Programming by starting with assessment design Unit: Key learning area: Assessment due: Persuasion English – Stage 3 Term 1, Week 9, 2015 We want students to know: (BIG IDEAS) The features of a persuasive text The purpose of persuasive texts How language features and form can be used to persuasively promote points of view and position a responder. Overarching question: How and why do composers craft texts that promote persuasively points of view? Links to Foundation/Stage Statements/Outcomes EN3-2A composes, edits and presents well-structured and coherent texts EN3-1A communicates effectively for a variety of audiences and purposes using increasingly challenging topics, ideas, issues and language forms and features EN3-5B discusses how language is used to achieve a widening range of purposes for a widening range of audiences and contexts EN3-6B uses knowledge of sentence structure, grammar, punctuation and vocabulary to respond to and compose clear and cohesive texts in different media and technologies EN3-9E What do we want our students to learn? (Deep learning element) How and why writers create and use persuasive texts. How to create texts which persuasively promote a distinct point of view, using specific language features and form. How to transfer knowledge of the craft of writing for other composing purposes (transferable knowledge to spoken texts, presentations, other written text types) recognises, reflects on and assesses their strengths as a learner This learning matters because: The focus of this unit is on the power of language to persuade through a range of texts such as: speeches, advertisements, editorials, short stories and poetry. Students will learn about how words and images can be used persuasively to manipulate and position others. The cross curriculum dimensions of Information and communication technology capability and critical and creative thinking will be used to connect the concept to other Key Learning Areas and guide the choice of texts. This learning should support students in preparation for writing tasks such as Naplan. Exploring the concept of persuasion allows students to learn more about the way texts are formed with specific audience and purpose in mind. This unit allows students understand and appreciate the way texts are shaped through exploring a range of language forms and features and ideas related to persuasion. Students in Stage 3 need opportunities to create imaginative, informative and persuasive texts on familiar topics for known readers by planning, proofreading and editing their own writing. They require opportunities to write using basic grammatical features and conventions of punctuation, showing an awareness of different purposes, audiences and subject matter. It is important that knowledge of the purpose, form and language features of a persuasive text will be transferrable. Students will apply their learned knowledge of persuasive techniques to participate in a debate. They will use their developed knowledge of ICT to use different types of persuasive techniques in visual texts. Why does this learning matter? (Significance dimension) Are there clear links to prior and future learning? Students in Stage 2 are able to explain some ways in which authors and illustrators engage the interests of audiences and achieve a range of purposes. They have had opportunities to explore the structural and grammatical features and purposes for a range of written, visual and multimodal texts. These skills will be further developed during this imagery unit. In Stage 4, students will be expected to be able to shape meaning through the thoughtful selection and ordering of appropriate content and by drawing on a widening repertoire of language choices. Building on S3 skills, they should be ready to They experiment with form and language in different modes and technologies to produce various types of texts for specific purposes. As appropriate, they plan, draft and edit to produce polished texts. Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Assessment task outline: Composing – Writing, Speaking and Representing Compose a visual text (advertisement) featuring a range of persuasive devices, using technology to communicate the form and purpose of the text (EN3-6B uses knowledge of sentence structure, grammar, punctuation and vocabulary to respond to and compose clear and cohesive texts in different media and technologies) Responding – Reading, Listening and Viewing Read and critically evaluate a persuasive text, expressing own ideas on the way persuasive devices are used to achieve the purpose of the text and identifying the likely target audience (EN3-5B discusses how language is used to achieve a widening range of purposes for a widening range of audiences and contexts; EN3-1A communicates effectively for a variety of audiences and purposes using increasingly challenging topics, ideas, issues and language forms and features) Reflecting– recognising, reflecting on and assessing own strengths as a learner Students will engage in a class debate, synthesising new skills and knowledge of persuasive texts to persuasively promote a single point of view and position their audience. Students will reflect on their own participation in this debate, expressing their understanding of persuasive texts (purpose, form and languages features). EN3-9E recognises, reflects on and assesses their strengths as a learner Key outcomes for assessment: EN3-1A the student: communicates effectively for a variety of audiences and purposes using increasingly challenging topics, ideas, issues and language forms and features EN3-5B the student: discusses how language is used to achieve a widening range of purposes for a widening range of audiences and contexts EN3-6B the student: uses knowledge of sentence structure, grammar, punctuation and vocabulary to respond to and compose clear and cohesive texts in different media and technologies EN3-9E the student: recognises, reflects on and assesses their strengths as a learner How will students demonstrate their deep understanding? Authentic purpose: create a visual text (advertisement), develop the skills to participate in a debate, reflect on skills and knowledge and participation in learning process Audience: advertisement to be published on class webpage Communication tools: incorporating technology to enhance meaning Student direction: student may choose content of advertisement and style of presentation. Students will be able to chose own position to defend/promote for class debate. Opportunity for students to demonstrate learning at an ‘A’ level: Students working at Stage 4 level can recognise the main ideas and points of view, and the ways in which texts seek to position responders. They make decisions about whether content and language are appropriate to purpose, audience and context. They plan, draft and edit to produce polished texts. How well do we expect students to do it? 85% of students will be expected to demonstrate sound understanding (or higher) of the concepts in this unit. 10% of students will require scaffolding and additional teacher support/modification of task in order to demonstrate sound understanding of concepts in this unit. 5% of students will require scaffolding and additional teacher support/modification of task in order to demonstrate a basic understanding of concepts in this unit. Assessment modes: writing and speaking Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Assessment criteria Students will know and understand: The features of a persuasive text The purpose of persuasive texts How language features and form can be used to persuasively promote points of view and position a responder. Students be able to explain (through spoken text or written text): How and why composers craft texts that promote persuasively points of view. Students be transfer learned knowledge by: independently creating a persuasive text with clear audience and purpose using ICT skills. Participating in a class debate using persuasive devices to promote and sustain a point of view Reflecting on their learning At the beginning of the unit, students will be provided with information about the purpose of the unit (overarching question) and the 4Q questions will be explicitly addressed (see below). Students will be given explicit information on learning expectations and form of summative assessment at the end of the unit. A marking matrix will be provided for students to provide explicit information on what a quality product or performance looks like and what they need to demonstrate to achieve set outcomes. Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Overview: Week 1 Week 2 Week 3 Week 4 Week 5 Week 6 Week 7 Week 8 Week 9 Week 9-10 Overview of unit – purpose, expectations, assessment, 4Q model Pre-assessment – establish prior knowledge/understanding/making connections/present vocabulary Definition: persuasion, persuade, persuasive Focus questions: What are the key features of a persuasive text? What is the purpose of a persuasive text? Why do we need to persuade people and how do we persuade? Analysis of the techniques and processes of persuasion Comparison of how different types of texts (eg speech, advertisement, bulletin) use persuasive visual, aural and language techniques Explore vocabulary in more detail Power of verbs and imperative voice Persuasion in 30 seconds – making considered choices Exploring polarised debates Focus on context, audience and purpose: exploring The influence of context, audience and purpose The composers capacity to engage and persuade and audience Explore persuasion map (online tool) Exploring emotive language and modality: examine the use of emotive language and modality to persuade and position the reader/audience/responder Point of view: establishing a clear line of argument and building supporting evidence around this Explore rhetorical speeches Examining advertising: revisit the influence of context, audience and purpose Explore persuasive devices used in visual texts (nothing is ‘by chance’: everything is by design!) By end of week students can independently list persuasive devices and discuss merits of each in the context of advertising samples (reading assessment) Writing assessment: create advertisement (visual text), using effective persuasive devices. Class debates (minute speeches, prepared in class). Students reflect on their participation in the debate and their use of persuasive devices in their speech. Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Glossary - - - Alliteration: two or more words beginning with the same letter. The effect is rhythmic and maybe comic. ‘Pay the price’ is alliteration. Allusion: reference to a related object of circumstance. You can have a religious allusion. Ambiguity: a statement accidentally has two meanings. Analogy: a comparison between two things that are similar in some way, often used to help explain something or make it easier to understand. Anaphora: the repetition of a word or phrase at the beginning of successive phrases, clauses or lines e.g. I have... I have... I have... Anastrophe: the reversal of normal word order e.g. to market went she. Anecdote: a short, interesting or amusing story about a particular person or event. Antistrophe: repetition of the same word or phrase at the end of successive clauses. Antithesis: a seeming contradiction of ideas, words, clauses, or sentences. The effect is the emphasis the opposition of ideas. Apostrophe: rhetorical words spoken to an imaginary person, object or idea. Assonance: repetition of vowel sounds. Atmosphere/mood: the emotional feelings inspired by a work. Bias: an unfair preference for or dislike of something. Circumlocution: the use of more words than necessary to express something, especially to avoid saying it directly. Cliché: an over-used concept, idea, storyline, or common expression. Collective noun, collective pronoun: words such as ‘team’, ‘pair’, and ‘we’ which refer to a collective groups of individuals (engaging the audience) or individual items. Colloquialism: a word or phrase used everyday in plain and relaxed speech, but rarely found in formal writing e.g. ‘don’t’ and ain’t. Conjunction: a word that joins two simple sentences together. For example: but, and, however. Consonance: repetition of initial consonant sounds. Declarative sentence: a statement used to convey information. Didactic: literature or other types of art that are instructional or informative e.g. the Bible. Opposite of non-didactic (more concerned with artistic qualities and techniques than conveying a message, even if it is instructive). Ellipsis: the avoiding of using words in order to be direct and not repetitive, or (...). Emotive language: language that causes an emotional reaction in the reader. Euphemism: a more gentle or polite way of saying something. Euphony: language that is smooth and pleasant to listen to. Figurative language: language with figures of speech. Figure of speech: any words consisting of language techniques. o Alliteration. o Personification. o Simile. o Metaphor. o Irony. o Hyperbole. o Onomatopoeia. o Metonymy. o Oxymoron. Generalisation: a statement made about everyone or everything because of just one piece of evidence. Hyperbole: extreme exaggeration that is not meant to be taken seriously. The effect is a strong impression, although not to be taken literally. Irony: a contrast between what is expected and what actually exists or happens. o Dramatic irony: the audience knows something that the characters do not. o Verbal irony: when the speaker means something totally different to what they are saying. Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © - - - - - o Cosmic irony: when some unknown force brings about dire and dreadful events. o Irony of situation: when what is expected to happed is different from what actually happens. Imagery: a picture painted with words. o Visual (sight) imagery. o Auditory (sound) imagery. o Tactile (touch) imagery. o Thermal (hot and cold) imagery. o Olfactory (smell) imagery. o Gustatory (taste) imagery. o Kinaesthetic sensation (movement) imagery. Imperative Voice: Forcefully using the verb at the start of a sentence to order or direct. Intertextuality: showing the relationship between two or more texts that quote, allude, or somehow connect to each other. Invective: speech or writing that attacks, insults, or denounces a person, topic or institution, usually involving negative emotional language. Levels of language: o Formal: used on important occasions, extensive vocabulary, no abbreviations or contractions. o Informal: casual language. o Colloquial: everyday language, abbreviations. o Slang: used by certain groups, those outside the group don’t understand it all, changes rapidly. o Jargon: used by professional and sports groups, those outside the group don’t understand it all, regarded as acceptable to use only within the group. Metaphor: something is described as another thing that it isn’t. An extended metaphor is a metaphor that continues into the following sentences. Metonymy: the name of one object is replaced by another which is closely related to it. Modality: the degree of certainty expressed by the author. o High modality: high certainty. o Low modality: low certainty. Mood: a feeling or emotional state in literature. Motif: a recurring object, concept or structure in a work of literature. Neologism: made-up words that are not part of everyday vocabulary e.g. climature. Onomatopoeia: when the sound of a word matches its image. Oxymoron: apparently contradictory words placed near each other. Paradox: a statement that seems to be a contradiction but which, on closer inspection, can be seen to make sense. Parody: to imitate something somebody or something comically. Pathos: a writer or speaker’s attempt to inspire an emotional reaction in the audience; usually a deep feeling of suffering, but sometimes joy, pride, anger, humour, patriotism, and other emotions. Parallelism: two identical or very similar changes occur independently. Personification: to give an object or idea human attributes. Point of view: o First person: I, me, my, we, us, our. o Second person: you, your, yours. o Third person: he, she, it, they. o Third person omniscient. Pun / paronomasia: a play on words on words which are alike in sound but different in meaning. The effect is humorous. Register: the appropriateness of the language used in a particular situation according to situation of context e.g. formal, informal. Repetition: the occurrence of something which has occurred before. Rhetoric: persuasive argument through writing or speech, or eloquent and charismatic language. Rhetorical question: a question that is not expected to receive an answer. Sarcasm: hurtful or spiteful language. Simile: comparing things using ‘like’ or ‘as’. Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © - - Subjective language: opinion. Superlative: the form of an adjective indicating the greatest degree of the quality that the adjective describes e.g. ‘best’ is the superlative form of ‘good’. Symbolism: using a specific object or colour to represent something. Syntax: the ordering of words into meaningful verbal patterns such as phrases, clauses and sentences. Poets often manipulate syntax, changing conventional word order, to place certain emphasis on particular words. Tautology: a statement that is needlessly repetitive. Tone: the feeling in a piece of writing, of the writer, character or reader. Understatement/litotes: something that is stated with too little emphasis. Vernacular: the everyday or common language of a geographic area or the native language. Voice: an author or narrator’s distinctive style or manner of expression. Volitive: a verb form that expresses a wish, command, or the speaker’s will. Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Australian Curriculum – content Taken from NSW Syllabuses for the Australian Curriculum: English Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Speaking and listening A student: communicates effectively for a variety of audiences and purposes using increasingly challenging topics, ideas, issues and language forms and features EN3-1A Content: Students: Develop and apply contextual knowledge compare and justify the ways in which spoken language differs from written language according to purpose, audience and context understand that patterns of language interaction vary across social contexts and types of texts and that they help to signal social roles and relationships (ACELA1501) understand that strategies for interaction become more complex and demanding as levels of formality and social distance increase (ACELA1516) understand that different social and geographical dialects or accents are used in Australia in addition to Standard Australian English(ACELA1515) Understand and apply knowledge of language forms and features use and describe language forms and features of spoken texts appropriate to a range of purposes, audiences and contexts use appropriate metalanguage to identify and describe relationships between and among texts develop criteria to evaluate the effectiveness of spoken texts use metalanguage to describe the effects of ideas, text structures and language features on particular audiences (ACELT1795) Respond to and compose texts plan, rehearse and deliver presentations, selecting and sequencing appropriate content and multimodal elements for defined audiences and purposes, making appropriate choices for modality and emphasis (ACELY1700, ACELY1710) use interaction skills, for example paraphrasing, questioning and interpreting non-verbal cues and choose vocabulary and vocal effects appropriate for different audiences and purposes (ACELY1796) use interaction skills, varying conventions of spoken interactions such as voice volume, tone, pitch and pace, according to group size, formality of interaction and needs and expertise of the audience (ACELY1816) participate in and contribute to discussions, clarifying and interrogating ideas, developing and supporting arguments, sharing and evaluating information, experiences and opinions (ACELY1709) identify and summarise key ideas and information from guest speakers, eg note-taking or using digital technologies discuss and experiment with ways to strengthen and refine spoken texts in order to entertain, inform, persuade or inspire the audience Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Writing and representing A student: composes, edits and presents well-structured and coherent textsEN3-2A Content: Students: Engage personally with texts Develop and apply contextual knowledge understand and appreciate the way texts are shaped through exploring a range of language forms and features and ideas experiment and use aspects of composing that enhance learning and enjoyment recognise and discuss issues related to the responsible use of digital communication Develop and apply contextual knowledge identify and explore underlying themes and central storylines in imaginative texts explore and analyse the effectiveness of informative and persuasive devices in texts understand and use the key elements of planning, composing, reviewing and publishing in order to meet the increasing demands of topic, audience and language Understand and apply knowledge of language forms and features plan, draft and publish imaginative, informative and persuasive texts, choosing and experimenting with text structures, language features, images and digital resources appropriate to purpose and audience (ACELY1704, ACELY1714) understand, interpret and experiment with the use of imagery in imaginative texts, poetry and songs, eg similes, metaphors, personification and sound devices such as alliteration understand that cohesive links can be made in texts by omitting or replacing words (ACELA1520) investigate how complex sentences can be used in a variety of ways to elaborate, extend and explain ideas (ACELA1522) Respond to and compose texts compose imaginative and informative texts that show evidence of developed ideas compose texts that include sustained and effective use of persuasive devices, eg texts dealing with environmental issues present a point of view about particular literary texts using appropriate metalanguage, and reflecting on the viewpoints of others (ACELT1609) create literary texts that experiment with structures, ideas and stylistic features of selected authors (ACELT1798) experiment with text structures and language features and their effects in creating literary texts, for example, using imagery, sentence variation, metaphor and word choice (ACELT1800) compose increasingly complex print, visual, multimodal and digital texts, experimenting with language, design, layout and graphics use increasingly complex research data from print and digital sources to compose short and sustained texts assess the reliability of resources, including digital resources, when researching topics reread and edit students' own and others' work using agreed criteria and explaining editing choices (ACELY1705, ACELY1715) develop a handwriting style that is legible, fluent and automatic and varies according to audience and purpose (ACELY1706, ACELY1716) use a range of software, including word processing programs, learning new functions as required to create texts (ACELY1707, ACELY1717) Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Responding and composing A student: discusses how language is used to achieve a widening range of purposes for a widening range of audiences and contexts EN3-5B Content: Students: Develop and apply contextual knowledge identify and discuss how own texts have been structured to achieve their purpose and discuss ways of using conventions of language to shape readers' and viewers' understanding of texts discuss how the intended audience, structure and context of an extended range of texts influence responses to texts Understand and apply knowledge of language forms and features identify and explain characteristic text structures and language features used in imaginative, informative and persuasive texts to meet the purpose of the text (ACELY1701) identify the ways in which language use in imaginative texts, including use of figurative language, character development, events and setting, creates interest for the reader or viewer investigate how the organisation of texts into chapters, headings, subheadings, home pages and sub pages for online texts and according to chronology or topic can be used to predict content and assist navigation (ACELA1797) analyse strategies authors use to influence readers (ACELY1801) understand the uses of objective and subjective language and bias(ACELA1517) discuss the conventions of a range of complex texts, eg act and stage directions in plays, literary devices in poems and stories, layout conventions in print and digital texts Respond to and compose texts compose more complex texts using a variety of forms appropriate to purpose and audience recognise the techniques used by writers to position a reader and influence their point of view identify and use a variety of strategies to present information and opinions across a range of texts consider and develop sustained arguments and discussions supported by evidence Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Grammar, punctuation and vocabulary A student: uses knowledge of sentence structure, grammar, punctuation and vocabulary to respond to and compose clear and cohesive texts in different media and technologies EN3-6B Content: Students: Develop and apply contextual knowledge understand that language is structured to create meaning according to audience, purpose and context understand that choices in grammar, punctuation and vocabulary contribute to the effectiveness of texts Understand and apply knowledge of language forms and features identify and explain how choices in language, for example modality, emphasis, repetition and metaphor, influence personal response to different texts (ACELT1615) understand the difference between main and subordinate clauses and that a complex sentence involves at least one subordinate clause (ACELA1507) experiment using a range of language features, eg connectives, topic sentences, active and passive voice understand how noun groups/phrases and adjective groups/phrases can be expanded in a variety of ways to provide a fuller description of the person, place, thing or idea (ACELA1508) understand how ideas can be expanded and sharpened through careful choice of verbs, elaborated tenses and a range of adverb groups/phrases (ACELA1523) show how ideas and points of view in texts are conveyed through the use of vocabulary, including idiomatic expressions, objective and subjective language, and that these can change according to context (ACELY1698) identify a variety of connectives in texts to indicate time, add information, clarify understanding, show cause and effect and indicate condition/concession use complex punctuation to engage the reader and achieve purpose understand how the grammatical category of possessives is signalled through apostrophes and how to use apostrophes with common and proper nouns(ACELA1506) understand the uses of commas to separate clauses (ACELA1521) Understand and apply knowledge of vocabulary understand the use of vocabulary to express greater precision of meaning, and know that words can have different meanings in different contexts (ACELA1512) investigate how vocabulary choices, including evaluative language can express shades of meaning, feeling and opinion (ACELA1525) Respond to and compose texts select some more challenging language features, literary devices (eg irony, humour) and grammatical features (eg modality) to engage and influence an audience experiment with different types of sentences, eg short sentences to build tension and complex sentences to add detail use topic sentences and appropriately organise main (independent) and subordinate (dependent) ideas to enhance coherence in written texts select appropriate language for a purpose, eg descriptive, persuasive, technical, evaluative, emotive and colloquial, when composing texts use grammatical features, eg pronouns, conjunctions and connectives, to accurately link ideas and information to ensure meaning when composing texts Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 © Reflecting on learning A student: recognises, reflects on and assesses their strengths as a learner EN3-9E Content: Students: Develop and apply contextual knowledge begin to understand the difference between their way of learning and the way others learn reflect on own learning achievements against specific criteria Understand and apply knowledge of language forms and features recognise that there is a language for discussing learning experiences discuss how the reader or viewer can enjoy and discover a wide range of literary experiences through texts Respond to and compose texts plan, rehearse and deliver presentations, selecting and sequencing appropriate content and multimodal elements for defined audiences and purposes, making appropriate choices for modality and emphasis (ACELY1700, ACELY1710) use interaction skills, for example paraphrasing, questioning and interpreting non-verbal cues and choose vocabulary and vocal effects appropriate for different audiences and purposes (ACELY1796) use interaction skills, varying conventions of spoken interactions such as voice volume, tone, pitch and pace, according to group size, formality of interaction and needs and expertise of the audience (ACELY1816) participate in and contribute to discussions, clarifying and interrogating ideas, developing and supporting arguments, sharing and evaluating information, experiences and opinions (ACELY1709) identify and summarise key ideas and information from guest speakers, eg note-taking or using digital technologies discuss and experiment with ways to strengthen and refine spoken texts in order to entertain, inform, persuade or inspire the audience Adapted from “Planning for programming by starting with assessment”: unit prepared by Georgia Constanti, Sydney Region Priority Schools Programs, 2011 ©