Get out… • index card • Writer’s Guide • white board • glove •IF you do not have your Writer’s Guide, get a green packet from Mrs. Macauley- SIGN IT and DATE IT! One of these sentences needs a comma. Rewrite the one that NEEDS it. INSERT the comma. Last week’s math test covered linear equations which was the hardest topic all year. Last week’s math test which was the hardest one all year covered linear equations. Last week’s math test, which was the hardest one all year, covered linear equations. WHY: the adjective clause is in the middle of the sentence and is nonessential (not needed) in the sentence. See rule #10 in your Writer’s Guide. Last week’s math test covered linear equations which was the hardest topic all year. • See NOTE on rule #10 in your Writer’s Guide. If you know the comma rules, you can impress others. WHY: If a sentence starts with a subordinating conjunction, you will need a comma before the complete sentence. See rule #7 in your Writer’s Guide. You can impress others if you know the comma rules. Rule #1: series Rule #2: no comma This year I really learned a lot about sentence fluency, organization, and voice. Students wrote papers on Emily Dickenson and Robert Frost and Dr. Seuss. Rule #3: compound sentence Rule #4: two adjectives I know there should be a comma when a sentence starts with a preposition, yet I often forget. Persuasive writing requires a passionate, credible voice. Rule #5: quotes Rule Mrs. Macauley said, “It is okay to be wrong.” Of #6: first words course, there will be a quiz on commas. Rule #7: subordinating conjunction (SC) Participial Phrase (PP) While comma rules may be difficult, correct usage helps readers understand your ideas. Rule #8: direct address Students, please copy down the entire sentence. Rule #9: transition Rule #10: adjective clause More often than not, reading your paper aloud will help with sentence fluency. Good word choice, which is subjective, can transform a paper. Rule #11: Rule #12: date appositive phrase Comma usage, part of the punctuation unit, will be the biggest section of the quiz. The punctuation quiz is scheduled for May 10, 2011. Rule #13: letter Dear Students, You can do this!! I was born on March 6, 1971. I was born on March 6, 1971. Rule # 12 date Because of the rain, we had to cancel practice. Because of the rain, we had to cancel practice. Rule #7 Subordinating Conjunction The crabby, unpleasant woman scowled at us. The crabby, unpleasant woman scowled at us. Rule #4 Two Adjectives “Tell me your secret,” begged Angela. “Tell me your secret,” begged Angela. Rule #5 Quotes My dog, Boomer, ran through the screen door. My dog, Boomer, ran through the screen door. Rule #11 appositive Well, I suppose you think you should get one too? Well, I suppose you think you should get one too? Rule #6 First Words The mouse scurried across the kitchen floor, and the cat just watched. The mouse scurried across the kitchen floor, and the cat just watched. Rule # 3 Compound Sentences Sleeping soundly, Hank didn’t hear the thunder. Sleeping soundly, Hank didn’t hear the thunder. Rule #7 Participial Phrase The fall leaves are a blend of the colors red, yellow, and orange. The fall leaves are a blend of the colors red, yellow, and orange. Rule # 1 Series Tanya yelled, “Watch out!” Tanya yelled, “Watch out!” Rule #5 Quotes Son, you must clean up your room! Son, you must clean up your room! Rule #8 Direct Address My soccer coach, who is my friend’s dad, taught me a lot. My soccer coach, who is my friend’s dad, taught me a lot. Rule #10 Adjective Clause Frightened out of her mind, Mindy covered her eyes during the movie. Frightened out of her mind, Mindy covered her eyes during the movie. Rule # 7 Participial Phrase The friends met at the beach, swam in the lake, and built a sandcastle. The friends met at the beach, swam in the lake, and built a sandcastle. Rule #1 series Gone With the Wind, the Pulitzer Prize winning book, sits on a shelf in my living room. Gone With the Wind, the Pulitzer Prize winning book, sits on a shelf in my living room. Rule #11 Appositive Shockingly, the entire class completed the assignment on time! Shockingly, the entire class completed the assignment on time! Rule #6 First Words When the sun finally came out, my mood improved. When the sun finally came out, my mood improved. Rule #7 Subordinating Conjunction The store was giving out coupons which gave the customer 50% off! The store was giving out coupons which gave the customer 50% off! Rule #10 Appositive Phrase (at the end of the sentence = no comma) Complete worksheet • You will need your Writer’s Guide. • If you do not have one, you can download it via my writing wiki site. One of these sentences needs a comma. Rewrite the one that NEEDS it. INSERT the comma. The baby has been crying since his mom left. Since his mom left the baby has been crying.