English Composition and Literature Dr. Linda Reesman Poetry Writing Assignment Poetry Writing Assignment Analysis Essay Directions: In an essay of approximately 750 words (3 full typewritten pages, not 2 ¼ ), double‐spaced, analyze one or both of the poems from the handout on Marianne Moore’s “Fish” and Allen Ginsberg’s “A Supermarket in California,” or from the handout on Shakespeare’s Sonnets (from which you may choose to discuss more than one sonnet in your essay). Discuss in your analysis how this poem (1) tells a story, (2) describes a mood, or (3) dramatizes a situation. Please use the poetic conventions as discussed in class to build your argument and provide evidence with specific examples from the poem. Some of these poetic conventions include but are not limited to: point of view, physical form, rhythm, rhyming scheme, line length and variation, alliteration, assonance, imagery, symbolism, contradiction or paradox, diction, and personification. 1. Use direct quotes from the poem. 2. Cite line numbers in parentheses following the ending quotation mark but before the period of your sentence. 3. All poem titles are punctuated with quotation marks, not underlined or in italics. 4. Format typed essay according to the MLA style for writing short papers. 5. Use a heading MLA style and a title for your paper centered below the heading. 6. Add page numbers in the upper right‐hand corner of the page following your last name on all pages but the first. This paper is your interpretation but should be well‐supported with evidence from the poem(s) to back up your opinions. One example is not enough to show a pattern developed by the poet; however, several examples that show the poet’s emphasis should be presented. Use your understanding of form and content to create a complete picture of your own ideas to the reader. Assume the reader has not read this poem. Workshop draft; due in class: Final revision due: (Final revision and draft with student comments) Rubric for Poetry Writing Assignment Dr. Linda Reesman A‐B+ Development of Development topic covers topic in depth and is comprehensive Ability to analyze Shows original and interpret poetry insights and makes clear connections Use of supportive Examples details & examples specifically illustrate major ideas Correct use of Writing shows language skills evidence of mastery of language B‐C+ Development covers topic with some depth Shows some insight with occasional connections Examples generally illustrate major ideas C‐D+ Development covers topic superficially Shows little insight and no clear connections Examples are lacking or weak with little explanation Writing shows Writing shows generally good interference in mastery of language language mastery Assessment of Hamlet Research Project Elise Denbo Assessment Sixteen students submitted final papers on Hamlet on or before May 20, 2010. This project was “scaffolded”: it was built on preliminary assignments, library visits, and in-class writing workshops whereby students developed outlines, early drafts, and integrated critical material for their paper. Students received the rubric for the project along with the written assignment in early April. When students submitted their final paper, they attached a checklist that reinforced important requirements outlined in the rubric. Results Library visits, preliminary assignments, and writing workshops helped students understand the assignment, how to develop their interpretation of Hamlet while maintaining their own voice and incorporating other critical points of view for support. 31% of students received ‘A’ grades, 44% ‘B’ grades, and 25% ‘C’ grades. No paper received an ‘F’ although two papers were not submitted and remain incomplete. Summary The rubric, especially when handed out as a guide, helped clarify the goal of the project as well as the various writing / research steps that led to the final paper. Students also indicated that a final checklist helped clarify paper requirements. Such a checklist not only reinforced the rubric, restating requirements in a bullet-type format, but also helped students assess their own paper as they checked off the list. In addition, the rubric offered me an opportunity to consider my own parameters and requirements for the assignment, not only ways to explain these to the students but also how to put them into practice. Summary Rubric Score Sheet Course: EN-102 Section: LC 1 Professor: Denbo Assignment: Research Project on Hamlet Class Size: 18 Students (Score Sheet based on 16 submitted papers) Elements (Project Goals) Addresses all parts of the assignment and presents a critical lens or thesis that integrates literary and cultural views of Hamlet, making appropriate and coherent connections throughout the essay (40%) Demonstrates an understanding of the chosen topic and research through summary, explanation, and analysis of relevant material (25%), Maintains own voice, develops own insights and thoughts while referencing the required number of sources for support, identifying the sources formally or informally (20%) Communicates clearly and effectively, using appropriate conventions of language (e.g. paragraph and sentence coherence, grammar, spelling, punctuation). (15%) 4 3 2 6 6 4 7 6 3 6 7 3 6 7 3 1 0