Distinguished Student
Cultural extinction: Distinguished
4
Brazil facts
3
2
Provides 3 or
Provides three
Provides 1 fact
more accurate
facts about the
about the
facts about the
Yanomami tribe Yanomami tribe
Yanomami
Tribe. All
sentences are
expository.
Structure of a
Includes topic
Includes topic
One part of the
paragraph
sentence, at least sentence, at least paragraph is not
3 details, and a
3 details, and a
included.
concluding
concluding
sentence.
sentence.
Details relate to
Details relate to
topic sentence.
topic sentence.
Spelling and
No spelling or
1-2 spelling or
3-4 spelling or
grammar
grammar
grammar
grammar
mistakes
mistakes
mistakes
(including
capitals)
Comments: Great job, Grant! You did a great job using complete sentences.
indent your first sentence!
Score: 4/4
1
Student provides
0 facts
Or
Facts are not
accurate
Two parts are not
included
Or
Details do not
relate to topic
sentence
5 or more
spelling or
grammar
mistakes
Remember to
Proficient Student
Cultural Extinction: Proficient
4
Brazil facts
3
2
1
Provides 3 or
Provides three
Provides 1 fact
Student provides
more accurate
facts about the
about the
0 facts
facts about the
Yanomami tribe Yanomami tribe Or
Yanomami
Facts are not
Tribe. All
accurate
sentences are
expository.
Structure of a
Includes topic
Includes topic
One part of the
Two parts are not
paragraph
sentence, at least sentence, at least paragraph is not
included
3 details, and a
3 details, and a
included.
Or
concluding
concluding
Details do not
sentence.
sentence.
relate to topic
Details relate to
Details relate to
sentence
topic sentence.
topic sentence.
Spelling and
No spelling or
1-2 spelling or
3-4 spelling or
5 or more
grammar
grammar
grammar
grammar
spelling or
mistakes
mistakes
mistakes
grammar
(including
mistakes
capitals)
Comments: Leah, this is a great start, but you need to add more details. Make sure you are
using correct capital letters.
Score: 2/4
Developing Student
Cultural Extinction: Developing
4
Brazil facts
3
2
1
Provides 3 or
Provides three
Provides 1 fact
Student provides
more accurate
facts about the
about the
0 facts
facts about the
Yanomami tribe Yanomami tribe Or
Yanomami
Facts are not
Tribe. All
accurate
sentences are
expository.
Structure of a
Includes topic
Includes topic
One part of the
Two parts are not
paragraph
sentence, at least sentence, at least paragraph is not
included
3 details, and a
3 details, and a
included.
Or
concluding
concluding
Details do not
sentence.
sentence.
relate to topic
Details relate to
Details relate to
sentence
topic sentence.
topic sentence.
Spelling and
No spelling or
1-2 spelling or
3-4 spelling or
5 or more
grammar
grammar
grammar
grammar
spelling or
mistakes
mistakes
mistakes
grammar
(including
mistakes
capitals)
Comments: Nick, you need to work on making complete sentences. Watch for spelling and
capital letters!
Score: 1/4