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Hayley Durham

Melinda Dinninger

Elizabeth Findlay

Kayla Pape

Speaker’s thoughts on Winter Storm

Cannot control or predict the elements

No one can control the elements

We survive the elements by a closed, sheltered life.

Control the Forces of Nature

• Man cannot hope to control nature

Can only sit out the storm in a shelter

Helpless Technology

• Barometers cannot change weather

Clocks can only tell the time, not change it

Mankind’s Inability to Control and Predict

• Weather

“Weather of the Heart”

Formal Lyric Poem

“Tells” the narration from the Speaker to the Reader

Strong Imagery Lines

• Lines 1 – 7

Lines 22 – 25

Helps Understand the Storm

Draws Attention to Contrast

Contrast Safety and Comfort

• Line 1

Lines 4 – 5

Lines 22 – 23

Helps “see” the Storm

Most Common Imagery Found

Appeal to reader’s Sense of Hearing

• Line 9

Line 24

Speaker Acknowledges the Presence of

Sound

Calm

• Helps analyze what is taking place

Resigned

• Knows hears the storm, but doesn’t act surprised

Thoughtful

• Literary meanings: Physical and Metaphysical

Optimistic Realist

• Natural occurrence that shouldn’t be fought

First Person

• Through eyes of speaker

Present Tense

• Happening in the “now”

Pleasant To The Ears

“P” Sound

• “Upon a pillowed chair”

“W” Sound

• “Moves inward toward”

Harsh, Sharp To The Ears

“K” Sound

• “curtains as the sky goes black”

Consecutive Sounds - Lots of “W”

• “What Winds are Walking overhead, What zone…”

• “Walk from Window to closed Window,

Watching…”

Repetition of Vowel Sounds

“A”

• “glAss hAs been fAlling All the Afternoon”

“I”

• “the wInd wIll rIse”

Looks Rhymed

Semi-Rhyme

Afternoon; Zone

Abroad; on

Time; rise

Black; glass

Season; regions

Rhymes Within the Lines

• Match; Glass

Weather; Aperture

Stresses in the Beginning

Example:

“And think again”

• Line 6

Not Consistent

Full Stop at End of a Line

Feeling of Completeness

Stream of Consciousness

Seems to be Sentence Makes a Stanza

• Lines 22 – 25

• “I draw the curtains as the sky goes black

And set a match to candles sheathed in glass

Against the keyhole draught, the insisting wine

Of Weather through the unsealed aperture.”

Pattern of Stressed and Unstressed

Syllables

Gives Rhythm when Lacking Rhyme

Comparisons using Physical and

Metaphysical

Turmoil of Weather and Heart

• Lines 13 – 14

Literal and Figurative: Giving it a Name

The Storm Becomes Abstract

• Line 2

Lines 3 – 5

Replaces a Word for Another

“The Glass has been falling all morning”

• Line 1

“glass” is a rain

Word represents Another

“The Glass has been falling all morning”

• Line 1

“glass” represents a Barometer

Contradictory, but True Phrase

Technology

• “Predict” the weather, but can’t “control” it

Direct Meaning of a Word

Literal Meaning

Example:

• “Silent Core of Waiting”

Eye of the Strom

Associated Meaning of a Word

Connective Meaning

Example:

• “Silent Core of Waiting”

Her peaceful area before the Storm

Significance in Poem

Representation

Example:

• “winds” symbolize power of sudden change

Straight Forward

Verbs:

• Falling, knowing, walking, moving, strain…

Adjectives:

• Grey, pillowed, closed, silent, secret, polar…

Alluding to Something

Winds “walking”

• Storm is on the Move

“Grey Unrest”

• Storm is right above the speaker

Emphasizes the Meaning of Poem

“Who live in troubled regions”

• Learn to Live

“Polar realms”

• Home is an isolated area

General English

No Complex Words

Easy to Read and Understand

Four Stanza

Not Closed Form

Blank Verse

Proper Usage of Stresses (Rhythm)

Slant Rhymes

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