GCSE ENGLISH EXAM – Response to formative marking Grade Q2a What do we learn about the character Q2b Performance techniques Q2c Importance of a theme Q7a What do we learn about the character Q7b How the writer uses language Q7c Importance of a theme Q11 or Q12 I need to… NAME:______________________________________________ Grade I need to… Grade I need to… Q2a Point - Can I use adjectives to describe the what the character is like? Evidence - Can I select, precisely, a quote that shows this? Explanation - Can I explain how the quote supports the point I made about the character? Can I do this 3 times? Q2b Point - Can I use adjectives to describe how the character is feeling at this point? And explain what is happening to make him feel like this? Evidence – Can I select, precisely, a quote that shows this? Explanation - Can I describe the performance techniques the actor might use to create an impression of how the character is feeling? And can I explain the effect this might have on the audience? Can I do this 3 times? Q2c Point – Can I give ONE other place in the play where this theme is important? Evidence – Can I recount what happens at this point in the play? Explanation - Can I explain how, in the storyline, this theme is important: what lead to this and how it will affect the events to come? And, can I comment on why this issue might have been important to the writer (and why it might still be important)? Q7a Point - Can I use adjectives to describe what the character is like? Evidence - Can I select, precisely, a quote that shows this? Explanation - Can I explain how the quote supports the point I made about the character? Can I do this 3 times? Q7b Point – Can I use adjectives to describe an idea that is being presented? And, can I identify a language technique the writer has used? Evidence – Can I select, precisely, a quote that shows this? Explanation – Can I explain why the writer might have chosen this style/word/phrase/sentence type? And can I explain how it might have an effect on the reader? Can I do this 3 times? Q7c Point – Can I give ONE other place in the novel where this theme is important? Evidence – Can I recount what happens at this point in the novel? Explanation - Can I explain how, in the storyline, this theme is important: what lead to this and how it will affect the events to come? And, can I comment on why this issue might have been important to the writer (and why it might still be important)? Q11 or 12 Purpose – Can I promote my point of view (be persuasive)? Audience – Can I use suitable words and phrases – only using colloquial language and/or humour if it is appropriate? Form – Can I use the appropriate codes and conventions for the type of writing I have chosen? Planning – Can I come up with 3 ideas to develop with supporting explanations and examples? Vocabulary – Can I use the correct terminology for the topic? And, can I choose effective, ambitious words and phrases that will engage my reader? Spelling – Can I spell common words accurately and can I spell ambitious words phonetically? Punctuation – Can I use a wide range of punctuation accurately? Sentence Structures – Can I use a varied range of effective sentences? Can I maintain control of expression in my sentences? Paragraphs – Can I use a range of paragraph lengths for effect? Structure –Can I structure my ideas effectively, having a clear beginning, middle and end? Can I link my ideas within and across paragraphs, making use of appropriate cohesive devices – including connectives? The Hook – Have I engaged my reader from the very first line?