Concision Cubed: The Art of Haiku
This is where we take our developing skill of writing with concision to its logical, albeit
extreme, conclusion. Having read David Brook’s op-ed piece “The Sandra Bullock Trade” and
composed a Letter to the Editor of 150 words or less, we will now attempt to distill that letter of 150
words down to a mere 17 syllables.
Haiku is a form of poetry derived from ancient Japanese culture. Haiku utilizes form, content,
and language to observe and engage with everyday matters such as nature, feelings, or personal
experience. The haiku is all about simplicity. Commonly, Haiku is made up of three short lines. The
first line maintains five (5) syllables, the second line seven (7), and the third line five (5). Rhyming is
not the point (that would be a limerick). Although Haiku poetry concerns itself with concision, it can
be profound or irreverent. The challenge of Haiku is to put both the poem's meaning and imagery in the
reader's mind in only 17 syllables.
The purpose of this exercise is to reinforce the importance of addressing complex matters with
simplicity and concision. Haiku compels us to think patiently, deliberately, and thoughtfully. Word
choice matters. Thoughtful composition precludes haste. We are no longer trying to load up a blank
page with as many words as possible. We are instead learning to make our point with clarity and
brevity. This is the first step in learning how to self-edit.
For Tuesday, April 20, compose at least four (4) examples of haiku. Three examples should
reflect the essence of your previous Letter to the Editor. The fourth is all yours. You may address
anything you wish.