Writing Letters Icons key: For more detailed instructions, see the Getting Started presentation Flash activity. These activities are not editable. Extension activities 11 of of 15 15 Web addresses Teacher’s notes included in the Notes Page Accompanying worksheet © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Learning objectives In this unit you will… Learn how to write formal and informal letters Learn the rules for laying out word-processed and handwritten letters Practise writing formal and informal letters 2 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Types of letters if u hd 2 rite a letter 2sum1 wud u no how? What is wrong with this question? Text messages and e-mails are effective methods of communication, but this style and language is not appropriate for writing a letter. It is important to know the rules for the different types of letter writing. This unit will take you through the necessary layout and style for a formal business letter and will then look at the language which is appropriate for a casual letter to a friend. How many types of letters can you think of? 3 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Formal or informal? 4 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Features of formal and informal letters 5 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Informal letters Choose and write two letters from the list below. A letter to a cousin describing a recent summer holiday. A letter to a friend inviting him/her to a party (give details). A letter to a friend explaining why you can’t go to his/her party. A letter to a friend finalizing arrangements for a surprise you are organizing. 6 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Formal letters Formal letters require us to use a standard layout and write in a formal style. What do you actually mean by ‘formal’? When we write in a formal style we use proper or standard English. Would you handwrite a formal letter or use a computer? Many people choose to word-process letters in formal situations, but if you are writing by hand, remember that you want the person receiving it to be able to read it. A will create a bad impression! 7 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 A word-processed letter 8 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 A handwritten letter 9 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Appropriate language 10 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 How NOT to write a formal letter Find all the things that are wrong with this word-processed letter. Mr T. Blair 10 Downing Street London WC1 2AA 4 Tile Hill Roding Bucks W65 3MG May second Dear Tony I can’t eat school dinners anymore. I think there nasty. Why do I have to keep eating chips, burgers, sweets, etc? I eat school dinners 5 days a week and I don’t think I can take much more. Can’t you sort it out? Me and my friends are sick of eating rubbish why don’t you give the schools enough dosh so they can afford healthy things? See u Kev 11 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 How to write a formal letter The Manager Quickshop 3 High Street Roding W65 7HV Dear Sir/Madam 4 Tile Hill Roding Bucks W65 3MG Monday 3rd June 2001 I purchased a packet of fresh prawns from your shop on Sunday. On opening the pack, I discovered that while the visible prawns were in good condition, those at the bottom of the packet were an unpleasant brown colour. I have been a regular customer at your shop for several years. However, if this is to be the standard of the produce, I shall take my custom elsewhere in future. Yours faithfully Sarah Hall Sarah Hall 12 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Activity: writing a formal letter Write the reply from the manager of Quickshop to Ms Hall. The manager’s name is Tariq Iqbal. Remember that your aim is to keep this customer, not to lose her, so you need to be polite, no matter what you really think of her complaint! I think I’d offer her some more prawns to make up for it, or a gift token for the shop. I think she should count herself lucky just to get a reply! 13 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Activity: writing a formal letter We’re a small family-run hotel. We have 8 rooms, including 2 family rooms. Cots are available on request. Lovely atmosphere, children very welcome. Sorry no pets. Beach is 2 mins walk away. Sea views from most rooms. Sunnyside Hotel, Cross St. Polneath, Cornwall PA31 8QN. Respond to this advertisement. You would like to take your family of five (two adults and three children, including a baby of nine months) on holiday to Polneath for 17 days arriving on July 28th. If possible, you would like to all be in one room and you would prefer a sea view. 14 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006 Activity: writing a formal letter Wanted: Young person (16+) to work in pub as waiter/waitress and kitchen assistant. Apply to Rose Harrold, landlady. Write expressing an interest in the job. Imagine you are sixteen. Ask about hours, duties and pay. Tell the landlady that you have experience of kitchen work and that your former boss will give you a reference. Make up the rest of the details yourself! 15 of 15 © Boardworks Ltd 2006