Give suggestions on how to stay fit
Qiushi Experimental Middle School---Nina

1,What’s daddy pig’s problem?
2,What did he do to solve the problem?

1,What’s daddy pig’s problem?
He is too fat, he can’t even touch his toe.
1,What did he do to solve the problem?

3,Did he succeed? Why?
Because he gave up easily.

Food how to stay fit
Exercise
Habit Mind
★ Tips: when you are writing a composition, try to think out some phrases first.

Sentence patterns
How to give suggestions
★ Tips: Then you can put them into sentences.

firstly, secondly, thirdly, fourthly/ finally, on (the)one hand,on the other hand and, besides, what’s more… for example, such as… because, so, so that, although…

How to stay fit ?
Purpose,
Beginning
Introduction （总起全文）
Main part
Ending
Elucidation
( 阐述，说明）
Conclusion （总结）

Beginning
Purpose and Introduction
It’s ________ for sb. to do.
If…
Here are some suggestion s

Ending
Conclusion
In a word, Above all ( 总之）
There is a saying/As the saying goes:“…”

★ Tips: Choose a saying for your composition.
1. Where there is a will, there is a way.
2. Happiness lies first of all in health.
幸福首先在于健康。
3. Health is better than wealth.
4. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
5. Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
世上无难事，只怕有心人
。

How to stay fit
Beginning
It’s important for you to…
Here are… If
Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, Fourthly/Finally
Main part for example, such as besides, what’s more
Ending because, so, in order to in a word, above all
As the saying goes…

Daddy pig:
Best wishes to you!
Yours, xxx

Handwriting ○ excellent
○ average
Structure
(3 parts)
○ weak
○ complete
○ not complete
Mistake
○ no mistake
○ few mistakes
○ many mistakes
Good sentence ○
Linking words ○
○ Excellent ○ Average ○ Weak

1.Exchange your composition with your partner and try to evaluate the composition.
2. Write another composition like this one
(two topics for you to choose)
How to learn English well?
How to protect the environment?

It's important for you to stay fit. Here are some suggestions that can help you.
There are many ways to stay fit. First of all, you should take some exercise every day, such as running and riding a bike. Secondly, you’d better eat more healthy food instead of junk food. Thirdly, don’t watch TV for too long, it’s bad for your health . Fourthly, try to keep a good state of mind.
In a word, it’s not so difficult to stay fit, if you put your heart into it. As the saying goes,
“ where there is a will, there is a way.” I wish you to be healthy in the future.

It's important for you to stay fit.
There are many ways to stay fit.
In a word, it’s not so difficult to stay fit,
★ Tips: Write a topic sentence for each part, and try to use some good sentences.
Here are some suggestions that can help you .

smile as often as possible keep up a good state of mind spend some time with …
Try (not) to
Doing …is a good way to do…

get enough sleep
…or …
Don’t …
You’d better (not ) do…

Don’t give up easily.
Doing …is a good way to do…
Why not /Why don’t you do…

instead of fried food
It’s a good idea to do…
You’d better (not) do…

Evaluate ( 评价）
A good composition should be… be complete 内容完整 be grammatical 无语法，拼写错误 be formal 书写规范 be fluent and graceful 语句流畅优美

In a word ,…
1.
In a word, it’s not so _________ to stay fit, if you put your heart into it .
2. In a word, if you _______________
______________, you can stay fit

If…
1. If you are not healthy,
2. If you want to stay fit, I’ll
_______________________.