Contents Contents Preface………………………………………………………………………vii Significance of this Book……………………………………………viii Audiences for this Book………………………………………………..ix Acknowledgments………………………………………………………x Introduction…………………………………………………………………1 Organization of this Book………………………………………………3 Notes…………………………………………………………………….6 1. Developments in English L1 Composition…………………………..7 Trends in L1 Writing Instruction and Research…………………………9 Product-Oriented Pedagogies in L1 Composition………………………10 The Process Movement……………………………………………..…12 Problems Confronting L1 and L2 Writing after the Process Movement……………………………………………………….13 Genre as a Response to Process Methods……………………………….16 Writing Research in L1 Contexts………………………………………..18 Summary……………………………………………………………….20 Notes……………………………………………………………………22 2. Approaches to ESL/EFL Writing Instruction………………………25 Trends in ESL/EFL Writing Instruction and Research………………..27 Product-Oriented Writing Instruction………………………………….28 Research on Grammar Instruction………………………………29 Research on Error Correction……………………………………32 Process-Oriented Writing Instruction………………………………….33 Writing Process Research………………………………………..35 Genre-Oriented Writing Instruction……………………………………39 i AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING Genres in the Sydney School…………………………………….40 Genres in English for Specific Purposes………………………..44 Genres in the New Rhetoric……………………………………..45 Genres in Contrastive Rhetoric………………………………….48 Summary………………………………………………………………..49 Notes…………………………………………………………………….51 3. Teaching EFL Writing in Taiwan……………………………………53 Applying ESL Pedagogies in EFL Writing Classes…………………..55 English Language Instruction Policies in Taiwan…………………….56 English Writing Instruction in EFL Contexts…………………………57 A Classroom Study…………………………………………………….59 Research Questions……………………………………………..60 Setting and Students…………………………………………….61 Summary……………………………………………………………….66 Notes……………………………………………………………………68 4. Teacher-Initiated Research…………………………………………..71 Classroom-Based Research……………………………………………73 The Course Genres…………………………………………………….74 Integrating Product, Process, and Genre………………………………80 Research Design…………………………………………………………89 Data Collection Plan…………………………………………………….90 Writing Tasks……………………………………………………..90 Written Reports…………………………………………………..93 Questionnaire A…………………………………………………..94 Questionnaire B…………………………………………………..95 Questionnaire C…………………………………………………..96 Error Logs………………………………………………………...99 Text-Structure Logs……………………………………………100 Interviews………………………………………………………101 Procedure……………………………………………………………..102 ii Contents Analysis of the Data………………………………………………….103 Summary………………………………………………………………105 Notes……………………………………………………………………107 5. Processes and Strategies in EFL Writing…………………………..109 Reporting Writing Processes and Strategies………………………….111 Strategy Use in Idea Exploration………………………………112 Strategy Use in Idea Planning………………………………….114 Strategy Use in Drafting………………………………………..116 Strategy Use in Revising………………………………………..118 Topic Change, Genre Effect, and Strategy Use………………………123 Problems Confronting in the Writing Process………………………..125 Summary……………………………………………………………….129 Notes……………………………………………………………………131 6. Text Structures and Grammatical Errors…………………………..133 Focus on Text and Language Structures………………………………135 Problems with Structural Entities……………………………………..137 Writing the Introduction…………………………………………137 Drafting the Body………………………………………………143 Writing the Conclusion…………………………………………..146 Treatment of Errors in EFL Writing…………………………………150 Errors of Nouns…………………………………………………..151 Errors of Verbs…………………………………………………152 Lexical Errors………………………………………………….153 Syntactic Errors………………………………………………..155 Mechanical Errors………………………………………………157 Grammar Points to Be Emphasized……………………………157 Summary………………………………………………………………159 Notes…………………………………………………………………..161 iii AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING 7. Learning to Use the School-Based Genres………………………..163 Defining Genre……………………………………………………….165 Familiarity with the Genres………………………………………….169 Effectiveness of Analyzing the Genres………………………………173 Modeling and Deconstructing the Genres…………………….173 Independent Construction of the Genres………………………175 Usefulness of Learning to Use the Genres…………………………..177 Suggestions for Teaching the Genres………………………….178 Feelings about Using the Genres………………………………179 Summary………………………………………………………………180 Notes………………………………………………………………….182 8. Evaluating the Integrated Approach to Writing Instruction……..183 Product-Process-Genre Connections…………………………………185 Tracking Progress in Composing in English…………………………186 Stages in the Writing Process…………………………………..187 Perceived Difficulties in Writing……………………………….192 Perceived Benefits of the Writing Course………………………194 Attitudes toward the Integrated Approach…………………………….196 Reflections on the Integrated Approach………………………202 Reasons for Taking the Elective Course on Academic Research Writing……………………………………202 Advantages to Students of Having Taken Advanced English Writing…………………..…………………204 Improvements in English Writing………………………………206 Summary………………………………………………………………207 Conclusion……………………………………………………………..208 Appendices………………………………………………………………..213 Appendix 3.1: Chinese Version of the Consent Form………………..213 Appendix 3.2: English Version of the Consent Form………………..214 Appendix 3.3: Chinese Version of the Background Survey…………215 iv Contents Appendix 3.4: English Version of the Background Survey………….216 Appendix 4.1: Course Syllabus I……………………………………..217 Appendix 4.2: Course Syllabus II……………………………………218 Appendix 4.3: Composition Textbooks Surveyed……..….…………219 Appendix 4.4: Handout for Writing Assignment 4 (Narrative)……220 Appendix 4.5: Handout for Information Reports…….…..…………221 Appendix 4.6: Handout for Explanations……………………………222 Appendix 4.7: Handout for Expositions…..…………………………223 Appendix 4.8: Handout for Procedures………………………………224 Appendix 4.9: Written Report Form…………………………………225 Appendix 4.10: A List of Writing Strategies…………………………226 Appendix 4.11: Questionnaire A………………………………………228 Appendix 4.12: Questionnaire B………………………………………229 Appendix 4.13: Questionnaire C………………………………………230 Appendix 4.14: Error-Analysis Form…………………………………232 Appendix 4.15: Text-Structure Analysis Form……………………….233 References…………………………………………………………………235 Author Index………………………………………………………………263 Subject Index……………………………………………………………269 v Preface Teaching a college-level English composition class is a challenging task for the majority of instructors. Required in all English departments in Taiwan, there are many factors that contribute to making it a difficult course for both instructors and learners. For some instructors, the difficulty lies in focusing the course and choosing an appropriate text, as well as in dealing with students at different levels of writing proficiency. One of the greatest obstacles, for both instructors and learners, is the difficulty that most students have when trying to write coherent and concise compositions in English. Despite its problematic nature, the composition class offers learners a valuable opportunity to develop their linguistic and written competencies, while challenging the instructor to create pedagogical situations and activities that enhance the students’ development. The product-, process-, and genre-oriented approaches have dominated much of the teaching of English L1 and L2 writing. The product-oriented approach focuses on the products of writing by examining texts either through their formal surface elements or their discourse structure. The process-oriented approach focuses on the writer and describes writing in terms of the processes used to create texts. The genre-oriented approach emphasizes the role that readers play in writing, adding a social dimension to writing research by elaborating how writers engage with an audience in creating coherent texts. The integrated approach to EFL writing instruction proposed in this book is unique in that it aims to combine the relative merits of these three pedagogical approaches and use them to more fully understand writing and learning to write. This synthesis of product, process, and genre orientations allows writing teachers to broaden formal and functional orientations to include the social purposes behind forms, to highlight the significance of writing as a process leading to a product, and to contextualize writing for audience and purpose. vii AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING The notion of the integrated approach developed here echoes the belief held by such researchers as Silva (1990), Raimes (1991), Hyland (2002, 2003a), Johns (2003), and Kroll (2003) that a truly effective approach to the teaching of ESL/EFL composition should be based on a broader, more comprehensive conception of what L2 writing involves, and this bigger picture must account for the contributions of the writer, reader, text, and context, as well as their interaction. Significance of this Book There are two objectives that underlie the writing of this book. One objective is to explore the viability of integrating the relative merits of the product-, process-, and genre-oriented approaches in the teaching of writing in an EFL classroom. It is worth noting that “ESL/EFL writing classrooms are typically a mixture of more than one approach and that teachers frequently combine these orientations in imaginative and effective ways” (Hyland, 2003b, p. 23). However, in reality, what teachers or materials writers have done for students may be simply based on their intuitions rather than findings from actual classroom research. Very few empirical studies of writing in EFL contexts have been conducted to identify principled reasons for choosing which grammatical features to teach and in what ways grammar might be best introduced, what genres should be included and how these will be structured and modeled, and what factors make a genre easy or difficult for students to learn to apply. Moreover, teachers need to know what problems students will encounter as they try to develop an effective essay through the creation of a thesis statement, topic sentences, supporting sentences, and a conclusion. This book is intended to address the questions posed above, thereby contributing to the development of more viable, realistic theories of ESL/EFL writing and writing instruction. The other objective of the book is to examine the effects of exposure to the integrated approach on students’ writing skills. The product-, process-, and genre-oriented approaches to ESL/EFL writing instruction have been the most influential approaches since about 1945. However, published research on the viii Preface relative merits of different approaches when applied in the classroom is hard to find. The lack of empirical evidence from valid and reliable classroom research may weaken the place of such approaches within a coherent model of the interrelationship of ESL/EFL writing theory, research, and practice. This book is one of the few attempts to conduct classroom research on the effectiveness of the integrated approach, yet the attempt to determine the effectiveness of an innovative teaching method should proceed with caution. It may not be reasonable to expect that students’ writing abilities can be affected by an experiment of short duration. This book includes a longitudinal qualitative study conducted for two semesters, nearly nine months, in one EFL writing class at a small-size technological university in Taiwan. This small-scale study can be seen as a testing ground for the efficacy of the integrated approach. To achieve this goal, the study elicited information from the students about their attitudes toward the integrated approach, their perceptions of the progress they made in their writing skills, and their performance in an English writing test. Audience for this Book The product-oriented approach to writing is commonly found in Taiwan’s EFL teaching materials and classroom practices for students at initial levels of each stage of schooling (senior high school/vocational high school/junior college, college/college of technology, or university/university of technology). The process-oriented approach has been adopted by some college or university teachers when they teach writing to students majoring in English. The genre-oriented approach, which treats writing as attempts to communicate with readers, has rarely been used by teachers in Taiwan. This book provides a synthesis of theory, research, and practice to help Taiwan’s teachers make informed choices about the methods, materials, and procedures to use in the classroom based on a clear understanding of the current attitudes and practices in ESL/EFL writing. In this way I hope to offer those teachers the resources to plan, implement, and evaluate a program of writing instruction for any teaching situation in which they may find themselves. ix AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING Because this book presents pedagogical approaches for the teaching of EFL composition in a framework of current theoretical perspectives on ESL/EFL writing processes, practices, and writers, it should appeal to teachers who are or will be teaching students who speak English as a foreign language in colleges, universities, workplaces, language institutes, and senior secondary schools. Those who have little or no experience teaching writing to students from non-English-speaking backgrounds will also find much of value in these pages. Graduate students in TESOL and Applied Linguistics programs can consider this book a guide to ESL/EFL writing instruction grounded in composition theory and research. Researchers involved in describing ESL/EFL writing and investigating ESL/EFL composition pedagogy will also find this book particularly valuable in that it relates EFL classroom activities to relevant issues and methods in English L1 and L2 writing. Acknowledgments This book would not have been written without the support of the National Science Council (NSC) of the Executive Yuan (行政院國家科學委員會). I thank the NSC for supporting my research projects by Grant No. NSC93-2411-H-327-001 and Grant No. NSC95-2420-H-327-001. I thank the Center for Humanities Research ( 人 文 學 研 究 中 心 ) for funding the publication of this book in 2008. My heartfelt thanks go to Prof. Wu-Chang Chang (張武昌教授) of the Department of English at National Taiwan Normal University who directed the work of the editorial board and evaluated the written comments by three reviewers. I would also like to express my appreciation to the editorial board members: Prof. Chen-Ching Li (李振清教授) of the Department of English at Shih Hsin University, Prof. One-Soon Her (何萬順教授) of the Graduate Institute of Linguistics at National Chengchi University, Prof. Shih-Guey Joe (周碩貴教授) of the Department of Applied English at Southern Taiwan University, Prof. Chuan-Hsiu Hung (洪 詮 修 教 授 ) of the Department of Applied Foreign Languages at National Yunlin University of Science and x Preface Technology, Prof. Chiou-Lan Chern (陳秋蘭教授) of the Department of English at National Taiwan Normal University, Prof. Liang-Tsu Hsieh (謝良足 教授) of the Department of Applied Foreign Languages at National Pingtung Institute of Commerce, Prof. Fu-Hsing Su (蘇復興教授) of the Department of Foreign Languages at National Chiayi University, Prof. Mei-Mei Chang (張美 美 教 授 ) of the Department of Modern Languages at National Pingtung University of Science and Technology, Prof. Yueh-Miao Chen (陳月妙教授) of the Department of Foreign Languages and Literature at National Chung Cheng University. I am very grateful to the three reviewers who read and commented on each chapter of the book during the summer vacation. Their comments have been helpful in improving the final product. I would like to thank all my colleagues in the Department of English at NKFUST who have contributed to the creation of a warm and supportive working environment which has made the writing of this book possible. In particular, I owe a debt of gratitude to Dr. Robert Good, who read every page and provided insightful feedback. I am truly grateful for his constant support and encouragement. I also thank my research assistants, You-Lian Huang (黃 有廉) and Hui-Tzu Hsu (許惠慈),for their help with various kinds of work involved in the research projects. I would especially like to acknowledge the contribution of my writing class students during the two semesters of the 2003-2004 academic year listed in alphabetical order: Charlene Chao, Erin Chen, Ginny Chen, Amanda Cheng, Sophia Cheng, Natalie Fang, Grace Huang, Janice Huang, Eric Kao, Molina Lai, Elyse Lee, Zoe Lee, Sara Pai, Kelly Sheng, Amy Wang, and Sarah Yu. Their learning effort and determination to improve their English writing ability have provided not only the motivation for writing this book, but also the examples and valuable experiences that they used to accomplish the tasks involved. Finally, I would like to thank Paul Yang (楊乾隆),the vice president of Crane Publishing Co., Ltd., for accepting my manuscript, inviting well-known scholars to review the manuscript, filing an application to the Humanities xi AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING Research Center for funding the publication, and seeing the project through to completion. I also want to thank Hui-Ling Chen (陳慧玲) of the Publishing Department at Crane for expertly putting my manuscript into final form, and I am very grateful for her assistance and careful attention to detail. xii Introduction Writing is among the most important skills that students learning English as a second language (ESL) or a foreign language (EFL) should develop, and the ability to teach writing is central to the expertise of a well-trained language teacher. Interest in ESL/EFL writing and approaches to teaching it began in the late 1960s and early 1970s in the USA and the UK as there was a growing concern about the increasing numbers of international students coming to tertiary-level academic institutions and an increasing awareness of domestic ESL students who performed poorly in the public educational systems.1 For much of the 1970s and 1980s, theorizing on the nature of writing in ESL/EFL contexts followed closely on English L1 views of writing (Flower & Hayes, 1980, 1981; Graves, 1984; North, 1987) and theories of the L1 writing process (Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987). In the 1990s, research in ESL/EFL writing evolved mainly from the fields of English for Specific Purposes (ESP), contrastive rhetoric, written discourse analysis, functional language use, and English for Academic Purposes (EAP) in USA settings. Major independent contributions from ESL/EFL settings included the attention to language in writing production, the nature of organizational structuring in writing, and the influence of cross-cultural variation on writing (Connor, 1996, 1997; Leki, 1991, 1995, 1997; Leki & Carson, 1994, 1997; Johns, 1997; Matsuda, 1998; Sasaki & Hirose, 1996; Silva, 1990, 1993, 1997; Silva, Leki, & Carson, 1997). In terms of how writing was viewed within the ESL/EFL curriculum from the 1940s until the 1990s, the history of ESL/EFL writing instruction can be seen as a succession of the product-, process-, and genre-oriented approaches. The product-oriented approach began from the early 20th century into the 1960s with its emphasis on paragraph models, grammar and usage rules, vocabulary development, and then focused largely on the logical construction and arrangement of discourse forms. Since the early 1980s, a shift from a focus 1 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING on finished product to process in writing instruction has provided insight into the behaviors, strategies, and difficulties of writers, and has made the writing process become the central focus in both English L1 and L2 writing. This process-oriented approach, especially its cognitive views of writing as a multi-step process, has had considerable influence on modern ESL/EFL classrooms. Nevertheless, this approach began to receive criticism in the 1990s for treating writing as an abstract, internal, and largely asocial process. As a reaction to this writer-centered composition pedagogy, proponents of the genre-oriented approach, however, began in the late 1980s to promote writing to be purposeful, socially situated responses to particular contexts and communities. They argued that the process-oriented approach overemphasizes the individual’s psychological functioning and downplays the academic discourse genres that are important for learners to successfully deal with the writing tasks in school.2 The pedagogical approaches discussed above represent different conceptions of the nature of writing and tend to emphasize specific elements of writing, but they are by no means mutually exclusive, and teachers rarely focus exclusively on one approach. As Hyland (2003b) points out, “few teachers adopt and strictly follow just one of these approaches in their classrooms; instead, they tend to adopt an eclectic range of methods that represent several perspectives…” (p. 2). These diverse perspectives can actually provide teachers with curriculum options, or complementary alternatives for designing courses that have implications for teaching and learning. By integrating and extending the insights of the major pedagogical approaches, teachers will have an effective methodology for helping students understand that “writing is a sociocognitive activity which involves skills in planning and drafting as well as knowledge of language, contexts, and audiences” (Hyland, 2003b, p. 23). Students will benefit from having clear guidelines for how to construct the different kinds of texts they have to write. In addition, since the existing body of empirical research on the nature of ESL/EFL writing is fairly substantial and growing rapidly, there is a need to investigate the relative efficacy of different approaches when applied in the classroom (Grabe, 2001; Kroll, 2003).3 2 Introduction The purpose of this book is to propose an approach to EFL writing instruction that incorporates the relative merits of the product-, process-, and genre-oriented approaches, and to investigate the effects of exposure to this integrated approach on Taiwanese university students’ writing skills. Specifically, the present study records a longitudinal study of technological university juniors learning to write in English, with the goal of finding out their processes of writing, their strategies for composing various types of academic essays, their problems with lexical and syntactic features of a text, their construction and arrangement of discourse-level text structures, their developing control of academic or school-based genres, their attitudes toward this integrated approach to EFL writing instruction, and the effects of exposure to this approach on their writing skills. Organization of this Book This book contains an up-to-date overview of the theoretical issues and research findings related to ESL/EFL composition instruction (Chapters 1-2). The majority of the book, however, is devoted to providing specific, concrete, and practical information about a qualitative longitudinal study in one junior EFL writing class at a small-size technological university in southern Taiwan. In addition to this introductory chapter, each of the eight main chapters is divided into several sections. ■ Chapter 1, “Developments in English L1 Composition,” gives an overview of how English L1 writing instruction and research have evolved. Historical accounts of L1 writing theory and practice clearly indicate that approaches to ESL/EFL composition reflect parallel (although by no means simultaneous) developments in L1 composition and rhetoric. Research in L1 composition and rhetoric has provided sound theoretical underpinnings for ESL/EFL composing pedagogy. It was not until the 1980s that ESL writing instruction began to emerge as a separate discipline (Ferris & Hedgcock, 2005, p. 3). 3 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING ■ Chapter 2, “Approaches to ESL/EFL Writing Instruction,” examines the influential roles the three main approaches have played in shaping theory development and praxis in ESL/EFL writing. It explores how different conceptions of writing and learning influence teaching practices in ESL/EFL classrooms; investigates empirical studies of major issues related to the effectiveness of product-, process-, and genre-based frameworks for ESL/EFL writing instruction. ■ Chapter 3, “Teaching EFL Writing in Taiwan,” follows the recent changes in Taiwan’s English language instruction policies and describes English writing instruction at secondary and postsecondary levels. To investigate the effectiveness of integrating the product-, process-, and genre-oriented approaches in the teaching of writing in an EFL classroom, this chapter sets up a classroom study by formulating research questions and introducing the setting where the study took place and the students who participated in the study. ■ Chapter 4, “Teacher-Initiated Research,” portrays the teacher as a researcher who wished to make informed classroom choices based on an awareness of current perspectives on ESL/EFL composition. The focus of this classroom-based research was on the integration of the product-, process-, and genre-oriented approaches in EFL writing instruction, and then on the effects of exposure to this integrated approach on students’ writing skills. Multiple data types were obtained to address the research questions and qualitative research methods were proposed for data analysis. ■ Chapter 5, “Processes and Strategies in EFL Writing,” focuses exclusively on the research question regarding what processes and strategies the novice student writers used when they composed various types of academic essays. Written reports were analyzed to explore how the students obtained ideas, planned, drafted, revised and edited; how they made use of peer responses and teacher-student conferences to revise; and what problems they encountered while writing. The relationship between the topics the students wrote about, the genres they learned to use, and the strategies they adopted was also examined. 4 Introduction ■ Chapter 6, “Text Structures and Grammatical Errors,” addresses the research questions concerning the structural features of academic writing and the inclusion of grammar instruction in the writing class. Text-structure logs were used to identify the problems the students had when they tried to develop an effective essay through the creation of a thesis statement, topic sentences, supporting sentences, and a conclusion. Error logs were used to analyze the types of errors and the number of each error type. The analysis of these error logs was used to address the issue regarding what grammatical features should be chosen to include in the integrated approach to EFL writing instruction. ■ Chapter 7, “Learning to Use the School-Based Genres,” identifies the factors that influence the teaching and learning of a range of academic or school-based genres such as the information report, narrative, explanation, exposition, and procedure. Five versions of Questionnaire A were used to elicit responses from the students about their views on the genre instruction they received. The main focus of data analysis was their familiarity with the genres, their thoughts on the effectiveness of teacher modeling and analysis of the genres, their difficulties in using the genres, their opinions about the benefits of learning to write the genres, their suggestions for teaching the genres, and their confidence in being able to use the genres again in the future. ■ Chapter 8, “Evaluating the Integrated Approach to Writing Instruction,” aims to assess what attitudes the students had toward the integrated approach and to explore how the students evaluated the effects of the integrated approach on their writing skills. The data were gathered through two types of questionnaires and interviews. Results confirmed the success of integrating the product-, process-, and genre-oriented approaches in the teaching of EFL composition. The final section of this chapter concludes by summarizing the major findings of the study. 5 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING NOTES 1 In terms of the contexts of English use and the purposes for learning English, learners of English are commonly divided into English as a Second Language (ESL) learners and English as a Foreign Language (EFL) learners. This book will use ESL/EFL in the background discussion and EFL in the application of the integrated approach to teaching writing in Taiwan. 2 Although researchers often use the singular form of each pedagogical approach, it should be noted that there is no single set of practices that can be called the product-oriented approach, the process-oriented approach, or the genre-oriented approach. When teaching composition in English L1/L2 classrooms, teachers tend to interpret and adapt aspects of each pedagogical approach to suit their beliefs, teaching styles, classroom contexts, and students. Accordingly, each “approach” might be more accurately called “approaches.” 3 Empirical research on ESL/EFL writing has grown considerably over the past 15 years; however, research on the comparison of the effectiveness of different pedagogical approaches has been hard to find. 6 CHAPTER 1 Developments in English L1 Composition This chapter will… review trends in L1 composition instruction and research; trace the product-oriented instructional traditions in L1 rhetoric and composition; discuss the effects the process movement has had on L1 and L2 composition pedagogy and research; explain why genre pedagogies have emerged in L2 writing classes since the late 1980s; explore how research on writing in L1 contexts has changed writing instruction from elementary to post-university professional contexts. 1 Developments in English L1 Composition TRENDS IN L1 WRITING INSTRUCTION AND RESEARCH Developments in English L1 composition have had a profound impact on developments in ESL composition ever since about 1945—the beginning of the modern era of L2 teaching in the USA. Interest in ESL/EFL writing and approaches to teaching it heightened in the late 1960s and early 1970s in the USA and the UK as more and more international students came to tertiary-level academic institutions. At the same time it was seen that domestic ESL students were not performing well in the public educational systems. The emphasis on the teaching of composition in English L1 and L2 classrooms during this period of time can be pinpointed as “most professional articles appearing prior to 1980 centered on techniques for teaching writing rather than on the nature of writing in various contexts” (Grabe & Kaplan, 1996, p. 27). More recently, researchers studying ESL/EFL writing have re-examined and adapted many of the early research projects and instructional practices first investigated with English L1 students. Three major approaches have been developed for the teaching of writing to native speakers of English in the USA since the early 20th century. The product-oriented approach that featured the reading and analysis of literature was widely adopted for composition instruction in US secondary and postsecondary schools from the early 20th century into the 1960s. This instructional tradition in L1 rhetoric and composition emphasized the understanding and interpretation of literary texts and the use of rhetorical forms. Little attention was given to the strategies and other cognitive operations involved in writing a coherent, meaningful piece of connected discourse. A major paradigm shift in pedagogical focus took place from the 1960s into the 1980s. The focus of discourse form shifted to the focus on the individual writer and the cognitive processes used in the act of writing. This new process-oriented approach focused particular attention on procedures for solving problems, discovering ideas, expressing them in writing, and revising emergent texts. These procedures, however, were actually done without 9 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING reference to any cultural, educational, or sociopolitical contexts in which the writing might take place. Some researchers commented that process-oriented pedagogies represented text construction as a solitary, asocial, and decontextualized activity (Atkinson, 2003b; Canagarajah, 2002; Casanave, 2003; Hyland, 2003a). Since the late 1980s, much of the theoretical interest has shifted to a contextual approach, to analyses of the situations in which writing takes place. In these theories, the writer is viewed as a social being, and texts are viewed as genre exemplars: purposeful, situated, and repeated social responses. This genre-oriented approach allows teachers to treat writing as an attempt to communicate with readers, and to understand the ways that language patterns are used to write coherent, purposeful prose. In order to better understand the place of English L1 writing research in ESL/EFL writing research, there is a need to trace the product-oriented instructional traditions in L1 rhetoric and composition, review the influence of the process movement on L1 composition pedagogy and research, discuss the criticisms process-oriented pedagogies have received, understand the background of the emergence of genre pedagogies in ESL/EFL writing classrooms, and consider the strands of L1 writing research in the 20th century. PRODUCT-ORIENTED PEDAGOGIES IN L1 COMPOSITION In terms of US composition instruction from the early 20th century into the 1960s, the principles that secondary and postsecondary schools followed were rooted largely in an educational philosophy that featured the reading and analysis of literature. In this tradition, students read novels, short stories, plays, essays, and poetry, and then analyzed these works in written compositions. Their understanding and interpretation of canonical literary texts were the central concern of pedagogical practice. Consequently, little instructional time remained for teachers to guide students to plan, draft, share, or revise written products (Babin & Harrison, 1999; Berlin, 1984, 1987; Ferris & Hedgcock, 2005; Grabe & Kaplan, 1996; Graves, 1999; Kroll, 2001; Matsuda, 2003). Besides learning to read and critique literary works, students had to master a 10 1 Developments in English L1 Composition range of school-based written genres (e.g., narration, exposition, explanation) that embedded functions such as description, illustration, process analysis, and comparison and contrast. To enable students to achieve this mastery, many 20th century textbooks followed what was then a conventional model of instruction. Initially, the teacher introduced and defined a rhetorical pattern or mode (e.g., comparison and contrast) in terms of rigidly established rules or formulas. Students then read a work of literature, which they discussed and analyzed in class. Next, the teacher assigned a composing task based on the literary text, referring back to the rhetorical description introduced earlier. This sequence often was accompanied by a linear outline or template for students to follow in constructing their essays. In the final phase of the instructional sequence, the teacher evaluated the students’ assignments before initiating a similar cycle based on a new literary text. Some researchers referred to the above model of composition instruction as the “traditional paradigm” (Berlin, 1987; Bloom, Daiker, & White, 1997; Clark, 2003a, 2003b, 2003c), while others labeled it the “product approach” as it focused on the production of a written text without reference to the process engaged in to produce it (Kroll, 2001). In an extension of this model, known as “current-traditional rhetoric,” popular in US composition studies in the 1950s and 1960s, students were also instructed to generate connected discourse by combining and arranging sentences into paragraphs based on prescribed formulas (Berlin & Inkster, 1980; Grabe & Kaplan, 1996; Silva, 1990; Young, 1978).1 Representative composing tasks involved the imitation of specific rhetorical patterns (e.g., exposition, exemplification, comparison, classification, argumentation, and so forth) based on authentic samples and sometimes student-generated models (Barnett, 2002). It is important to note that neither the traditional nor so-called current-traditional model of composition instruction was grounded in a theory of education or cognitive development. These instructional models simply “reflected a perspective in which school-based essays were viewed as static representations of students’ learning and content knowledge” (Ferris & Hedgcock, 2005, p. 5). Accordingly, 11 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING in product-oriented writing classrooms, the writing processes and strategies used as students wrote never became a matter of great concern. THE PROCESS MOVEMENT The writing process approach is a way of looking at writing instruction in which the emphasis is shifted from students’ finished products to what students think and do as they write. The incorporation of the process-oriented approach into writing instruction, beginning from the late 1960s, seemed to have been motivated by dissatisfaction with the traditional and current-traditional paradigms. Proponents like James Britton (1975 et al.) and Janet Emig (1971) considered the product-oriented approach to be discouraging in terms of creative thinking and writing. They were two of the first researchers to examine students’ writing processes. The process-oriented approach emphasized the individual writer as a creator of original ideas. By encoding these ideas, one used written discourse as a vehicle for exploring oneself, conveyed one’s thoughts, and claimed one’s individual voice, or authorial persona, as a writer. Faigley (1986) identified those researchers who advocated the process movement as expressivists or cognitivists. Expressivists like Donald Murray, Ken Macrorie, William Coles, Peter Elbow, and others viewed composing as “a creative act in which the process—the discovery of the true self—is as important as the product” (Berlin, 1988, p. 484). They believed that writing instruction should be nondirective and personalized, so classroom activities were designed to encourage self-discovery, the emergence of personal voice, and empowerment of the individual’s inner writer. Elbow (1981), for example, considered journal writing and personal essays to be tasks in which students could “write freely and uncritically” to “get down as many words as possible” (p. 7). For expressivists, writing fluency and power over the writing act, as enthusiastically promoted by Elbow (1981, 1999), were the chief tools for achieving writing proficiency (Hillocks, 1995; Hirvela & Belcher, 2001; Ivanic, 1998; Sharples, 1999; Soven, 1999; Zamel, 1976, 1982, 1983). 12 1 Developments in English L1 Composition In contrast to expressivism, cognitivism, sometimes described as a “writing as problem solving” approach, has had more significant impact on theory construction in L2 writing pedagogy. At the same time, some cognitivist approaches share with expressivism an explicit appreciation of novice writers’ composing processes as recursive, personal, and “inner directed” (Bizzell, 1992). Nevertheless, cognitivists placed considerably greater value than did expressivists on high-order thinking and problem-solving operations. These operations included planning, defining rhetorical problems, positioning problems in a larger context, elaborating definitions, proposing solutions, and generating grounded conclusions (Emig, 1983; Flower, 1985, 1989; Hayes & Flower, 1983). Typical features of cognitivist approaches to teaching writing as process include invention and prewriting tasks, drafting of multiple versions of writing assignments, text-level revision, collaborative writing, feedback sessions, and the postponement of editing until the final stages of the composing cycle (Atkinson, 2003b; Clark, 2003a; Murray, 1992). Cognitivists thus were interested in producing good writers who “not only have a large repertoire of powerful strategies, but they have sufficient self-awareness of their own process to draw on these alternative techniques as they need them” (Flower, 1985, p. 370). In other words, good writers should develop cognitive and metacognitive strategies2 for creating, revising, and correcting their texts independently (Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987; Berlin, 1988; de Larios, Murphy, & Marin, 2002; Flower, 1989; Ransdell & Barbier, 2002a, 2002b). From a cognitivist, process-based perspective, writing is “essentially learnt, not taught, and the teacher’s role is to be nondirective and facilitating, assisting writers to express their own meanings through an encouraging and cooperative environment with minimal interference” (Hyland, 2003a, p. 18). Problems Confronting L1 and L2 Writing after the Process Movement Although the singular form “the process approach” is frequently adopted 13 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING throughout the book to represent one of the approaches to the teaching of composition in English L1 and L2 classrooms, it should be emphasized that the process movement does not merely entail a singular, homogeneous method of instruction. Adherents of the process movement may interpret and adapt aspects of process models, hybridizing principles and practices that suit their beliefs, teaching styles, classroom contexts, and students (Blanton, et al., 2002). Nevertheless, most implementations of process-based pedagogies share a number of fundamental, recursive practices such as prewriting, peer and teacher feedback, and revision (Cumming, 2003). Like many popular and influential educational trends, process-oriented approaches (expressivists and cognitivists alike) have been challenged on ideological, social, cultural, ethical, theoretical, empirical, and pedagogical grounds. Writing researchers and practitioners have singled out the problems discussed below as shortcomings of current process-oriented conceptualizations. One serious shortcoming is the role of the writer in process paradigms. The writer is viewed as originator of written text, and the process through which the writer goes to create and produce discourse is the most important component in process pedagogies. The role of the writer as creator is open to the criticism that process paradigms represent text construction as a solitary, asocial, and decontextualized activity. Because process models assume that written production emanates from within the individual, they tend to “disempower teachers and cast them in the role of well-meaning bystanders” (Hyland, 2003a, p. 19). In addition to minimizing teacher authority in composition instruction (Bizzell, 1992; Cope & Kalantzis, 1993), the deductive, discovery-based nature of process-oriented practice typically avoids revealing learning aims in advance (Feez, 2002; Hasan, 1996). Process pedagogies place strong emphasis on idea generation, self-discovery, and problem-solving. This shift in composition orientation from product to process may be seen as implying that written products are not important. This implication may pose a serious problem to minority and non-native-speaker (NNS) writers who have not been socialized into adopting, let alone embracing, the nondirective, discovery-based precepts and practices 14 1 Developments in English L1 Composition of process writing. In fact, many process approaches “draw heavily on inaccessible cultural knowledge” (Hyland, 2003a, p. 21), which well-intentioned teachers may falsely assume all students have available to them. Indeed, prototypical components of process-based instruction (e.g., personal writing, multiple drafting, extensive revision, minimal form-focused feedback) can be very hard for NNS writers to understand, particularly those in EFL and multilingual contexts in which prevailing educational traditions do not support such practices (Halliday, 1994). Process methods often postpone feedback on form and expression to the end of the drafting and revising process so that student writers can learn to freely express themselves unencumbered by thoughts of “correctness.” This is particularly true in the expressivist orientation, which urges teachers to provide considerable opportunities for writing, encourage creativity, and respond to the ideas that learners produce, rather than dwell on formal errors (e.g., Murray, 1985). Unfortunately, many teachers felt that such a hands-off facilitative approach cast them in the role of well-meaning bystanders with little to say about the ways texts are conventionally structured and used. They found it was unreasonable to expect that their students were familiar with key genres, as in fact, L2 writers often had an incomplete control of English and relied heavily on teachers to help them develop the linguistic resources they needed to express themselves effectively (Cope & Kalantzis, 1993; Hasan, 1996). Just as the promotion of voice in L1 composition pedagogy has come into question (Bowden, 1999, 2003), L2 experts have challenged the appropriateness of this abstract metaphor in ESL/EFL writing instruction (Atkinson, 2000; Belcher & Hirvela, 2001; Ramanathan & Atkinson, 1999; Ramanathan & Kaplan, 1996). Development of one’s voice is undeniably a vital component of writing proficiency. Stapleton (2003), for example, acknowledged that voice “should be brought into the mainstream of L2 writing pedagogy either via consciousness raising or through the specific teaching of certain features” (p. 187). However, he offered a strong caution regarding voicist pedagogies, warning that overplaying the voice metaphor “sends the message to teachers that voice is critically important, and this message, if 15 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING passed down to students, may result in learners who are more concerned with identity than ideas” (p. 187). Psycholinguistic and cognitive theories dominated language teaching in the 1970s and 1980s, and writing teachers were encouraged to focus on general principles of thinking and composing. Writing was seen as a skill that was essentially learned, not taught, and the teacher’s role was to be non-directive, facilitating writing in a supportive and cooperative environment with minimal interference. Unlike product approaches to writing, this process-oriented writing instruction has served to instill greater respect for individual writers and for the writing process itself. Hyland (2004), however, argues that process pedagogies actually have “little to say about the ways meanings are socially negotiated,” and therefore they “failed to consider the forces outside the individual that help guide purposes, establish relationships, and ultimately shape writing” (p. 7). GENRE AS A RESPONSE TO PROCESS METHODS In opposition to the proponents of process approaches who focused exclusively on the writer, cognitivists, responsible for laying some of the groundwork for constructing a post-process framework,3 argued that writing is an inherently social, transactional process that involves mediation between the writer and his or her audience (Bazerman, 1988; Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987; Cope & Kalantzis, 1993; Flower, 1994; Gee, 1996, 1998). As a transactional activity, writing represents a process that the writer must take the reader’s background knowledge, needs, interests, and ideologies into consideration. By understanding their readers and by anticipating reader expectations, writers shape their texts so that they meet these expectations effectively (Hinds, 1987; Hyland, 2000, 2003a; Johns, 1997, 2003). According to this social constructionist view, the audience or target discourse community largely determines knowledge, language, and the nature of both spoken and written discourse (Bruffee, 1986; Coe, 1987; Cope & Kalantzis, 2000; Prior, 2001). 16 1 Developments in English L1 Composition This pedagogical approach is founded on the social constructionist premise that NS and NNS writers need to be apprenticed into one or more academic discourse communities, and that writing instruction consequently should prepare students to anticipate, satisfy, and even challenge the demands of academic readers (i.e., their instructors and other authorities) as they generate their written products (Flower, 1979; Flower, Long, & Higgins, 2000; Hinds, 1987; Hyland, 2002a; Johns, 1990; Pennycook, 2001). To adopt a reader-centered pedagogy emphasizing discipline-specific rhetorical forms, teachers need to collect texts and assignments from the relevant disciplines, analyze their purposes, assess audience expectations, and acquaint learners with their findings. According to this view, writing instruction most appropriately centers on identifying, practicing, and reproducing the implicit and explicit features of written texts aimed at particular audiences. Genre approaches to writing instruction seek to address the needs of writers to compose texts for particular readers and draw the teacher into considering how texts actually work as communication. Genre is a term for grouping texts together, representing how writers use language to respond to recurring situations. The concept of genre enables teachers to identify the kinds of texts that students will have to write in their target occupational, academic, or social contexts and to organize their courses to meet these needs. Genre adherents argue that people do not just write, they write something to achieve some purpose: writing is a way of getting things done. They believe that people follow certain social conventions for organizing messages, and these conventions can be described and taught. Hyland (2004), for example, supports the application of genre in writing classes because genre can serve to “pull together language, content, and contexts, offering teachers a means of presenting students with explicit and systematic explanations of the ways writing works to communicate” effectively (p. 6). Genre pedagogies have emerged as a response to process pedagogies since the late 1980s. Classroom applications of genre represent a “corrective reaction to the individualistic, discovery-oriented approaches to writing that characterized learner-centered classrooms until recently” (Hyland, 2004, p. 7). 17 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING WRITING RESEARCH IN L1 CONTEXTS Grabe and Kaplan (1996) have identified four distinct but interacting areas of research on writing in English L1 contexts. The first of these research strands is the study of literacy development, particularly at the early stages. The issues that interest researchers in this area include the socio-educational contexts for learning to write, the need to express meaning in writing, the need for students to view writing as a purposeful activity, and the various stages of learning through which young writers are nurtured. Much of this research has centered on case studies of individual children, learning experience approaches (LEA), and whole-language approaches (Calkins, 1986; Dyson, 1989, 1993; Graves, 1983, 1984). Many of the practical approaches are also in line with Vygotskean perspectives on literacy development (Moll, 1990; Tharp & Gallimore, 1988; Vygotsky, 1983; Wertsch, 1985, 1991). In addition, current research in Australia addresses the role of language form and genre knowledge as critical aspects of learning to write from early grades (Christie, 1992; Cope & Kalantzis, 1993). A second strand of research concentrates on the cognitive aspects of writing. Much of the research is empirical in nature. While earlier cognitive research on writing principally studied the written products and used experimental research on text recall (Britton & Black, 1985; van Dijk & Kintsch, 1983), more recent research on cognitive processes have included studies of the actual process of writing on-task (that is, as it is occurring in real time), as well as protocol analyses, and task intervention (e.g., Bereiter & Scardamalia, 1987; Flower, 1994; Flower, et al., 1990; Hillocks, 1986; Kellogg, 1994; Smagorinsky, 1994). Other approaches like retrospective case studies and observational research are used to examine qualitatively the nature of the composing processes and their development. Important results from this strand of research include the findings that writers constantly shift among pre-writing, writing, and revising tasks. That is, writing is not a linear process; instead, it 18 1 Developments in English L1 Composition involves the complex combination of content information, rhetorical demands, and reader interpretation. Good writers and poor writers also appear to make use of processing skills in different ways (see Chapter 2, Writing Process Research, for further discussion). A third strand of research explores how texts are constructed and organized in ways which allow appropriate reader interpretation. Central topics for this research field are the study of contributing lexico-grammatical structures, cohesion, coherence, inferences-making processes, and text modeling (Coulthard, 1994; Halliday & Hasan, 1989; Hoey, 1991; Mann & Thompson, 1992; Singer, 1990; van Dijk & Kintsch, 1983). Some studies of these topics are quantitative involving the counting of surface features, propositional units, or inference chains together with appropriate statistical analyses of the resulting data (Beck et al., 1991; Cox et al., 1990, 1991; Speigel & Fitzgerald, 1991). Others are qualitative analyzing the coherence of texts, that is, macro-structures (or text themes), logical relations among clauses and text units, and information structuring in texts (Singer, 1990; vande Kopple, 1986, 1990). All three subsets of coherence notions have proved important for research on writing as well as for writing instruction. The fourth strand of research on writing examines variation in writing skill or writing interpretation as a function of writing purpose, topic, genre, audience, intertextuality, and the social construction of writing, as well as the larger sociopolitical, historical, and educational contexts. This rhetorical study of writing focuses on both classical and nineteenth-twentieth-century rhetorical history, rhetorical criticism of (literary) texts, and social and political contexts of intertextuality (Corbett, 1971; Horner, 1983; North, 1987). The revival of rhetoric4 in the 1970s and 1980s in US universities has led to a much greater influence of rhetoric on composition studies and, in general, on the teaching of composition in educational institutions, particularly at secondary and tertiary levels. Perhaps the most enduring influence of the modern rhetorical revival will be the increasing emphasis on discourse communities and the role of social construction in writing, both of which are having a significant impact on theories of writing and writing instruction, particularly in academic and professional contexts. Writing instruction across 19 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING the curriculum and content-based writing instruction have also been influenced by these rhetorical developments. The four strands of L1 writing research have greatly changed writing instruction at almost all levels—from elementary to post-university professional contexts. The ongoing research on writing in all four research strands has continued to better the quality of writing instruction. These research strands have also had a strong impact on writing assessment and evaluation, though the demands of testing theory and the institutional requirements for grading impose conservative constraints on changes in assessment. A new area in writing research which also stands to benefit from research is computer-assisted writing instruction, with computers being used both as a research tool and as an instructional resource (Bangert-Drowns, 1993; Cochran-Smith, 1991; Pennington, 1993; Snyder, 1993). This particular field will make significant contributions when it learns to use the capacities of the computer in innovative ways beyond current conceptions of its utility for writing (Bruce, Peyton, & Bateson, 1993; Bruce & Rubin, 1993; Selfe & Hilligoss, 1994; Tuman, 1992). SUMMARY Three major approaches have been developed for the teaching of writing to native speakers of English in the USA. The product-oriented approach was widely used in US secondary and postsecondary schools from the early 20th century into the 1960s. This approach focuses on the products of writing by examining texts in various ways, either through their formal surface elements or their discourse structure. The 1960s, 1970s, and 1980s witnessed the considerable influence of the process movement on L1 composition pedagogy and research. This process-oriented approach focuses on the writer and describes writing in terms of the processes used to create texts. Reader- and discourse-based frameworks for writing instruction emerged in the late 1980s. This genre-oriented approach emphasizes the role that readers play in writing, adding a social dimension to writing research by elaborating how writers 20 1 Developments in English L1 Composition engage with an audience in creating coherent texts. Shifts in pedagogical approaches are due to perceived inadequacies in earlier approaches. Writing research in English L1 contexts has been conducted along four distinct but interacting dimensions. The four strands of research involve the study of literacy development, the cognitive study of writing, the study of text construction, and the rhetorical study of writing. All four research strands have greatly changed writing instruction from elementary to post-university professional contexts. The ongoing research on writing in these areas of research has continued to improve the quality of writing instruction. Based on presumed and observed similarities between L1 and L2 composing processes5, ESL/EFL writing instruction in the early 1980s largely replicated L1 classroom practice. The three pedagogical approaches, which were based on differing conceptions of writing, tend to emphasize different aspects of writing. They have had a significant impact on the teaching of composition in ESL/EFL classrooms. The emphasis in ESL/EFL writing research has also closely followed L1 writing research. Findings gained from research in L1 composition and rhetoric have provided a solid foundation for ESL/EFL writing pedagogy. 21 AN INTEGRATED APPROACH TO TEACHING EFL WRITING NOTES 1 In his characterization of the current-traditional paradigm, Richard Young (1978) included such features as “the emphasis on the composed product rather than the composing process; the analysis of discourse into words, sentences, and paragraphs; the classification of discourse into description, narration, exposition, and argument; the strong concern with the preoccupation with the informal essay and the research paper; and so on” (p. 31). 2 Strategies are specific actions and procedures learners take to help themselves learn a language better and use the language more effectively. To clarify the concept of strategy use, several researchers have proposed a distinction between cognitive strategies and metacognitive strategies. Oxford (1990) defines metacognitive strategies as actions going beyond cognitive devices and providing a way for learners to coordinate their learning process, namely, strategies learners use to plan, monitor, and evaluate their own learning process. O’Malley and Chamot (1990) consider metacognitive strategies as planning, selective attention, monitoring, and evaluation. Wenden (1998) identifies metacognitive strategies as general skills through which learners manage, direct, regulate, and guide their learning, i.e., planning, monitoring, and evaluating. Cohen and Dörnyei (2002) treat metacognitive strategies as those processes which learners consciously use in order to supervise or manage their language learning. Such strategies allow learners to control their own cognition by planning what they will do, checking how it is going, and then evaluating how it went. 3 As teaching practice and beliefs about process have evolved away from the process movement’s expressivist and cognitivist core, L1 rhetoricians (Clark, 2003a; Glenn, Goldthwaite, & Connors, 2003; Gottschalk & Hjortshoj, 22 1 Developments in English L1 Composition 2004; Kent, 1999; Tobin, 1994; Trimbur, 1994) and L2 writing specialists (Atkinson, 2003a, 2003b) have tried to characterize what they term the “post-process” era. Post-process scholarship aims, among other things, to expose the shortcomings of current process-oriented conceptualizations, “highlight the rich-multifocal nature of the field,” and “go beyond now-traditional views of L2 writing research and teaching” (Atkinson, 2003b, p. 12). 4 Rhetorical research traces its origins back to the five canons of Aristotle: invention, arrangement, style, memory, and delivery (Corbett, 1971; Horner, 1983). Modern rhetorical research, after a long history of declines and emergences, comprises three branches of inquiry: historical, philosophical, and critical/hermeneutic research (North, 1987). Grabe and Kaplan (1996) explain that “this tripartite scheme provides a useful way to encompass rhetorical inquiry” (p. 20). 5 My use of “composing processes” here does not imply that the process-oriented approach was the first to make it into L2 classrooms. They simply mean a series of steps writers use to compose their academic essay. 23