William Tennent High School Centennial School District Warminster, Pennsylvania A HANDBOOK F OR RESEARCH AND REPORT WRITING A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 1 Table of Contents INTRODUCTION Why Conduct Research-based Learning? Selecting a Topic Nuts and Bolts of the Big Six Establishing a Schedule 3 3 4 4,5 6 NOTE TAKING 7 FORMULATING AND SUPPORTING A THESIS Tips for Writing a Thesis Statement Thesis Checklist Starting Your Working Bibliography 8 9 9 9 SOURCES Primary Sources Secondary Sources 10 10 10 USING THE INTERNET FOR ACADEMIC RESEARCH Use of Databases Access PA Power Library Wikipedia Evaluating an Internet Resource 11 11 12 13,14 14 CITING SOURCES Academic Honesty: Avoiding Plagiarism Citing Sources in Your Paper Examples of Cited Sources Block Quotes 14 14,15 15 16-18 19 ORGANIZING YOUR PAPER The Outline A Sample Outline 19 19 20 PREPARING YOUR PAPER FOR SUBMISSION Title 21 21 Text of Paper Works Cited Works Consulted Formatting Works Cited or Works Consulted Citing Print Sources Citing Non-Print Sources World Wide Web Sites Online Periodical Subscriptoin Databases A SAMPLE W ORKS CITED PAGE A SAMPLE RESEARCH PAPER THE FORMAT OF A BUSINESS LETTER Page 2 21 22 22 22 23,24 24 25 25,26 27 27-33 34 William Tennent High School INTRODUCTION During your academic career at WTHS, some of your most interesting work will be research projects where you will have the opportunity to explore new frontiers and answer your most important questions. This handbook is designed to help you with these assignments. It outlines the research process you will follow and it describes the standard MLA format appropriate for English papers and reports. The examples included in this handbook serve as a guide for particular phases of the research process and various components of a formal paper. Research is most satisfying when used to answer “real world” questions. It requires skills and a proper attitude; curiosity, tenacity, organization, and patience will serve you well while you research. The contents of this handbook include suggestions for note-taking, accessing and evaluating websites, selecting relevant sources, using parenthetical citations, and compiling bibliographic information for your works cited and works consulted pages. People often rely in internet sources to research information and overlook other scholarly sources. The WTHS library houses many important reference collections, such as computer databases, books, and the periodicals collection (magazines, newspapers and journals) that will be useful to you in your work. A research assignment gives you an opportunity to engage in creative, independent work. Following clues to your subject, finding the information you need, and preparing your presentation can be an interesting and satisfying experience. Why conduct research-based learning? emphasizes learning activities that are long-term, interdisciplinary, student-centered, and integrated with real world issues and practices provides you with the opportunity to manage your own learning allows you to pursue your own interests and questions and make decisions about how you will find answers and solve problems helps make learning relevant and useful to you by establishing connections to life outside the classroom teaches skills highly desired by today's employers, including the ability to work well with others, make thoughtful decisions, take initiative, and solve complex problems allows your teacher to fill the varied roles of coach, facilitator, and co-learner actively involves you in the exploration of the content, issues, and questions surrounding a specific topic or concept emphasizes "how you come to know" and less on "what you know" is about seeking appropriate resolutions to questions and issues -- because often there is no “right” answer fosters a greater understanding of the world in which you live, learn, communicate, and work helps build self confidence, motivation to learn, and collaboration A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 3 SELECTING A TOPIC Make a firm decision on your topic after you have had an opportunity to do some research in the library. Check the library catalog, magazine databases, Internet search engines, and other appropriate major indexes. Is there too much material on your topic? Should you plan to focus on one aspect of it? Is there too little material available? Should you plan to expand your focus? Read at least one article in an encyclopedia or other source which will give you an overview of your proposed subject and help you determine the scope and focus of your research. The sub-headings in an encyclopedia article may suggest specific aspects of a subject to pursue. The cross-references lead you to related ideas which you might want to consider. The way an encyclopedia article is organized can also suggest ways to organize your own research. NUTS AND BOLTS OF THE BIG6 The Big6TM is the product of Mike Eisenberg and Bob Berkowitz. You can find their web site at http://Big6.com/ . The Big6TM skills provide a systematic approach to information problem-solving that relies upon critical thinking skills. The Big6TM skills can be used by librarians and teachers to help learners attain information literacy and provide a full understanding beyond merely being able to locate resources within a library. The Big6 involves: a systematic approach to information problem-solving six broad skill areas necessary for successful information problem-solving a complete library and information skill curriculum How is it different? Big6 skills link information problem-solving and critical thinking. Simply knowing that the World Book Encyclopedia exists involves a low-level of cognition. Incorporating knowledge and the use of this encyclopedia within an overall problem-solving strategy represents a higher level of cognitive learning. Traditional research skills focus on knowledge and understanding of specific sources (lower cognitive skills). Students need the ability to use critical thinking skills and manipulate information into a meaningful solution. The Big6 Strategies for Information Problem Solving 1. Task Definition In this step, the student determines exactly what the information problem is and the specific information related to the problem. Using a simple school assignment as an example, students would need to know which questions need to be answered, what kind of information is needed to answer these questions, when it is due, etc. Page 4 William Tennent High School 2. Information Seeking Strategies Once the problem is clearly articulated, attention turns to the range of possible information sources. Information Seeking Strategies involves making decisions and selecting sources appropriate to the defined task. Too many times students don't spend enough time thinking about these two steps. They leap right into step 3, Location and Access. This is becoming even more true as the Internet proliferates and students start surfing without the necessary forethought. 3. Location and Access This is where the information seeking strategy really begins. Once students have decided on the appropriate strategy, the strategy must be carried out. In the Big6 approach, getting to materials follows logically after deciding what it is you wish to find and where you might find it. 4. Use of Information Once students are able to locate and access a source, they must be able to read, view, listen or interact with the information and decide what is valuable for their particular situation. They must evaluate the source to determine if it is the best source for their needs. They must extract the information that they need using notes, copies, citations, etc. 5. Synthesis Synthesis is the restructuring or repackaging of information into new or different formats to meet the requirements of the task. Synthesis can be as simple as relaying a specific fact. Synthesis can be very complex, involving several sources, a variety of media or presentation formats, and the effective communication of abstract ideas. This is where the real learning takes place as new information is brought in and links are made to pre-existing knowledge within the learner's head. 6. Evaluation Evaluation determines how effectively and efficiently the information problem- solving process was conducted. The primary concerns of evaluation are these questions: Was the information problem solved? Was the information need met? Was the decision made? Was the situation resolved? Does the product satisfy the requirements as originally defined? Other considerations in evaluating the efficiency of the information solving process include the amount of time spent on useful activities and whether there was any miscalculation in the amount of time needed to complete the tasks. This "de-briefing" by the students, whether conducted mentally or formally in the classroom, will improve their overall ability to solve future information problems and is an important part of learning. It is always useful to have an evaluation checklist provided by the teacher so A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 5 that students will know what criteria will be used to grade their work and how long each major task should take. How can it be used? An effective way to implement the Big6 is to seek out opportunities within existing or planned classroom units and lessons that are directly related to the Big6 skills. The simplest question may turn into an opportunity to explore the Big6. Excerpted from http://www.kn.pacbell.com/wired/big6/overview.html GETTING STARTED ON RESEARCH Establishing a Schedule At the time you are assigned a written report, your teacher may give you a "Components of Report" form. The teacher may also give you the due dates for each component of your report. Enter the dates on the form so that you will know when each part of the assignment is to be checked or handed in. Knowing the due dates will help you organize your time as you progress through each part of the report. DateDue Approved Topic Ideas _____ _____ Topic Choice _____ _____ Working Bibliography _____ _____ Thesis Statement _____ _____ Preliminary Outline _____ _____ Note Cards _____ _____ Final Outline _____ _____ First Draft _____ _____ Final Draft _____ _____ Thesis Statement (Preliminary): __________________________________________________ Page 6 William Tennent High School NOTE TAKING Note taking is an essential part of the research writing process. There are several ways to approach this. You can read a selection and write a summary. You can photocopy pages of information and highlight what you need. However, these are not the most organized methods, since you may find yourself going back and forth to the same page of notes as you try to write on one topic at a time. The note card method promotes good organization. You may have several index cards for one source, but each card will hold only one topic. You can then bundle all cards on a particular topic together, thereby organizing your paper in the same way as your outline. Whether you use the note card method or the summary method these are the following things to consider avoiding unintentional plagiarism: Make sure direct quotations are copied accurately and placed in quotation marks to distinguish them from summaries and paraphrases. When paraphrasing, be careful not to use the exact wording of the author, take an idea out of context or word it in a way that that suits your own conclusion. Each note card must include the following: four pieces of information: the author’s last name, the page number, the topic and a code number to help cross reference the notes to the source, as opposed to writing the title of the book on every card. In note taking, attempt to write as little as possible. In other words, take down only the most important information. Use shorthand and abbreviations and phrases as much as possible. Read one section of material at a time to see what is important, then go back and take notes. As you take notes you will find that some information has been repeated, and some fits the purpose of your paper better than others. This is part of the narrowing and focusing of your topic. Finally, there will be times when you will jot down your own ideas based on your reading to incorporate in your paper. These note cards should be included with the rest of your content cards. A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 7 FORMULATING AND SUPPORTING A THESIS Many papers completed in school are reports. Information is gathered, organized, and presented in a paper. Advanced research requires you to formulate and support a thesis. A thesis is a statement of a position, for example: "The V-Chip in new televisions violates free speech.” Once you have stated your position, your research task is to find information and/or arguments to support it. In some cases the supporting material may be hard facts, but you may also find support in editorials or in the opinions of experts in the field. You will then organize these facts and opinions in your paper to prove your thesis’ validity. According to the Research 2: The Research Paper, 2006, published by the Center for Learning, a thesis is to a research paper what a topic is to a paragraph. It should capture in a sentence or two how your argument will develop. A thesis can be any one of the following: * an opinion “Hemingway was a master of economizing action and description.” * a statement indicating categories or reasons “In all likelihood, advances in technology will mean the first ‘foot’ to step on Mars will belong to a robot” * a statement showing two sides to a question, but emphasizing one “Shakespeare will always be one of the greatest dramatists, but he was a poor historian.” A thesis is not * neutral “Gun control is a controversial issue that has been debated for years.” * a fact or widely accepted observation “The sun is critical to the continuation of life on Earth.” * a question “Will the Amazon rainforest be preserved in our lifetime.” * a topic sentence announcing what your paper is about “The Vikings discovered North America.” * an emotional attack “No one with any brains could claim that hunting is a sport.” * vague “Blues music will always appeal to a certain kind of audience.” * too broad “History has shown in countless ways that dictators never succeed.” (see “Updating Your Topic and Focusing on Your Thesis” in Research 2: The Research Paper,2006, from the Center for Learning, 146). Page 8 William Tennent High School TIPS FOR WRITING A THESIS STATEMENT A good thesis tells readers both the subject of the paper and, more importantly, the author's plan to treat his or her subject. It also serves as a personal guide to the writer to help him or her to focus on that subject throughout the entire essay. The thesis is one or two sentences that contains two or three main elements: a limited subject plus a specific feeling or attitude toward that subject and possibly three aspects of that subject that the author will explore. This last portion usually establishes the organizational pattern of the body of the essay. THESIS CHECKLIST Make sure that the thesis focuses on a single, limited subject. Make sure that the thesis is stated in a clear, direct sentence. It may not be a question. Make sure that the thesis conveys the writer's point of view or attitude about the topic Make sure that there is enough good information to support the thesis statement Make sure that the thesis directs the writer to generate a paper that meets all of the requirements of the assignment. Remember that your thesis is not carved in stone. You are in charge. If necessary, you may revise it during the writing and research process. STARTING YOUR WORKING BIBLIOGRAPHY As you check the catalogs, databases, and other sources, fill out a bibliography slip for any book or article you find that might be useful in your research. The library has book and magazine slips which will simplify this task. It is very important that you record all the source information at this point. Your collection of slips becomes your "working bibliography," the sources you want to check as you do your research. If you do not find any helpful information in a particular book or magazine, you will include it on the Works Consulted page which accompanies your completed paper. A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 9 SOURCES When using sources in a research paper, you must be aware that a variety of materials are available to you. You MUST include a variety of sources; all of your sources CANNOT be from the Internet. There are two main types of sources that you may wish to include in your research. PRIMARY SOURCES: They are original documents with no interpretation, evaluation or analysis and reflect the individual viewpoint of a participant or observer, who reports actual events as they occurred. Primary sources are firsthand, “direct from the source” information. Some examples of primary sources may include: speeches interviews letters memoirs original documents (such as birth certificates) autobiographies artifacts photographs audio recordings surveys and census information data and statistics documentaries Primary materials also need to be carefully read and interpreted. These questions will assist you in determining whether the source is truly a primary source, rather than a secondary source. 1. 2. 3. Who created the source and for what original purpose? Did the creator have firsthand knowledge? What biases or hidden agendas did the creator have? Is the document meant to persuade or inform? Was the source originally meant to be private or public? When was the source created? Soon after the event, years later? 4. 5. Taken From: http://www.lib.washington.edu/subject/history/historyday/his.html SECONDARY SOURCES: Secondary sources interpret, evaluate or analyze a primary source and are at least one step removed from the event. They are not a firsthand account. Some examples of secondary sources may include: articles in magazines newspapers books critical essays Page 10 William Tennent High School textbooks dictionaries encyclopedias USING THE INTERNET FOR ACADEMIC RESEARCH You must remember that today, just about anyone can post a website on any subject. Your task is to find the BEST information. The huge numbers of sites found by your favorite search engine may be inadequate for your research: either they contain material completely unrelated to your topic or offer very little data that can be utilized in a research paper. You can often easily judge a site’s worth by the type or quantity of information offered, as well as the author or generator of the site. So, DO NOT believe everything you read on the Internet! In order to determine the accuracy or validity of an Internet source, you must consider the quality and type of information provided. What’s the difference between surfing the web and using a database? How does information get on the Web? Anyone can post anything on the Web. There is no agency that controls content or polices what happens on the World Wide Web. Any point of view is welcome; no one has to prove their expertise on a subject. How does information get onto a database? Information on a database comes from published reference books, scholarly journals, reputable newspapers, and evaluated websites. The companies that make databases are very concerned that their products be accurate, up-to-date, and free from bias so that schools and libraries will purchase their services for their students and patrons. Database companies acquire the best materials for their clients. How much does it cost to access information on the Web? Most information on the Web is FREE, once you have Internet service…until you get to a site for a newspaper or magazine and want to access an archived article. The publisher will ask you to pay for the individual article. Try going to www.nytimes.com for a sample. How much does it cost to access information on a database? A database is a PAID service that a school or library subscribes to, like subscribing to a magazine or newspaper or buying a book for the shelves. Databases contain 1000’s of articles from magazines and newspapers from around the world, as well as sets of reference books. Because the school or library has paid a fee to the database company, students or patrons can search all of the holdings at once—for FREE. A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 11 Why can’t my favorite search engine get to those articles? Even the best search engines only access a part of the FREE web and CANNOT access the same information that the paid databases can. Even though Google may bring back millions of hits, it does not return the QUALITY resources that a database does. Google hasn’t paid the subscription fee to enter the database. Every 24 hours, over 4 million new pages are added to the Web; The average life span of a Web page is 44 days; The Web is expected to double in size each year; 83% of Web sites contain commercial content; 6 % of websites are educational, scientific, or government sites; 70% of medical and health information is considered wrong or misleading; The best search tools can only index 40% of the Web. (The American Library Association -citing numerous studies) Search easier, better, faster!!! Access PA Power Library ACCESS PA POWER LIBRARY which includes EBSCOhost, the magazine database/index, can be accessed from home with your Bucks County Free Library card. Follow these steps to use EBSCOhost: Go to the Bucks County Library Network website: <http:/www.buckslib.org/>* Click on “ONLINE RESOURCES.” Click on “POWER Library.” Submit the barcode number on your library card. Click on “EBSCOhost Web Interface.” Choose the “MasterFILE Premier” database and click “continue.” Page 12 William Tennent High School *At this website you can also access the online catalog of the entire Bucks County Library system Why shouldn’t I use WIKIPEDIA as a source for my project? From http://en.wikipedia.org/ Is Wikipedia accurate and reliable? “Wikipedia is as reliable as the external sources we rely on. Properly written articles cite the sources, and a reader should rely on the Wikipedia article as much, but no more, than the sources the article relies on. If an article doesn't cite a source, it may or may not be reliable. Students should never use information in Wikipedia for formal purposes (such as a school essay) until they have checked those external sources. Fortunately, Wikipedia cites its sources more frequently than most other publications. Wikipedia is rapidly developing, so the reliability of the encyclopedia is improving all the time. Because readers continually compare articles to what they already know, articles tend to become more accurate and detailed. Certain articles about many of the major sciences were developed from other free or public domain encyclopedias. This provides a reliable basis upon which encyclopedia writers could develop more current information. Wikipedia is cited almost daily in the press. On the other hand, it is possible for an article on Wikipedia to be biased, outdated, or factually incorrect. This is true for any resource. One should always double-check the accuracy of important facts, regardless of the source. In general, popular articles are more accurate because they are read more often and therefore any errors are corrected in a more timely fashion. Also, there may be a Western bias in particular because that is where most contributors are from.” What keeps someone from contributing false or misleading information? “Nothing. Anyone can, at this very moment, go to almost any page and change the information to make it misleading or wrong. Very specific minor facts, like an exact date for a less well known historical event, are less trustworthy since vandals sometimes change them. However, it probably will not stay that way very long. Scores of contributors monitor the list of contributions (particularly to important or controversial articles), and will quickly delete nonsense or obviously wrong articles, and undo baseless edits. Almost all articles will be on one or more editors' personal watch lists, and they will quickly undo any vandalism. Major articles will be on hundreds of watchlists, so that whenever vandalism is performed, it will be seen and undone in a matter of minutes or less. If an anonymous or relatively new user changes a number or a date by a little bit, without justifying their edit, it is particularly likely to raise a red flag. But Wikipedia cannot be perfect. There is almost certainly inaccurate information in it, somewhere, which has not yet been discovered to be wrong. Therefore, if you are using Wikipedia for important research or a school project, you should always verify the information somewhere else. You should also check that the other source does not rely on Wikipedia for it's [sic] information.” From http://en.wikipedia.org/ A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 13 Guidelines for Evaluating an Internet Resource Authority Is the author’s name given? Does the site give the author’s background, position, title, educational level? Is there an address to contact the author? Accuracy Is the title of the page indicative of the content? Is the information reliable and free of errors? Does the information contradict something you found somewhere else? Is a bibliography included to verify the information given? Does the domain (i.e. edu, com, gov) of the page influence your evaluation? Is this someone’s personal webpage? Objectivity Is the site factual (without bias/opinion)? Are graphics or information used to influence you emotionally? Currency Is the date of the latest revision of the site clearly stated? Is the date given for when the information was gathered and/or posted? Coverage Is the scope of the topic clearly stated? Does the site give supporting facts, data, charts, statistics, etc? Are you satisfied that the information is useful for your purpose? Citing Sources Academic Honesty: Avoiding Plagiarism Plagiarism is defined as "Passing off someone else's work as your own.” It happens if you copy somebody else's work instead of doing your own. It also happens in those cases where people actually buy essays instead of doing the work themselves. Schools, colleges, and universities regard this as a serious offence - and they often have stiff penalties for anyone found guilty. All the following can be counted as plagiarism: Copying directly from a text, word-for-word Page 14 William Tennent High School Using an attractive phrase or sentence you have found somewhere Using text downloaded from the Internet Paraphrasing the words of a text very closely Copying from the essays or the notes of another student Why do teachers, schools, colleges, and universities make such a big fuss about this issue? The answer to this is that they are trying to keep up important conventions in academic writing. The conventions involve two things at the same time. They are: You are developing your own ideas and arguments and learning to express them. You are showing that you have learned about and can use other people's work. When doing this, you must show which part is your own work and which parts belong to somebody else. You also need to show where the information comes from. Using PARENTHETICAL CITATIONS to identify the source of the idea or phrase does this. This is the year for you to develop your own style and research methods. You will acquire the skills needed for success in both writing and research this year. Remember that what you have to say is important and should be your own ideas and words. Please remember that plagiarism is an offence that is punishable according to the guidelines in your Handbook: “If you plagiarize or engage in academic cheating of any kind, you will be assigned the grade of “zero” for that assignment and may be given additional disciplinary consequences.” Citing Sources in Your Paper According to the Research 2: The Research Paper, 2006, published by the Center for Learning, 116, the purpose of this format is to provide brief and specific information without interrupting the flow of the text. Usually in-text citations are placed at the end of the sentence, but they may be placed in the middle, too (see example 6). Further publication information can be found in the paper’s bibliography. When you are citing in your paper, each quote, paraphrase and statistic or figure should be followed by an in-text parenthetical citation. Citing is important for several reasons: 1. It gives credit to ideas or words that other people used and prevents plagiarism. 2. It provides the reader with the source for your information. 3. It relieves you of the responsibility of verifying the information. A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 15 If your source has incorrect information it is not your fault, but only if you cite it correctly. A parenthetical citation consists of the author’s last name and the page number within parentheses. If you are dealing with an anonymous piece, you will use the title and the page number. Be sure that you cite any information you did not previously know. Parts of a Citation (from Research 2: The Research Paper, 2006, published by the Center for Learning, 116-118) Rules 1. Use the author’s last name, or title when an author is unavailable, and give the page number in parentheses. 2. DO NOT use page or abbreviations for page (p., pp., pg., pgs.); just WRITE THE NUMBER 3. Allow one space before the parentheses but none after it if a period (.) follows. Examples of Parenthetical Citations 1. One book with one author: use the author’s last name and the page number in parentheses Thomas Hardy’s Return of the Native is a masterly example of coincidence (Ellman 89.) 2. more than one book by the same author: give the author’s last name, comma, the title, and the page Animal imagery conveys the primitive, uncontrolled rage that the peasants feel. One person “had acquired a tigerish smear about the mouth” (Dickens, A Tale of Two Cities 33-34). 3. If you identify the author and title in the text: just give the page number In Jude the Obscure, Hardy depicts the heartrending disappointment that Jude must face: “the spires of the Medieval buildings haunted his existence and at the same time they beckoned him to call the pillars of learning his home” (9). 4. If no author is given: give the title and the page numbers Some critics, including Christopher Ricks, believe that Thomas hardy overuses the trite coincidences to generate the action in his novels (Spectator 5). 5. If the quoted material exceeds FOUR LINES in your text (BLOCK QUOTE): set it off by starting it on a new line and indenting the entire quote one inch (ten spaces) from the left margin, WITHOUT USING QUOTATION MARKS Seen in later Roman feasts of the Saturnala, masters and slaves would exchange their position. Sir James Frazer said: Page 16 William Tennent High School Feasting and revelry and all the mad pursuit of pleasure are the features that seem to have especially marked the carnival of antiquity. As it wears on for seven days in the streets and public squares and houses of ancient Rome from the seventeenth to the twenty-third of December. (Myers 33) Obviously, the celebration of Mardi Gras has been a tradition, as well as a nuisance. 6. Corporate Publication: If the quoted material involves corporate or committee authorship, it is best to include the name of the organization within the text. The Thomas Hardy Literary Society has called Hardy the “Victorian-modern father of literature” (34). 7. Work in a multiple volume: It is unnecessary to use the word volume or the abbreviation if you identify by both the volume and the page number. The order is to give the volume number first, then a colon, a space, and then the page. Dvorak is nicknamed “Old Borax,” but it is never mentioned by some critics (Hall 5: 87-88). 8. Magazine Article: Give the author if available, otherwise, use a shortened version of the title of the article, then follow with a page number if available. (The article is “A Questionable Hero: Jude the Obscure” in Time magazine) Jude can be surveyed from a biblical point of view as a martyr (“Questionable Hero” 16) 9. Plays: Generally give Arabic numbers for both acts and scenes, but you may still use Roman numerals for acts and lower case ones for scenes. List the line numbers last and separate them with a period. In Julius Caesar perhaps the most quoted line comes from Caesar: “Et, tu, Brute!” (3.1.23) OR (III. Iii. 23) 10. Poetry: For short quotations: separate lines of poetry with / marks and list the line numbers as if they were page numbers “When I was half the man I was / And serve me right as the preachers warn,” (“Lament” 37-38). For longer quotations (more than three lines), start the quotation on a new line. Indent each line one inch (ten spaces) from the left margin, without quotation marks (unless they appear in the original). The persona of the poem, however, takes years to realize his father's message. Once he realizes the importance of sports to their relationship, he sends a message back to his father: A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 17 and I never learned what you were laying down. Like a hand brushed across the bill of a cap, let this be the sign I'm getting a grip on the sacrifice. (20-23) 11. Newspapers: List the author if available, otherwise list the newspaper title without any definite or indefinite articles that begin it (New York Times not The New York Times) and the page number. According to the New York Times, Jesse Jackson appeared to have a good chance to win the Democratic nomination for President (Kehoe C4). 12. Encyclopedia: treat encyclopedias like books. The average age of residents of New Mexico, 27, is the lowest among the fifty states (Collier’s 1276). 13. Electronic and Internet sources Database materials generally have no page numbers. If your source includes no text divisions, numbered pages, or numbered paragraphs, simple provide the author’s name. Science writers have pointed out that the “extra deep groove” in Einstein’s brain may have contributed to his unusual intelligence by allowing for the presence of more neurons (Day). 14. Visual Material (graphs, charts, tables, etc.) These materials must be documented. Generallym write “Source:” and then following bibliographic information: author, title (place of publication: publisher year of publication) page number. Immigrants to the United States, 1976-1986 Country of Origin Approximate Numbers Mexico 720,000 Vietnam 425,000 Philippines 379,000 Korea 363,000 China/Taiwan 331,000 Source: Eric Foner and John A. Garrity, eds., The Reader’s Companion to American History (Boston: Houghton Mifflin, 1991) 538. Page 18 William Tennent High School Some things to remember about block quotes They should not be endless in length. The purpose of a quote is to illustrate a point to your reader, or back-up a comment you made. It is not to fill up space in your paper. Your block quote should ALWAYS be followed by a sentence or two with your analysis of the quote. Remember, your interpretation is what’s important. The sentences immediately following the block quote should not be indented in any way. Since these sentences are your analysis, they are essentially a continuation of the paragraph you have already started. Indents in sentences are only used to show a new paragraph. DO NOT put the block quote in quotation marks (“ ”). You have already indented it twice. This is sufficient to let your reader know that they are reading someone else’s work and/or ideas. Remember to place the period before the closed parenthesis. ORGANIZING YOUR PAPER The Outline When you feel you have completed your research, use the outline keys on your note cards to arrange them in the same order as your preliminary outline. Read through your notes to make sure you have all the information you need to write your report complete bibliographic information (author, title, date, etc.) for each of the sources you used You are now ready to draft your final outline. The final outline will help to insure that your report is clearly and logically organized and that you do not inadvertently omit material you had meant to include. Reflecting your increased knowledge of your subject, the final outline will be more detailed than the preliminary outline or you may decide to organize it in a different way. The time you spend on this part of your project will not be wasted; once you have created a logical, detailed final outline, the report will practically write itself A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 19 Sample Outline: Thesis statement: Mental illness should be treated like any other illness in terms of payment and service. I. Introduction a. The case of a mentally ill man b. Problems facing the mentally ill c. National economic impact of mental illness II. Comparison of Costs a. Costs associated with lost productivity, crime, incarceration b. Costs associated with treatment are less by comparison c. Cost comparisons to treating other illnesses: coronary heart disease, cancer III. Mental Illness at School a. Accounts of students with difficulties at school b. School psychologist’s testimony on childhood depression and other disorders IV. Mental Illness in the Workplace a. Accounts of workers with mental illness b. Popular misconceptions about “workplace killers” c. Influence of the media on promoting stereotypes and fear VI. The Problems of Payment a. Insurance issues surrounding the costs of treatment b. Instances of abuse by treatment centers and payment plans c. Efforts to guarantee fairness VII. Reconsidering Mental Illness a. Summary of problems still facing the mentally ill b. Reluctance of insurance companies to pay c. The struggle of those who cannot afford treatment VIII. Conclusion: strong restatement of thesis Page 20 William Tennent High School PREPARING YOUR PAPER FOR SUBMISSION When your first draft has been approved, you will be ready to prepare your paper for submission. The completed paper will include your text, a work cited page, and a works consulted page. Some teachers may ask you to submit your final outline with the paper. Your paper should be written in grammatically correct, standard English. Title/Heading A separate title page is not necessary. Instead, on the first page ( and only the first page) beginning one inch from the top and at the left margin type your name, your teacher's name, the name of the course, and the date on separate lines; double-spacing between each line. Double-space again and center the title. Double-space between the title and the first line of the text. Do not underline the title or put it in quotation marks or type it in all capital letters. Text of paper Spacing: Double-space the entire research paper including quotations and the lists of works cited and works consulted. Because the ENTIRE paper is double-spaced, you do NOT need to put an extra space between paragraphs. The indent in the beginning of a paragraph is sufficient to show that you are starting a new one. When done one paragraph, simply hit the “enter” button once, make sure your paragraph is “tabbed” in once. And then start typing. Font: All work throughout the paper should be in Size 12, Times New Roman. Margins: Leave one-inch margins at the top and bottom and on both sides of the text. Most computers have a default setting of 1.25 inches. You must change this. In order to fix your margins, Click on “File” Click on “Page Setup” Make sure the tab selected is “margins” At the places where is says “top,” “bottom,” “left,” and “right,” make sure they all say 1.00. Click OK Header: Number all pages consecutively throughout the research paper using Arabic numerals. The number should be placed in the upper right-hand corner, one-half inch from the top at the right margin. Type your last name before each page number. Do not use the abbreviation p. or any other mark before or after the page number. You can set up a header in your word processing to do this automatically. Usually, on most PC’s the process is Click “View” Click “Header and Footer” Hit the Tab button twice (this should bring you to the right side of the page) Type your last name Hit two spaces Then, look to the Header and Footer Toolbar that has appeared. Click on the button that has the “#” symbol on it. This will number each of your pages for you. A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 21 Works Cited Works Cited is the term for the list of sources actually documented (paraphrased or quoted) in your project through parenthetical citation. All of the parenthetical references in the paper or project should lead the reader to this list of sources. Works Consulted Works Consulted is the term used for the list of sources used in the preparation of a research project. It is used to list background reading, summarized sources, or any sources read for informational purposes but NOT paraphrased or quoted (cited) in the actual paper. Formatting Works Cited or Works Consulted There are many resources on the internet to help you format your Works Cited and Works Consulted page. You will not always have all the information you need in order to fill in all the “spaces” in a citation. Cite what is available. The information you give in your Works Cited and Works Consulted should be complete enough that if someone read your paper and wanted to look at one of your sources, he or she could easily find it. Arrange your bibliography slips in alphabetical order by the author's last name or by the first word in the title of an unsigned work. Alphabetize by the second word if the title begins with A, An or The. Do not number the items. When you have finished typing in all the items, use the “hanging indent” format, where the first line of each item is on the left margin, and other lines are indented one-half inch. Or, you can simply hit “Enter” at the end of each line so that you can indent the second, third, etc. lines independently. NEVER number your works cited or works consulted page. Should I use a Works Consulted Page? A student might prepare ONLY a Works Cited page if he or she paraphrased or quoted from and therefore cited all sources used. A student might prepare both Works Consulted and Works Cited pages if, in addition to the sources cited in the project or paper, he or she also consulted other sources that were not paraphrased or quoted in the paper. If your paper includes both Works Cited and Works Consulted, the Works Consulted page should follow the Works Cited page. In rare situations, a student might prepare only a Works Consulted page if he or she did not quote or paraphrase at all in the project. Page 22 William Tennent High School The following pages contain examples of how to cite your sources. Use this to help format "Works Cited" and "Works Consulted" pages. Print Sources A Book by One Author Blum, Ralph. Beyond Earth: Man's Contact with UFO's. New York: Bantam Books, 1974. Two or More Books by the Same Author Motley, Michael. Who Was this Shakespeare Guy Anyway? Princeton: Princeton Press, 2004. Never Enough Bard. New York: Bittlesworth Inc, 1998. A Book by Two Authors Rutland, Barbara T. and Susan Jones, eds. Stories from the Universe. New York: Johnson Press, 1981. A Book by Three Authors Simpson, Homer, Bugs Bunny, and Charlie Brown. Cartoon Life is a Drag. Los Angeles: Warner Bros., 2004. A Book by a Corporate Author William Tennent English Department. How to Survive in the Real World. Warminster: Centennial Pub, 2007. A Book with an Editor Turk, Megan ed. Reflections on Time: An Anthology. Cambridge: Penguin Publishers, 1991. A Book with Two Editors Rutland, Barbara T. and Susan Jones, eds. Stories from the Universe. New York: Johnson Press, 1981. A Work in an Anthology Doe, John. "No One Really Knows Me." The Lonely Road. Ed. Jane Anonymous. Phoenix: Random House Pub, 1978. 201211. An Edition Other Than the First Peters, Michael. Everything You Always Wanted to Know About Keeping Your Classroom Neat and Clean. 4th ed. Philadelphia: Lysol, 1995. A Signed Article in a Reference Book Smith, Jenna. "The Assassination of Brutus." Encyclopedia Britannica. 2001 ed. An Unsigned Article in a Reference Book "The Assassination of Brutus." Encyclopedia Britannica. 2001 ed. An Article From a Monthly or Bi-Monthly Periodical Kelly, Tara. "Myspace or Nospace." Internet Communication Mar. 2006: 20-24. An Article from a Weekly or Biweekly Periodical Cartright, Jack. "Skateboarding is Life." X-treme Sports 17 May 2006: 34-16. A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 23 A Signed Article from a Daily Newspaper Mydans, Steve. "A Green Cloud Adds to Soviet UFO Lore." New York Times 31 Jan. 1983: B1. An Unsigned Article from a Daily Newspaper Reporting UFO Sightings. Tucson: Aerial Phenomena Research Organization, 1983. Editorial “Strange Designs in England’s Field.” Editorial. The Boston Herald 13 March 1985: A10. Facts on File "CIA UFO Watch Detailed." Facts On File World News Digest, 9 Feb. 1979: 93. SIRS (Print Notebooks) McLaughlin, Janet. "AP History--The McLaughlin Group." Forbes June 1993: 21-23. CQ Researcher Cooper, Mary. "Strange Happenings: the UFO Question." CQ Researcher, 12 Sep. 1988. DISCovering U.S. History “First Laser Is Developed.” DIScovering U.S. History. Vers. 1.0. CD-ROM. Detroit: Gale, 1997. DISCovering World History “Winston Churchill.” DIScovering World History. Vers. 1.0. CD-ROM. Detroit: Gale, 1997. Non-Print Sources Radio or television interview Mack, John. Interview. Talk of the Nation. National Public Radio. WHYY, Philadelphia. 19 May 1986. Films; Radio and Television Programs "Starring the Other Peggy Lee." Slightly Off Broadway--The Series . Prod. Sheldon Wang. PBS. WNET, Aug. 1995. New York. 6 Making Creative Bookcovers. Dir. Tom Martin. Videocassette. Clemens, 1997. Sound Recording Jones, Norah. "Don't Know Why." Come Away With Me. Rec. 2001. Blue Note, 2002. Personal or Telephone Interview Correll, Steve. Personal interview. 3 Jan. 2007. Personal photograph (Good for your scanned images!) Begin with a description of the photo. Do not use italics or quotation marks. Indicate who took the photo and the date it was taken. Grandpa Al at Home. Personal photograph by Susan Student. 28 May 2003. Page 24 William Tennent High School World Wide Web (WWW) Sites: To cite files available for viewing/downloading via the World Wide Web by means of Explorer, Netscape, or other Web browsers, provide the following information: Basic Format Include as many items from the list below as are relevant and available. 1. Name of the author of portion used (if available). 2. Title of portion used from a site (in quotation marks). 3. Title of the Web site (underlined) as given on the home page. If no title given, use “Home Page.” 4. Name of editor of the site (if any). 5. Date of creation, publication, copyright, or last date updated. 6. Name of any institution or organization sponsoring the information on site. Burka, Lauren P. "A Hypertext History of Multi-User Dimensions." MUD History. 1993. 5 Dec. 1994 <http://www.ccs.neu.edu/home/1pb/mud-history.html/>. “Roswell.” HistoryChannel.Com. History Channel. 12 Oct. 2000 <http://historychannel.com/perl/printbook.pl?ID=110705/>. Tolkien Society Home Page. 29 April 1999. Tolkien Society. 3 Mar. 2001 <http://www.tolkiensociety.org/>. Online Periodical Subscription Databases Basic Format 1. Author’s name (if given) 2. Title of article or material (in quotation marks) 3. Name of the periodical (underlined) 4. Date of publication 5. Number range for pages (if given) 6. Name of database (underlined) 7. Name of the subscription service (do not underline) Signed article found in EBSCO host: Wilson, Jim. “Roswell Declassified.” Popular Mechanics Vol. 180 Issue 6, June 2002, 80. EBSCOhost. FACTS.com "Roswell Alien Landing Claims Debunked." Facts On File World News Digest, 24 July 1997. “Key Event: Meteorite Hints at Life on Mars.” FACTS.com. SIRS Researcher Online: A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 25 Kaplan, Carl S. “Friend or Foe?” Newsday 4 March 1999: 60+. SIRS Researcher. SIRS Knowledge Source. SIRS Government Reporter Online: Harris, Susan L. “What is Archeology” Protecting Archeological Sites on Private Lands, 1993: 6-7. SIRS Government Reporter. SIRS Knowledge Source. SIRS Renaissance Online: DiFate, Vincent. “The Flying Saucer Decade: a Filmography of UFO Movies… 1950-1959.” Outre 23 Nov. 2001: 35-41. SIRS Renaissance. SIRS Knowledge Source. World Book Online: Strong, Ronald. "Unidentified Flying Object (UFO)." World Book Online. 2003 World Book, Inc. 17 April 2002 . For more information on MLA documentation style go to: www.mla.org and choose “MLA Style” from the left column. Then select “Frequently Asked questions about MLA Style” on the left. Page 26 William Tennent High School A SAMPLE WORKS CITED PAGE The following Works Cited page was prepared according to the guidelines in this handbook. You may find it useful as a reference. Works Cited Baulk, Catherine. “Why Isn’t Mental Illness Talked About?” Medscape 2 December 1998. http://www.medscape.com. Bellenir, Karen, ed. Mental Health Disorders Sourcebook. Detroit: Omnigraphics. 1996. Brink, Susan, “I’ll Say I’m Suicidal.” U.S. News & Work Report 19 January 1998: 63+. “Carter Center Video Counters Stigma of Mental Illness.” The Carter Center Video Counters Stigma of Mental Illness.” The Carter Center. 12 December 1998 http://www.CarterCenter.org/cgi-bin/search.pl. Dykstra, Tracey. “How I Cope.” Schizophrenia Bulletin 23 (4): 697-699, 1997. National Institute of Mental Health. Gabbard, Glen O., MD. “Are All Psychotherapies Equally Effective?” The Menninger Letter 3 (1995): 1-2. Hannig, Paul J., Ph.D. “What Is a Personality Disorder?” Internet Mental Health 8 December 1998. <http://www.lei.net.:8080/dml/Odyssey/BPCD.htm>. Holm, Emma. “Colder Weather.” Medscape 14 December 1998. <http://www.medscape.com>. Kemp, Mark. “Out of the Woods.” Rolling Stone December 1997: 24+. Kleinfield, N.R. and Kit R. Roane. “Subway Killing Casts Light on Suspect’s Mental Torment.” New York Times 11 January 1999: A1+. “Mental Health: Does Therapy Work?” Consumer Reports November 1995: 734-739 A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 27 Daly 1 MLA Research Paper (Daly) Angela Daly Mrs. Chavez English 14 March XXXX A Call to Action: Title is centered. Regulate Use of Cell Phones on the Road Opening sentences catch readers’ attention. When a cell phone goes off in a classroom or at a concert, we are irritated, but at least our lives are not endangered. When we are on the road, however, irresponsible cell phone users are more than irritating: They are putting our lives at risk. Many of us have witnessed drivers so distracted by dialing and chatting that they resemble drunk drivers, weaving between lanes, for example, or nearly running down pedestrians in crosswalks. A number of bills to regulate use of cell phones on the road have been introduced in state legislatures, and the time has come to push for their passage. Regulation is Thesis asserts Angela Daly’s main point. needed because drivers using phones are seriously impaired and because laws on negligent and reckless driving are not sufficient to punish offenders. Daly uses a clear topic sentence. No one can deny that cell phones have caused traffic deaths and injuries. Cell phones were implicated in three fatal accidents in November 1999 alone. Early in November, two-year-old Morgan Pena was killed by a driver distracted by his cell phone. Morgan’s mother, Patti Pena, reports that the driver “ran a stop sign at 45 mph, broadsided my vehicle and killed Morgan as she sat in her car seat.” A week later, corrections officer Shannon Smith, who was guarding prisoners by the side of the road, was killed by a woman distracted by a phone call (Besthoff). On Thanksgiving weekend that same Page 28 Signal phrase names the author of the quotation to follow. No page number is available for this Web source. Author’s name is given in parentheses; no page number is available. William Tennent High School month, John and Carole Hall were killed when a Naval Academy midshipman Daly 2 crashed into their parked car. The driver said in court that when he looked up from the cell phone he was dialing, he was three feet from the car and had no time to stop (Stockwell B8). Expert testimony, public opinion, and even cartoons suggest that driving Page number is given when available. Clear topic sentences, like this one, are used throughout the paper. while phoning is dangerous. Frances Bents, an expert on the relation between cell phones and accidents, estimates that between 450 and 1,000 crashes a year have some connection to cell phone use (Layton C9). In a survey published by Farmers Insurance Group, 87% of those polled said that cell phones affect a driver’s ability, and 40% reported having close calls with drivers distracted by phones. Many cartoons have depicted the very real dangers of driving while distracted (see Fig. 1). Scientific research confirms the dangers of using phones while on the road. In 1997 an important study appeared in the New England Journal of Medicine. The authors, Donald Redelmeier and Robert Tibshirani, studied 699 Summary and long quotation are introduced with a signal phrase naming the authors. volunteers who made their cell phone bills available in order to confirm the times when they had placed calls. The participants agreed to report any nonfatal collision in which they were involved. By comparing the time of a collision with the phone records, the researchers assessed the dangers of driving while phoning. The results are unsettling: We found that using a cellular telephone was associated with a risk of having a motor vehicle collision that was about four times as high as that among the same drivers when they were not using their cellular telephones. This relative risk is similar to the A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 29 Long quotation is set off from the text; quotation marks are omitted. Daly 3 Illustration has figure number, label, and source information. Summary begins with a signal phrase naming the author and ends with page numbers in parentheses. Fig. 1. Chan Lowe, cartoon, Washington Post 22 July 2000: A21. hazard associated with driving with a blood alcohol level at the legal limit. (456) The news media often exaggerated the latter claim (“similar to” is not “equal to”); nonetheless, the comparison with drunk driving suggests the extent to which cell phone use while driving can impair judgment. A 1998 study focused on Oklahoma, one of the few states to keep records on fatal accidents involving cell phones. Using police records, John M. Violanti of the Rochester Institute of Technology investigated the relation between traffic fatalities in Oklahoma and the use or presence of a cell phone. He found a ninefold increase in the risk of fatality if a phone was being used and a doubled risk simply when a phone was present in a vehicle (522-23). The Page 30 William Tennent High School latter statistic is interesting, for it suggests that those who carry phones in their Daly 4 cars may tend to be more negligent (or prone to distractions of all kinds) than those who do not. Some groups have argued that state traffic laws make legislation Daly counters an opposing argument. regulating cell phone use unnecessary. Sadly, this is not true. Laws on traffic safety vary from state to state, and drivers distracted by cell phones can get off with light punishment even when they cause fatal accidents. For example, although the midshipman mentioned earlier was charged with vehicular manslaughter for the deaths of John and Carole Hall, the judge was unable to issue a verdict of guilty. Under Maryland law, he could only find the defendant guilty of negligent driving and impose a $500 fine (Layton C1). Such a light sentence is not unusual. The driver who killed Morgan Pena in Pennsylvania received two tickets and a $50 fine--and retained his driving privileges (Pena). In Facts are documented with in-text citations: authors’ names and page numbers (if available) in parentheses. Georgia, a young woman distracted by her phone ran down and killed a two year- old; her sentence was ninety days in boot camp and five hundred hours of community service (Ippolito J1). The families of the victims are understandably distressed by laws that lead to such light sentences. When certain kinds of driver behavior are shown to be especially dangerous, we wisely draft special laws making them illegal and imposing specific punishments. Running red lights, failing to stop for a school bus, and drunk driving are obvious examples; phoning in a moving vehicle should be no exception. Unlike more general laws covering negligent driving, specific laws leave little ambiguity for law officers and for judges and juries imposing punishments. Such laws have another important benefit: They leave no A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 31 Daly uses an analogy to justify passing a special law. ambiguity for drivers. Currently, drivers can tease themselves into thinking they Daly 5 are using their car phones responsibly because the definition of “negligent driving” is vague. As of December 2000, twenty countries were restricting use of cell phones in moving vehicles (Sundeen 8). In the United States, it is highly unlikely Daly explains why US laws need to be passed on the state level. that legislation could be passed on the national level, since traffic safety is considered a state and local issue. To date, only a few counties and towns have passed traffic laws restricting cell phone use. For example, in Suffolk County, New York, it is illegal for drivers to use a handheld phone for anything but an emergency call while on the road (Haughney A8). The first town to restrict use of handheld phones was Brooklyn, Ohio (Layton C9). Brooklyn, the first community in the country to pass a seat belt law, has once again shown its concern for traffic safety. Laws passed by counties and towns have had some effect, but it makes Transition helps readers move from one paragraph to the next. more sense to legislate at the state level. Local laws are not likely to have the impact of state laws, and keeping track of a wide variety of local ordinances is confusing for drivers. Even a spokesperson for Verizon Wireless has said that Daly cites an indirect source: words quoted in another source. statewide bans are preferable to a “crazy patchwork quilt of ordinances” (qtd. in Haughney A8). Unfortunately, although a number of bills have been introduced in state legislatures, as of early 2001 no state law seriously restricting use of the phones had passed--largely because of effective lobbying from the wireless industry. Daly counters a claim made by some opponents. Despite the claims of some lobbyists, tough laws regulating phone use can make our roads safer. In Japan, for example, accidents linked to cell phones Page 32 William Tennent High School fell by 75% just a month after the country prohibited using a handheld phone Daly 6 while driving (Haughney A8). Research suggests and common sense tells us that it is not possible to drive an automobile at high speeds, dial numbers, and carry on conversations without significant risks. When such behavior is regulated, obviously our roads will be safer. Because of mounting public awareness of the dangers of drivers distracted by phones, state legislators For variety Daly places a signal phrase after a brief quotation. must begin to take the problem seriously. “It’s definitely an issue that is gaining steam around the country,” says Matt Sundeen of the National Conference of State Legislatures (qtd. in Layton C9). Lon Anderson of the American Automobile Association agrees: “There is momentum building,” he says, to pass laws (qtd. in Layton C9). The time has come for states to adopt legislation restricting the use of cell phones in moving vehicles. Source: Diana Hacker (Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2006). Used with Publisher’s Permission For more samples of research papers and how to cite see: www.dianahacker.com/resdoc/ A Handbook for Research and Report Writing revised 2008 Page 33 The paper ends with Daly’s stand on the issue. THE FORMAT OF A LETTER There may be times during the research process where you will need to write a formal business letter. For example, you may need to write an inquiry letter, in order to get information to use as a source. Here is one example of a business letter. Be sure to tailor your actual letter to the situation or the assignment. 333 Centennial Road Warminster, PA 18974 January 21, 2003 ) Mr. Jim Lovenzen Aerial Phenomena Research Organization 2501 Santa Rita Avenue Tucson, AZ 85714 ) Dear Mr. Lovenzen ) I am a sophomore at William Tennent High School doing research on the history of UFOs. I have come across your organization's name in a number of books and articles and hope you can supply me with some statistics. I want to make a graph or table showing the number of sightings or reported experiences since 1945 to the present. If you have some statistics you can send me or if you can refer me to a specific publication, it would help me very much. As my project is due by the end of March, I would appreciate receiving this information as soon as possible. Thank you. ) Sincerely ) ) ) ) Mary Smith ) = skipped line Page 34 William Tennent High School