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School uniforms should not be required in schools because uniforms are proven to diminish self-expression,
they also do not provide better scores on tests, kids also still find ways to bully other kids even though all the
kids look the same.
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Introduction
intro 1
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"Uniform: A speical type of clothing worn by members of a perticular group ("Uniforms . . ." 539).
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Source: "Uniforms | Define Uniforms at Dictionary.com." Dictionary.com | Free Online Dictionary for English
Definitions. Web. 29 Mar. 2011. <http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/uniforms>.
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Intro 2
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". . . schools began requiring that students wear uniforms in the 1980s." ("Cengage . . .")
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Source: "Cengage Learning Product Trials - Product - Opposing Viewpoints in Context." Cengage Learning
Product Trials - Login. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.galetrials.com/products.aspx?pid=2763&marketID=1&trialID=9862&contactID=30111>.
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intro 3
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"Uni forms a found in mainly private and religous schools "
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Source: "School Uniform (JUNIOR): Debatabase - Debate Topics and Debate Motions." IDEA: International
Debate Education Association - Debate Resources & Debate Tools. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.idebate.org/debatabase/topic_details.php?topicID=497>.
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Support Area 1- School uniforms should not be required in schools because they are proven to diminish
self-expression
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support 1-1
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"We all have a right to individuality, to make personal choices and to express our personality." ("Idea. . . .")
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Source: IDEA: International Debate Education Association - Debate Resources & Debate Tools. Web. 29 Mar.
2011. <http://www.idebate.org/>.
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suppotr1-2
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"The right of free expression includes the way we choose to dress." (
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Source: IDEA: International Debate Education Association - Debate Resources & Debate Tools. Web. 29 Mar.
2011. <http://www.idebate.org/>.
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support 1-3
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. . . particularly important for young people, who often have few other ways of expressing their personality or
making choices about their lives." - ("Gale. . . .")
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Source: "Gale - In Context - Home." Gale - Home. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.gale.cengage.com/InContext/>.
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Support Area 2 School uniforms should not be required in schools because they do not provide any better
scores on tests than public schools
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Support Area 2-2
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"Requiring students to wear uniforms will not change the outcome rusults of a test result"
(Gale. . .)
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Source: "Gale - In Context - Home." Gale - Home. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.gale.cengage.com/InContext/>.
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Support Area 2-1
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"There is no good evidence that links school uniform to improved results."
(School uniform JUNIOR. . .)
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Source: "School Uniform (JUNIOR): Debatabase - Debate Topics and Debate Motions." IDEA: International
Debate Education Association - Debate Resources & Debate Tools. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.idebate.org/debatabase/topic_details.php?topicID=497>.
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Support Area 2-3
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Test scores are are not related to what you wear they are resulted opon the ability of the student
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Source: GreatSchools, Joining. "Do Uniforms Make Schools Better? - Defining Your Ideal School | GreatSchools."
GreatSchools - Public and Private School Ratings, Reviews and Parent Community. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.greatschools.org/find-a-school/defining-your-ideal/school-uniforms.gs?content=121>.
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Support Area 3 School uniforms should not be required in schools because even all the kids look the same
kids still find ways to bully other kids
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Support Area 3-1
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"Students always find ways to tease or bully others, regardless of what clothes are worn."
("IDEA. . .")
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Source: IDEA: International Debate Education Association - Debate Resources & Debate Tools. Web. 29 Mar.
2011. <http://www.idebate.org/>.
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Support 3-2
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Uniforms have nothing to to with the leading causes ofbullying and violence ("Cengage. . . ")
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Source: "Cengage Learning Product Trials - Product - Opposing Viewpoints in Context." Cengage Learning
Product Trials - Login. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.galetrials.com/products.aspx?pid=2763&marketID=1&trialID=9862&contactID=30111>.
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Support 3-3
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Bullies are not based on what a kid wears they are basedupon the kids.("Great schools. . ." )
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Source: GreatSchools, Joining. "Do Uniforms Make Schools Better? - Defining Your Ideal School | GreatSchools."
GreatSchools - Public and Private School Ratings, Reviews and Parent Community. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.greatschools.org/find-a-school/defining-your-ideal/school-uniforms.gs?content=121>.
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Pro & Con
Opposing Fact
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"Having all the students wearing the same uniform helps to create a sense of belonging and a good school ethos
(culture or spirit)."
(School uniform. . .)
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Source: "School Uniform (JUNIOR): Debatabase - Debate Topics and Debate Motions." IDEA: International
Debate Education Association - Debate Resources & Debate Tools. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.idebate.org/debatabase/topic_details.php?topicID=497>.
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Support to Opposing fact
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"We all have a right to individuality, to make personal choices and to express our personality. This right of free
expression includes the way we choose to dress."
(School uniform JUNIOR. . . )
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Source: "School Uniform (JUNIOR): Debatabase - Debate Topics and Debate Motions." IDEA: International
Debate Education Association - Debate Resources & Debate Tools. Web. 29 Mar. 2011.
<http://www.idebate.org/debatabase/topic_details.php?topicID=497>.
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Conclusion
Restate the Thesis
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School uniforms should not be required in schools because uniforms are proven to diminish self-expression, they do
not provide better scores on tests, and kids still find ways to bully other kids even with school uniforms.
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Solution
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If kids want to wear a uniform they should go to a private but if kids donot wantwear uniforms at a public school
they should not be forced to.
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Plan of action
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to get people to recognize all the bad things with school uniforms I will e-mail a document to the governor of
Michigan
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