Rubric for Email, Memo, & Letter Note: Failure to answer the question asked or task required results in an automatic Failing Grade. PAIBOC DESCRIPTION Edit Ref. A++ 100 -90 Excellent A+ A 89 84 -85 -80 5 Purpose Identification of Purpose Clearly answers question asked or task required. Purpose is suited to Audience. Can “reverse-identify” audience by reading finished document. Direct/Indirect Uses correct strategy for document style. Information Opening Meets criteria of document style. Closing Meets criteria of document style. Clear Supporting Details Clear; Concise; Easy to understand. Sufficient Supporting Details Adequate; All necessary ones present; References or Citations if required. Analysis Reflects strong understanding of Purpose & Audience. Benefits Sentence Structure Style Range of Styles & Structures. Appropriate use of; Meets purpose requirements. Spelling Canadian (unless otherwise instructed) Clear spell checker was used. Punctuation Clear grammar checker was used. Grammar Control of; Attempt at corrections obvious; Impact of grammar on quality of document. 5 5 4 5 5 5 5 5 Word choice; Clarity; Appropriateness. Clear proofreading was employed. Context Format Appearance; Font; Spacing; Meets document format criteria. 4.5 Tone Proofreading 0 5 5 5 5 5 Correct structure; Flow (transitions from sentence to sentence). Objections 1 2 Paragraph Style Active/Passive Voice 2.5 3 Use of transition words; Good choice of; Good employment of. Cohesive thoughts; Does it flow from beginning to end?; Is there a clear transition of thought throughout document? 3.5 MARK Transitional Words Flow of thought Poor D F 59 55 -55 -0 5 4.5 5 Clarity; Articulation; Positioning. Rhetorical Strategy 4 Average C+ C 69 64 -65 -60 Primary & Secondary Purposes Determined Audience 4.5 Good B+ B 79 74 -75 -70 4.5 5 5 Comments: Magnificent! This is a near perfect paper. It is obvious that a lot of time was spent planning out what was needed in the letter, as well as you were very clear on the details and providing your professor with what needs to be done in order to get these applications in on time. Again magnificent. 97.5 The only concern has to do with the word choice beginning the first four paragraphs, which is repeated each time. Might I suggest when you send such a letter that you use multiple ways of starting your paragraphs. © McGrawHill Ryerson Ltd. Document Created by Katherine A. Weir /100