelpiece, something to pose
with, crow about, something with which to leverage ourselves into a better spot on the social
totem pole. No longer is it how you play the game, no longer is it even whether you win or lose,
or learn or grow, or enjoy yourself doing it… Now it’s “So what does this get me?” As a
consequence, we cheapen worthy endeavors, and building a Guatemalan medical clinic becomes
more about the application to Bowdoin than the well-being of Guatemalans. It’s an epidemic —
and in its way, not even dear old Wellesley High is immune… one of the best of the 37,000
nationwide, Wellesley High School… where good is no longer good enough, where a B is the
new C, and the midlevel curriculum is called Advanced College Placement. And I hope you
caught me when I said “one of the best.” I said “one of the best” so we can feel better about
ourselves, so we can bask in a little easy distinction, however vague and unverifiable, and count
ourselves among the elite, whoever they might be, and enjoy a perceived leg up on the perceived
competition. But the phrase defies logic. By definition there can be only one best. You’re it or
you’re not.
If you’ve learned anything in your years here I hope it’s that education should be for,
rather than material advantage, the exhilaration of learning. You’ve learned, too, I hope, as
Sophocles assured us, that wisdom is the chief element of happiness. (Second is ice cream…
just an fyi) I also hope you’ve learned enough to recognize how little you know… how little you
know now… at the moment… for today is just the beginning. It’s where you go from here that
matters.
As you commence, then, and before you scatter to the winds, I urge you to do whatever
you do for no reason other than you love it and believe in its importance. Don’t bother with
work you don’t believe in any more than you would a spouse you’re not crazy about, lest you too
find yourself on the wrong side of a Baltimore Orioles comparison. Resist the easy comforts of
complacency, the specious glitter of materialism, the narcotic paralysis of self-satisfaction. Be
worthy of your advantages. And read… read all the time… read as a matter of principle, as a
matter of self-respect. Read as a nourishing staple of life. Develop and protect a moral
sensibility and demonstrate the character to apply it. Dream big. Work hard. Think for
yourself. Love everything you love, everyone you love, with all your might. And do so, please,
with a sense of urgency, for every tick of the clock subtracts from fewer and fewer; and as surely
as there are commencements there are cessations, and you’ll be in no condition to enjoy the
ceremony attendant to that eventuality no matter how delightful the afternoon.
The fulfilling life, the distinctive life, the relevant life, is an achievement, not something
that will fall into your lap because you’re a nice person or mommy ordered it from the caterer.
You’ll note the founding fathers took pains to secure your inalienable right to life, liberty and the
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pursuit of happiness–quite an active verb, “pursuit”–which leaves, I should think, little time for
lying around watching parrots rollerskate on Youtube. The first President Roosevelt, the old
rough rider, advocated the strenuous life. Mr. Thoreau wanted to drive life into a corner, to live
deep and suck out all the marrow. The poet Mary Oliver tells us to row, row into the swirl and
roil. Locally, someone… I forget who… from time to time encourages young scholars to carpe
the heck out of the diem. The point is the same: get busy, have at it. Don’t wait for inspiration
or passion to find you. Get up, get out, explore, find it yourself, and grab hold with both hands.
(Now, before you dash off and get your YOLO tattoo, let me point out the illogic of that trendy
little expression–because you can and should live not merely once, but every day of your life.
Rather than You Only Live Once, it should be You Live Only Once… but because YLOO doesn’t
have the same ring, we shrug and decide it doesn’t matter.)
None of this day-seizing, though, this YLOOing, should be interpreted as license for selfindulgence. Like accolades ought to be, the fulfilled life is a consequence, a gratifying
byproduct. It’s what happens when you’re thinking about more important things. Climb the
mountain not to plant your flag, but to embrace the challenge, enjoy the air and behold the view.
Climb it so you can see the world, not so the world can see you. Go to Paris to be in Paris, not
to cross it off your list and congratulate yourself for being worldly. Exercise free will and
creative, independent thought not for the satisfactions they will bring you, but for the good they
will do others, the rest of the 6.8 billion–and those who will follow them. And then you too will
discover the great and curious truth of the human experience is that selflessness is the best thing
you can do for yourself. The sweetest joys of life, then, come only with the recognition that
you’re not special.
Because everyone is.
Congratulations. Good luck. Make for yourselves, please, for your sake and for ours,
extraordinary lives.
David McCullough
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Advice to High-School Graduates: 'You Are Not Special'
English teacher David McCullough Jr. thinks students need to stop trying to excel at everything.
By Amy Quick Parrish May 7 2014, 10:30 AM ET
On a spring day in 2012, Wellesley High School English teacher David McCullough Jr. stepped
onto the school’s football field, then covered in a sea of seniors dressed in identical caps and
gowns. Clad in a blazer and striped tie, McCullough made his way to the podium, donned his
reading glasses, and began his commencement speech. Nothing about the event seemed out of
the ordinary. McCullough, after all, was participating in a ritual that happens hundreds of
thousands of times across the United States each year. He had given graduation speeches before.
But compared to the countless other remarks given by comedians, journalists, and politicians that
year, McCullough’s speech stood out for its blunt, four-word message: “You are not special.”
The immediate reaction to the address was positive. After the ceremony, a grandmother thanked
McCullough and complimented the speech. She asked for a copy of the remarks, so he handed
her the piece of paper from which he had read. And as McCullough and his son walked to the
parking lot, a friend of McCullough’s called up to him, “That was awesome!” But soon after its
delivery, the speech’s influence spread far beyond Wellesley High School: Across the country, it
was quoted, sound-bited, discussed, analyzed, dissected, tweeted, and re-tweeted. Quite simply,
it was the graduation speech of 2012.
The reaction caught McCullough by surprise. He had attended several other graduations that
weekend, including his son’s, and by the following Monday, he said, his speech felt like “three
graduations ago.” He was not prepared for the avalanche of emails, interview requests, and even
book deals that followed.
“I was floored. I thought I was speaking merely to the people sitting in front of me. I was aware
of the grandstand full of friends and family. I was unaware that it was being videotaped,” said
McCullough. “I was concerned that suddenly I became the story and we were taking away from
the kids." But his ideas had clearly attracted interest, and last month, he published a book: You
Are Not Special and Other Encouragements, which argues that the pressure to excel prevents
students from taking chances and learning from failure.
***
Wellesley, Massachusetts is a special place. The town, home to Wellesley College, Babson
College, and several other private schools, is affluent and well-educated. Former astronauts,
famous writers, and brilliant scientists have all resided in Wellesley. The town is known for its
excellent public school system, its many golf courses, and its proximity to downtown Boston.
The town also has a nurturing atmosphere in which children thrive. According to Boston
Magazine’s “Best Schools in Boston 2013,” Wellesley High School’s students have a 98.3
percent graduation rate, and 95.1 percent earn a score of 3-5 on AP exams. Wellesley students’
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SAT scores average a 623 in reading, 631 in writing, and 631 in math. These kids are born and
bred for success.
That’s what worries McCullough. “If you remove from the kid the notion that every step is
crucially important, all expectations are spectacular achievement, and allow him to operate free
from adult scrutiny and be a regular kid and follow his interests, it makes for a much healthier
educational attitude,” he said.
Since he first began teaching 26 years ago, McCullough says, priorities have shifted greatly.
“[Students] have become ever more intent on assembling an impressive GPA... A ‘B’ is now
understood to be an average grade. And because the grade is the point and to be average is to be
a bit of a loser—everyone has to be high achieving.”
Today’s adults grew up with asphalt playgrounds, playing outside unsupervised until dinner. But
today’s kids are strapped in car seats from birth, and McCollough sees his students slowly losing
autonomy. “The kids now seem so directed and scheduled—they're tutored and coached and the
degree to which parents are involved in their lives is … well, one notices,” he said. “They’re
getting very little experience conducting their own lives and living with the consequences of
their decisions. When they stumble, their parents step in, denying them very important formative
experiences.”
“You are not special” may sound like the lament of a grumpy old man. But McCullough’s book
is not about bashing students, their parents, or society. Instead, he sees himself as a mentor who
wants the best for his students amid worries about a generation defined by college admissions
decisions. McCullough hopes teenagers will “think about why they do what they do, follow new
interests, not worry so much about material reward, invest themselves in the moment, [and] trust
that results will take care of themselves.” He wants today’s kids to worry less about impressing
people. “It becomes a novel idea that you study because it's fun to learn [...] not clearing the way
for the next step,” he said.
McCullough encourages his students to go out and see the world—travel, buy a boat, climb
mountains, work in Haiti, join the armed forces, or go to the library and simply start reading
anything and everything that interests them. “Climb the mountain not to plant your flag, but to
embrace the challenge, enjoy the air and behold the view. Climb it so you can see the world, not
so the world can see you.”
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Illustrative/Exemplification Essay on The Last Lecture
For your first essay, you are going to write your own 500-750 word essay giving advice on how
you live your life, based on the life lessons you have learned so far. You need to break up your
advice into five short chapters and give each chapter a title (and you will need to give the overall
essay a title). I have explained what I want in each chapter below, but you need to create your
own original title to go with it. You will also need to include short anecdotes from your life to
support each chapter, just as Randy did in his book. Your chapters should be broken up as
followed:

Chapter One: The Book that Changed Me (and How)

Chapter Two: A Photo from History that Inspires Me (include the photograph;
create a works cited entry based on where photograph is found)

Chapter Three: An Idea or Motto or Quote that Inspires Me

Chapter Four: A Person that Inspires Me

Chapter Five: How I Will Change the World (must include an article from a
reputable website that includes research on way you will impact the world;
include work cited entry based on where photograph is found)
The following are your due dates for this essay:

Rough draft is due to www.turnitin.com by ______ at 11:59 pm- worth 10 points

Peer editing is done in class on ________; it is due to www.turnitin.com by ______ at
11:59 pm- worth 15 points

Final draft is due to www.turnitin.com by ______ at 11:59 pm- worth 75 points. (Note:
You will highlight in yellow changes you made from rough to final draft. You should
highlight at least 15% of what you wrote in order to receive a grade for completing a final
draft.)
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Causal Analysis Essay Instructions
The following are your due dates for this essay:

Rough draft is due to www.turnitin.com by ______ at 11:59 pm- worth 10 points

Peer editing is done in class on ________; it is due to www.turnitin.com by ______ at
11:59 pm- worth 15 points

Final draft is due to www.turnitin.com by ______ at 11:59 pm- worth 75 points. (Note:
You will highlight in yellow changes you made from rough to final draft. You should
highlight at least 20% of what you wrote in order to receive a grade for completing a final
draft.)
The following are your choices for this essay, which needs to be 500-750 words and include at
least two quotations from two reputable sources with works cited entries (keeping in mind that
no more than 20% of your paper should be quoted material):

Write a causal analysis essay on the poor writing habits of today’s students

Write a causal analysis essay on the lack of popular financial support for museums,
concerts, and other art forms

Write a causal analysis essay on the need for prison reform

Write a causal analysis essay on the worldwide popularity of rock music

Write a causal analysis essay on the failure of the rapid transit system in most large cities

Write a causal analysis essay on our tendency to buy throwaway items

Write a causal analysis essay on the contributions suffragettes made to the cause of
feminism

Write a causal analysis essay on the destructive effects caused by differences in lifestyle
between some college students and their parents. Consider such matters as clothing,
entertainment, music, hairstyle, and dating. Consider also differences in political or other
issues.
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Wadworth: Writing Paragraphs
Exercise B
Determine one possible pattern of development for a paragraph on
each of these topics. Then, write a paragraph (of at least five
sentences) below on one of the topics.
1. What success is (or is not)
2. The two kinds of people who appear on television reality shows
3. My worst experience
4. The connection between coffee consumption and heart disease
5. The dangers of using a cell phone while driving
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Wadsworth: Thesis Statements and Formal Outlines
Attached you will find an editorial entitled Why the Insanity of College Admissions Will Change
by Patrick Mattimore. Please read this editorial and write a formal outline of it. You need to
have a minimum of a thesis statement, three Roman numeral subheadings, and an a and b to go
with each subheading:
My college alma mater, Dartmouth College, announced recently that the College had received a record number of
applications for spots in the freshmen class. The admissions’ department has also projected that Dartmouth would
accept the lowest percentage of students in the College’s history, about 11-12% of applicants.
Sometime this coming fall, I expect to receive a letter from Dartmouth informing me that this year’s class of
freshmen is the best-prepared, most diverse, smartest, highest potential group of students to ever enroll at
Dartmouth, thereby knocking my class, which was also all the “bests”, from 40th to 41st place on that esteemed list.
Coincidentally, I will also receive a solicitation to donate to the alumni fund, presumably to help push my class into
42nd place.
Yale, Harvard, Princeton, and Stanford already accept less than 10% of applicants annually, and Yale recently
publicized the fact that the College had accepted a record low number of early admissions’ applicants which will
help keep their overall acceptance rate below 10%. I’m pretty sure Dartmouth’s goal is to break into that 90%
rejection club too. The irony is that these same admissions’ departments regularly broadcast the fact that nearly all
their applicants are capable of doing the work that would be expected of them at the respective colleges. Stories are
legion of students with perfect SAT scores and 4.0 high school grade point averages being turned down at these elite
schools. Everyone seems to agree that competitive admissions have become too competitive but, like a high stakes
game of chicken, no one seems willing to step back from the edge.
Two years ago, during my last full year teaching high school, my seniors exacted some revenge by compiling some
of the most obsequious, self-serving rejection letters that colleges sent out and combining extracts from those letters.
Several large daily newspapers published our story along with several students’ editorial suggestions. Various
people have suggested solutions to tamp back the competitive college admissions game, perhaps the most radical of
which is the idea proposed by Barry Schwartz at Swarthmore. Schwartz has recommended that competitive colleges
establish minimum acceptance standards and then take all the student applicants that meet the criteria and put them
into a lottery.
The real answer, though, will come not from making the system one of chance, or dictating solutions, but from the
market itself. Much as the housing bubble burst after years of increasing demand and prices, demand for the name
colleges will begin to recede in the next few years for several reasons.
First, the population of college-age students is expected to decline. That fact alone will produce a lesser demand for
spots in colleges.
Second, the financial crisis will cause a greater demand among students for financial aid. While many of the better
endowed colleges can now promise to provide 100% of demonstrated need for admitted students, those generous
pledges may not last. In any event, the colleges may tighten definitions of demonstrated need.
Third, markets reveal frauds. Or rather, commodities that are overpriced, deflate. At some point, the perception that
only a narrow band of elite schools are acceptable and that those elite schools are better than many other colleges
will fade. The public will likely realize that the letter on someone’s college sweatshirt has a lot less to do with the
quality of that person’s education than what the person wearing the sweatshirt makes of her opportunities, no matter
where she goes. Unfortunately, that realization will come a little late for the Class of 2013.
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Wadsworth: Commas
Part I: Add commas to the following sentences so they make sense.
1. Kahlo was a young, energetic girl of sixteen when her life was interrupted by a devastating
bus accident so she was forces to convalesce in bed for a long time.
2. Her love of painting could not be stopped and she found ways to paint while she was
recovering.
3. Kahlo painted smaller self-portraits with bright glossy colors and lush vivid flowers.
4. While many of her images are warmly tropical details such as a bleeding heart her wounded
and broken body and twisted limbs are also featured.
5. In 1892 Diego Rivera and his family moved to Mexico City.
6. At the San Carlos Academy he studied art.
7. In 1987 an exhibit of Frida Kahlo’s art was brought to the Plaza de la Raza a site in East Los
Angeles.
8. The exhibit among the most extensive in the United States at that time drew the attention of
Tina Guotta a young artist.
9. Born in Guanajuanto Mexico in 1886 Diego Rivera spent a lifetime committed to the
struggles of workers both in Mexico and internationally.
10. Although he and his wife Frida Kahlo noted Mexican artist were controversial for their
Communist sympathies they both acquired an international reputation for their great art.
Evaluating Sources- Do Exercise 2 on p. 209-210 of your Wadsworth on your own.
Be sure to write down at least two significant characteristics about each website below.
www.cancer.org
1.
2.
http://canhelp.com
1.
2.
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Wadsworth: Using Other Punctuation Marks
Directions: Add appropriate punctuation—colons, dashes, parentheses, brackets, or slashes—to
the following sentences. If a sentence is correct, mark it with a C.
1. Mark Twain Samuel Clemens made the following statement “I can live for two months on a
good compliment.”
2. Liza Minnelli, the actress singer who starred in several films, is the daughter of legendary
singer Judy Garland.
3. Saudi Arabia, Oman, Yemen, Qatar, and the United Arab Emirates all these are located on the
Arabian Peninsula.
4. John Adams 1735-1826 was the second president of the United States; John Quincy Adams
1767-1848 was the sixth.
5. The sign said, “No trespassing sic.”
6. Checkmate a term derived from the Persian phrase meaning “the king is dead” announces
victory in chess.
7. The following people were present at the meeting the president of the board of trustees, three
trustees, and twenty reporters.
8. Before the introduction of the potato in Europe, the parsnip was a major source of
carbohydrates in fact, it was a dietary staple.
9. In the well-researched book Crime Movies (New York Norton, 1980), Carlos Clarens studies
the gangster genre in film.
10. I remember reading thought I can’t remember where that Upton Sinclair sold plots to Jack
London.
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Wadsworth: Chapter 9 “Using Logic,” Chapter 10 “Writing Argumentative Essays,” and
Chapter 41: “Revising Run-Ons”
1. Do Exercise #1 on p. 110-111 and write the answer below:
2. Choose one of the enthymemes for Exercise #2 on p. 112-113, supply the missing premise,
and determine if the resulting syllogism is sound.
3. Do Exercise #1 on p. 124.
4. Do Exercise #2 on p. 126-127.
5. Combine each of the following sentence pairs into one sentence without creating comma
splices or fused sentences. In each case, either connect the clauses into a compound sentence or
subordinate one clause to the other to create a complex sentence. You may need to add, delete,
reorder, or change words or punctuation.
a. The sound of waves is comforting. The sand gets into everything.
b. Several reasons have been given for this decline in historical literacy. The main reason is the
way history is taught.
c. One way to avoid this problem is to use good textbooks. Textbooks should be accurate, lively,
and focused.
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Wadsworth: Writing a Research Paper, including Writing a Rough Draft, Revising Your
Drafts, and Preparing a Final Draft
1. True False:
You can put your thesis statement anywhere in a research paper; it
does not need to be in the introduction.
2. True False:
You lead readers through the body of your paper with strong
topic sentences that correspond to the divisions of your outline.
3. True False:
If two sources present conflicting interpretations, you should be
especially careful to use precise language and accurate transitions
to make the contrast apparent.
4. True False:
Photographs and other visuals should not be used in an argument
research paper.
5. True False:
Your teacher’s revision suggestions can help you revise your
research paper.
6. True False:
Feedback you get from peer review is usually not helpful and
should not be used to revise.
7. True False:
It may be necessary to add more research in order to find support
for certain points in your research paper.
8. True False:
You should always remove sources you did not use in the paper in
your final Works Cited.
9. True False:
You do not need to proofread your paper; you should always trust
in your judgment that you have done your best work at 4 am the
day before the paper is due.
10. True False
It is an asset to have a general title instead of a title that is specific
and interesting.
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Wadsworth: Evaluating Internet Sources; Writing a Research Paper
Directions: This assignment will be due at the end of class on __________. You will also need
to bring your Wadsworth book since it is necessary to complete your assignment.
Your research paper this semester will be on a social issue that is relevant to Florida. (We will
begin it officially in November.) The requirements are:
 1200-1500 words
 MLA style
 Six (or more) internet sources dated from 2012-present
 One source that is a book that has been checked out from the SFCC library (does not
need to be from 2012-present); you will need to turn in a photocopy of the pages you
used, plus the title page, copyright information page, and proof you checked out the book
from SFSC.
To aid you in writing your research paper, you definitely need to know how to evaluate sources.
Please answer the following questions to aid in learning how to evaluate sources:
1. Make a list of at least three topics you think you could write your research paper on:
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2. Now that you’ve thought about it a bit, choose one of the topics and do a search with several
of the popular search engines listed in section 13b (p. 192-193) of your Wadsworth. Compare
the results, especially of the first items listed on each search.
 Was there much duplication?
 Did some sources appear only on one search?
 How many “hits” did each search engine provide for a particular topic?
3. Try using one of the metasearch engines listed in 13b (p. 193). What were the results?
4. Try using one or two of the specialized search engines also listed in 13b (p. 195-196). What
were the results?
5. Was a particular search engine faster or slower than the others?
6. Try narrowing your search. Put quotation marks around a phrase and search again. Use
combining keywords—and, or, or not—to conduct a Boolean search. Try plus or minus signs
with word combinations. How were the results different from your earlier searches?
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Now that you’ve had some time to search, pretend you must pick out your research paper topic
right now. (Relax—you can change it later, or you might find out that you get much work done
for your research paper right now by choosing the topic that works for you!)
Topic of argument research paper:
Thesis of research paper (w/ side that agrees with your opinion):
Thesis of research paper (w/ side that disagrees with your opinion):
Why would I make you write a thesis on both sides of the issue?
Now, find two authoritative sources on your topic. (One with a fact or opinion that agrees with
your opinion; one with a fact or opinion that disagrees with your opinion.) Below you should
write the title and author, website name, and brief explanation of how you would use this
source in your paper.
Source #1-
Source #2-
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My Name
Ms. Rosenbaum
ENC 1101- Period ___
Date
Here is Where I Add My Specific and Interesting Title for This Assignment
Index on The Canterbury Tales:
1. Knight
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
2. Squire
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
3. Yeoman
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
4. Nun (Prioress)--travels with another nun, three priests
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
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Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
5. Monk
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
6. Friar
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
7. Merchant
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
8. Oxford cleric
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
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9. Serjeant [sic] at the Law
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
10. Franklin
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
11. Haberdasher, Dyer, Carpenter, Weaver, Carpet-Maker
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
12. Cook
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
13. Skipper
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
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Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
14. Doctor
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
15. Woman (or Wife) of Bath
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
16. Parson
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
17. Plowman
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
18. Miller
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Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
19. Manciple
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
20. Reeve
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
21. Summoner
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
22. Pardoner
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
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Significance of Quote #2:
23. Host
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
24. Quote/Significance #1 from The Pardoner’s Tale
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
25. Quote/Significance #2 from The Pardoner’s Tale
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
26. Quote/Significance #3 from The Pardoner’s Tale
Quote #3: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #3:
27. Quote/Significance #4 from The Pardoner’s Tale
Quote #4: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #4:
28. Quote/Significance #5 from The Pardoner’s Tale
Quote #5: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #5:
29. Quote/Significance #1 from The Summoner’s Tale
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
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Significance of Quote #1:
30. Quote/Significance #2 from The Summoner’s Tale
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
31. Quote/Significance #3 from The Summoner’s Tale
Quote #3: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #3:
32. Quote/Significance #4 from The Summoner’s Tale
Quote #4: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #4:
33. Quote/Significance #5 from The Summoner’s Tale
Quote #5: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #5:
34. Quote/Significance #1 from The Wife of Bath’s Tale
Quote #1: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #1:
35. Quote/Significance #2 from The Wife of Bath’s Tale
Quote #2: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #2:
36. Quote/Significance #3 from The Wife of Bath’s Tale
Quote #3: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #3:
37. Quote/Significance #4 from The Wife of Bath’s Tale
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Quote #4: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #4:
38. Quote/Significance #5 from The Wife of Bath’s Tale
Quote #5: “
” (Chaucer __).
Significance of Quote #5:
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Works Cited
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Notes on The Canterbury Tales
Geoffrey Chaucer (1340-1400)
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Known an “father of English poetry”
Second in praise only to Shakespeare amongst English authors
was first to write in English, a language considered vulgar at the time; he is actually
credited with making English “respectable”
member of upper middle class
was captured while serving country in France; king paid his ransom for release
Background on The Canterbury Tales
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Chaucer originally intended to write 120 tales; 2 stories from each pilgrim on the way
there and 2 on the way back
Chaucer died—so only 24 were written
However, The Canterbury Tales provides a telling description of the way different people
were in the Middle Ages
Time of extreme corruption in Christianity (i.e. Prioress, Monk, Friar, Summoner,
Pardoner)
Some pilgrims are probably based on people Chaucer knew (i.e. Merchant, Friar—
Chaucer once beat up a Friar)
General Prologue
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Mentions 30 pilgrims (including Chaucer) and the Host
Presents reader with variety of types of people who were part of Middle Ages society
Only by a pilgrimage could Chaucer have an excuse to present all of these characters,
since all different types went on a pilgrimage
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Where are these people going?
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When did they begin the pilgrimage?
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What are the religious people Chaucer describes generally like?
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Who is/are the exception to this?
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What was the bet the Host made with the pilgrims?
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How was it decided who would tell their story first?

Chaucer at one point talks about how he felt relaying these stories to the reader (lines
745-749). How did he feel about expressing the crudeness of some of the tales?
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The pilgrims

Knight
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Squire
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Yeoman
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Prioress (Nun)
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Monk
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Friar
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Merchant
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Oxford Cleric
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Serjeant at Law
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Franklin
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the Guild Fraternity (Haberdasher, Dyer, Carpenter, Weaver, Carpet-maker)

Cook

Skipper

Doctor

Woman (Wife) of Bath

Parson

Plowman

Miller

Manciple

Summoner

Pardoner
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
Reeve

Host
The Pardoner’s Prologue and Tale
The Wife of Bath’s Tale
The Summoner’s Tale
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SHS Pilgrimage/Creative Project/ Chaucerian Food Celebration/ The Best Storyteller
on The Canterbury Tales
I. Creative Project- Choose one of the following creative assignments to complete on ________ on The Canterbury
Tales. This project will be worth 50 points.
Ye Olde Advert Assignment- Create a travel brochure advertising Canterbury pilgrimages starting from the
Tabard Inn in Chaucer’s day. Include appropriate details from The Canterbury Tales, such as the name of
the inn’s proprietor. You should take into account the following categories with your travel brochure: food,
entertainment, lodging, and travel clothing.
Sebringian Pilgrimage (Children’s Story)-Create a children’s book with at least ten photographs of places
of significance to you in Sebring. Find a way to tell a story that makes sense and is appropriate for a child.
If it makes sense to make the story autobiographical, that is acceptable as well.
Sebringian Pilgrimage (Film Version)-Create a short film with you standing in front of at least ten places
or with at least ten people (or a combination of each) that are significant to you in Sebring. Find a way to
create a film that makes sense and is appropriate for the classroom. If you wish the people of significance
to you to speak in your film, that is appropriate as well. It should be about five minutes long.
I Am a Sebring Pilgrim!-Come dressed as a teacher or fellow student that would be familiar to all students
in class. Then, you will need to read an original poem to the class that you have written. It should be about
your pilgrim and be modeled after the style of Chaucer. Your poem should be in rhyming couplets and at
least twenty lines long. It goes without saying that your costume/imitation/poem should be complimentary
and not cruel in nature.
I Am A Canterbury Pilgrim!- Come dressed as your favorite pilgrim mentioned in Chaucer’s The
Canterbury Tales. You will then need to read to the class the original description of the pilgrim in Middle
English. You can find the Middle English version for each pilgrim at:
http://www.fordham.edu/halsall/source/CT-prolog-para.html (This contains a side-by-side Middle English
and Modern English version.) You can find a pronunciation guide for Middle English at:
http://www.ajdrake.com/e211_spr_05/materials/guides/med_chaucers_english.htm
II. Chaucerian Food Celebration- worth 15 points
The same day you present your creative project, we will also do a Chaucerian Food Celebration. You need to bring
in a medieval food that will serve eight to ten people. (A good place to find medieval recipes from Chaucer’s times
is: http://www.godecookery.com/mtrans/mtrans.htm) Since medieval people used their hands in most of what they
ate, try to bring in a recipe that can be eaten with one’s hands. If you choose to bring in something that requires
utensils, please supply the utensils as well. You may also choose to buy something, but you simply need to justify
to me how the food relates to medieval times. (Yes, it will be okay if you buy Oreos and cover up the name Oreos
with “Ye Olde Chocolate and Cream Cookies.”)
III. The Best Storyteller- worth 15 points
During the class before our Chaucerian Food Celebration, everyone is going to write a story that begins with the
same first line, is entertaining, and contains a moral at the end (just like the pilgrims did to entertain themselves on
the way to Canterbury!). If you wish to do so, you may hang up your story on the wall (without your name on it).
The day of our Chaucerian Food Celebration, you will be given a sticky note (which you should put your name on).
The student whose story ends up with the most sticky notes under it will be given the reward of “The Best
Storyteller” and will receive a goody bag.
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The Canterbury Tales BINGO GAME
B
I
N
G
KNIGHT
SQUIRE
YEOMAN
NUN (PRIORESS)
FRIAR
MERCHANT
OXFORD CLERIC
SERJEANT AT THE
LAW
HABERDASHER,
DYER, CARPENTER,
WEAVER, CARPETMAKER
COOK
FREE SPACE!
0
MONK
FRANKLIN
SKIPPER
DOCTOR
WIFE OF BATH
PARSON
PLOWMAN
MILLER
MANCIPLE
REEVE
SUMMONER
PARDONER
HOST
CHAUCER
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B
I
N
G
0
MONK
HABERDASHER,
DYER, CARPENTER,
WEAVER, CARPETMAKER
COOK
PLOWMAN
FREE SPACE!
NUN/PRIORESS
FRANKLIN
SKIPPER
MILLER
PARDONER
YEOMAN
SERJEANT AT THE
LAW
DOCTOR
MANCIPLE
HOST
OXFORD CLERIC
WOMAN (OR WIFE)
OF BATH
REEVE
CHAUCER
MERCHANT
PARSON
SUMMONER
KNIGHT
SQUIRE
KNIGHT
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B
I
N
G
O
SQUIRE
COOK
REEVE
SUMMONER
DOCTOR
YEOMAN
MONK
MERCHANT
SERJEANT AT THE
LAW
SKIPPER
NUN (PRIORESS)
MANCIPLE
FREE SPACE
PARDONER
WOMAN (OR WIFE)
OF BATH
OXFORD CLERIC
HOST
MILLER
PARSON
CHAUCER
PLOWMAN
FRANKLIN
KNIGHT
HABERDASHER,
DYER, CARPENTER,
WEAVER, CARPETMAKER
FRIAR
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B
I
N
G
O
REEVE
DOCTOR
SKIPPER
MERCHANT
MILLER
WOMAN (OR WIFE)
OF BATH
COOK
CHAUCER
SQUIRE
KNIGHT
FREE SPACE!
OXFORD CLERIC
MANCIPLE
SERJEANT AT THE
LAW
PARSON
MONK
HOST
SUMMONER
FRANKLIN
FRIAR
PARDONER
YEOMAN
PLOWMAN
NUN (PRIORESS)
HABERDASHER,
DYER, CARPENTER,
WEAVER, CARPETMAKER
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Classify and Divide Your Pilgrims!
In order to aid you in writing your next short essay, we are going to classify and divide the
pilgrims in five minutes. Each person in the group needs to fill out the chart below with the
name of all of the following pilgrims, who are the: Knight, Squire, Yeoman, Prioress (Nun),
Monk, Friar, Merchant, Oxford Cleric, Serjeant at Law, Franklin, the Guild Fraternity
(Haberdasher, Dyer, Carpenter, Weaver, Carpet-maker), Cook, Skipper, Doctor, Woman (Wife)
of Bath, Parson, Plowman, Miller, Manciple, Summoner, Pardoner, Reeve, Host.
Remember--You do not need to fill out every box in order to complete the assignment. You
simply need to put the names of all the pilgrims in boxes.
Category
Name:
Category
Name:
Category
Name:
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Name:
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Name:
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Name:
Pilgrim
Name:
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Classification/Division Essay Topics- Choose one of the topics below and write 500-750
words on it.
Rough draft due (including submission to www.turnitin.com) on ___________(worth 10 points)
Peer/self-editing (done online at www.turnitin.com) by ___________at 11:59 pm (worth 15
points)
Final draft due on _____________with submission of revised version to www.turnitin.com
(worth 75 points)
Topic #1: Write a classification/division essay on The Prologue to The Canterbury Tales. You
should consider classifying and dividing the pilgrims by class, profession, morality, or any other
such topic you find appropriate. You will also need to include two quotes from the Prologue,
and properly credit those quotes with a parenthetical citation and a Works Cited page. If you
choose to use outside sources, you must credit them as well.
Topic #2: In an essay, divide and classify one of the following subjects:
A. Your friends
B. Your relatives
C. Classes you like to take
D. Classes you do not like to take
Topic #3: Pretending that you’re writing to a perspective employer, divide and classify you life
into various stages leading up to the present.
Topic #4: Write a lighthearted classification and division essay discussing kinds of snack foods,
cartoons, pets, status symbols, toys, shoppers, vacations, hairstyles, fashion styles, teachers,
bosses, or drivers. Establish four or five distinct categories and analyze them.
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Due Dates for Florida Social Issue Research Paper
Your research paper this semester will be on a social issue that is relevant to Florida. The
requirements are:
 1200-1500 words
 MLA style
 Six (or more) internet sources dated from 2012-present
 One source that is a book that has been checked out from the SFCC library (does not
need to be from 2012-present); you will need to turn in a photocopy of the pages you
used, plus the title page, copyright information page, and proof you checked out the book
from SFSC.
_________ Research Time in class using Panther Central
_________ Paper proposal (an at least five sentence explanation of topic; the last sentence of which is
your debatable thesis statement for paper) is due to www.turnitin.com by 11:59 pm (10 points)
__________Response to someone else’s paper proposal is due to www.turnitin.com by 11:59 pm (5
points)
__________ Hyperlinks of six sources from 2012-present turned in to www.turnitin.com by 11:59 pm
(10 points)
__________Book from SFSC shown to teacher (20 points)
__________ Annotated Works Cited (with an at least two sentence explanation of source plus how it
will be used in paper) due to www.turnitin.com by 11:59 pm (20 points)
__________ Outline/Formal Brainstorming—you should complete an outline, do bullet points of the
major points of your paper, or simply a sketch of your ideas; it needs to be at least 200 words and
turned in to www.turnitin.com by 11:59 pm (20 points)
__________ Rough draft of research paper is due to www.turnitin.com by 11:59 pm (50 points)
__________ Peer/Self Editing of research paper is due to www.turnitin.com by 11:59 pm (15 points)
__________Final draft of research paper is due to www.turnitin.com by 11:59 pm (200 points)
__________ Research Paper Presentation given. Your presentation is essentially a powerpoint of
your main points of your research paper. Be sure to include a title slide, a works cited slide, and at
least 10 other content slides that sum up your paper in an interesting way. You should also include at
least five photographs in your powerpoint, making sure to credit the sources of those pictures on a
separate slide as well, by putting a picture # under the picture then having a slide with the picture #s
listed and a link to where the picture was found. You should be able to give your presentation in 2-3
minutes. (50 points)
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My Name
Ms. Rosenbaum
ENC 1101- Period ___
Date
My Wonderful and Specific Title Goes Here
Extremely interesting opening line goes here. One more sentence to add to the
excitement of my topic, such as a fascinating quote or statistic to grab the reader’s attention,
which I will then cite (Source). I will then give brief background information about my source
that is at least two sentences long. I will make sure I explain how my topic specifically relates to
Florida in my opening paragraph. My debatable thesis statement will be the last sentence of my
first paragraph and it will be underlined.
My topic sentence will contains information on my first specific example (or subheading)
of how I am breaking down my topic and how it relates specifically to Florida. I might use an
emotional appeal here, also known as pathos. Then, since I need to have information from a
source in every body paragraph, here is where I put an interesting quote from a source that
includes a transitional statement before a quote (Source). I put an additional sentence/s after this
quote explaining the significance of the information I just noted. I might add my sentence from
my book from SFSC here, including an interesting transitional statement such as _____________
once said, “Here is where I put the quote from my book from SFSC” (Last Name__). Here is
where I put sentence/s explaining the significance of what this quote means. I conclude my
paragraph with a concluding sentence to this paragraph.
My next topic sentence of my next specific example (or subheading) and how it relates
specifically to Florida, although I am careful I am not making my essay sound FCATy in any
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way as I move from one topic to another. I have heard it said, and I agree, that compoundcomplex sentences are easy to write; I might put one here. To vary the way the second body
paragraph is set up, I might put another quote or fact from a source here (Source). I will add
sentences explaining the significance of this quote here, including why this topic is significant to
Florida. I might have a sentence/s explaining the significance of this source with a concluding
sentence to this paragraph.
My next topic sentence of my next specific subheading or another specific example and
how it relates specifically to Florida. To vary the way I am presenting my information, here I
might include a chart. When I introduce a chart, advertisement, political cartoon, graph, or
visual art it will not take up more than one-fourth of the page; there will also be a transitional
statement with a phrase like “as followed” or “the following” with a : after that. For example,
the following is an example of a graph that displays how cool seniors are compared to freshmen,
sophomores, and juniors:
(“U.S. Dept…”)
I would them write a sentence/s about the significance of this graph. For example, one could say
a comment about how the coolness factor of seniors has only continued since this study was done
in the 1990s. I might have a compound sentence here, or I might not have a compound sentence
here. I might also add an original metaphor here to make my writing exciting. Then, I could go
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on to add additional logical appeals here, and therefore I would highlight a sentence that stated
something like, “90.7% of students love writing research papers” (Source). Since I do not want
to end my paragraph with information from a source, I can add a concluding sentence to this
paragraph here.
Here is where I put a topic sentence for my next subheading and how it relates
specifically to Florida. This might be the perfect time to incorporate ethos, by explaining an
expert on your topic once stated “Here is where the very important quote he or she said goes”
(Source). Here you explain the significance of this quote in a sentence/s. Since some people may
interpret your expert’s opinion ironically, here might be a good place to have irony. Since irony
can be a challenging concept for some, you may have to include a complex sentence here to
explain it. I would also include another quote or example from another source here (Source). I
would explain the significance of this quote or example in a sentence/s here. I might also want
to add a political cartoon or advertisement here that is significant to my topic. Here is where I
put my transition introducing my political cartoon or advertisement:
(Glasbergen)
Here is where I would list a sentence/s explaining the significance of this cartoon or
advertisement. I would add a concluding sentence to my paragraph here.
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Here is where I put a topic sentence on the opposing side of my opinion and how it
relates specifically to Florida. I would include information from a source that gives details on the
opposing side—as either a quote or a fact—right here (Source). Here is where I would explain in
a sentence/s the reason/s why the opposing side is incorrect. This would also be a good place to
include an original paradox, since the logic of this point of view might be paradoxical. I might
include information from a source on the side (or another bit of information on the opposing
side) right here (Source). I would then include a sentence/s explaining why I agree or disagree
with this point of view. I would include a concluding sentence to this paragraph here.
Here is where I start my concluding paragraph without repeating my thesis statement or
other information from my introduction. I might include an allusion here since it would be
something interesting to put into a conclusion. I would then include a sentence or two summing
up what is significant to take away from my paper. I will avoid using first person point of view
in my research paper even though I have used it repeatedly throughout this template. I will end
my paper with an exciting clincher statement.
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Works Cited
Glasbergen, Randy. "Education Cartoons | Randy Glasbergen - Today's Cartoon." TODAYS
CARTOON by Randy Glasbergen. Promote Globally, 2011. Web. 16 Nov. 2011.
Last name, First Name of author. “This is Where You Put the Article Title.” Website Title.
Publisher, Date published. Web. Date Accessed.
Last name, First Name of author. “This is Where You Put the Article Title.” Website Title.
Publisher, Date published. Web. Date Accessed.
Last name, First Name of author. “This is Where You Put the Article Title.” Website Title.
Publisher, Date published. Web. Date Accessed.
Last name, First Name of author. “This is Where You Put the Article Title.” Website Title.
Publisher, Date published. Web. Date Accessed.
Last Name, First Name of Author of SFCC Book. Book Title. Place Published: Publisher,
Year Published. Print.
"U.S. Department of Education Study Reveals Seniors Rule." The Onion - America's Finest
News Source. Onion, 4 Sept. 1996. Web. 16 Nov. 2011.
Disclaimer: You may use this template however you choose or completely ignore it. This
was meant to help you organize your paper so you can see what I expect it to look like.
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Name _______________________________
Period_______
Stuff to Fix (or Not Fix) for Final Draft of Florida Social Issue Research Paper
Thesis Statement
______ Still not strong enough
______ Needs to be underlined
______ Needs to be last sentence of 1st paragraph
______ By evidence presented here, you did not prove your own thesis
______ Looks good- Keep it up!
References to Florida or how this issue effects Florida
______ Needs to be referenced to more often
______ Not incorporated into paper
______ Not incorporated into paper in an appropriate and interesting way
______ Effective use of references to Florida
Citations
______ Need to have one in every body paragraph
______ Need to have a citations from six sources
______Need to have a citation from book from SFCC
______ Need to have a citation after you paraphrase information
______ Need to properly cite (Last name of author and p. #) or (1 st 2 words of article and
p #)
______ Citations are done properly—You rule the school!
Paper Itself
______Need to fix heading
______Need to fix title
______ Need a more interesting introduction
______ Need stronger support in body paragraphs
______ Paper is not discussed in a logical order
______ Paper seems rushed, as if you did not spend a lot of time working on it
______ Need to discuss opposing side of the argument
______ Need a stronger conclusion
______ Need to add to length
______ Need to shorten length
______ Need to double space
______ Need to make it Times New Roman 12 pt font
______ Need to have page #s done properly (your last name and p # in upper right hand corner)
______ Looks good—I look forward to reading your final draft.
Works Cited
______ You have work cited entries here that were not cited in your paper
______ You need to remove the annotation
______ Entries are not done according to instructions; need to fix
______ Again it looks good—Hooray for you!
Overall Comments (if any):
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Argument Essay Instructions
This essay will be completed in-class on ___________ and will be worth ______ points. You
will be timed for ________ minutes. The following are your choices of topics on educational
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Is Cheating Getting Worse?
Should Students Be Able to Grade Their Teachers?
Does Your School Hand Out Too Many A’s?
Should Middle School Students Be Drug Tested?
Should Reading and Math Be Taught in Gym Class Too?
How Seriously Should We Take Standardized Tests?
How Well Do You Think Standardized Tests Measure Your Abilities?
Do You Spend Too Much Time Preparing for Standardized Tests?
Should Schools Offer Cash Bonuses for Good Test Scores?
Should We Rethink How Long Students Spend in High School?
Do Schools Provide Students With Enough Opportunities to Be Creative?
What Are You Really Learning at School?
How Important Is Arts Education?
Does Gym Help Students Perform Better in All Their Classes?
Who Should Be Able to See Students’ Records?
Are Children of Illegal Immigrants Entitled to a Public Education?
What Is the Right Amount of Group Work in School?
Is Your School Day Too Short?
Do You Think a Longer School Calendar Is a Good Idea?
Should the Dropout Age Be Raised?
Should Students Be Allowed to Skip Senior Year of High School?
How Does Your School Deal With Students Who Misbehave?
Should Schools Be Allowed to Use Corporal Punishment?
How Big a Problem Is Bullying or Cyberbullying in Your School or Community?
How Should Schools Address Bullying?
Should Schools Put Tracking Devices in Students’ ID Cards?
What Do You Think of Grouping Students by Ability in Schools?
Do We Need a New Way to Teach Math?
Does Class Size Matter?
Should All Students Get Equal Space in a Yearbook?
Is Prom Worth It?
How Important Are Parent-Teacher Conferences?
Should All Children Be Able to Go to Preschool?
Should Colleges Use Admissions Criteria Other Than SAT Scores and Grades?
What Criteria Should Be Used in Awarding Scholarships for College?
Do You Support Affirmative Action?
Do College Rankings Matter?
How Necessary Is a College Education?
Should Engineers Pay Less for College Than English Majors?
Source: http://learning.blogs.nytimes.com/2014/02/04/200-prompts-for-argumentativewriting/?_php=true&_type=blogs&_r=0
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Ms. Rosey’s Annual Scarevenger Hunt
-This frightening activity will be done in-class on ______(for A Days) and _______(for B
Days).
-You need to make sure you wear comfortable shoes and clothing the day of the Scarevenger
Hunt, as we will be doing terrifying tasks inside and outside of the classroom.
-You also need to either bring in a bag of candy OR turn in a story to turnitin.com about the
topic of Halloween that is 250-350 words by the time class starts. You will receive 15 points for
this. (Guess what most people did last year? You got it! Brought in candy!)
-When we are done with the Scarevenger Hunt, everyone will be given a brown bag. We will
then take all of the candy that has been brought in and go “trick or treating.”
-Finally, we will end the class by writing a spooky circle story in a group.
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Read like a Rock Star 2nd 9 Weeks Assignment
What to Read --Choose a book from the list that is worthy of your intelligence (that you have not read for another
class or are not going to read for another class). You must get the book approved by me. Just so you know, you will
HAVE to read a British literature book on a specific list I give you for our next Read like a Rock Star.
Quiz- on _______________________
You will be asked some long-response questions related to your book to ensure you read and understood it. You
will essentially be proving to me you actually read the book. About two weeks before the quiz, I will ask you what
your book is so I can gear a specific quiz toward your book. Your quiz will be worth 50 points.
Book Talk- on _______________________
For this assignment, we will set up the room into “tables” so we look like a sophisticated book club. You will have
topics on cards at each table in which you will have to discuss something about your book. You will also bring a
food dish or drink (that you have made or bought that serves eight to ten people) that was either mentioned in or
inspired culturally by your book. I will have a sign-up sheet so we have a balance of food and drinks on that day in
your class. Your food dish will be worth 25 points. Your sophisticated discussion comments that I will go around
the classroom and monitor will also be worth 25 points.
Reading Log Assignment--You will need to complete four reading logs during Read like a Rock Star. Your reading
logs will be turned in to www.turnitin.com. The following are your due dates:
Reading Log #1- ____________by 11:59 pm
Reading Log #2- ____________by 11:59 pm
Reading Log #3- ____________by 11:59 pm
Reading Log #4- ____________by 11: 59 pm
This is what you need to do for each reading log:
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Write your book title (italicized) and author’s name centered on the page
Write the page numbers you read this week directly below it. (Ex—I read p. 14-58.)
Write an at least five sentence summary of the pages you read. (Keep in mind that you should be reading
about twenty minutes a day.)
Answer five of the following per log with an at least three sentence response for each. Your options are:
a. Three things I learned are…
b. A really good description is…
c. The best part of this section was...because…
d. I want to know more about…
e. I can relate to (name a character) because…
f. The setting is important because…
g. This reminds me of…
h. I predict______ will happen…
i. These pages were boring because…
j. The theme in this story is…
k. (Name a character) surprised me when…
l. (Name a literary device) was used in the line…
m. These pages were interesting because…
n. The conflict in this section is…
You are allowed to use some of the same questions on your log, but obviously your answers may not be the
same. Your log will be worth 20 points each week.
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Discussion Board Assignment
On the discussion board section of www.turnitin.com, you need to respond to a discussion I started on “Why I Do
(or Do Not) Recommend my Read like a Rock Star book…” by writing at least four sentences. Write a response to
one of your peer’s sentences that is at least one sentence long. This will be due on _____________ by 11: 59 pm.
This assignment is worth 10 points.
Project Assignment
Choose one of the following projects to complete by the time class starts on ________. Your choices are:
 Design an advertising campaign to promote the sale of the book you read. Include each of the following: a
poster, a magazine or newspaper ad, a bumper sticker, a button, and a 30 second television commercial.
(Note: This must be original. Do not violate copyright law in the making of your advertising campaign.)
 Create a comic-book summary of the book you read complete with bubble-style conversations and
illustrations. This needs to be a minimum of fifteen pages.
 Write at least ten diary entries for a diary kept by one of the characters in your book. This should be a
minimum of 500 words. You may choose to handwrite or type this. You may want to follow the style of
the times. (For example, if you are reading Pride and Prejudice you have a diary of the time period and
write in cursive.)
 Create a time capsule of significant items representing the events of the book or their lives in general.
Make a list of the at least fifteen items included, explaining why each was chosen. (If this turns out to be
financially impossible, you may make models of items to go into the capsule. I do not want you to buy an
actual ipod, for example, to go into your time capsule.)
 Write a 500-750 word proposal explaining why your book should be studied in a course at school. It could
be in an English class, or it could be offered in another subject—such as social studies, science, or art. To
make a strong case, your proposal should show you understand the scope and goals of the class and should
explain how including the book would enrich this particular class. You will initially need to present your
proposal to the class, then you will (after the class’ suggestions) submit your proposal to an administrator.
 On a poster board, use words, pictures, paint, markers, and whatever else you deem artistically and
creatively necessary to make a collage on your book. The collage should illustrate the plot or characters.
You will want to include at least twenty phrases or quotes from the book; include at least twenty pictures.
Include a written explanation of the images/quotes on the bottom corner of the collage. Be sure to include
the page numbers and a citation after the quote.
 Compile a scrapbook on your book. The scrapbook should illustrate one of the characters, including items
mentioned in the book as well as items you think that character would collect. Include at least twenty
pictures or items, plus at least 250 words explaining the items.
This is worth 75 points. How you do on all of these assignments combined will determine if you receive a literacy
card the next nine weeks.
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Name __________________________
Jigsaw Review of Reading for Writers Articles “In Praise of the Humble Comma” (425-428),
“Shame” (249-253), “Of Altruism, Heroism, and Nature’s Gifts” (414-419) and “Wide Open
Spaces” (445-449)
Article #1- “In Praise of the Humble Comma” p. 425-428
Part I: Write down a three sentence summary of the article below:
Part II: Write down three quotes, with a proper citation, to help a student understand the
article.
Quote #1-
Quote #2-
Quote #3-
Part III: Choose one question under “The Strategies” that you will ask the class. Leave
room for answers.
Question I Asked as an Expert:
Responses to this question:
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Article #2- “Shame” p. 249-253
Part I: Write down a three sentence summary of the article below:
Part II: Write down three quotes, with a proper citation, to help a student understand the
article.
Quote #1-
Quote #2-
Quote #3-
Part III: Choose one question under “The Strategies” that you will ask the class. Leave
room for answers.
Question I Asked as an Expert:
Responses to this question:
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Article #3- “Of Altruism, Heroism, and Nature’s Gifts” (414-419)
Part I: Write down a three sentence summary of the article below:
Part II: Write down three quotes, with a proper citation, to help a student understand the
article.
Quote #1-
Quote #2-
Quote #3-
Part III: Choose one question under “The Strategies” that you will ask the class. Leave
room for answers.
Question I Asked as an Expert:
Responses to this question:
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Article #4- “Wide Open Spaces” (p. 445-449)
Part I: Write down a three sentence summary of the article below:
Part II: Write down three quotes, with a proper citation, to help a student understand the
article.
Quote #1-
Quote #2-
Quote #3-
Part III: Choose one question under “The Strategies” that you will ask the class. Leave
room for answers.
Question I Asked as an Expert:
Responses to this question:
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