PP-7: Dissecting & Defending Arguments Accompanies Unit 1- Lesson 9 Raymond Gregg 9/18/2013 Section 001 Instructions: For each passage below create a BLUF statement. Identify (and mark up) the main argument around which the piece is framed by highlighting & underlining its reason and bolding & putting (parentheses around its conclusion). State whether the author adequately supports his/her claim. Make a bulleted list of items that support (or refute) the author’s claim. Lastly, identify any key assumptions. Include your name, date, Section #. Omit the instructions and the original articles in your submission. Add to your Analysis Journal. Passage 1 "In order to save a considerable amount of money, Rockingham's century-old town hall should be torn down and replaced by the larger and more energy-efficient building that some citizens have proposed. The old town hall is too small to comfortably accommodate the number of people who are employed by the town. In addition, it is very costly to heat the old hall in winter and cool it in summer. (The new, larger building would be more energy efficient, costing less per square foot to heat and cool than the old hall.) Furthermore, it would be possible to rent out some of the space in the new building, thereby generating income for the town of Rockingham." BLUF: Rockingham’s town hall should be replaced due to energy inefficiencies, size, and cost to maintain. The author supports his/her claim. Costly to heat/cool depending on season New building would be energy efficient and larger Would generate more income Key assumptions: The building will generate income through renting out some of the space. Passage 2 The University needs both affordable housing for its students and a way to fund the building of such housing. The best solution to this problem is to commission a famous architect known for experimental and futuristic buildings. It is common knowledge that tourists are willing to pay money to tour some of the architect's buildings, so it can be expected that tourists will want to visit this new building. The income from the fees charged to tourists will soon cover the building costs. (Furthermore, such a building will attract new students as well as donations from alumni.) And even though such a building will be much larger than our current need for student housing, part of the building can be used as office space. BLUF: A famous architect should be hired to create a new housing building to affordably house more students. The author supports his/her claim through use of key assumptions: Famous architect’s building will sell tours to pay for itself Will be large enough to have extra space Alumni donations will help with funds Key Assumptions: Alumni will donate. PP-7: Dissecting & Defending Arguments Accompanies Unit 1- Lesson 9 People will pay to tour. The building will ultimately fund itself. Passage 3 As a result of numerous consumer complaints of dizziness and nausea, Promofoods requested that eight million cans of tuna be returned for testing last year. (Promofoods concluded that the cans did not, after all, contain chemicals that posed a health risk.) This conclusion is based on the fact that the chemists from Promofoods tested samples of the recalled cans and found that, of the eight chemicals most commonly blamed for causing symptoms of dizziness and nausea, five were not found in any of the tested cans. The chemists did find that the three remaining suspected chemicals are naturally found in all other kinds of canned foods. BLUF: Promofoods tested 8 million cans of tuna to test for chemicals that trigger dizziness and nausea to consumers due to customer complaint. The author supports does not fully support the claim that the cans contained chemicals that posed a health risk. 3/8 chemicals found to cause these symptoms Large number of cans tested Key Assumptions: The 3 chemicals found that cause nausea and dizziness were not the cause of nausea and dizziness for the consumer. Passage 4 "One year ago we introduced our first product, 'Bargain Brand' breakfast cereal. Our very low prices quickly drew many customers away from the top-selling cereal companies. Although the companies producing the top brands have since tried to compete with us by lowering their prices, and although several plan to introduce their own budget brands, not once have we needed to raise our prices to continue making a profit. (Given our success selling cereal, Bargain Brand should now expand its business and begin marketing other low-priced food products as quickly as possible.)" BLUF: Bargain Brand will expand business and marketing due to being successful and making profit. The author supports the claim through facts of making a profit. Drew customers away from other brands Hasn’t had to lower prices Key Assumptions: Customers will buy other food products because they buy the breakfast cereal.