Day 1
Virginia Woolf pioneered the stream of conciousness technique, using
characters’ feelings, memories, and thought.
The random flow of thoughts through a character’s mind is what Woolf’s fiction
and novels are all about.
Use of vivid verb to improve style
Revision of a sentence ending with a preposition
Correction of commonly misspelled word
Elimination of redundancy
Correction of misplaced participle
Day 1
Using characters’ feelings, memories, and thought, Virginia Woolf
pioneered the narrative technique called stream of consciousness.
Correction of misplaced participle
Correction of commonly misspelled word
_________and novels
Woolf's fiction depicts the random flow of thoughts through a character's mind.
____________
(are all about)
Elimination of redundancy
Use of vivid verb to improve style
Revision of a sentence ending with a preposition
Day 2
When reading a stream of consciousness narrative the reader must
organize a meaningful whole from the intermingled thoughts
memories and dialogue.
This task demanding and rewarding reveals an intense and psychologically
complete portrait of a character.
Use of hyphens with compound adjective
Use of commas to set off adjectives following noun
Use of comma after introductory phrase
Use of commas in a series
Day 2
When reading a stream-of-consciousness narrative, the reader must
organize a meaningful whole from the intermingled thoughts,
memories, and dialogue.
Use of hyphens with compound adjective
Use of comma after introductory phrase
Use of commas in a series
This task, demanding and rewarding, reveals an intense and
psychologically complete portrait of a character.
Use of commas to set off adjectives following noun
Day 3
Katherine Mansfield was an innovative writer on account of the fact that
she focused on characters’ most innermost states and heightened
awareness.
Even when little happens outward, her story dialogue reveals complex
moods and conflicts!
Use of adverb to modify verb
Elimination of unnecessary exclamation point
Elimination of superlative form of absolute adjective
Revision of wordy sentence
Day 3
_______________
on account of the fact Katherine Mansfield was an
___
innovative writer in that she focused
most
Revision
of wordy
sentence
on characters’
innermost
states
and heightened awareness.
Elimination of superlative form of absolute adjective
Even when little happens outwardly, her story dialogue reveals
complex moods and conflicts.
Use of adverb to modify verb
Elimination of unnecessary exclamation point
Day 4
The powerful novels of Doris Lessing explores the evils of racism the
role of women in society and the complexities of today’s modern-day
life.
Few contemporary novels are more distinguished than them for there
breadth of vision.
Correct spelling of homophones
Elimination of redundancy
Correct pronoun case after than
Subject and verb agreement
Use of commas in a series
Day 4
The powerful novels of Doris Lessing explore the evils of racism,
_____
today's
the role of Subject
women and
in society,
and the complexities of modern-day
verb agreement
life.
Use of commas in a series
Elimination of redundancy
Few contemporary novels are more distinguished than they for their
breadth of vision.
Correct pronoun case after than
Correct spelling of homophones
Day 5
The protagonists of the novels of Margaret Drabble are frequently welleducated professional women, scholars, poets, journalists.
They are often faced with the dilemma of integrating family life and careers. They
break with tradition. They chart new lifestyles and patterns of living.
Streamlining sentence with possessive form
Revision of choppy sentences
Correct use of colon before a list
Day 5
The protagonists of Margaret Drabble's novels are frequently well-educated
professional women: scholars, poets, journalists.
Streamlining sentence with possessive form
Correct use of colon before a list
________
They are
Often faced with the dilemma of integrating family life and careers,
they break with tradition and chart new lifestyles and patterns of
living.Revision of choppy sentences