Report Writing: Writing the Report LEARNING OBJECTIVES: To gain a brief overview of the prefatory/supplementary parts of a report To understand the principal considerations in the drafting of the report To become aware of key areas to pay attention to in editing and proofreading the report to ensure a polished and professional final product Once you have a well-structured, accurately phrased outline, you can begin the final stage of the report-writing process, actually writing the report. In addition to the introduction, findings, conclusions, and recommendations sections of the report (refer to the Notes on Report Writing: Organising and Outlining Report), you need to include prefatory and supplementary parts in your report. When drafting your report, ensure that your report is clear, concise, coherent, courteous, correct, and complete. 1. Prefatory/Supplementary Parts and the Report Proper In drafting the report, you need to distinguish clearly the various sections of the report, remembering the functions for each section. There are three basic divisions of a formal report, prefatory parts, supplementary parts, and the report proper (sometimes referred to as the body of the report). Prefatory parts may include the title page, letter of authorization, letter of transmittal, table of contents, list of illustrations and synopsis or executive summary. With respect to the prefatory parts section for your problem-solving reports, you will need only to include a title page. Supplementary parts could include ‘References’ (sometimes called ‘Sources’ or ‘Bibliography’), Endnotes and an appendix. The References is a list of secondary sources consulted when preparing the report, such as websites, newspaper or journal articles, books, etc. Notes (Endnotes) are included when in-text citations use the superscript system and the reader views the source information at the end of the report (more information on in-text citations in “Drafting the Report” (see section below). An appendix contains materials related to the report but not included in the text because they are too lengthy, complex, or lack direct relevance. The report proper of your problem-solving reports should include introduction, findings, conclusions, and recommendations sections. Centre for English Language Communication National University of Singapore 1 Introduction May include background, purpose, scope, limitations, sources and methods, and report organisation. Findings The objective presentation of your data through text, charts and tables. Conclusions Your evaluation of the data presented in the Findings section. Recommendations Your ideas for improvement based on your conclusions. 2. Drafting the report Drafting refers to the process of writing and re-writing to get a complete first draft of your report. There are three main activities associated with the actual report writing process, drafting, editing, and proofreading. When writing your reports, remember that good business writing should be clear, concise, coherent, correct, and courteous (refer to the Language of Business handout). Also, your report should be complete. First, before starting the drafting process, check the instructions given by your tutors for any required format for the report. Because your report contains a number of different sections, it is especially important to pay attention to the concept of coherence. 2.1 Ensure coherence at all levels of the report Coherence is the quality when all the parts fit together well and logically to form a united whole. Although analytical reports are divided into main sections, including an introduction, findings, conclusion and recommendations, it is important that there are logical transitions linking the various parts of the report into one integrated whole. This need for coherence applies not only between the main sections, but also to the subsections within the main sections. There are various ways to ensure connections between sections and coherence throughout the report. 2.1.1 Provide introductory comments for main sections Introductory comments for each main section of the report give the reader a preview of the content and organisation of the section. This preview allows the reader to understand not only the main idea presented in the section but also how the subideas (sub-sections) are related to each other and the main idea. Centre for English Language Communication National University of Singapore 2 2.1. 2 Use general statements/topic sentences to begin paragraphs A general statement or topic sentence introduces the main idea of the paragraph. Following the introductory general sentence, the paragraph and the topic is developed through the presentation of data or examples, explanations, etc. This organisation of the paragraph, from the general to the specific, provides a logical and connected development of ideas for the reader. 2.1.3 Use linking words Linking words show the connection between what has been said and what comes next. They help to provide a logical, smooth flow of ideas and information to the reader. Linking words (i.e. in addition, however, similarly, thus, and for example) may be used within a sentence, within a paragraph, and between paragraphs. 2.2 Incorporate charts and tables in the text Once you have produced your visual aids, you need to ensure they are integrated appropriately with the text of the report. Some report writers refer to all visual aids as exhibits and number them consecutively throughout the report, while others number tables and figures (charts) separately. Integrating the visual aids with the text can be done through the following means: · Introduce the visual aids in the text Help the readers understand the significance of any visual aids by referring to the visual aids. This reference helps readers understand why the chart or table is important. When describing the data shown in your visual aids, be sure to emphasize the main point you are trying to make, such as the critical information or trend. Do not make the mistake of simply repeating all the data. · Place visual aids near their in-text references Preferably, place each visual aid directly next to the text that refers to and explains the visual aid. Ideally, each visual aid and its relevant text should be on the same page, so that readers can consult both the visual aid and the explanation at the same time. 3 In-text citations In drafting your reports, it is necessary to acknowledge, through citations, the data or information that you incorporate into your report from secondary sources. Two common ways of handling citations are the author-date system and the superscript system. 3.1 Author-date system When using the author-date system to make a reference citation in text, insert the author’s last name and the year of the publication within parentheses. You can add a page number when necessary: Centre for English Language Communication National University of Singapore 3 … reflected the most comprehensive approach (Lee, 2000, p. 67). Alternatively, the name of the author can be integrated into the text: According to Lee (2000), the solution was definitely … When there is no author for the publication, use a short form of the title of the work: … because of the slowdown in exports (New Plans for Trade Stimulation, 2001, p. 13). The author-date system requires a reference list in the supplementary parts section of the report that contains pertinent information about the publication such as the name of the author, title of the article or book, date of publication, etc. 3.2 Superscript system A more traditional method of in-text citation is the superscript system. In this system, Arabic numerals are place just above the line of type at the end of the section of information taken from secondary sources. The superscript lets the reader know to look for source information either in a footnote (at the bottom of the page) or in an endnote (in the supplementary parts section of the report). … represented a 12% decrease in exports compared to the previous year. 4 1 Editing and proofreading the report Editing and proofreading the report is the last stage of the report-writing process. When editing your report, consider how you can improve the clarity and conciseness of your writing. You may need to rewrite or even delete entire sections if you find them unclear, illogical, wordy or redundant. Other areas that you will need to review are the coherence, appropriateness of the writing style and completeness of the report. Eventually, in your editing process you will reach a point when you proofread the report, primarily looking for grammatical, spelling or typographical errors. Use spell or grammar checkers first, but be aware that a spell checker is not foolproof. The following passage has been through a spell checker: My Spelling Chequer Eye halve a spelling chequer It came with my pea sea It plainly marques four my revue Miss steaks eye kin knot sea Eye have run this poem threw it I am shore your please two no Its letter perfect awl the weigh My chequer tolled my sew. --- Sores unknown --- Centre for English Language Communication National University of Singapore 4 Some suggestions for proofreading are to proofread the report several times, not just once. Also, get a friend or fellow student to proofread your report. Others are likely to catch mistakes that you continually fail to miss. If you have the time, set the document aside and proofread it the next day. With respect to the presentation of your report, ensure that it is neat, attractive, and professional. For effective design, be consistent in the use of design elements such as margins and type styles and balanced in the use of white space, text, and graphs. White space, blank space free of text and artwork, provides contrast and gives readers a resting point. Finally, and very importantly, check again that you have followed the instructions given by your tutors on any required format for your reports. References: 1. Bovee, Courtland L., Thill, John V., Schatzman, Barbara E. (2008): Business Communication Today. 9th Edition. Prentice-Hall International Inc. 2. Locker, Kitty O. (2003): Business and Administrative Communication. 6th Edition. Irwin/McGraw-Hill. Further readings Recommended texts 1. Bovee, Courtland L. & Thill, John V. (2005): Business Communication Today. 9th Edition. Prentice-Hall International Inc. -- Pages 425 - 495. 2. Locker, Kitty O. (2006): Business and Administrative Communication. 7th Edition. Irwin/McGraw-Hill. -- Pages 408 - 434. Centre for English Language Communication National University of Singapore 5