Name: Block: Mr. MacDonald’s Midterm Grading Breakdown ______ 1. “If—” Rewrite + Drafts—50% - Already turned in! See flipside for grading rubric. ______ 2. Written Explanation and Analysis of your poem focusing on the anchors that converge to build the big idea. Also, address how the motif of irony and contrast contributed to the construction of this message—25%. - Due Monday, 12/15. You must bring a printed copy to class on Monday. ______ 3. Recitation and Performance of Your Poem—25%. - Poems will be performed on Wednesday, 12/17. Practice and revision (yes, again) are essential to your success. You must bring TWO printed copies of your poem with you to class on Monday. See below for speaking rubric. If for some reason you won’t perform your poem, you will not receive credit for this portion of the midterm. Public Speaking Skills Quality and Impact Score Flow, Cadence, and Rhythm 10 8 6 4 2 Fluency and Volume 10 8 6 4 2 Confidence, Enthusiasm, and Connection with Audience 10 8 6 4 2 Clarity, Intonation, and Annunciation 10 8 6 4 2 Physical: Gestures, Eye Contact, and Posture 10 8 6 4 2 Comments /50 “If—” Reinvention Poetry Project Rubric Ability to Captivate the Reader Unfocused; author seems unsure of direction. (1-2 pts.) Some focus, but lacks continuity is lost, at times. (3-4 pts.) Well-focused and interests reader throughout. (5-6 pts.) Captivates and involves reader deeply. (7-8 pts.) Big idea is not apparent or somehow contradicted. (1-3 pts.) Big idea is somewhat vague or somehow confusing. (4-6 pts.) Big idea is clear but could be more effectively evoked (7-9 pts.) Multiple anchors converge tactfully and work with devices to build a big idea. (10-12 pts.) Imprecise or Inappropriate choice of words; Wordly Wise words are used incorrectly or are absent. (1-2 pts.) Thoughts are limited or unclear due to word choice; Wordly Wise words are used incorrectly or are absent. (3-4 pts.) Uses mostly effective language; some words could be changed to enhance meaning; Wordly Wise words are generally used effectively (5-6 pts.) Uses rich, complex, meaningful language throughout; word choice is exact; all Wordly Wise words are used effectively. (7-8 pts.) Rhythm & Flow Kipling’s rhythm is virtually absent; flow is absent; this distracts from the poem’s meaning. (1-3 pts.) Kipling’s rhythm not matched with consistency; flow is inconsistent; this distracts from the poem’s meaning. (4-6 pts.) Kipling’s rhythm is matched mostly; flow mostly works. (7-9 pts.) Kipling’s rhythm is matched throughout; flow is clear. (10-12 pts.) Devices Limited irony and contrast is used. (1-2 pts.) Contrast and irony are present, but ideas may be miscommunicated or confused. (3-4 pts.) Irony and contrast are used, but their use could be more effective in context. (5-6 pts.) Irony and contrast build and help to generate a feeling of balance. (7-8 pts) Evocation of Thematic Anchors and the Big Idea Use of Language Comments and Grade Other Requirements Printed before class (1 pt.) Drafts Attached (1 pt.) /50