Your draft reads very well, and demonstrates beginnings of creative mastery (B+ to A-potential at this point). Strive towards building on your creative mastery. You might explore how your concept of how self-managing teams forge group strength to overcome individual weak links (“As the team discovers the weaknesses and strengths each individual carries, they can piece together a team that has strengths in each area.”) lends itself to a potential statement of paradox, a slogan, and an organizing principle for building creativity in your case. Avoid passive voice and overuse of verb “to be” and “must.” Keep up the positive momentum! Date: December 10, 2009 To: Reinhold Messner Everest Expeditions From: Will, Addie, Mike, and Kimberly RE: Self Managing from Base Camp You show little doubt that creating a company strictly focused on guiding inexperienced people to the summit of Mount Everest will be a major challenge, but a challenge that can be achieved. You have been the most successful climber in the history of Mount Everest; therefore, clients should be naturally drawn to Everest Expeditions. As a new company, safety must be the main focus assured to all clients. Since individuals are naturally different in their overall willingness to trust, Everest Expeditions should make it a necessity to build a relationship with each client (Whitener and Stahl, pg. 466). The way you organize the company from the beginning will influence your key focus, which will either persuade or limit people’s ability to develop new strategies towards improving climbing (Nadler and Tushman, pg. 641). Innovation will improve over time, so you must incorporate patience. Climbing mountains does not happen daily for everyone, so each leader must eventually be able to become knowledge coaches by sharing some of their deep smarts with clients through conveying their experience to them (Leonard and Swap, pg. 94). You should design each expedition around the predetermined knowledge of the employees. That determines how to better the experiences of clients for the present and the future. We have designed a self managing team with excellent expertise on guiding clients to Mount Everest’s Base Camp. Due to the location of the Mountain, all clients will meet at Kathmandu, Nepal. The journey will not be easy; therefore, all climbers should be well acquainted with one another. This will provide a sense of understanding of the group dynamics and each other’s personalities. Leadership roles will be assigned and clients must know where they stand within the group for the next two months. Being a part of Everest Expeditions, Level Five leadership roles become essential to the group because the most important interest is not of ourselves, but of those around us, which will assist in creating a successful journey (Collins, pg. 477). Once we all meet at Kathmandu, a helicopter will be provided to transport climbers to Lukla, Nepal before beginning the endeavor to the Base Camp. As they begin the hike along the path to Base Camp, it will be important to take notice of the capabilities of each of the hikers, both physically and mentally. Once the stronger and weaker clients are differentiated, it will help distinguish who you can rely on towards group dynamics, which provides an important skill when reaching the summit (Gibson, pg. 324). When we arrive at Base Camp, it will be important to contact the respective camps and determine what supplies and demands they may desire for making the hike less strenuous and more enjoyable for the individuals. Upon contact, it will be essential to not only listen to the demands of other camps, but to state what we expect or need in return. Having a clear, organized time line of required supplies will allow time for all materials to be available at the appropriate time. To properly treat and care for hikers, communication between the camps becomes a necessity (Lawler, pg.581). Listening to each participant will provide an open environment where everyone's interest can be shown. This in turn will achieve the best possible solution in the steps needed from camp to camp and eventually the summit (Bourgeois, Eisenhart and Kahwajy, pg. 406). To effectively self-manage your teams, you must be able to establish relationships and effective communication within the group. Additionally, you must be able to have a well thought and processed plan of action for the trip. The job functions need to be well-defined and everyone is responsible for monitoring and managing their own performance (Druskat and Wheeler, pg. 340). The team can have additional help outside of the group, such as, feedback. As the climbers ascend Mount Everest, their breathing becomes strenuous, resulting in the lack of clear thinking skills. By reporting back to Base Camp on a continual basis to provide updated conditions, Base Camp can supply feedback and guidance. Seeking information from broader sources bring together more information to help the team to make educated decisions (Druskat and Wheeler, pg. 343). When a team learns to effectively selfmanage, they begin to build a strong, “self-directed” group, which is essential when climbing Mount Everest. Base Camp will encourage the process of selfmanagement through training and team building. Base Camp will further provide help to the other camps and the teams during travel through relationship building, organizational skills, and communication. The beginning process of building a team consist of screening clients, selecting individuals that will be compatible with one another, and are capable of the long journey. These climbers must be able to demonstrate leadership skills, team work, and effective communication skills. These selected clients will then continue on to the next level of building relationships within the team and physical training for the hike. Safety procedures, guidelines, and rules must be clear and reiterated within the group. The team should be able to form a self-managed team that will effectively stay together as a group in an emergency situation. As the team discovers the weaknesses and strengths each individual carries, they can piece together a team that has strengths in each area. There is no room for people who lack the ability to make a useful contribution simply to artificially create diversity in an incident management team (Roberts, pg. 28). References: Collins, J. (2001). “Level 5 Leadership.” Organizational Behavior Reader, pg. 477. Druskat, V. & Wheeler, J. (2004). “How To Lead a Self-Managing Team.” Organizational Behavior Reader, p. 340, 343. 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