POETRY!!! Figurative Language Authors use many types of figurative language in order to help the reader visualize and understand what they are writing metaphor simile alliteration onomatopoeia personification hyperbole These are some types of figurative language. Figurative language is made up of all the tools that a poet uses to create a special effect or feeling. It includes metaphor, simile, alliteration, personification, and onomatopoeia. Figurative language is a tool that an author uses to help the reader visualize what is happening in a story or poem. There are several different types. Simile: a comparison using like or as. It usually compares two dissimilar objects. For example: His feet were as big as boats. We are comparing the size of feet to boats. Metaphor: states that one thing is something else. It is a comparison, but it does not use like or as to make the comparison. For example: Her hair is silk. The sentence is comparing or stating that hair is silk. Decide whether each sentence contains a simile or metaphor. Decide what is being compared. 1. The baby was like an octopus, grabbing at all the cans on the grocery store shelves. 2. As the teacher entered the room she muttered under her breath, "This class is like a three-ring circus!" 3. The giant's steps were thunder as he ran toward Jack. 4. The pillow was a cloud when I put my head upon it after a long day. 5. I feel like a limp dishrag. 6. Those girls are like two peas in a pod. 7. The fluorescent light was the sun during our test. 8. No one invites Harry to parties because he is a wet blanket. 9. The bar of soap was as slippery as an eel during the dog's bath. 10. Ted was as nervous as a cat with a long tail in a room full of rocking chairs. Work in pairs to complete each statement with a metaphor. 1. Grandma's hair was a ... 2. The garden was a ... 3. The hole under the tree was the ... 4. The old chair was Grandpa's ... 5. The ancient tree was a ... Mother to Son Well, son, I'll tell you: Life for me ain't been no crystal stair. It's had tacks in it, And splinters, And boards torn up, And places with no carpet on the floorBare. But all the time I'se been a -climbin' on, And reachin' landin's And turnin' corners, And sometimes goin' in the dark Where there ain't been no light. So boy, don't you turn back. Don't you set down on the steps 'Cause you finds it's kinda hard. Don't you fall nowFor I'se still goin', honey, I'se still climbin', And life for me ain't been no crystal stair. Decide whether each of the following sentences contains a simile or a metaphor. Write your answers on the lines. 1. The news travelled as swiftly as the breeze in the birches. __________ 2. John was a streaking greyhound in the 100-yard dash._____________ 3. The smoke was a slithering snake rising into the still air.___________ 4. The baby's blond hair shone like a golden halo._____________ Sort the similes and metaphors. alliteration Alliteration is the repetition of the initial consonant (sometimes vowel) sound. There should be at least two repetitions in a line. For example: Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers. The first letter, p, is a consonant. It is repeated many times. Underline the alliteration in these sentences. 1. Puny pumas pit their skills against zebras. 2. Pretty Polly picked pears for preserves. 3. Handsome Harry hired hundreds of hippos for Hanukkah. Complete the following sentences with alliterative words. 4. Doodling daughters ... 5. Prickly pears ... 6. Studious students ... 7. Sunny skies ... E.Q. :Why do authors use alliteration? E.Q. : What is alliteration? Alliteration is the repetition of the same consonant sound at the beginnings of 2 or more words in a line of poetry or a sentence. Examples: Peter Piper picked (a) peck (of) pickled peppers. She sells seashells (by the) sea shore. Practice with these: Angela Abigail Applewhite ate anchovies and artichokes. Bertha Bartholomew blew big, blue bubbles. Clever Clifford Cutter clumsily closed the closet clasps. Dwayne Dwiddle drew a drawing of dreaded Dracula. Elmer Elwood eluded eleven elderly elephants. Floyd Fllingle flipped flat flapjacks. Greta Gruber grabbed a group of green grapes. Hattie Henderson hated happy healthy hippos. Ida Ivy identified the ivory iris. Julie Jackson juggled the juicy, jiggly jello. Karl Kessler kept the ketchup in the kitchen. Lila Ledbetter lugged a lot of little lemons. Milton Mallard mailed a mangled mango. Norris Newton never needed new noodles. Patsy Planter plucked plump, purple, plastic plums. Quinella Quist quite quickly quelled the quarreling quartet. Randy Rathbone wrapped a rather rare red rabbit. Shelly Sherman shivered in a sheer, short shirt. Trina Tweety tripped two twittering twins under a twiggy tree. Uri Udall usually used his unique, unusual unicycle. Vicky Vinc Viewed a very valuable vase. Walter Whipple warily warned the weary warrior. Xerxes Xenon expected to xerox extra x-rays. Yolan Yvonne Yarger yodeled up yonder yesterday. Zigmund Zane zig-zagged through the zany zoo zone. Alliteration Sampler The Eagle He clasps the crag with crooked hands; Close to the sun in lonely lands, Ringed with the azure world, he stands. The wrinkled sea beneath him crawls; He watches from his mountain walls, And like a thunderbolt he falls. - Alfred Lord Tennyson White Butterflies Fly, white butterflies, out to sea, Frail, pale wings for the wind to try, Small, white wings that we scarce can see, Fly! Some fly light as a laugh of glee, Some fly soft as a long, low sigh; All to the haven where each would be, Fly! -Algernon Charles Swinburne Fun with letters! Alliteration can add variety and interest to language. It can also be fun to write. In the examples below, fill in each blank with a word of your choice that starts with the indicated letter. 1. a plaid, purple p______________ 2. soft, silent s________________ 3. baseball and b________________ 4. w___________, white, w______________ 5. a river r____________________ 6. curly c_____________________ 7. jumping j___________________ 8. a m___________________ mess 9. the last l________________ 10. a terrible t_____________________ 11. Messy M____________ made more messes in the month of M________ than M__________, M__________, and M_____________ all made in the month of M____________________. 12. My dog D_______________ danced with D________________, the d________________. 13. For supper, P____________ ate p___________ p______________ and p_______________. Write an alliterative "name poem." First, write each letter of your first name on a separate line. Next to each letter, write a description of yourself using at least two words that start with that letter. Example: S- sometimes serious, sometimes silly A- always alert and active M- magnificent, but messy Onomatopoeia Onomatopoeia is the imitation of natural sounds in word form. These words help us form mental pictures about the things, people, or places that are described. Sometimes the word names a thing or action by copying the sound. For example: Bong! Buzz! Hiss! The rusty spigot sputters. utters a splutter, spatters a smattering of drops, gashes wider; slash, splatters, scatters, spurts, finally stops sputtering and plash! gushes rushes splashes clear water dashes. -Eve Merriam Sort the phrases. i Fun Words Onomatopoeia makes our language fun to hear and say. Design an onomatopoeia animal. 1. What is the size, color, and shape of your animal? 2. How is it like other animals? 3. How is it different from other animals? 4. Does it have eyes, ears, legs, wings, feet, claws, or paws? If so, how many? What do they look like? 5. What unusual features does your animal have? 6. How does your animal act or behave? What does it do? 7. What onomatopoeic words describe the sounds your animal makes when it is happy? when it is sad? (You can make up new words if you need to.) 8. What onomatopoeic words describe the way your animal walks or moves? 9. What onomatopoeic words describe the way other animals or people respond to your animal? 10. Draw a picture of your animal next to your poem. www.picturebook.com Personification Personification is giving human qualities, feelings, actions or characteristics to inanimate objects. For example: The window winked at me. The verb "wink" is a human action that the inanimate object, the window, is doing. Write the object being personified in the following sentences and the human characteristic they have. 1. The wind sang her mournful song through the falling leaves. 2. The microwave timer told me it was time to turn my TV dinner. 3. The video camera observed the whole scene. 4. The strawberries seemed to sing, "Eat me first!" 5. The rain kissed my cheeks as it fell. 6. The daffodils nodded their yellow heads at the walkers. 7. The water beckoned invitingly to the hot swimmer. 8. The snow whispered as it fell to the ground during the early morning hours. 9. The china danced on the shelves during the earthquake. 10. The car engine sputtered and coughed as it went down the highway. Personification describing human qualities in something that is not a person My computer died. Personification Sampler Under a Telephone Wire I am a copper wire slung in the air, Slim against the sun I make not even a clear line of shadow. Night and day I keep singing- humming and thrumming; It is love and war and money; it is fighting and the tears, the work and the want, Death and laughter of men and women passing through me, carrier of your speech, In the rain and the wet dripping, in the dawn and shine drying, A copper wire. -Carl Sandburg Proud Words Look out how you use proud words. The Puzzled Centipede A centipede was happy quite, Until a frog in fun Said, "Pray, which leg comes after which?" This raised her mind to such a pitch, She lay distracted in the ditch Considering how to run. When you let them go, it is not easy to call them back. They wear long boots, hard boots, they walk off proud; They can't hear you callingLook out how you use proud words. -Carl Sandburg Hyperbole A hyperbole is a type of figurative language. It is often confused with a simile or metaphor because it often compares two objects. The difference is a hyperbole is an exaggeration. For example: I had a ton of homework. Such statements are not literally true, but people make them to sound impressive or to emphasize something, such as a feeling, effort, or reaction. Examples: I could sleep for a year. This box weighs a ton. I've told you a million times to clean your room. They have yarns Of a skyscraper so tall they had to put hinges on the two top stories so to let the moon go by, Of one corn crop in Missouri when the roots Went so deep and drew off so much water The Mississippi riverbed that year was dry, Of pancakes so thin they had only one side, Of the man who drove a swarm of bee across the Rocky Mountains and the Desert "and didn't lose a bee." Of the boy who climbed a cornstalk growing so fast he would have starved to death if they hadn't shot biscuits up to him, Of the ship captain's shadow: it froze to the deck one cold winter night, Of the sheep-counter who was fast and accurate: "I just count their feet and divide by four." Hyperbole Sampler My teacher is so old… § “they’ve already nailed the coffin shut.” § “she gets a seniors discount at the nursing home!” § “her wrinkles weigh more than she does!” § “she showed us a yearbook from 1500 B.C.!” § “she considers Shakespeare to be a ‘new-fangled modern art’!” § “she personally knew Shakespeare!” § “she remembers the tragedy when the dinosaurs died!” § “she’s mentioned in the Old Testament.” § “she can’t even remember her own name!” § “she taught cave men to start a fire.” § “she edited the bible for mistakes!” § “she claims that she invented the question mark!” § “we looked up the word ‘ancient’, and there was full definition with her name and a big picture of her.” § “she knows how to speak cave-man language!” Idioms An idiom is an expression that has a meaning apart from the meanings of its individual words. For example: It's raining cats and dogs. Its literal meaning suggests that cats and dogs are falling from the sky. We interpret it to mean that it is raining hard. Write the meanings of these frequently used idioms: 1. catch a cold 2. see eye to eye 3. under the weather 4. stuffed to the gills 5. out of the frying pan and into the fire 6. on pins and needles 7. fly off the handle 8. head in the sand 9. lay down the law 10. hold your horses 11. going bananas 12. cat has your tongue 13. bury the hatchet 14. born yesterday 15. back seat driver Imagery Imagery involves one or more of your five senses (hearing, taste, touch, smell, sight). An author uses a word or phrase to stimulate your memory of those senses. These memories can be positive or negative which will contribute to the mood of your poem. The Worker My father lies black and hushed Beneath white hospital sheets He collapsed at work His iron left him Slow and quiet he sank Meeting the wet concrete floor on his way The wheels were still turning-they couldn't stop And as they carried him out The whirring and buzzing and humming machines Applauded him Lapping up his dripping iron They couldn't stop. -Richard W. Thomas Identify all the senses that are used in the poem. Also identify other poetic devices that Thomas uses. Imagery is the use of vivid language, usually rich in sensory words, to create pictures, or images, in the reader's mind. Figurative language is the language that uses imagery and such figures of speech as similes, metaphors, and personification. Creating poetry requires the use of imagery. Think of some imagery words to describe some part of nature: sea, clouds, a tree, a river, an animal, etc. Irony Irony is a literary form that lets us say one thing by mean the opposite. Usually irony is expressed in positive words, but it implies blame. Irony is lighter in tone than sarcasm, but it can be more cutting. There can also be irony in an event or situation in which the result is the opposite of what we expect to happen. The Crocodile How doth the little crocodile Improve his shining tail, And pour the waters of the Nile On every golden scale! How cheerfully he seems to grin, How neatly spreads his claws, And welcomes little fishes in, With gently smiling jaws! -Lewis Carroll Free Verse Free verse is easy and fun to write. There isn't any strict verse pattern, nor does free verse poetry rhyme. Free verse lets the writer use language that appeals to the head and the heart. The poet can express his or her feelings, emotions, and ideas in an imaginative way. Free verse poems can be about serious or humorous subjects. Below are the opening lines to be used to write your own free verse poem. Complete the poem so that it appeals to your head or your heart. Getting up on Monday morning... I spilled a can of orange soda pop... The cars on the freeway hum by... The summer sun... Free Verse Free verse is easy and fun to write. There isn't any strict verse pattern, nor does free verse poetry rhyme. Free verse lets the writer use language that appeals to the head and the heart. The poet can express his or her feelings, emotions, and ideas in an imaginative way. Free verse poems can be about serious or humorous subjects. Below are the opening lines to be used to write your own free verse poem. Complete the poem so that it appeals to your head or your heart. Getting up on Monday morning... I spilled a can of orange soda pop... The cars on the freeway hum by... The summer sun... Limericks There was a Young Lady whose Nose Continually prospers and grows; When it grew out of sight, She exclaimed in a fright, "Oh! Farewell to the end of my Nose!" There was a Young Lady of Niger Who smiled as she rode on a tiger; They returned from the ride With the lady inside, And the smile on the face of the tiger. -Edward Lear Theme Theme is the lesson that the writer wishes to convey about a particular subject. It is what the author wants the reader to remember the most. For example, in E. B. White's Charlotte's Web, Wilbur says at the end, "Friendship is one of the most satisfying things in the world." However, not all themes are specifically stated. Often one must do a bit of detective work to discover a theme. If you finish a story and aren't sure what the point was, you should go back over the reading. Sometimes the theme is stated directly in a key sentence, phrase, or word. Mostly, you have to think about what you are reading to figure out its theme. Look at the title. Identify important words or phrases. Common topics: hate, hope, independence, family, freedom, trust, truth, war, success, love, growing up, childhood, courage, death, faith.... Mood is the overall emotion or feeling created by a piece of literature. It can "color" a poem or set the feeling for the piece of literature for the reader. Tone is the author's attitude toward a subject of relationship he or she has with the reader. Sometimes it is hard to identify the emotions linked to poetry. Here are some examples of possible emotional vocabulary: Happy joyous delighted cheerful lighthearted optimistic hopeful enthusiastic Serious somber grim sober solemn reflective meditative thoughtful Brave courageous bold fearless heroic Arrogant smug boastful gloating prudish Exciting inspiring interesting intriguing stimulating disquieting Peaceful serene calm harmonious tranquil list compiled by Pat Greene Scary haunting frightened horrified terrified terrorized alarmed Shy bashful demure timid reserved Confused puzzled flustered bewildered perplexed vague undecided Sad dejected miserable melancholy grieving gloomy discouraged depressed morose Romantic mushy dreamy sentimental fanciful Nervous anxious cautious withdrawn apprehensive jittery Speaker: the voice that is heard in the poem NOT necessarily the author. Examples: Meterthe pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables in poetry. A unit of meter with two or three syllables of which one is usually stressed. Some examples: iambic foot- a two-syllable foot with the stress on the second syllable. It is the most common. trochaic foot- a two-syllable foot with the stress on the first syllable. Often used to suggest evil. In Macbeth: "Double, double, toil and trouble." Poe's "Raven": "Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary." Repetitionrepeating of sounds, words, phrases, or lines for emphasis examples Symbol- person, object, word, image, or event that has additional meaning beyond the normal definition Refrain- repeated part of a poem, especially at the end or between two stanzas Blow, Blow, Thou Winter Wind by Shakespeare Blow, blow, thou winter wind, Thou art not so unkind As man's ingratitude; Thy tooth is not so keen Because thou art not seen, Although thy breath be rude. Heigh-ho! sing heigh-ho! unto the green holly: Most friendship is feigning, most loving mere folly: Then, heigh-ho! the holly! This life is most jolly. Freeze, freeze, thou bitter sky, Thou dost not bite so nigh As benefits forgot: Though thou the waters warp, Thy sting is not so sharp As friend remember'd not. Heigh-ho! sing heigh-ho! unto the green holly: Most friendship is feigning, most loving mere folly: Then, heigh-ho! the holly! This life is most jolly. Stanzaa division of a poem based on thought or form. Stanzas based on form are shown by their rhyme scheme. Some types: couplet- a two-line stanza triplet- a three-line stanza quatrain- a four-line stanza quintet- a five-line stanza sestet- a six-line stanza septet- a seven-line stanza octave- an eight-line stanza Rhyme- a similarity of sound between two words. True rhyme is identical sounding stressed syllables in which the letters before the vowel sounds are different. Rhymed verse has end rhyme and usually rhyme meter. Free verse has no regular meter and no end rhyme. End rhyme has rhyme at the ends of the lines in a stanza. Internal rhyme has rhyme within a line of poetry. Rhyme scheme- the pattern of end rhyme. Sounds are identified by letters, aabb, abab, abc abc, etc. The Raven- Edgar Allen Poe Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered weak and weary, Over many a quaint and curious volume of forgotten lore, While I nodded, nearly napping, suddenly there came a tapping, As of some one gently rapping, rapping at my chamber door. `'Tis some visitor,' I muttered, `tapping at my chamber door Only this, and nothing more.' Ah, distinctly I remember it was in the bleak December, And each separate dying ember wrought its ghost upon the floor. Eagerly I wished the morrow; - vainly I had sought to borrow From my books surcease of sorrow - sorrow for the lost Lenore For the rare and radiant maiden whom the angels named Lenore Nameless here for evermore. Roses are red, Violets are blue. Sugar is sweet and so are you. Let's see what you remember...