המכללה האקדמית אשקלון מסלול בר-אילן Strategies לשימוש פנימי ולצורכי לימוד בלבד TABLE OF CONTENTS PART 1 - READING STRATEGIES Page number o Student Obligations 4 o Grading Guidelines 6 o Strategies for Unknown Words 7 o Dictionary Use 8 o Vocabulary in Context 10 o Definitions in the Text 13 o Affixes: Prefixes & Suffixes 16 o Reference 21 o Sentence Structure 26 o Simple Sentences 29 o Adjective Clauses 36 o Expended (Compound & Complex sentences) 42 o Connectives 47 o Cause & Effect 51 o Markers of Contrast 58 o Markers of Comparison 62 o Comparison & Contrast 64 o General Idea – Specific Examples/Illustration 66 o Inference 71 o Paragraph Structure, Main Ideas & Supporting Details 72 o Inferring & Implied Main Idea 80 o Prediction/Skimming/Scanning 87 2 STUDENT OBLIGATIONS ATTENDANCE Attendance is required at all classes. No more than 2 absences per semester are allowed. A student with numerous absences will not be given an internal grade (which constitutes 60% of the final grade) or may not be allowed to continue his English course that year/semester. GROUND RULES Lateness for class is unacceptable no matter what the reason may be. Students will not be allowed to enter the classroom after the first 10 minutes of the lesson. Therefore, they will be considered absent. Other unacceptable behavior patterns: 1) early departures from lessons 2) cellular phones may not be switched on during lessons 3) food and drink during a lesson 4) switching class from one to another because of a student’s changing needs. Once a student has signed up for a particular course with a specific instructor, he may not attend a lesson given at a different hour even if the instructor is the same. All of the class hours must suit the student. Otherwise, he should not be enrolled in that particular course. CLASS ASSIGNMENTS Homework will be assigned regularly and must be completed for the next lesson. If you were ill or in the army reserves and could not attend the lesson, you are expected to contact someone from your group in order to complete your homework assignment. Hand in the completed assignment immediately upon your return to class. TESTS If a student knows he will not be able to take a scheduled test, it is his responsibility to inform his instructor so that appropriate measures can be taken. If a student has missed a test, it is his obligation to inform the instructor and explain his absence. STUDENTS WITH SPECIAL NEEDS All students with special needs (e.g. extra time, use of a tape, new immigrants up to 5 years in Israel, over 40’s) must provide documentation from Bar Ilan to validate their needs within the first 2 weeks of the course. BOOKS Students are required to buy the newest version of the Course book. Older copies are inadmissible. ATTENDANCE IS COMPULSORY. BOOKS MUST BE BROUGHT TO LESSONS. SOME ELECTRONIC** AND ALL PAPER DICTIONARIES MAY BE USED. **THE USE OF ‘PEN STYLE’ ELECTRONIC DICTIONARIES (QUICKTIONARY) OF ALL TYPES IS BANNED IN CLASS AND IN ALL EXAMS. 3 MITKADMIM ANNUAL COURSE GRADING GUIDELINES 2010 The PASS GRADE in English courses and ALL exams at Ashkelon Academic College is 60. The INTERNAL CLASS GRADE will include no fewer than 5 (FIVE) internal tests: TESTS – 80% Semester 1 - Two regular exams (ranging from 1800 – 2200 words) No grades to be dropped semester one. Semester 2 – Two regular exams (2500 – 3000 words) and one sample final test (3000 words) and a MAKE-UP TOTAL - 4 regular exams plus 1 sample final (3000 words) Students should make up tests they miss DURING the course, not wait until the end. At the end of the course a sixth (6th) exam should be given. It will be counted as follows: a) If the student takes the exam because he missed an earlier one, he will now have 4 regular exams and one compulsory, all to be counted. TOTAL: 5 TESTS, all internal b) If the student wants to improve one of his grades in semester 2, the 6th test can replace one of his weaker grades in the same type of test. In other words, the student will still have 5 grades, one of which must be a sample final exam TOTAL: 5 out of 6 TESTS, all internal The sample final grade cannot be dropped HOMEWORK/ CLASSWORK: 5% Homework should be set each week. The teacher determines the amount and type of classwork to be counted in the grade. GUIDED READINGS - semester 1 only, annual courses - 5%; At least 2 guided tests should be given. (A class exercise, where the teacher may draw the students’ attention to significant points in the text; the questions are to be completed under test conditions) READING PROJECT – annual course, semester 2 only. – 10% Students will study a unit on empirical academic articles, and will be required to read, analyze and answer questions on such an article under test conditions. FINAL MARK The final mark consists of the internal grade (60%) and the final test (40%). A minimum grade of 50 is required on the final test before calculations of the final mark can be made. ATTENDANCE IS COMPULSORY. LATEST COPIES OF REQUIRED COURSEBOOKS MUST BE BROUGHT TO ALL LESSONS. SOME ELECTRONIC** AND ALL PAPER DICTIONARIES MAY BE USED. *THE USE OF ‘PEN STYLE’ ELECTRONIC DICTIONARIES (QUICKTIONARY) OF ALL TYPES IS BANNED IN CLASS AND IN ALL EXAMS. 4 הסבר חלוקת ציון בקורסי אנגלית ציון הקורס מרוכב מציון כיתה – 60%וציון מבחן סופי – .40% ציון כיתה :ציון זה אינו "מגן" ,אלא משקף את רמת הידע של הסטודנט ומוכנותו להמשיך לרמה הבאה. להלן הרכב ציון כיתה: .1מבחנים פנימיים במהלך הקורס מהווים 80%מסך ציון הכיתה. על הסטודנט להשלים את כל המבחנים הפנימיים טרם סיום הקורס. כל המבחנים ( 5או 6מבחנים ,בהתאם לדרישות הרמה) כלולים בחישוב הציון הסופי. אין מבחן "שיפור ציון" פרט לרמת "מתקדמים" .2שיעורי בית ,השתתפות בשיעורים: תרגילים בכיתה ובחנים: 5% 15% קורס שנתי -חובות הסטודנט ציון עובר 60 :לכל המבחנים ,ולקורס בכלל. נוכחות: חובת נוכחות בכל השיעורים .אסור להעדר מיותר מ 4-שעות שבועיות בסמסטר בקורס שנתי ומ 8-שעות שבועיות (שני מפגשים) בקורס סמסטריאלי .סטודנט שנעדר פעמים רבות לא יקבל ציון כיתה (שערכו 60% מהציון הסופי) או שלא יוכל להמשיך את קורס האנגלית באותו סמסטר/שנה. כללי יסוד: איחורים לשיעור מכל סיבה שהיא לא מקובלים .סטודנט לא יוכל להיכנס לכיתה אחרי 10הדקות הראשונות של השיעור .לכן ,ייחשב הדבר כהיעדרות. דפוסי התנהגות לא מקובלים: .1יציאה מוקדמת מהשיעורים. .2דיבור בפלאפון בזמן השיעור. .3אכילה ושתייה בשיעור. . 4אין אפשרות להחליף קורס חוץ מאשר בתקופת השינויים .סטודנט חייב להישאר באותו קורס אליו הוא נרשם .לכן ,כל שעות הקורס צריכות להתאים לסטודנט. בית: שיעורי שיעורי בית יינתנו באופן קבוע .יש להשלים את שיעורי הבית עד לשיעור הבא .אם הסטודנט נעדר משיעור מכל סיבה שהיא ,עליו ליצור קשר עם סטודנט אחר מהקבוצה ולהתעדכן לגבי שיעורי הבית .סטודנט כזה יראה למרצה את שיעורי הבית מיד בשובו לכיתה. מבחנים: אם הסטודנט יודע שלא יוכל להבחן בבחינה שנקבעה במערכת ,עליו להודיע למרצה מראש, כך שיינקטו הצעדים המתאימים. אם הסטודנט לא נכח במבחן ,מחובתו להסביר את היעדרותו למרצה. סטודנטים עם צרכים מיוחדים: כל הסטודנטים עם צרכים מיוחדים (תוספת זמן ,השמעת השאלון על גבי קלטת ,עולים חדשים עד 5שנים בארץ ,בני )+40 חייבים להמציא את המסמכים המתאימים מבר אילן במהלך השבועיים הראשונים של הקורס. ספרים: על הסטודנט לרכוש את הגרסה החדשה של הספר .אסור להשתמש בספרים ישנים. מילונים: חל איסור מוחלט על שימוש בכל סוגי מילוני "עט" (בסגנון ) QUICKTIONARYגם בכיתה וגם במבחנים 5 Strategies for Unknown Words When you see words in a text that you don’t know, ask yourself: 1. Can I understand the text without knowing the meaning of this word? If the answer is yes, then ignore the word and keep on reading. Example: attention. The thief walked casually through the town, careful not to attract any 2. What do I know about the word? Is it a noun, verb, adjective, or adverb? Is it a negative or positive word? Example: almost no friends. 3. He was known to be a parsimonious person and therefore had Does the sentence give me any clues to the meaning of the word? Example: The Japanese had been preparing secretly for Pearl Harbor, but the actual attack was entirely overt. 4. Does the word itself give me any clues to its meaning? Do I know any part of the word? Example: He did not wish to relive the unpleasant experience. 5. Does it sound like a word I know in Hebrew? Example: Inflation has been a serious problem in the twentieth century. Example: The speaker told many anecdotes about his travels in India. 6 Dictionary Use Exercise 1. Read the following groups of sentences. Look up the meanings of the emphasized words in your dictionaries and explain them in English or Hebrew. 1. a. Sam wasn’t content until he was sure that all the children were safe. content: ________________________ b. The programme was entertaining but had little content. content: ___________________________ 2. a. Please fill out this form. form: __________________________ b. During the course the students will form ideas on different issues. form: ____________________________ c. She bought a vase in the form of a swan. form: _____________________________ 3. a. The students showed perfect discipline during the ceremony. discipline: _________________________ b. We discipline students who never work. discipline: __________________________ c. Courses in disciplines such as biology, chemistry and physics are part of John’s scientific training at the University. discipline: _________________________ 4. a. President Obama succeeded President Bush. succeed: _____________________________ b. All the students succeeded in the final examination. succeed: _____________________________ 4. a. Have you seen the movie “The Sound of Music”? sound: ________________________________ b. Thank you for your sound advice on this issue! sound:________________________________ 5. a. His illness stems from the period he lived in tropics. stem: _________________________________ b. He cut the stems of the flowers. stem: _________________________________ By Dr. Anna Lyubman 7 Exercise 2. Use your dictionary to translate the underlined words (words with different meanings). Indicate what part of speech they are. 1. The employer noted the employee's late arrival. note _____________________________ _________ 2. Florence Sabin, noted for her scientific research, was one of the few women to hold a prominent position in her field. note _____________________________ _________ 3. He sprang to his feet when he heard about his admission into college. sprang _____________________________ _________ 4. The spring broke, that’s why the handle of this door won’t hold. spring _____________________________ _________ handle _____________________________ _________ 5. The manager was unable to handle the situation anymore, so he resigned. handle _____________________________ _________ 6. You must never abandon a friend in trouble. abandon _____________________________ _________ 7. Idan Raichel’s singing is so emotional; he sings with so much abandon. abandon _____________________________ _________ 8. There are special stores to outfit skiers. outfit _____________________________ _________ 9. They were conspicuous in their outfit. Outfit ___________________ ________ 10. His reckless behavior may compromise the situation. compromise _____________________________ _________ 11 Nobody ever gets everything one wants; we must all make compromises in life. compromise _____________________________ _________ 12. The fallen trees bar the road so vehicles are directed to alternative roads. bar _____________________________ _________ 8 Vocabulary in Context Context Clues 1. Explanations and Definitions: Sometimes an explanation or definition of a word is given in a text; if you keep reading, the meaning becomes clear. Example: The hippocampus, which is located in the medial temporal lobe of the brain, is an important structure in memory processing. Example: The salesman was very garrulous, talking endlessly about various insignificant things. Example: Plankton, i.e., minute plants and animals that float in the ocean, are a significant source of food for many fish. 2. Examples: Examples of something may help you understand what it is; if you don’t understand the example, knowing what it exemplifies may help you understand the word. Example: Such flowers as cyclamens and anemones are native to Israel. Punctuation: Colons (:), dashes (-), commas (, ,), parentheses ( ), and semicolons (;) may mean that an example or explanation will follow. Example: During the festival, the park was filled with vehicles of all types – cars, trucks, buses, and motorcycles. 3. Cause/Effect: Understanding a cause/effect relationship in a text may help you understand the meaning of an unknown word. Example: The student’s writing was so incoherent that the teacher couldn’t understand a single word of it. 4. Synonyms: Instead of repeating the same word in a text, writers will often use synonyms. If you understand the synonym, you’ll understand the word. Example: Proponents of legalizing drugs believe that it will result in less crime and supporters of keeping drugs illegal believe that legalizing drugs will lead to more crime. 5. Antonyms and Contrast: When you know what something is not, then you can understand what it is. Example: Tony thought his criticism was justified, but it was gratuitous. Example: Although Ron was generally quite malleable, this time he refused to give in. 6. Words in a Series: When words appear in a series in a sentence, they generally have similar meanings. Example: Most students go to university with the hope that it will lead to a lucrative, profitable and rewarding job. 9 7. General Meaning of the Text: The general meaning of the text can help you understand the meanings of unfamiliar words. Example: The context of this word makes its meaning apparent. EXERCISE 1 Read the following sentences. From the possibilities given, choose the one that best describes the meaning of the word in bold letters. Use the structure of the word or the context for clues. 1. The popular, or even the lawbook, theory of everyday criminal processes oversimplifies in some respects what usually happens. a. b. c. d. 2. Whenever an infraction of the law occurs, the police try to catch the criminal and bring him or her to justice. Unfortunately they are not always successful. The crime is recorded but the lawbreaker is unpunished. a. b. c. d. 3. a criminal breaking changing keeping The contrast between the rich, green vegetation of the coastal area and the barren, brown hills of the desert was striking to the eye. a. b. c. d. 4. does not make it simple enough makes more difficult makes too simple simplifies in the wrong way rich with many trees and bushes without any plants beautiful The professor told her students to review the lecture notes if they wanted to understand the material. She did not say directly that there would be a test the following week, but from her comments, the students inferred it. a. b. c. d. doubted understood denied believed 10 5. He is sentenced by the judge to a term of probation under which he is permitted to live in the community as long as he behaves himself. a. b. c. d. 6. A commands because he possesses authority; B obeys because he is subject to that authority. a. b. c. d. 7. road repairs consideration carelessness good intentions From the public reaction to her speech, the politician realized that she had misjudged the extent of her influence. a. b. c. d. 10. changes for the better does not change leaves room for hope becomes worse The worker who leaves a hole in the ground endangers public safety. This kind of negligence should be punished just as crimes are punished. a. b. c. d. 9. is under control refuses to be under control gives orders to powerful people shows a liking to command The situation does not improve as the stutterer gets older. On the contrary, the stutterer's self-image deteriorates still further. a. b. c. d. 8. a period in prison with visits home every week a punishment for an indefinite period of time life in a special institution a period of normal living under certain conditions had not judged had not judged enough had judged before the event had judged wrongly Many scientists claim that there is life on Mars. This claim, however, is disputed by those who have studied the photographs brought back by astronauts who have been in space. a. b. c. d. proved supported not accepted accepted From: Build It Up, by A. Levine, B. Oded, and S. Statman, Aviv Printers. 11 Definitions in the Text Technical and specialized terms are often defined in texts, since many readers are not familiar with them. In the following sentences, underline the terms being defined once and the definitions twice. Circle the clues in the sentences that helped you to find the definitions. 1. A buyer’s market refers to a market in which the quantity of goods for sale surpasses the amount that consumers are willing and able to buy at the existing prices. 2. A simile is a comparison between two things that is signaled overtly by words such as like or as. 3. Sampling means taking snapshots of an audio or video signal at rapid intervals, usually tens of thousands of times per second. 4. A fluegelhorn is a valved brass instrument resembling a bugle with a wide bell that is used in jazz and commercial music. 5. Many linguists are interested in semantics, i.e., the study of the meaning of linguistic expressions. 6. Homeostasis, that is, the tendency of living organisms to maintain a balanced internal state for optimal operation, allows organisms to function in a wide variety of environmental conditions. 7. The process of changing from one key to another in music is known as modulation. 8. In the 1930’s, doctors dealing with uncontrollable, violent patients would sometimes perform a lobotomy: they would drive a tool through the person’s eye socket in order to sever the nerves that connect the frontal lobes of the brain to the brain region that controls emotions. 9. Many tragic events throughout history have been blamed on groupthink, or a phenomenon in which people become so involved with a group that they lose their capacity for sound judgment and independent thinking. 10. After a coup d’etat (a forceful and unlawful change of government), a new government might be formed by a junta, or group of military officers ruling the country after seizing power. 11. Stagflation, which occurs when economic stagnation and inflation occur simultaneously, is very difficult to eliminate once it starts. 12. Dutch painter Johannes Vermeer was well known for his genre paintings – scenes of everyday life – as well as his portraits, among which is Girl with a Pearl Earring. 12 13. Emoticons, text-based faces and objects often seen in e-mails, are used to help the reader of a text understand the emotions of the writer. 14. Free trade, international trade between countries without government interference or restrictions, stands in stark contrast to protectionist trade policies, whereby governments interfere in international markets through price setting and supply quotas. 15. The gene alpha 1-3 gal transferase, which produces a sugar that triggers rejection of transplanted organs, must be deactivated in transplant patients. List the different ways of including definitions in the text: Words / Phrases ________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ Punctuation: ____________________________________________________________ By Minna Lipner General Terms, Definitions and Examples The hazards of insomnia have been much better investigated and tabulated than those of hypersomnia (too much sleep). When discussing insomnia, doctors ask if the patient has difficulty in getting to sleep, difficulty in staying asleep, is waking too early, or waking unrefreshed. The problem is characterized as “transient” insomnia, which is usually related to external circumstances and lasts only for days; “intermittent “ insomnia, which lasts for longer periods but is interspersed with times when the patients sleep well; or “chronic” insomnia, which persists for weeks or months. Whatever the type, causes such as working antisocial hours, depression, bipolar disorder, some diseases - including heart troubles, thyrotoxicosis and sleep apnoea (crescendo snoring with intermittent pauses in breathing) – or inappropriate use of caffeine or alcohol, have to be excluded. (adapted from “How Much Sleep Should We Have, by T. Stuttaford, The Times, February 2004) 13 1. Fill in the following table with the terms and/ or their definitions as they appear in the paragraph. Indicate the markers that helped you find the answer. Some answers have been filled in for you. Term Definition/Explanation/Example Marker/Clue Term Definition/Explanation/Example Marker/Clue 2. too little sleep 1. hypersomnia …which is related to… 3. 4.”intermittent” insomnia 5. 6. thyrotoxicosis 7. () 2. Complete the following sentence: Working antisocial hours, bipolar disorder and inappropriate use of caffeine are all examples of _________________________________________________________ By Dr. Anna Lyubman 14 AFFIXES: PREFIXES and SUFFIXES Many words are formed by adding prefixes or suffixes to the root word. Knowing the meanings of the prefixes and suffixes can help you to understand the definitions of words formed in this way. Below is a list of common prefixes and suffixes. Prefix/Suffix Usual Meaning Examples un-, non-, in- not unchanged, nonviolent, inexpensive, il-, ir-, im-, a- illogical, irresponsible, impossible, atypical in- inside inborn, innate, incoming de-, dis- reverses action of defrost, disconnect verb re- again redo, retry ante-, pre- before antedate, preread fore- a) before b) in front forehead, foresee post- after postdate, postwar anti-, against antiwar, contradict, counterargument, in favor of, supports pro-business, pro-choice, contra-, counter-, pro- pro-conservation inter- between international intra- within intravenous, intranational mid- middle midday, mid-sentence, midnight mal- bad, ill malfunction, maltreat, malnourish mis- in the wrong way misunderstand, misplace, misguided out- a) outside b) to do outgoing, outbuilding, output better or more outdo, outrun, outsmart, outstare many multipurpose, multimillionaire multi-, poly- polysyllabic, polyglot, polytheism semi- partly, half semicircle, semidarkness, semi-annual super- great amounts, super-efficient, superman, superhuman, bigger, better, etc. superpower, superstar below subtitle, subnormal, subhuman, subway sub- 15 tele- distant telephone, telescope, telepathy over- a) over overrule, overview b) too much overconfident, overweight Prefix/Suffix under- Usual Meaning Examples a) under underwater, underwear b) not enough underpay, underpriced, underestimate uni-, mono- one uniform, unicycle, monopoly, monotone bi- two bicycle, biannual trans- across translate, transportation co-, con-, together, with co-author, cooperate, cohabit, connect, col-, comex- consensus, collect, community a) former b) out, more than, very, outside ex-husband, ex-friend, exit, exceed, excel en-, -en make enrich, sweeten -ology study of psychology, physiology, biology -er, -or, carrier, actor, driver, policeman, biologist, -ful person who does/knows something/ profession/ in the style of a) someone who is affected by an action b) someone who does an action with, has the quality -less without careless, hopeless, rainless -ify, -ize to make simplify, unify, dramatize, equalize -able, -ible can, having ability avoidable, lovable, noticeable extra- -man, -ist, -ian -ee extra-large, extra-curricular mathematician, Machiavellian employee, examinee, payee, interviewee, absentee, divorcee, escapee careful, beautiful, harmful Suffixes often tell us what part of speech a word is: Noun Markers Verb Markers** Adjective Markers *ment–improvement ate – liberate *al – accidental *ness – happiness fy, ify – satisfy *ic – tragic *ship – partnership ize – visualize able/ible– acceptable 16 Adverb Markers ly - slowly *(a)tion (sion, cion) – politician er/or – teacher en – weaken *ous – serious *ity – abnormality *ance/ence– independence *ive – protective ful – peaceful **All of these verb suffixes mean: “to make” less – homeless (without) By Minna Lipner Affixes – Practice Exercise 1 Based on your knowledge of prefixes and suffixes, divide the bold words into their components (roots + affixes), and then define them according to their meanings in the sentences. 1. World War II happened because an amoral leader came into power. ________________________________________________________________ 2. Harry is feeling disillusioned because after all his hard work, he has discovered that no one really believed in the project at all. ________________________________________________________________ 3. The building collapsed when it was finished because no one had the forethought to redesign the foundation after the top floors were changed. ________________________________________________________________ 4. Intraparty politics and the party leader’s lack of interpersonal skills caused the party to call new election. ________________________________________________________________ 5. The computer malfunctioned because there was a misprint in the instructions, and people misused it. ________________________________________________________________ 6. The students sat in a semicircle, watching the film in the semidarkness. ________________________________________________________________ 7. With telecommunications technology, it is possible to transmit information from one country to another. ________________________________________________________________ 8. Due to his overconfidence, the accountant underestimated the amount of money needed for expenses, and exceeded the budget by millions of dollars. ________________________________________________________________ 17 9. The writer’s style was Agnonian. ________________________________________________________________ 10. Because Rachel is a realist, she believes that the situation is hopeless. ________________________________________________________________ 11. The musician’s flawless performance seemed effortless. ________________________________________________________________ 12. In order to be profitable, you must diversify your investment portfolio. ________________________________________________________________ by Minna Lipner Exercise 2 Enclose in parentheses the asterisk in front of the word that best replaces the underlined word. Examples: John is too heavy. * underweight (*) overweight * mid-weight The Egyptian pyramids predate classical Athens. * postdate (*)antedate *outdate 1. The child has only become poorly accustomed to the new situation. * re-adjusted * well-adjusted * mal-adjusted 2. The new advertising seems to be having the opposite effect in regard to increasing sales. * counterproductive * reproductive * underproductive 3. Snow storms can immobilize community services like home nursing and garbage collection. * enable * disable * unable 4. The word ‘port’ comes from a Latin word that means ‘bring’ or ‘convey.’ Thus, a ‘seaport’ or an ‘airport’ is a place where objects are brought into a country or conveyed out. * exported * imported * reported 5. When a person is unwillingly sent out of a country, we may not be sorry to see him go. * supported * imported * deported 18 6. Engineers had the vision to plan against mishaps in the rocket’s pre-launch testing. * hindsight * oversight * foresight 7. The file was supposed to be in the Desktop folder, but it was incorrectly put in My Documents. * misplaced * replaced * pre-positioned 8. Some pupils dislike the classroom because they are overly restless. * hyper-active * super-intelligent * ultra-modern 9. Many people who have lived a regular life find that when they reach the age of fifty, they bemoan a sense of boredom and yearn for new experiences. * non-life * pro-life * mid-life 10. My sister-in-law is divorced, but her former spouse is trying to get custody of the children. * extradition * ex-husband * ex-manager 11. My father worked 16 hours a day, five days a week, in a factory for a small hourly wage. He was underpaid and driven too hard. * anti-labor * overworked * disallow 12. Astrology is a system of knowledge that cannot be proven by rigorous testing or experimentation. * semi-conductor * pseudo-science * quasi-system Adapted from: Words to Texts©2008 by Eli Ben-Joseph (pp. 26-29). All Rights Reserved. 19 Reference What are references? References are words that point (refer) to other words in the text – either one word, a group of words, or a sentence (or sentences). Usually the word refers to something mentioned before it in the text, but sometimes it refers to something that comes after it. How do you know what the reference points to? If you are not sure of what is being referred to by the reference word, try the substitution test: Replace the reference word with the word(s) you think it points to and then read the sentence to see if it makes sense in the context. Examples: -Stress is experienced differently by different people, but it does cause a number of physiological changes in the body. The reference word “it” refers back to “stress.” -Though it may be tricky, men and women can successfully become close friends. The reference word “it” refers forward to “men and women can successfully become close friends.” Some Common Reference Words: Read the sentences below, and underline the referents for the reference words in bold. 1. it (they) Example: Healthy alternatives to sugar exist, and they need to be made more accessible to the public. 2. this (these), that (those) Example: Some educational researchers maintain that early intervention programs for disadvantaged children have long-term benefits. Other researchers disagree with this. Example: Some educational researchers believe that early intervention can help disadvantaged children and that decreasing class size in their schools will lead to enhanced educational results. However, these ideas are the subject of much debate. 20 3. one (ones) Example: There are many factors that may result in an innocent suspect being found guilty. One is public pressure to catch the criminal. 4. such (+ noun) Example: The number of hours people sleep may vary widely. Such variation may be the result of various factors, such as different lifestyles and physical needs. 5. so Example: Before reading a text, it is important to read the title and subtitles. Doing so may help you understand the main idea. 6. the former, the latter Example: Researchers compared orphaned rats and rats with mothers. The former were found to have more cell death in several brain regions. Example: Although Japanese students outperform Americans at early stages of education, the latter catch up and even surpass the former in university. 7. there, then Example: During World War II, 70% of the buildings in Berlin were destroyed by bombs. People living there then lived in terrible conditions. By Minna Lipner 21 Exercises 1 Underline the word(s) or sentence(s) that the reference (substitute) words replace. The first one is done for you. 1. The press cannot be separated from the movements in popular culture any more easily than the other media. The way it has developed has not protected it from contemporary pressures. 2. Perhaps the approach that philosophy offers will at least provide a framework for a theory of semantics. It would be comforting to think so. 3. Although in recent years, people frequent cinemas less and less, film making is still a major industry. There are a number of reasons for this. 4. The critics argued that although many popular novels claim to be involved with the "values of our civilization" they offer an extreme simplification of experience. 5. British consumers have been left to flounder in a pile of communications from industry, each one having reached them according to the speed of the publicity machine used. 6. To remain profitable, more firms are having to devote time and money to market planning. It is but a short step to persuade them that the information they should work with is that which reflects real needs and not merely the sales reports of their competitors' current models. 7. Our era is distinguished by much discussion on patriotism, social welfare, law, and order. Some people believe that such talk is only a mask to hide private indifference to public issues. 8. In 1945, there was a shortage of 2 million homes, and the new government promised to overcome it by constructing subsidized housing estates. 9. George Orwell predicted that by 1984 war ill have become peace. This is believed to have happened in certain totalitarian states. 22 10. In the world of business executives, images of status and achievement predominate. These, however, are so uniform that it is often difficult to evaluate any act that does not conform to an absolute standard. From: Build It Up, by A. Levine, B. Oded, and S. Statman, Aviv Printers. Exercise 2. Read the sentences below and answer the questions after each sentence. Identifying references will help you find the answers. 1. According to one of the traditional assumptions about earning and buying, if people who have money expect prices to go up, they will hasten to buy. If they expect prices to go down, they will postpone buying. But research surveys have shown that this is not always true. Which traditional attitude is not supported by research data? ______________________________________________________________________ 2. It is not merely desirable but essential for a teacher to have a genuine capacity for sympathy—in the literal meaning of that word; a capacity to tune in to the minds and feelings of other people, especially, since most teachers are school teachers, to the minds and feelings of children. Closely related with this is the capacity to be tolerant – not, indeed, of what is wrong, but of the frailty and immaturity of human nature that induce people, and especially children, to make mistakes. Which two qualities of a teacher are closely connected? ______________________________________________________________________ 3. The nineteenth century saw the sudden growth of many cities with populations ranging from 100,000 to 8 million. An important reason for this development lies with the great advances in technology that came during the second half of the eighteenth century and during the nineteenth century. What was one of the effects of the great advances in technology during the nineteenth century? ______________________________________________________________________ 4. At about 3 months of age, a baby is likely to smile if somebody comes close and talks to him. This shows that he is aware of the approach of the other person, that pleasurable sensations are aroused. If, however, the person moves too quickly or speaks too sharply, the baby may look apprehensive and cry. He will not “trust” the unusual situation but will have a feeling of uneasiness, of mistrust, instead. What kind of reaction shows that the baby is aware of the approach of another person? ______________________________________________________________________ 23 5. Democratic discipline uses punishments and rewards, with more emphasis on rewards. Punishments are never harsh. They are used where children willfully disobey their parents. How do parents react when children refuse to obey them? ______________________________________________________________________ 6. In Mexico and India, the “revolutionary party” tends to remain in power long after the revolution is over. It remains in power through popular gratitude and through the adept manipulation of the institutions that the veterans created in the first place for themselves. Like well-tailored suits, they fit their measurements perfectly. What are compared with well-tailored suits? ___________________________________ Whose measurements do they fit? ____________________________________________ From: Build It Up, by A. Levine, B. Oded, and S. Statman, Aviv Printers. 24 Sentence Structure UNDERSTANDING DIFFICULT SENTENCES: SENTENCE STRUCTURE What do you do if you come across a sentence that you don’t understand? You may look up the hard words in a dictionary. But - what do you do if you look up every hard word, and you still don’t understand the meaning? In this case, you may understand the sentence by breaking it down into its main parts. When you understand the main parts of a sentence, you can understand its main message. Then you can understand how the other parts of the sentence relate to the main parts, and understand the sentence one section at a time. What are the main parts of a sentence? The main parts of every sentence are the verb and the subject. The subject comes first, and the verb comes immediately after. Example: subject verb The children are selling lemonade. VERBS The verb can be an action word like swim, read, help, talk. The verb can also be the verb “be” (am, is, are, were, etc.). Example: subject verb The English teacher is nice. When is a verb form not a verb? Sometimes there are words that look like verbs that do not function as verbs in the sentence. 1. If the verb has “to” in front of it, it is not a verb. Example: subject verb To study English in university is sometimes difficult. 2. If the verb form is “verb+ing” without a helping verb, it is not a verb. Example: subject verb Studying English can be very exciting. subject verb The boringadj. lecture put the students to sleep. 25 3. Some words that take the form of “verb+ed” are adjectives. They come before a noun and they modify the noun. Example: subject verb The bored students snored gently. SUBJECTS The subject of a sentence is usually a noun or noun group (a noun + all of the words that modify it). Example: subject verb The exciting stories about the war heroes have been told many times. Sometimes the subject of a sentence is a clause (sentence), which includes a verb. If the subject is a clause, then the first verb is NOT the verb of the sentence – the second verb is. How do you know if a subject is a clause? a. If the sentence starts with a question word, but it’s not a question (no question mark at the end), then the subject is a clause. b. if the sentence starts with “whether, whoever, whenever, whichever, whatever” – the subject is definitely a clause. c. if the sentence starts with the word “that” – then you must check – the subject could be a noun or a clause. Examples: What I need is a long vacation. Whoever left their books on the floor should move them. That his theory was flawed soon became obvious How do you find the subject and verb of a sentence? 1. Start by finding the verb of the sentence. Start from the beginning of the sentence and find the first verb that can be a verb (if it has “to” before it, or if it has “ing” and no helping verb, or if it is part of a subject clause -- it is NOT a verb!). 2. After you find the verb, ask “who or what did the verb?” – the answer is the subject of the sentence. The subject always comes before the verb – and there shouldn’t be anything between the subject and the verb. 26 Once you have found the main subject and verb of the sentence, you can understand the main message of the sentence. SOME VARIATIONS Sometimes, there is an introduction to the sentence before the subject. The introduction is often a phrase describing when or where the sentence happened (and it will start with a preposition). Example: introduction subject verb In most modern countries, building new housing requires permits from the municipal government. Another kind of introduction is a phrase that starts with a V3 or V+ing. This kind of introduction describes the subject of the sentence; sometimes it gives a reason for the sentence. Examples: introduction: subject verb -Tired by her children’s constant demands, the mother quietly walked into her bedroom and closed the door. introduction subject verb -Complaining loudly about the unfairness of the school rules, the students marched into the principal’s office. If a sentence starts with “it is” or “there is”, technically, “it” and “there” are the subjects of the sentence, but they refer to the end of the sentence. Examples: -It is impossible to understand what they are saying. -There is a broad consensus in some societies that the proper role of a female is to be in the home. 27 Simple Sentences Exercise 1: Label the subjects and verbs in the following sentences. 1. The use of animal organs for transplantation into humans has traditionally met with failure. 2. Jonathan Allen, a virologist at the South-West Foundation for Biomedical Research in San Antonio, Texas, was recently quoted in Time magazine. 3. Writing about citizens and their voluntary services to the needy is a good way to record official appreciation. 4. Over the last several decades, public awareness of the medical feasibility of organ transplantation as a viable means of prolonging human life has increased. 5. This awareness, combined with a strong desire on the part of the medical establishment to promote the technique of transplants, has resulted in the creation of a demand for suitable donor organs that has far outstripped the limited supply. 6. Vilified by critics on the right and the left, the politician reluctantly retired from politics, still convinced of the justness of his claims. 7. Bored with hearing the same material explained again and again, the student looked for alternative means of stimulation. 8. Attempting to add to the literature on weight disorders, the researchers studied a college student sample of overweight men and women on diets to determine which factors lead to successful weight loss. 9. That he should fail to conduct the investigation seems very strange. 10. What all these events have in common is that they interfere with or threaten our accustomed way of life. 11. In humans, however, it is harder to predict what will be stressful to a particular person at a particular time. 12. There is one approach to improving health care that government members from all parties agree on: finding ways to prevent illnesses. 13. Whether a particular stimulus will be stressful depends on a person’s subjective appraisal of that stimulus. 14. Knowing the results of an AIDS test could not possibly help the mother of an infected child. 15. That the failure of the educational system in America is caused by the irrelevance of what is taught in school is emphasized by Goodman, a prominent educator. By Minna Lipner 28 Note how the subject may be expanded: Pronoun: It interests him. Noun: Behaviour interests him. Adjective & Noun: Animal behaviour interests him. Noun Phrase: The behaviour of captive animals interests him. Noun & Adj. Clause: The behaviour of animals which are aggressive interests him. Gerund Phrase: Watching animals interests him. Infinitive Phrase: To solve difficult social problems interests him. Noun Clauses: That animals are similar to people interests him. Reduced Adj. Clause: Animals found in remote parts of the world interest him. Note how the complement may be expanded: He studies it. He studies people. He studies unusual people. He studies all kinds of people in unusual situations. He studies reading. He studies to improve his knowledge. He studies people who suffer from various problems. He studies what interests him. He studies people involved in difficult situation. 29 SIMPLE SENTENCES Divide the sentences below into groups of words that go together. Start by finding the main subject(s) and verb(s) of each sentence. Then answer the comprehension questions that follow. 1. Whether or not acquisition of a new language in adults depends on a general learning ability is controversial. What do people argue about? (Complete the sentence.) Some people think ___________________________________________________ Others think ________________________________________________________ 2. The fact that research on anorexia nervosa continues to assert that eating disorders are psychiatric illnesses means that anorexics carry a stigma. Why are anorexics stigmatized? _________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 3. Job seekers’ decisions concerning whether or not to disclose information about a disability or associated needs must be based on knowledge about the benefits of disclosure as well as thorough information about their legal entitlements, rights, and responsibilities in disclosing. What do job seekers need to know about? a. _________________________________________________________________ b. _________________________________________________________________ Why do they need to know this? (Complete the sentence.) Because it will help them decide if they should tell employers ___________________________________________________________________ 4. In developing our critique, which is in part motivated by the necessity to examine the presuppositions of our own work, as well as the assumptions in work done by Fitch and Meltzer, we identify fundamental problems that must be addressed if progress is to be made in this area of inquiry. Why do the writers develop their critique? Because they think they must investigate __________________________________________________________________ and _______________________________________________________________ How do they develop the critique? (Answer briefly.) 30 By addressing ________________________________ 5. The mismatch between the elemental concepts of linguistics and cognitive neuroscience prevents the formulation of theoretically motivated, biologically grounded, and computationally explicit linking hypotheses that bridge neuroscience and linguistics. What is the difference between linguistics and cognitive neuroscience? Their ____________________________ (1-2 WORDS) do not _______________________ (1 WORD). Why is this a problem? (Fill in the blanks to answer the question.) Because it stops the creation of ___________________________ (ONE WORD) that connect ________________________________________________________. 6. That research on affective issues has generally looked for stable factors that can be measured by questionnaire, or even personal interviews, that most research from the past has focused on products, not on processes, has resulted in a lack of attention to the emotional reactions of students in research on affect in mathematics education. Why has research on affect in mathematics education ignored the emotional reactions of students? (Circle the correct phrases to complete the answer.) Because this research has sought PERSONAL INTERVIEWS / PRODUCTS STABLE FACTORS / EMOTIONAL REACTIONS , and it has concentrated on LACK OF ATTENTION / PRODUCTS / PROCESSES / RESEARCH ON AFFECT. 7. Improving practices on gender issues and promoting gender equality by hiring gender diverse senior management can improve the financial performance of a company and provide reputational benefits that enhance an organization’s ability to compete in the global marketplace for highly skilled workers. Which two actions are beneficial to companies? ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ In which two ways will they help companies? (Answer briefly): a. They will ________________________________ b. They will ________________________________ 31 8. An impressive first-century Roman arch of Pentelic marble with Corinthian capitals, known as The Arch of Titus, commemorates the emperor Titus’ triumphant victory in Jerusalem in 70 C.E. with depictions of the spoils taken from the Jewish Temple and an inscription recording the dedication of the arch by the Senate and people of Rome to “the divine Titus Vespasianus Augustus, son of the divine Vespasian.” What is the source of the information about the Roman victory in Jerusalem? a. Corinthian capitals; b. Jewish Temple c. The Arch of Titus d. The Roman Senate What two pieces of information are given? Underline the answers in the sentence. 9. To accurately reflect the significant number of studies describing sensory processing from multiple disciplines in addition to occupational therapy, we use terminology that is consistent with the terminology used by the studies’ authors, and, when possible, link the terms to current consensus terminology in sensory integration and practice. What 2 things do the writers do? a. ________________________________________________________________ b. ________________________________________________________________ Why do they do this? __________________________________________________________________ What kind of terminology do the writers use? __________________________________________________________________ 10. Given that stress, psychological resources (e.g., locus of control), and social support appear to have some role in the etiology of postpartum depression, the stress and coping paradigm (see Lazarus & Folkman, 1984 )--which could incorporate these findings--may be useful in this regard. Why does the writer think that the stress and coping paradigms may be useful? __________________________________________________________________ 32 11. In relation to personal resources, it has been suggested that, in comparison to people with internal control beliefs, those with external control beliefs are likely to doubt their ability to actively manage stressful situations, which means that they typically expend less effort on the development of coping, hence impairing their adjustment to stress. Who has difficulty adjusting to stress? __________________________________________________________________ Why do they have trouble with this adjustment? (Fill in the cause-effect chart to describe the process.) difficulty in adjusting to stress By Minna Lipner with Anna Lyubman Noun Groups A noun group is made up of a noun + all the words describing (modifying) it. There are several different types of modifiers: 1. Adjectives: nice friendly country; calm careful driver; incompetent, corrupt, oppressive and unrepresentative government 2. V+ing form: boring lecturer; developing country; convincing evidence 3. V3 forms: bored student; wasted day; developed country; manufactured goods *Adjective combinations: privately owned press; fairly untroubled life; commonly held belief 4. Nouns: In any noun-noun group, the second noun is the head noun and the first noun becomes an adjective describing the second noun. housework school day price list workhouse day school list price 33 5. Prepositional Phrases: the car in the garage; the book about the pioneers; the man with the mustache in the classroom about above across after among around at before behind below beneath beside between by down during except for from in into of off on over through to toward under up with Answer the questions after reading the sentences. 1. The university entrance test on grammar and spelling was given in the administration building. Which test was given? _________________________________________ In which building? _________________________________________ 2. The Knesset law committee chairman added his voice to the chorus of critics of the proposed legislation about stricter punishments for repeat offenders. Who added his voice? the _______________________ of the__________________________ What were people criticizing? ___________________________________________________ 3. The exhausted London city tour guide is waiting for the lost group from Brazil in the tourist information office on the corner. Which tour guide? _______________________ Which group? _________________________ Where is he waiting? ___________________________________ Questions by Minna Lipner Rewrite the following: 1. suggestion for the improvement of the restaurant of the university __________________________________________ 2. party for the staff of the department __________________________________________ 3. letter of news of the organization __________________________________________ 4. campaign for the prevention of accidents __________________________________________ 5. committee for the curriculum of the department of history __________________________________________ 34 Adjective Clauses An adjective clause is a group of words containing a verb that describes a noun. It comes after the noun it is describing. It is marked by the words who, whom, whose, which, that, when, where. Examples: The students who worked hard passed the test. The house where I was born has fallen down. The friend that I told you about passed his driving test. Identifying adjective clauses can help you in 2 ways: 1. It may help you find the main verb of the sentence – because you will know that the verb in the adjective clause is NOT the main verb of the sentence. 2. If you have a long, hard sentence, you can first put the adjective clauses into parentheses in order to shorten the sentence; then read the sentence without the adjective clauses and get the main message; and finally, add in the adjective clauses. Exercise 1: Circle the adjective clauses in the sentences below, and draw an arrow to the words that they modify. Then underline the main verb of the sentence. The first one has been done for you. 1. Thirty-four percent of people who said they never got sleepy during the day performed like a person with sleep apnea. 2. Reductions in the number of people who were suffering from infectious diseases stemmed from public health programs that kept these afflictions from occurring in the first place. 3. The shocker in this report is that husbands who kill their wives are not treated more leniently than men who kill strangers, despite the media myth to the contrary. 4. Virtually anything that sends the patient one of four messages – someone is listening to me; other people care about me; my symptoms are explainable; my symptoms are controllable – can bring measurable improvements in health. 5. People who have suffered strokes in certain brain regions have been known to have prolonged bouts of pathological laughter. 35 6. Sometimes the best strategy is to join a patient support group, where you can share your story and learn from those of people in the same predicament. 7. There is absolutely no support in this data for the claim that husbands who kill their wives are systematically treated with kid gloves by the system. Adapted from Minna Lipner Reduced Adjective Clauses Sometimes, the adjective clause marker (who, whom, whose, which, that, when, where) and the verb be are taken out. In other words, the adjective clause is reduced (made shorter). Examples: The idea that the teacher explained was important for understanding the text. The idea the teacher explained was important for understanding the text. The doctor who was available in the emergency room had not yet finished his training. The doctor available in the emergency room had not yet finished his training. The flowers which are blooming in the garden are my favorites. The flowers blooming in the garden are my favorites. The car that was taken by the thieves was found in an abandoned field. The car taken by the thieves was found in an abandoned field. How can we identify reduced adjective clauses? 1. The most important way is by reading to the end of the sentence and seeing which words go together. 2. There are some patterns to look for: noun + Ving (example 3); noun + V3 (with no helping verb) – (example 4); noun + V3 + by… (with no helping verb); and noun + adjective (example 2). When you see these patterns, you know that the words after the noun are an adjective clause modifying the noun. Exercise 2: Circle the reduced adjective clauses in the following sentences. Then draw arrows to the nouns that they modify. 1. Higher education obtained at a young age is often considered the key to economic stability. 2. One of the customers at McDonald’s sued the company for damages done in the course of drinking hot coffee in her car. 3. The cookies made with whole wheat flour were uneaten at the end of the day. 4. The prison inmates were brought to the court by the policeman known to be kind. 5. Ballet dancers struggling to maintain slim, graceful bodies often suffer from eating problems. 6. The researchers investigating language problems visited the schools attended by children with special needs in order to observe firsthand the influence of new techniques designed to alleviate language problems. 36 Exercise 3: Put parentheses around the adjective clauses in the following sentences, and draw an arrow to the noun they modify. Underline the main verb of each sentence. 1. One issue that has repeatedly gripped public attention in recent years is the issue of violence in the media. 2. Studies have shown that one factor contributing to high and rising levels of violence in the United States and elsewhere is media violence. 3. Several lines of research conducted in very different ways are consistent with this interpretation. 4. Participants who witnessed media violence later demonstrated higher levels of aggression than participants who were not exposed to such materials. 5. Results indicated that for boys who were rated by their teachers as being highly aggressive in the classroom, exposure to the violent program had the expected effects: it increased their violent behavior. 6. Such findings were not obtained among groups of boys previously rated as nonaggressive – a finding suggesting that violence in the media is more likely to enhance aggression among persons who already have a strong tendency for such behavior than among those in whom this tendency is relatively weak. 7. In the first game, the character controlled by subjects hit or kicked various villains in order to destroy them. 8. A new study using mice has raised questions about whether sunscreens can protect against melanoma. 9. The number of Americans diagnosed with melanoma has increased steadily for decades. 10. The secrecy surrounding HIV screening in newborns grew out of a reasonable effort to balance the need for information about the extent of the epidemic with the need to protect the privacy of patients, who may be discriminated against by employers and By Minna Lipner insurance companies. Exercise 4: I. Circle all of the words that modify the underlined head nouns, and answer the questions. 1. Observations of the children’s behavior revealed that those who had seen the model behave aggressively were much more likely to attack the inflated toy than those who had not witnessed such behavior. a. Which two groups are being compared in this sentence? ________________________________________ and ____________________________________ b. Which words in the sentence indicate that a comparison is being made? _____________________ c. What does the word “those” refer to? _______________________________ d. What is indicated by the word “that” in the sentence above? (Choose one answer.) -a new sentence within the sentence -a description of a noun 37 2. In a violent game called “Karetaka,” the character controlled by subjects hit or kicked various villains in order to destroy them. a. Who hit or kicked the villains? _______________________________________________ 3. Results indicated that youngsters exposed to violent programs or movies demonstrate higher levels of aggression than those exposed to nonviolent materials. a. Which two groups are being compared in this sentence? ___________________________________ and ____________________________________ b. Which words in the sentence indicate that a comparison is being made? ____________________ c. What does the word “those” refer to? _______________________________ d. What is indicated by the word “that” in the sentence above? (Choose one answer.) -a new sentence within the sentence -a description of a noun 4. These findings suggest that even very young children can acquire new ways of aggressing against others through exposure to filmed or televised violence. a. Who can acquire new ways of aggressing? ___________________________________________ b. What is indicated by the word “that” in the sentence above? (Choose one answer.) -a new sentence within the sentence -a description of a noun 5. In this investigation, second- and third-grade boys watched either an exciting film about a bike-racing team or excerpts from a popular, violence-filled television program. a. Who participated in this study? _____________________________________________________ b. What two things did they watch? ________________________________________ and ____________________________________ 38 II. Circle the noun groups in the sentences below. Underline the head noun in each group. (The number of noun groups in each sentence is written in parentheses at the end of each sentence.) 1. The latter film contained scenes in which the member of a special police team killed or knocked unconscious a large number of criminals. (2) 2. Results indicated that for boys who were rated by their teachers as being highly aggressive in the classroom, exposure to the violent programs had the expected effects: Those who watched these shows engaged in more acts of aggression during the hockey game. (6) 3. Such findings were not obtained among groups of boys who were previously rated as nonaggressive – a finding suggesting that violence in the media is more likely to enhance aggression among persons who already have a strong tendency for such behavior than among those in whom this tendency is relatively weak. (3) By Minna Lipner Noun Groups Exercise 5: Write the following sentences without adjectives and adjective groups: 1. Complex computer systems which were created to absorb statistical information may present problems to technicians who are inexperienced in the field. ______________________________________________________________________ 2. The clever little boy who had been dressed beautifully by his mother gave the flowers to the visiting queen. ______________________________________________________________________ 3. The bored, tired students fell asleep in the hot stuffy classroom. ______________________________________________________________________ 4. The cruel, merciless sun shone down on the traveling group and increased their burning, desperate need to find a source of purified water. ______________________________________________________________________ 5. The October Revolution’s amazingly easy victory occurred in a totalitarian country with a despotic and centralized bureaucratic system. 39 ______________________________________________________________________ 6. The weekend newspaper supplement is read by many regular contributors when they sit on the golden, grubby sans of the Tel-Aviv beach. ______________________________________________________________________ 7. The mathematics department curriculum committee will present its findings to the present rector. ______________________________________________________________________ 8. The large rambling semi-detached house which had always been the object of Jane’s dreams was bought by a member of a visiting basketball team. ______________________________________________________________________ 9. The amateur gardener used the grass cutter too near the blossoming flowers. ______________________________________________________________________ 10. Office staff who are bored in their work often gossip with friends whom they can reach by telephone. ______________________________________________________________________ Noun Modifiers Exercise 6: Read the following paragraph. Take all the adjective groups out, and translate the main idea into Hebrew. Dynamite On April 13, 1888, Alfred Nobel, a Swedish chemist and industrialist, who twenty years earlier had mixed a capricious, extremely powerful oil called nitroglycerine with kieselguhr, a diatomaceous earth, to create a baton shaped explosive which he called dynamite, woke to read his own obituary in a French newspaper. The notice, placed inadvertedly instead of the obituary of an older brother, who had died the previous day, described Nobel as a “merchant of death” whose work with explosives was responsible, to a great extent, for Europe’s accelerating arms race. ______________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ From Bryan D. Salvatore ‘The Vehement Fire’ 40 Expanded (Compound and Complex) Sentences Sentences can be expanded in two ways: 1. Two or more complete sentences may be attached together with a semicolon (;) or FANBOYS (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so). Each sentence has its own main subject and verb. Examples: -She wanted to take the course, yet it was already closed. -The children went out to play, and the adults stayed inside and talked. -We decided to cancel the picnic, for the weather forecast predicted rain. 2. Dependent sentences may be added to a complete (main) sentence. Each dependent sentence starts with a dependent marker (a.k.a. subordinator), and contains a subject and verb. The dependent sentences explain, or answer questions, about the main sentence. They also show the relationship between the main sentence and the dependent sentence(s). Common Dependent Markers / Subordinators: (Relationship of time) before, after, when, once, as long as, while, as soon as, until, as (Relationship of cause/effect/condition) as, since, inasmuch as, because, if, provided that, on condition that, unless, so that, in the hope that, in case (Relationship of contrast) in spite of, despite, though, even though, although, whereas, while Example: One complete sentence: The scientist will compile her results. One complete sentence + one dependent clause: The scientist will compile her results as soon as she gets home from the conference. One complete sentence + two dependent clauses: Although she has many other commitments, the scientist will compile her results as soon as she gets home from the conference. * To understand a long difficult sentence, break it up into separate sentences, and find the subject and verb of each sentence. 41 Expanded Sentences Exercise 1: Divide the following sentences into separate sentences. Circle the subordinators that mark the beginnings of new sentences. 1. If there were no wireless internet access on the campus, the students would be very unhappy despite the fact that this change might help them concentrate better during class. 2. After people have experienced a traumatic event, such as a car accident or terrorist attack, they often seek help in the form of psychotherapy in the hope that this therapy will help them overcome the distress that they feel as a result of their ordeal. 3. As people become more environmentally aware, they have started using environmentally friendly products in their daily lives since they realize that the changes they make can have a cumulative long-term impact on the world that we live in. 4. Because diet programs such as Atkins and Weight Watchers are advertised aggressively, they are very popular even though these diet programs involve a slow initial weight loss period before people can achieve their weight-loss goals. By Minna Lipner COMPLEX SENTENCES Exercise 2: Divide the sentences below into groups of words that go together. Start by finding the main subject(s) and verb(s) of each sentence. Then answer the comprehension questions that follow. 1. Although studies on alternative treatments for aggressive cancers are controversial, the amount of resources devoted to such studies suggests that they are motivated by a viable and successful research program, and implies that substantive progress is being made. What is the problem with the studies that are mentioned in this sentence? They are ________________________________ (ONE WORD). What are some advantages of these studies? (List 2.) ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ On the whole, is the writer more POSITIVE or NEGATIVE about these studies? Circle one answer: POSITIVE NEGATIVE 42 2. While insights gained by research into the neurological processes underlying language are certainly scientifically interesting, clinically relevant, and receive considerable popular attention, there are clear limitations to this methodology that dampen our enthusiasm about this approach as a comprehensive research program. What are the advantages of research on the neurological processes of language? It provides information that: ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ On the whole, is the writer more POSITIVE or NEGATIVE about this research? Circle one answer: POSITIVE NEGATIVE 3. Although the government has made efforts to pass legislation controlling investment scams, frauds of this type are reportedly on the rise as con artists target aging investors who are worried that their savings will not last them through their retirement. What is the main idea of this sentence? a. aging investors are concerned for their savings; b. investment scams are increasing; c. the government has enforced laws against frauds; d. con artists aim at elderly investors What has caused investment scams to increase? ___________________________________________________________________ Why are aging investors especially vulnerable to investment scams? ___________________________________________________________________ 43 4. In spite of significant breakthroughs in the development of human embryonic stem cell research that have left many people hopeful about its potential for new medical treatments, progress in this area has stalled as opponents debate the ethical issues involved in obtaining embryonic stem cells, resulting in the prevention of legislation that would provide for funding of this research. Fill in the following cause-effect chart about the sentence. lack of progress in human embryonic stem cell research What is the writer’s MAIN message regarding the future of the embryonic stem cell research? a. there has been considerable success in this area; b. it has potential for new medical treatments; c. there are ethical problems with this research; d. research in this area has come to a halt. 5. However, many terms in investor protection laws may not be binding since firms have the flexibility in their corporate bylaws to either choose to "opt-out" and decline a specific term or adopt additional terms not listed in the legal code. What can companies do if they don’t want to obey some aspects of investor protection laws? They can: __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ 6. Since they can be replicated to take the form of any cell or tissue in the body and have the ability to be produced in mass amounts, embryonic stem cells have the possibility of performing permanent organ repair when healthy cells of this type are injected into the body, a process commonly referred to as regenerative medicine, in the hope that terminal or life-altering diseases such as juvenile-onset diabetes, leukemia, and Parkinson’s disease can be cured. Why do embryonic stem cells have such great potential for curing diseases? ___________________________________________________________________ 44 What is regenerative medicine? When new cells in the body ___________________ ___________________________________________________________________ What is the purpose of regenerative medicine? _____________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 7. In this view, the data generated by the range of techniques that are used in neurolinguistic research – i.e. the neuropsychological deficit-lesion method, EEG, MEG, PET, or fMRI – provide evidence for concepts, representations, and processes that are independently motivated by linguistic research, and the neurolinguistic data give the theoretical-linguistic conceptual framework the authority of hard science methodology. In what ways is neurolinguistic research helpful to linguistic research? ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ By Minna Lipner with Anna Lyubman 45 Connectives INTRODUCTION I. Quickly scan the following paragraph. What is it about? How is it organized? There are several cultural reasons why the aged are stigmatized and oppressed in American society. One reason is that the members of our society are obsessed with youth. We have traditionally associated certain highly valued traits with youth: beauty, health, happiness, usefulness, etc. Second, in our rapidly changing, highly technical society, old people are considered unnecessary. Finally, the elderly are non-producers in a society where production translates into value. Adapted from: Ten Steps to Advancing College Reading Skills, by J. Langan, Townsend Press, NJ 1993 II. Try to predict the continuation of the following sentences. What helped you to guess? 1. Although I left my house late this morning, _______________________________ 2. Sharona decided to go to the party because _____________________________ 3. There are several things that I like about studying political science. First of all, ___________________________________________________________________ Transitions, which are also known as connectives or markers, have several functions: *They connect ideas and show relationships. *They can help us understand the organization of paragraphs and texts. *They may help us predict what will come next in the text. By Minna Lipner Connectives, which are also known as transitions or markers, have several functions: *They connect ideas and show relationships. *They can help us understand the organization of paragraphs and texts. *They may help us predict what will come next in the text. 46 Exercise. Read the following short passages. Use the markers to help you predict how each passage will continue. 1. A study of consumer behavior not only helps the marketing bodies, but it may also give useful information to a psychologist. Moreover… a. another result of a study of consumer behavior b. the specific information that such a study gives to a psychologist c. a problem in conducting a study of consumer behavior 2. Money did not become necessary until social groups developed and needed to increase the area of their trade and the field of individual specialization. People living in small groups can easily barter goods. But... a. the problem of barter for larger-groups b. the advantages of the barter system. c. a cause of the beginning of individual specialization 3. Most societies are stratified. In England, for example, we find a class system1 whereas in India, we find a caste system. The factors that determine a person’s class are largely economic. The factor that determines a person’s caste, on the other hand… a. a description of the economic factors that determine a person’s class b. a description of a factor that is not economic c. a comparison to show the similarity between class and caste 4. In the average classroom, the teacher does his or her best in distributing reinforcement within the class group or within groups for particular activities, hoping in this way to shape behavior progressively in the desired direction. This leads to… a. the result of the teacher’s efforts b. another method used by the teacher to shape behavior c. the description of the teacher’s methods 47 5. It is commonplace among moralists that you cannot get happiness by pursuing it. This is only true if you pursue it unwisely. Gamblers at Monte Carlo are pursuing money, and most of them lose it instead. But there are other ways of pursuing money that often succeed. So it is with… a. list of the successful ways of pursuing money b. something the writer will compare to pursuing money c. the result of the pursuit of money 6. Intelligence tests often seem to be biased against people from lower socioeconomic levels and minority groups. But tests are not biased simply because some people get higher scores than others. Bias means that the measurement represents different things for different people, which is not the same as simply showing a difference between people. For instance, a. an example of an unbiased intelligence test b. an example of what the measurement of an intelligence test means to different people c. a conclusion about intelligence tests 7. When a committee has acted favorably on a bill, the proposed legislation is sent to the Congress for open debate. When debate is ended, members vote to approve the bill, defeat it, table it, or return it to the committee. If the bill… a. an example of a specific bill that passed in Congress b. a specific condition in connection with the passing of the bill c. an explanation of how different legislative procedures developed From “Build It Up” by A. Levine, B. Oded, and S. Statman, Aviv Printers 48 Study the following table: *Words with more than one meaning TIME / ORDER ADDITION COMPARISON CONTRAST *first *then *next *since before after *as until previously *while when often frequently rarely seldom one not only(…but also) also besides apart from aside from as well as too another/other in addition additionally moreover furthermore *next firstly, second(ly) *first, second, third first of all, second of all last of all finally And *(both) *like just like just as…so equally correspondingly *as (…as) likewise similar(ly) neither…nor *both in the same way in a similar way in a similar fashion/manner *but however yet although (even) though instead rather than still conversely nevertheless nonetheless notwithstanding on the other hand despite in spite of *while in contrast (to) on the contrary unlike more than (tall)er…than whereas ILLUSTRATION CAUSE (REASON) EFFECT (RESULT) *like for example for instance to illustrate such as *thus including that is e.g. i.e. namely specifically in particular a case in point : ( ) *as *since for because (of) stem from arise from result from as a result of as a consequence of on account of owing to due to on the grounds that inasmuch as if…(*then) (C +E) originate in has its roots in consequently as a consequence as a result result in resulting bring about cause lead to therefore *thus so such/so…that (C+E) *then hence thereby accordingly give rise to 49 Cause and Effect Transitions of cause indicate that the reason for something will follow, and transitions of effect show that the result of something will follow. Note that sometimes the cause comes first, and sometimes the effect comes first. There is no difference in meaning. Sick people who laugh a lot may recover more quickly because laughter increases the production of new immune cells in the body. Because laughter increases the production of new immune cells in the body, sick people who laugh a lot may recover more quickly. Cause Effect ________________________________ ________________________________ Sometimes, there is more than one cause, or more than one effect. Some scientists believe that in the coming century, there will be more droughts as well as rising sea levels due to global warming. Cause(s) Effect(s) ________________________________ _________________________________ Violent conflicts and political or religious persecution in a country may result in increased immigration to more peaceful or tolerant regions. Cause(s) Effect(s) __________________________________ __________________________________ In some cases, a marker of time may indicate a cause/effect relationship. When it rains a lot in the desert, there are flash floods. Cause Effect _______________________________ _________________________________ 50 Sometimes there is a cause/effect relationship with no explicit marker of cause/effect. In many cases, the verbs indicate the relationship. Some words that may indicate cause/effect relationships: trigger necessitate produce influence overwhelm disrupt disturb contribute create attribute Lots of exercise and fresh air contributed to Sam’s quick recovery. Cause Effect ______________________________ __________________________________ By Minna Lipner Exercise 1: Circle the marker that shows cause or effect. Write which it shows. Answer the question. 1. Owing to the bad weather, the game was cancelled. -What caused the cancellation? _______________________________________________________ 2. As a consequence of his bad behavior, he was confined to his room for the evening. - What was the result of his behaving badly? ______________________________________________________ 3. Pollution comes from human beings' carelessness in protecting the environment. - What is the consequence of our lack of concern? _____________________________________________________ 4. Due to the devaluation, Tomer no longer had enough money to fly home. - What caused Tomer's problem? ____________________________________________________ 5. The hot weather is impossible. It makes sense, therefore, to buy air conditioners. - How can the problem be resolved? ___________________________________________________ 51 6. Inasmuch as a six day week is tiring, it makes sense to introduce a shorter working week. - What is the cause of the problem? __________________________________________________ 7. New measures have been introduced, since most of the workers are dissatisfied. - What did the workers' complaints result in? __________________________________________________ 8. Dehydration stems from lack of liquids in the body. - What is the cause of dehydration? _________________________________________________ Connectives of Cause Connectives of Effect Exercise 2: Find the cause and the result and circle the marker. 1. The change in weather led to the cancellation the picnic. 2. The crops failed and consequently there was a sudden rise in prices. 3. Freudian theories have come to explain “everything”, and therefore these theories are never ready to accept a straight political biography at its face value. 4. Natural gas prices are at their lowest point in more than 10 years, due to too much supply and too little demand. 5. The high growth rates result partly from declines in infant and child mortality rates due to improving health practices. 52 6. Internal control over behavior comes from educating children to behave in a proper manner and by sowing them the rewards for doing so. Exercise 3: Choose the appropriate completion from the list below for each of the following sentences. A B 1. Her satires were so brilliant ____ a. that several people fell asleep. 2. From infancy on, the individual is so b. as to make even her victims laugh. dependent upon the judgment of others for direction in his own affairs ____ 3. He spoke so monotonously ____ c. that no one is likely to attempt it. 4. The news in western countries is so d. that he comes to lean heavily on the pervasive ____ opinion of others. 5. This is so difficult a task to accomplish e. that it has become one of life's alone ____ necessities. B Exercise 4: In the following sentences, circle the markers that show cause or effect. Answer the question that follows. 1) Nine-tenth of the serious controversies which arise in life result from misunderstandings. What causes most controversies? ___________________________________________________________________ 2) Her claim was rejected by the board on the grounds that she had not paid her premium. Why did the board reject her claim? ___________________________________________________________________ 3) The fact that Karl Marx had an illegitimate son was not known in his lifetime because the Socialists wanted to protect his reputation. 53 In an attempt to protect Marx’s reputation, the Socialist party __________________ ___________________________________________________________________ 4) Increasingly acid rain and the destruction of plant and fish are some of the most alarming consequences of industrial pollution. What are the effects of pollution caused by industry on the environment? ___________________________________________________________________ 5) Farmers look forward to favorable weather conditions which will contribute to good harvests. A good harvest ensures an adequate supply of food for local consumption. Good harvests 6) Since academic achievements demanded of the lower-class child are beyond his or her capacity, it is common to find pupils with a sense of alienation from school or with bitter resentment against the middle class personnel who staff the school system. What are the consequences of the high academic demands on children from lower classes? ____________________________________________________________ Exercise 4: Read the following text. The recent flood of cheaper imports has had a disastrous effect on American industry. The steady decline in the demand for local products, which are often more expensive than the competition from abroad, has forced many American businesses to close down and this, in turn, has given rise to widespread unemployment. A case in point is the American car industry. Lower-priced foreign cars have drastically reduced the sales of automobiles manufactured in the U.S.. As a result, many car factories and their suppliers have had to shut their doors, leaving thousands of Americans jobless. Fill in the boxes with the appropriate letters from the list of items below (taken from the text). a. many business fail to survive Main Chain b. less expensive foreign cars c. cheap imports cause1 54 effect1 effect 2 effect 3 d. car industries are forced to stop operating e. less U.S. products are sold f. decrease in the U.S. car sales g. automotive workers loose their jobs Illustration Chain h. unemployment increases sharply cause1 effect1 effect 2 effect 3 Exercise 5: Read the text below and answer the questions. The Effects of Advertising on Women Adapted from: J. Moore, The Effects of Advertising on Women, Justice #29 March 2002 1. The anxiety girls and women experience from feeling unattractive is arguably one of the most pervasive and damaging consequences of advertising. Only one body type is almost always presented in the media and in advertisements -- that of a very tall, thin woman -- a woman who would meet the criteria for anorexia as 15% below normal weight (APA 1994). In reality, this unhealthy body shape is unattainable for 99% of women (Kilbourne 1997). Many times, even these "beautiful" women are deemed not good enough for advertisements. Photographs are airbrushed or otherwise altered to remove any lines, bumps, or lumps - anything less than "perfection." If the ideal of beauty is physically unattainable, then consumers will never be able to attain the image they want, and therefore there will be an endless demand for new beauty products. This is the reason for the incredible proliferation of the weight-loss, fashion, and cosmetics industries, which are among the largest and most profitable consumer industries. 2. Another serious problem is the fact that ads almost always portray women as sex objects, in order to increase the appeal of their product. This significantly affects the way women think about themselves, particularly young women, because it is during the adolescent stage of life that young people develop their sense of self and identity. This sends the underlying message to women and girls that the only important thing about themselves is the way they look, causing many women to believe that their self-worth is dependent upon attention from men. Commodification of women as sex objects has 55 another very detrimental effect on girls and women. The constant abuse of women's sexuality to sell products in the beer, sports, film and music industries, for example, has completely distorted our understanding of sexuality and gender roles. In addition, the commodification of women undoubtedly contributes to the high incidents of rape and physical assault in our society. In the US, a woman is raped every 3 minutes, and 55% of women report having experienced rape and/or physical assault in their lifetime (Sisterhood Is Global Institute, 1998). Questions Circle or highlight all of the words that point to causes and effects in the paragraph. Then answer the questions. 1. According to the writer, what is one of the worst effects of advertising on women? ___________________________________________________________________ _______________ 2. Why are advertisements filled with “perfect” women with a very tall, thin shape? ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________ 3. What is the reason that advertisers choose to depict women as sex objects? ___________________________________________________________________ 4. List several of the consequences of this depiction. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ By Minna Lipner 56 Markers of Contrast When you see a marker of contrast in a text, it means that two things are being contrasted; that is, they are different from one another. Example Unlike his father, Larry decided to study at university. Some markers — although, in spite of, despite, yet, still, nevertheless, notwithstanding — do more than indicate a contrast. They indicate that what happens in reality is a surprise, given our expectations. Examples 1. Although trade union movements are intended to serve the interests of the workers, they are often influenced by political considerations. 2. Despite the continued existence of corruption, the President’s economic moves are beginning to pay off. 3. In spite of the Administration’s concern about the talkative federal employees, the frequency of leaks from Government officials has not changed. 4. Notwithstanding a steady decline in numbers, the school has had a very successful year. Exercise 1.What is being contrasted? Which marker is used to show the difference? 1. Unlike sports, politics, entertainment, the arts or the law, teaching does not give rise to “stars”. Nobody ever got a Nobel Prize for teaching achievements. 2. The refrigerator repair service is governed by regulations of the Indu and Trade Ministry, whereas air-conditioning servicing is not. 3. Contrary to popular notions, Americans continue to show remarkable financial responsibility: almost all consumers pay theft bills on time. 4. Professional writers do not wait for inspiration. On the contrary, they stick to a strict schedule of writing. 5. Reporters, as opposed to opinion journalists, traditionally have tried to keep their personal feelings and opinions out of their reports. 57 6. There is a considerable consensus in support of our criminal laws; however, attitudes toward others may vary from apathy to active opposition. Exercise 2 Read the passage below. Highlight the markers of contrast. Answer the questions. Japanese Education Excerpted from Can Race Be Linked to Intellect? Time Magazine, October 6, 1986 Japanese experts speak on education: Tamotsu Senogoku, director of the Japanese Youth Research Institute states: “It is simply outlandish to think that you could generalize the state of intelligence or even education with but a few words.” He points out that in Japan, discipline and expectations of the young are much more stringent in schools and in family life than they are among Americans. In the U.S., schools run an average of 180 days a year. In Japan, they run 240 days and assign heavier course loads and homework. Hence the Japanese superiority in, for example, early math – though in cognitive capacity (the bedrock ability to learn) no difference shows between youngsters of the two nations. Significantly too, in a monolithic nation like Japan, where more than 90% of the people consider themselves middle class and the ethic is to conform to society rather than challenge it, the dropout rate among high school seniors is 2%, in contrast to 27% in the U.S. Yet Japanese scholars view the regimented conformity of their schools with increasing concern, fearing that it stifles creativity. Says Joetsu University’s Shibuya, “Consider the number of Nobel Prizes won so far by Japanese - fewer than ten. The number in the U.S.? More than 100. Steven Jobs, who founded Apple Computer on a shoestring and no college degree (he dropped out), is an example of the kind of creativity that American society can foster. Job’s achievement would be unthinkable in Japan, where no degree equals no such chance. Notes Harvard’s Chall: “Their computer managers…. are trying to emulate the more ‘freed up’ American approach.” The Japanese are also aware that, once in college, their students tend to slack off – possibly out of relief from surviving their earlier regiment – while Americans turn up the heat. As a result, the top 10% of U.S. students equal or surpass the achievements of their Japanese counterparts. With such contrasts in mind, the Research Institute’s Senogoku concludes,” There are, in fact, differences in education between out countries. And as far as I’m concerned there should be differences.” 58 I. Fill in the following table about the differences in Japanese and American education. Put an X in the appropriate column. Indicate the markers of contrast or words that helped you find the answer. The first one is done for you. JAPAN 1. discipline and expectations of the young (par. 1) 2. length of school year (par. 1) USA X 3. course loads and homework (par. 1) 4. achievements in early math (par. 1) 5. conforming to the norms of society (par. 2) 6. Dropout rate (par. 2) 7. creativity (par. 2) 8. number of Nobel Prizes (par. 2) 9. achievements in college (par. 3) 10. achievements of top students 59 Markers of contrast/ evidence from the text much more stringent II. Comprehension Questions 1). Complete the following cause and effect chain: Cause: Japanese schoolchildren learn for more days and do more homework. Effect: _________________________________________________________________ What marker helped you find the answer? ______________________ 2). TRUE/ FALSE: Japanese superiority in early math is the result of better cognitive abilities. Bring evidence from the text to support your answer. ______________________________________________________________________ 3). Why is the word “Yet” used in par. 2? _____________________________________ 4). Why does the writer mention Steven Jobs (par. 2)? _________________________ ______________________________________________________________________ 5). Does Tamotsu Senogoku think that the differences between Japanese and American education should disappear? YES/ NO Quote from the text to support your answer. ______________________________________________________________________ By Anna Lyubman 60 Markers of Comparison When you see a transition of comparison in a text, it means that two things that are similar are being compared. Thus, you must understand: a. which two things are being compared, and b. what is similar about them. Examples: A rose is the visible result of a multitude of complicated occurrences in the depths of the earth and in the air above. Similarly, a work of art is the product of strange activities in the human mind. Adapted from Clive Bell Which two things are being compared? ________________________________ and _______________________________ What is similar about them? _____________________________________________ My neighbor has as many chins as a Chinese phone book. Which two things are being compared? ________________________________ and _______________________________ What is similar about them? ____________________________________________ Exercise 1: Each of the following sentences contains a comparison. Read the sentences and circle any transitions of comparison. Then explain: a. which two things are being compared, and b. how they are similar. 1. Like the middle-class children in Fuhrman’s study, middle-class children in our study thought that they should have to do some household chores in exchange for their allowance. Which two things are being compared? _________________________________ and ______________________________ What is similar about them? ___________________________________________________________________ 2. Women initiate violence against their male partners as often as men initiate violence against their female partners. Which two things are being compared? _________________________________ and ______________________________ 61 What is similar about them? ___________________________________________________________________ 3. As in previous studies, this study showed that people driving while talking on cell phones were involved in more car accidents than people who weren’t talking on the phone while driving. Which two things are being compared? ________________________________ and _______________________________ What is similar about them? ___________________________________________________________________ 4. The writer Napoleon Hill once said: “Just as our eyes need light in order to see, so our minds need ideas in order to conceive.” Which two things are being compared? _______________________________ and _______________________________ What is similar about them? ___________________________________________________________________ 5. In terms of their effects on society, the impact of Gutenberg’s printing press in the 15th century was as significant as the Internet has been in the last century. Which two things are being compared? ________________________________ and _______________________________ What is similar about them? ___________________________________________________________________ 6. Soldiers in the army fight harder when they are treated well and when their commanders maintain their calm. In a similar fashion, human immune cells function better when they are protected from toxins and undue stress. Which two things are being compared? ______________________________ and _________________________________ What is similar about them? ___________________________________________________________________ 7. Neither students in Israeli universities nor their counterparts in American colleges feel that university education adequately prepares them for the real world. Which two things are being compared? _______________________________ and _______________________________ What is similar about them? 62 ___________________________________________________________________ By Minna Lipner Comparison and Contrast Read the text below, and circle the markers of comparison and contrast. Then answer the questions. Murder in Families 1. The Justice Department recently put out a report on “murder in families,” which contains some surprising information. For example, the report shows that husbands who kill their wives are not treated more leniently than men who kill strangers, despite the media myth to the contrary. Indeed, they were as likely to be charged with first-degree murder, were no more likely to have their cases dismissed or diverted, and were as likely to be convicted. Nor were their sentences significantly different, when relevant "case characteristics"--such as prior criminal record--were taken into account. Indeed, the only real difference is that spousal murderers "required less time to disposition than other types of murder cases." 2. In addition, some of the Justice Department data dramatically undercuts another myth: that husbands who kill their wives are treated more leniently than wives who kill their husbands. The available evidence points overwhelmingly in the opposite direction. Wives who kill their husbands were acquitted in 12.9 percent of the cases studies, while husbands who kill their wives were acquitted in only 1.4 percent of the cases. Women who were convicted of killing their husbands were sentenced to an average of six years in prison, while men received an average of seventeen years for killing their wives. Sixteen percent of female spousal killers get probation, compared to 1.6 percent for male. By almost every other measure as well, female spousal killers are treated more leniently than male spousal killers. Adapted from: Dershowitz, Alan M. 1994. "Wives Also Kill Husbands--Quite Often." In The Abuse Excuse: And Other Cop-outs, Sob Stories and Evasions of Responsibility. Boston: Little Brown. 63 Paragraph 1: Who is being compared? Similarities Difference a. b. Which general idea do the comparisons and contrasts in this paragraph support? ______________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: This paragraph is COMPARING / CONTRASTING two groups: _________________________________ and _________________________________. Which aspects are being compared / contrasted? (List 3) ____________________________________ ____________________________________ ____________________________________ What is the MAIN difference between the two groups? ______________________________________________________________________ By Minna Lipner 64 General Ideas – Specific Examples/ Illustration Exercise Read the following paragraph and answer the questions regarding generalization, definition, example or illustration, and explanation in the paragraph. CIVIL CONSCIENCE The state tends to deprive people of their humanity. By the “state” is meant the government that hires, musters, and enforces laws and decrees through its bureaucratic set-up. The mass of people serve the state not so much as thinking humans but as physical machines without judgment or sense. They become the state’s standing army and militias, jailers and constables. They have the same sort of worth only as a horse or a dog. Yet they are commonly esteemed as good citizens. Certain others, like most legislators, politicians, lawyers, and clerics serve the state chiefly with their heads; and, as they rarely make any moral distinctions, they are as likely to fail by serving evil, though unintentionally, as good. A very few, who are heroes, patriots, great reformers and human beings, serve the state with their consciences, and so must usually disobey it. 1. What is the generalization that the “mass of people” and “certain others” illustrate? 2. What is the definition of the state? 3. Complete the following explanation according to the paragraph. The paragraph explains that the mass of people do not act like people because they do not behave as __________________________ but rather as _________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 4. What kinds of jobs are offered as examples of the sort of work which the state assigns to ordinary people? i. ____________ ii. ____________ iii. ____________ 65 iv. ____________ 5. Give one example of “Certain others.” _______________________ 6. Complete the following explanation according to the paragraph. Although certain others use their heads, they usually fail to make _______________. 7. According to the final illustration, how do people with consciences generally serve the state? Complete the following sentence with one word. A small number, who act as human beings, ____________ the state. From: From Words to Texts ©2008 by Eli Ben-Joseph. REVIEW OF CONNECTIVES How Consistent is Human Behavior? Adapted from Introduction to Psychology, ed. by Ernest R. Hilgard I. Read the text and circle all the transitions. Then answer the questions that follow. 1. In studying personality, psychologists try to discover regularities in behavior. An assumption that is basic to most personality theories is that people behave consistently. But the empirical evidence for personality consistency is slim. Research over the years has failed to demonstrate much consistency in human behavior either over time or across situations. For example, one of the earliest studies of “moral character” in children found very low correlations between different measures of honesty – a child might lie to a teacher but not to a parent, cheat in the classroom but not on the playground (Hartshorne and May, 1928; 1929). Studies of other personality traits including self-control, cooperativeness, and submissiveness have also demonstrated little cross-situational consistency. 1. How do we explain the discrepancy between the data and our intuitive assumption that personality is consistent? One possibility is that the consistency assumption is wrong. Behavior is largely situation specific, and we attribute more consistency to a person’s behavior than actually exists. There are numerous reasons why we may do so (c.f. Bem and Allen, 1974). We will mention only three. First, our preconceived notions of how people behave may lead us to generalize beyond our actual observations. That is, we 66 may fill in missing data according to our “implicit personality theories” of what traits and behaviors go together (Schneider, 1973). Specifically, stereotypes of how a “homosexual” or a “career woman” or an “athlete” behave may cause us to attribute greater consistency to a person’s actions than observations warrant. Furthermore, our own presence can result in people behaving in certain ways. Thus, our acquaintances may appear to be behaviorally consistent because we are present as a stimulus during every observation we make. They may behave quite differently when we are not observing them. Lastly, because the actions of another person are such a salient feature of any scene, we tend to overestimate the extent to which behavior is caused by personality characteristics or attitudes and underestimate the importance of situational forces that may lead the person to act as he does (Jones and Nisbett, 1971). Observing someone behaving aggressively, we assume that the person has an aggressive disposition and will behave similarly in other settings – even though the situational factors may be quite different. Questions 1. a. How many groups of studies are cited in paragraph 1 to support the main idea of the paragraph? ________________ b. Which words signal the list of studies? _________________________________ 2. What does the dash ( - ) in paragraph 1 indicate? __________________________ 3. Self-control, cooperativeness, and submissiveness are all examples of ______________________ ___________________ (2 words) that show SOME / VERY LITTLE consistency across _______________________________. 4. Paragraph 2 mentions 3 reasons why ___________________________________ 5. Which words signal the reasons? _______________________________________ 6. Why do we generalize beyond our observations? __________________________________________________________________ 7. a. Copy the explanation in the text of what it means to generalize beyond our observations. __________________________________________________________________ b. Give an example of generalizing. __________________________________________________________________ 8. According to the second reason, what makes people behave in certain ways? __________________________________________________________________ 67 9. What kind of relationship is indicated by the word “thus” in paragraph 2? ____________________________ 10. What is the relationship between the last two sentences of the article? (Notice that without a transition, it’s much harder to figure out!) ____________________________ By Minna Lipner Groups in Society Read the text below and use your knowledge of transitions to help answer the questions that follow. To understand how different groups affect society and individual behavior, we must first classify human beings in social groups. Inasmuch as primary relationships are satisfying and enjoyable, they are an end in themselves and not a means to a political, economic, or any other end. Members of the primary group feel free to speak their minds and express emotion. Close friends and families are the typical primary groups. If people associated only when they liked each other, however, society would not last long. Secondary groups provide enduring relationships that do not depend on personal attraction and intimacy. The characteristics of secondary groups are roughly opposite those of primary groups. Members of secondary groups have disparate rather than common goals, and they value the extrinsic political, economic, or other benefits of the relationship rather than the relationship itself. While relations in primary groups are personal and spontaneous, those in secondary groups are impersonal and constrained. Such relations exist, for example, between sales clerks and customers, employees and employers, and taxpayers and the Internal Revenue Service. Because secondary contacts are brief and formal in nature, they are not emotionally involving. When you buy toothpaste in a drugstore, you have a purely rational relationship with the clerk who sells it to you. Whether you like him or not is irrelevant. As far as you are concerned, the transaction could just as well be made by an automatic vending machine. If this distinction sounds too simple, it is because primary and secondary groups are sociological concepts that do not exist in their pure forms in the real social. Moreover, it would be difficult to find a secondary group that was completely rational and unfeeling. In fact, most secondary groups rely on the primary relationships among their members, 68 since no group could long survive without the loyalty and cooperation of the people who belong to it. Questions: 1. What is the purpose of classifying humans in social groups? ___________________________________________________________________ 2. What is the goal of primary relationships? ___________________________________________________________________ 3. Under what condition would society survive? ___________________________________________________________________ 4. True / False: Secondary groups offer relationships that are based on attraction and expression of emotions and ideas. ___________________________________________________________________ 5. How are the features of secondary groups different from those of primary ones? ___________________________________________________________________ 6. What does the example of the purchase of toothpaste in the drugstore illustrate? ___________________________________________________________________ 7. What does the word "they" in line 15 refer to? ___________________________________________________________________ 8. Yes / No: Does the author agree with the social distinction made in this passage? (2 reasons) ___________________________________________________________________ 9. Fill in the missing cause: Cause: ____________________________________________________________ Effect: Most secondary groups depend on primary relationships among themselves. 69 Inference Exercise: Read the following sentences and answer the questions after each sentence. 1. The research has shown that, contrary to popular opinion, men talk more than women. What popular belief has been refuted by the research? ____________________ ________________________________________________________________ 2. In contrast to what many people believe, fat does not convert to energy through physical exercise. a. What do many people believe? ______________________________________ b. What happens in reality? ___________________________________________ 3. Unlike all the previous tests, this exam has been difficult! Complete: All the previous examinations __________________________________. 4. Researchers have repeatedly refuted the claim that neither the average Third World man nor the average Third World woman wants to limit the size of their family. Complete: It was once thought that both Third World woman and Third World man _____________________________________. However, according to the research, ___________________________________________________________________ 5. The government should not any more avoid the issue of the increased juvenile delinquency. We can infer from this sentence that today the government does not _________ _______________________________________________________________. 6. Mary and Jane are twin sisters. Most teachers believe Jane to be the leader of the two. However, their mother believes the opposite. a. What do the teachers think about Mary? _____________________________ b. What does the mother think about Jane? _____________________________ c. Which daughter is domineering, according to the mother? _______________ By Dr Anna Lyubman 70 Paragraph Structure Main Ideas and Supporting Details Topics versus Ideas A topic is the general subject of something. It is usually written as a phrase. An idea (or main idea) is what someone says about a topic. It is always written as a positive sentence. Practice: Next to each item below, circle “topic” or “idea.” 1. TOPIC / IDEA The accuracy of victims’ and bystanders’ descriptions of the criminal. 2. TOPIC / IDEA People often get mixed up about where they heard or saw something. 3. TOPIC / IDEA The human ability to acquire details during a crime. 4. TOPIC / IDEA The resemblance of a person in the lineup to the criminal. 5. TOPIC / IDEA Witnesses often choose the person in a lineup who most resembles the criminal, even if the resemblance is not very strong. 6. TOPIC / IDEA How reliable the eyewitness testimony is. 7. TOPIC / IDEA The difference between eyewitnesses and victims in remembering the suspect. Now choose any two topics from the list above and rewrite them as main ideas. Each main idea should be written as a sentence explaining what you would like to say about the topic. Dr. Anna Lyuman Adapted from Minna Lipner 71 What is a paragraph? A paragraph is a group of sentences that develop one idea. This main idea is usually located at or near the beginning of the paragraph, but sometimes it appears in other places in the paragraph. The rest of the sentences support or develop the main idea: they can be quotes, explanations, proof, examples, causes, effects, comparisons, or contrasts. Sentences that directly support the main idea are called major supporting details; sentences that expand on major supporting details are called minor supporting details. Different Paragraph Structures 1. Main Idea (Expansion / explanation of main idea) Supporting Details (Conclusion) 2. Introduction / Supporting Details Main Idea Supporting Details 3. Main Idea Supporting Details Main Idea 4. Supporting Details Main Idea 5. Implied Main Idea Supporting Details 72 6a. One Main Idea for 2 (or more) paragraphs: Type 1 Main Idea Supporting Details Supporting Details (Main Idea) 6b. One Main Idea for 2 (or more) paragraphs: Type 2 Main Idea Supporting Detail 1 Supporting Detail 2 73 Exercise 1 Read the following paragraph and fill in the information below describing its structure. Health Care for the Poor In view of the overwhelming health problems among the poor, it is important to make massive efforts to prevent such problems, which is usually much less costly than treating them later on. There are a couple of important approaches to take in working to prevent illness among the poor. First of all, there should be a major focus on preventive health services to poor children and their families. Such programs should include immunization schedules, along with parent education on the need for such immunization and help in getting children to the clinics. The clinics should emphasize dental care, an often neglected service. More extensive prenatal care is needed. In addition, society must also fight the social conditions of poverty that breed disease. We have to help more lowincome people get better housing, free from the rats that bite their babies and the lead paint that poisons their toddlers. We have to help people break out of the cycle of poverty, illiteracy, and unemployment if we are going to make the promise of medical progress become a reality for all our citizens. 1. Copy the sentence from the paragraph that is the main idea. (Remember, the main idea is the sentence that most or all of the other sentences support.) ________________________________________________________________ 2. Fill in the major and minor supporting details: (A and B are the major details.) A. ______________________________________________________________ 1.___________________________________________________________ 2. __________________________________________________________ 3. __________________________________________________________ 4. __________________________________________________________ 5. __________________________________________________________ B. ______________________________________________________________ 1. __________________________________________________________ 2. __________________________________________________________ Exercise 2 Read the following paragraphs, and underline the main ideas. Then answer the questions that follow. *Hint: If you are not sure if a sentence is the main idea, ask yourself: Does most or all of the paragraph support this idea? If the answer is “yes,” then that is the main idea. 74 1. A growing body of experimental and human evidence has identified a number of significant environmental risk factors as causes of cancer. They include past diagnostic and therapeutic radiation; diets high in some fats and low in fresh fruits and vegetables; workplace exposure to chemicals, dust, and fumes; pharmaceuticals; sunlight; and heavy alcohol drinking. Long-term, low-level exposures to some environmental contaminants, such as small particulates, chlorination by-products in domestic water, and organochlorine residues in animal and fish fat appear to increase the risk of cancer in human populations, and extensive animal studies indicate a clear risk. Some compounds may function by altering hormones, whereas others may directly affect gene expression. (Excerpted from: “An Ounce of Prevention” By D. L. Davis and H. P. Freeman, From Scientific American, September 1994) What kind of support is there in this paragraph? ____________________________ 2. In the face of danger, this short-lived reaction to stress helps you survive. If the stress response is regularly tripped for the wrong reasons, however, it has the opposite effect. Indeed, researchers have known for some time that chronic stress often leads directly to certain illnesses, including heart disease, hypertension, depression, immune suppression and diabetes. Recently they have discovered that stress also causes developmental abnormalities, unhealthy weight gain and neurodegeneration. Fortunately, some of these new insights suggest better means for combating excess stress. (Excerpted from: “Don’t Stress” By K. Leutwyler, From Scientific American, January 1998) What is the function of the first sentence in the paragraph? _______________________ What is the function of the last sentence in the paragraph? _______________________ 3. How do we explain the discrepancy between the data and our intuitive assumption that personality is consistent? One possibility is that the consistency assumption is wrong. Behavior is largely situation specific, and we attribute more consistency to a person’s behavior than actually exists. There are numerous reasons why we may do so (c.f. Bem and Allen, 1974). We will mention only three. First, our preconceived notions of how people behave may lead us to generalize beyond our actual observations. That is, we may fill in missing data according to our “implicit personality theories” of what traits and behaviors go together (Schneider, 1973). Specifically, stereotypes of how a “homosexual” or a “career 75 woman” or an “athlete” behave may cause us to attribute greater consistency to a person’s actions than observations warrant. Furthermore, our own presence can result in people behaving in certain ways. Thus, our acquaintances may appear to be behaviorally consistent because we are present as a stimulus during every observation we make. They may behave quite differently when we are not observing them. Third, because the actions of another person are such a salient feature of any scene, we tend to overestimate the extent to which behavior is caused by personality characteristics or attitudes and underestimate the importance of situational forces that may lead the person to act as he does (Jones and Nisbett, 1971). (Excerpted from: “How Consistent is Human Behavior?” From Introduction to Psychology, ed. By E. R. Hilgard) Circle the words that signal the major supporting details in the paragraph. What kind of support is used in this paragraph? ___________________________ 4. Whatever the challenges of male-female friendship, researchers agree that to succeed as friends, both genders have to openly and honestly negotiate exactly what their relationship will mean--whether sexual attraction is a factor and how they'll deal with it--and establish boundaries. In Afifi's and Reeder's studies, the friendships that survived--and even thrived--after sex or attraction came into play were those in which the friends extensively discussed the meaning of the sexual activity and felt confident and positive about each other's feelings. Once they got past that, they were home free. "If sex is part of the dynamic, addressing it explicitly is the best strategy" for making sure the friendship survives, says Werking. "The issue will fester if friends try to ignore it." So in the end, male-female friendship does have something in common with romantic relationships: To work, communication is key. (Excerpted from: “Overcoming Sex: Can Men and Women be Friends?” By C. Chaterjee, downloaded from http://www.psychologytoday.com/menwomenfriends.html) What 2 types of support are used in this paragraph? __________________________ 5. In the fifteenth century, a German goldsmith named Johannes Gutenberg was the first Western European to invent a printing press using moveable wooden or metal letters. This invention promoted progress in the sciences, arts, and religion through the widespread dissemination of texts. For example, the printing press played a role in creating a community of scientists who could communicate their findings with each other in academic journals, thus facilitating the advancement of science. In addition, the rate of 76 adult literacy in Europe rose sharply. The accessibility of printed texts also changed the process of reading; group oral readings gave way to more widespread silent reading by individuals. Finally, the language of published materials changed from Latin to the vernacular language of each country, as books became available to all. Write the main idea of the paragraph in your own words _________________________________________________________________. How many major supporting details are there in this paragraph? _____________ Another pattern of paragraph structure: One main idea for several paragraphs Sometimes, the main idea of a paragraph is developed in several paragraphs. That is, there is one main idea for two or more paragraphs. This kind of structure may be used when each supporting point is very long. This structure may look like this: a. Paragraph 1: Main Idea First supporting detail Paragraph 2: Second supporting detail Paragraph 3: Third supporting detail b. OR Paragraph 1: Last sentence of paragraph = main idea Paragraph 2: First supporting detail Paragraph 3: Second supporting detail Exercise 2 The paragraphs below, from an article on media violence, have one main idea. Read them, and underline the main idea. It is likely that all three of the explanations, the vested interests of the news media industry, a misapplied fairness doctrine, and communication failures, are operative, in both the specific case of research on media violence and aggression and more generally. The research community can do relatively little about the first two. However, we believe that the research community can more effectively present the research findings. 77 One major step would be to realize that the conservative scientist role and the public educator role are two very different roles with different norms. When the U.S. Senate, CNN, The New York Times, or the London Daily Observer asks researchers whether they believe that exposure to violent media causes an increase in aggression, they are not asking for the overly conservative, self defensive kind of answer that is appropriate when discussing their latest research projects at an APA convention. They are asking for their opinions, based on their knowledge of the research literature and their general knowledge of their scientific fields. This is not to say that scientists should abandon all caution and deliver outlandish, quotable statements. Another major step that researchers can take is to realize that the role of disseminating insights gained from their research is a part of their job, along with restructuring evaluation systems so that they explicitly include a public-education component. For the typical faculty member at a research university, this suggests that departments need to add a public education efforts dimension to the annual performance evaluations. Finally, scientists must be willing to pay some of the unavoidable costs, both monetary and personal, associated with educating the public. Other costs, such as time or having to deal with hate mail, are costs that individual researchers may simply have to pay on their own. We believe that the benefit to society of more effectively communicating to a broad general audience the knowledge gained from psychological research is worth the cost. (Excerpted from: “Media Violence and the American Public: Scientific Facts Versus Media Misinformation” By B.J. Bushman and C.A. Anderson, From American Psychologist, June/July 2001) Circle the words that indicate the supporting details. What type of support is used in these paragraphs? ___________________________ By Minna Lipner 78 Inferring an Implied Main Idea A writer may feel that the example(s) and explanation(s) presented are so clear that there is no need to state the paragraph’s main idea. The reader is expected to use the examples as clues for arriving at the implied main idea. Of course, the reader’s ability to take a reasonable step forward in thought is crucial to grasping the main idea. This type of reasoning is called inference. Exercise 1 Read the following paragraphs and then choose the statement that best expresses the implied main idea in each paragraph. FACING THE CRISIS These are the times that try our souls. The summer soldier and the sunshine patriot will, in the present crisis, shrink from the service of their country, but s/he that stands it now deserves the love and thanks of man and woman. Tyranny, like hell, is not easily conquered; yet we have this consolation with us that, the harder the conflict, the more glorious the triumph. What we obtain too cheap, we esteem too lightly; it is dearness only that gives everything its value. Heaven knows how to put a proper price upon its goods, and it would be strange indeed if such heavenly merchandise as freedom should not be highly rated. The implied main idea in the paragraph is: a. Patriots who succeed in a hard struggle for freedom will experience a great victory. b. People who help only when it is easy will not serve their country at the present time. c. The harder people struggle, the more they enjoy the outcome of the conflict. d. It is unusual for people to think their country’s independence is of little value. THINK AGAIN! Politicians, academics, and religious leaders often place a higher value on what they each have to say than does their audience; and therefore they speak. A similar experience is not infrequent in private life. A young and ardent person may keep a diary in which s/he writes down what s/he takes as compelling deeds. S/he may feel that the pages thus written are urgent and well-phrased. After some time has elapsed, s/he 79 wishes to show these pages to a friend, though with hesitation, believing the fervent words may overwhelm the friend. However, the friend coldly turns the pages and easily passes from the diary to a conversation about some other topic. The diarist is astonished, but cannot suspect the writing itself. S/he does not fathom that one may have an impressive experience but not know how to put this private fact into literature. The implied main idea in the preceding paragraph is: a. Politicians, academics, and religious leaders may believe too much in themselves. b. A serious young person who keeps a diary may feel that what s/he writes is literary. c. People may have too confident a belief in the importance of their deeds and words. d. Someone who keeps a personal diary may not know how to report an occurrence. AN IMPORTANT BOOK In 1732, Benjamin Franklin first published Poor Richard’s Almanac, under the penname of Richard Saunders, with an eye to selling his book to the common people. An almanac is a reference book issued annually and containing factual information, practical advice and often a calendar of holidays and public occasions. Poor Richard’s Almanac included a calendar in which all the little spaces between special dates were filled with catchy proverbs, like “Early to bed, early to rise, makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise,” in order to instill industry and frugality as the means of procuring wealth, and thereby securing virtue. For Franklin believed it difficult for a person with little means to act honestly, in the same way that, to use another of his proverbs, “It is hard for an empty sack to stand upright.” Franklin’s almanac came to be in such demand that he received a considerable profit from it, selling close to ten thousand copies per year from 1733 to 1758. Scarcely any neighborhood in the province was without it. The implied main idea in the paragraph is: a. Richard Saunders wrote and published Poor Richard’s Almanac for ordinary people. b. The main value of the Almanac was that it included a calendar with special dates. c. Benjamin Franklin felt that poor people need to learn to work and save to better themselves. d. Franklin endeavored to make his almanac both entertaining and useful to the common people. From Eli Ben-Josef 80 81 Global Reading Important Information Topic Main Idea Purpose Conclusion What is it? What the article is about The main message of the article. What does the author say about the topic? How the writer presents the information (e.g. By reviewing research? By giving a history? By comparing/contrasting? etc.) OR Why did the writer write the article? The writer’s final word; מסקנה 82 Where is it found? -Title (usually) -Subtitle (usually) -Subtitle (sometimes) -Introduction (usually) -Conclusion (sometimes) -Subtitle (sometimes) -Introduction (sometimes) (*it may be stated explicitly or implicitly) -Conclusion (end) The Structure of an Academic Article - Introductions and Conclusions Academic articles have three main parts: Introduction Body Conclusion Preparation to read the article; Introduces the topic; contains the main idea (thesis); may contain purpose; one or more paragraphs long Contains key ideas to develop and support the main idea; is the longest part of the article; may be divided into sections; several paragraphs or longer Ends the paper; may be one sentence, one paragraph, or several paragraphs long Typical Contents of Introduction Typical Contents of Conclusion * General presentation of topic * General conclusions on the topic * Background / context of article / history * Reference to beginning of article * Main Idea (for the first time, or repetition) * Main Idea (thesis) of article * Example / story that illustrates the main point (followed by main idea) * Solution to a problem * Summary of main points of article * Presentation of question or problem to be addressed in the article * Example / story that illustrates the main point * Purpose / plan of article * Results of a survey / experiment * Definition of key terms used in article * Discussion of the results of a survey / experiment * Survey or summary of past work done on the topic * Implications of main idea / results of study / recommendations * Indication of what has not yet been done on the topic (“gap”) * Limitations of this study * Possible benefits of the study / report * Directions for further study *Predictions / suggestions for the future 83 *Which of the “typical contents” of introductions and conclusions do you think usually only apply to research articles? Exercise: Read the following introductions and conclusions. a. What is the topic of each article? b. Find and underline the main idea / purpose and conclusion (if there is only one) of each article. c. In the margins, indicate any other elements of introductions and conclusions that you find. I. Excerpt from: The Emotional Toll of Motor Vehicle Accidents by Dennis Kramer, PhD., from Transport Topics (week of August 27, 2001 p.9.) Introduction In "Anatomy of an Accident," an article in the Sept. 13, 2000 Transport Topics, the reporter likened the cost of a truck crash to an iceberg, stating that the indirect costs are four times greater than the obvious direct costs. One hidden cost that has not received attention is the potential emotional or psychological toll of an accident on the truck driver. Only recently have doctors begun to realize that exposure to motor vehicle accidents can result in a number of psychological and emotional reactions. While the majority of those involved in an accident will not develop any serious emotional problems, evidence from a number of studies, focused on the general public, suggests that many will develop at least some stress reactions. Conclusion It is in the interests of both carriers and drivers to recognize that impaired functioning after exposure to an accident is not a rare event and does not reflect negatively on the character of those distressed. Once we recognize that post-trauma reactions are to some degree "normal reactions to abnormal events," those who suffer can feel free to admit and talk about their fears and concerns. Then, as an industry, we will have truly helped reduce one of the hidden costs of motor vehicle accidents. 84 II. Excerpt from: Contemporary Fundamentalism, by Hava Lazarus-Yafeh, from Jerusalem Quarterly, 47, Summer 1988 Introduction It has become fashionable to talk about fundamentalist movements, attitudes or leadership. Nevertheless, there exists no reasonably accurate definition of the term (it is mainly used as a synonym for fanatics or extremists) and few people seem to be aware of the fact that common denominators exist between very remote and different fundamentalist phenomena, such as revolutionary Iran, the Muslim Brethren in Egypt and Syria, Evangelist preachers, in both the USA and England, and the Jewish UltraOrthodox or messianic groups in Israel. Yet, although it may seem at first sight farfetched, all these and similar phenomena share many common traits and all seem to express a universal reaction to the modern Western world. In this paper some common characteristics of all will be described, following an attempt to mention in a very general way some of the causes which brought about the rise of the contemporary fundamentalist phenomenon. Conclusion Only a few characteristics have been surveyed here in order to point out the many common denominators between different fundamentalist phenomena. Of course, even in a general survey like this, the many differences also emerge and point up the need for a thorough study to clarify the role of each factor in the three religions surveyed. III. Excerpt from: An Ounce of Prevention, by Devra Lee Davis and Harold P. Freeman, From Scientific American, September 1994 Introduction Public hopes and presidential promises that cancer could be cured provided much of the cultural meaning and all of the federal funding for the modern war on cancer, launched some two decades ago. The search for a cancer cure, in part, reflected the belief that the disease arises chiefly from discrete external entities such as viruses that can be attacked and eradicated. Lately the war on cancer has reinvented itself as the exhilarating quest for defective genes. We read and hear that all cancer is genetic in origin, arising from mutations in the basic building blocks of cells that lead to unregulated growth. Yet only a relatively small portion of most dominant types of cancer is inherited. The key questions remain: What 85 causes the majority of people who have originally inherited a healthy array of genes – some 95 percent of women with breast cancer, for instance – to develop defects that lead them to acquire cancer; and what strategies can be applied to reducing the incidence of disease for all segments of society? Conclusion No matter how efficient we may become at delivering health care, we must also seek to reduce the need for treatment. An increase in cases of cancer in younger persons in the U.S. and parallel findings in Sweden indicate that we need to identify avoidable causes of cancer in addition to smoking and to develop effective interventions that keep people from developing the disease altogether. If we avert only 20 percent of all cancers each year, we will save more than 200,000 people and their families from this difficult disease and spare the public from the burgeoning costs of treatment and care. By Minna Lipner 86 Predictions / Skimming / Scanning To read an article globally, first read the introduction and conclusion. Then skim the body paragraphs. When you skim the body paragraphs, you read the first sentence in each paragraph. After you read the sentence, you must do several things: 1. NEW OR CONTINUATION? Ask: Is this a new topic, or a continuation of the previous topic? Look for words that indicate a relationship with the previous paragraph. Example: An additional technique is called “memory transfer.” The word “additional” shows that this paragraph is a continuation of the previous paragraph. * Show that the paragraph is a continuation by writing " "המשךor by drawing an arrow down the side of the page; show that the paragraph begins a new topic (section) in the text by drawing a line above it. Par. 1 המשך Par. 2 Par. 3 חדשPar. 4 *This is how you divide an article into sections. 2. RELATIONSHIP? If the paragraph is related to the previous one, what type of relationship is it: addition (more of the same type of thing), contrast, cause/effect, summary, time… In the example above, what is the relationship? _______________________ 3. PREDICT THE CONTENT Predict the content of the paragraph, and write notes on the side (in your native language) to remind you of what you predicted. Example: An additional technique is called “memory transfer.” What do you think the paragraph will be about? – טכניקה ""העברת זיכרון An additional technique is called “memory transfer.” 87 Exercise 1 The sentences below are the first sentences of paragraphs from different articles (there is no connection between them). Read each one, and follow the following steps: 1. Predict the content of the paragraph, and write notes (in English or Hebrew). 2. If the paragraph is related to the previous one, what is the relationship? Notes 1. Nevertheless, the power of school officials to restrict what students wear to school is not unlimited. 2. In short, this finding suggests that parental English literacy skills may not play a vital role in determining school performance. 3. We, on the other hand, suffered a great deal as a result of the new law. 4. So there is an overwhelming case for some heritable component in IQ. 5. Not many Americans know a great deal about intelligence testing, but strong opinions about it are rampant. 6. The media have done worst of all with the nature-nurture issue. 7. In a widely noted 1998 study, Robert Kraut and his colleagues speculated that virtual friendships and online social networks are poor substitutes for face-to-face connections. 8. But looks alone do not determine how a person is treated by his/her peers. 9. There is one catch: Typing has been shown to require four to five times as long as talking. 10. Researchers must also understand that spending a lot of time online may be productive, rather than dysfunctional, behavior. 11. Over time, elevated levels of stress hormones cause other serious disorders. 12. Previously, research had found only a weak association between playing violent video games and aggressive feelings and behaviors. 13. The new bill, then, is liable to further worsen the condition of medicine, and indeed of the society in general, in Israel. 14. This article has presented some data on the frequency of cheating, reasons for cheating, and the influence of penalties on cheating. 88 15. To illustrate the danger to the public’s health as a result of incorrect and excessive use of medicines and late self-treatment for illnesses, consider the case of Leah Navon, who was diagnosed with lung disease last winter. Beyond the first sentence… 1. Reading the second sentence: Sometimes after you read the first sentence of a paragraph, you may decide to read a second sentence. Read the second sentence of the paragraph when the first sentence of the paragraph is a transition sentence, or it “points” to important information in the second sentence. Example: a. There is another very different response to this problem. (What is the response? It is probably in the second sentence.) b. (From an article listing reasons why suspects confess to crimes that they didn’t do – the transition sentence is underlined. To find out the topic of the second paragraph, you must read the second sentence.) Suspects with low IQ’s are particularly vulnerable to the pressures of police interrogation: They are less likely to understand the charges against them and the consequences of professing guilt. One of the suspects in the Central Park attack had an IQ of 87; another was aged 16 with a second-grade reading level. But intelligence is by no means the decisive factor. Suspects with compliant or suggestible personalities and anxiety disorders may be hard-pressed to withstand an interrogation, according to Gisli Gudjonsson, PhD., a professor of forensic psychology at the Institute of Psychiatry in London. Gudjonsson’s suggestibility scale is used by courts around the world to evaluate selfincriminating statements. But he cautions against seeking only personality-driven explanations for confessions: “A drug addict may not be particularly suggestible but may have a strong desire to get back out on the street.” 2. Going back to the previous paragraph: Sometimes you must go back to the last sentence of the previous paragraph. Do this when the context of the first sentence is not clear. Example: Surprisingly, the answer seems to be yes. (The answer to what? What is the question? You must go back to the end of the previous paragraph to find out.) 89 3. Peeking at the second sentence: It often pays to “peek” at the beginning of the second sentence to see where the paragraph is going (especially if you’re not sure if you should read on…) Example: -Part of this confusion stems from the media. A certain 1989 film… -Some parents may deliberately construct an environment that is negatively correlated with the child’s genotype. For example… Exercise 2 The sentences below are the first sentences of paragraphs from different articles. Read each sentence as if you were skimming the article. Then circle “ENOUGH” if you don’t need to read more; “CONTINUE” if you would read the second sentence; or “go BACK” if you would go back to the previous paragraph. 1. There are proven – and apparent – differences between female friendship and male friendship. ENOUGH 2. CONTINUE GO BACK But that’s only one of the major barriers. ENOUGH 4. GO BACK Wrong, say relationship experts. ENOUGH 3. CONTINUE CONTINUE GO BACK “Boys and girls form their own gender groups in elementary schools,” explains Monsour. ENOUGH 5. CONTINUE GO BACK Men and women have increasingly similar rights, opportunities, and interests, which can make cross-sex friendships very political. ENOUGH 6. CONTINUE GO BACK First, this interpretation is supported by many short-term laboratory studies. ENOUGH CONTINUE GO BACK 90 7. Additional evidence for the aggression-enhancing impact of media violence is provided by a second group of studies using different methods. ENOUGH 8. CONTINUE GO BACK In a benign environment isolated from modern civilization, what kind of society is likely to develop? ENOUGH CONTINUE GO BACK ADAPTED FROM MINNA LIPNER Making Predictions Exercise 3 Read the sentences below. Choose from the alternatives given the logical continuation of the first sentence. 1. The mind is commonly thought to consist of a number of faculties. a. The mystery of the mind is the subject of scientific investigation. b. But, in fact, psychologists have shown this to be an error that has a harmful influence on education. 2. Who qualifies for a position in the establishment? Theoretically, everybody qualifies, whether young or old, native born or newly immigrated. a. In reality, the establishment is made up of older men who took part in the revolution. b. It is clear, therefore, that no qualifications are needed. 3. People once thought that the barrier to human progress was illiteracy, the widespread inability to read. a. But events have shown that this is simply not true. b. Therefore, we must teach all adults to read the printed word. 4. In spring 1945, the war minister advised the recruitment of 6 million women for work in the ammunition factories. As the war ended 6 months later, it was fortunate that his advice had not been taken. a. Had the women been mobilized, they would have helped the war effort. b. Had the women been mobilized, they would have found themselves without work. 91 5. At first glance, the phrase “philosophy of education” seems irrelevant to the practical methods of teaching. a. In fact there is no connection at all between the philosophy of education and teaching methods. b. But if we examine it more closely, we will find that much can be gained from a better understanding of its implications. Exercise 4 Skim the article “Aids and the Next Pandemic” by reading the introduction, the conclusion, and the first sentence of each paragraph as given below. Answer the questions that follow the text. AIDS AND THE NEXT PANDEMIC 1. The worldwide AIDS epidemic has grown from approximately 100,000 people infected with the human immunodeficiency virus (HIV) in 1980 to eight to ten million today. The pandemic (worldwide epidemic) remains, fifteen years after its discovery, dynamic and volatile, fueled by deep-seated and little understood behavior. Moreover, the decade to come seems inescapably worse. The combination of new HIV infections (estimated at 10 million to 25 million) and the natural history of individuals already infected is expected to result in at least six million new cases of clinical AIDS in adults during the 1990s. 2. Yet, the situation could have been much, much worse. The reaction to AIDS has been truly remarkable at many levels: science has made progress in developing vaccines and therapies; communities and local governments have mobilized quickly; public information efforts have been impressive in scale and, occasionally, in candor; and the world community has gained an increased awareness of the need for solidarity in confronting the pandemic. The global response has been unprecedented (which is not to say that major challenges do not remain.) All these developments are of course predicated entirely on the recognition of AIDS in 1981. The world must count itself fortunate to have discovered AIDS then rather than five or even ten years later. The reasons for the early detection of this disease reveal a lesson of supreme importance for dealing with the next pandemic. 3. First, by 1981 AIDS was occurring in the U.S., a country with a highly developed disease surveillance system. 92 4. Detection of AIDS was enormously facilitated by the unusual nature of its characteristic infections and malignancies. 5. Next, AIDS first came to the notice of officials in the U.S. as a health problem among a highly self-aware group of men who had sex with men. 6. Finally, the technical ability to detect human retroviruses was developed at precisely the same time the HIV pandemic was silently spreading, during the late 1970s. 7. Thus, extraordinary circumstances, both viral and human, led to detection of a global public health threat within five to ten years after it became pandemic. 8. The new globalism means that viruses and other pathogens, already known but geographically circumscribed, have unprecedented potential to spread. 9. What can we do to catch the next pandemic in time? 10. This task will require the involvement of psychologists, sociologists and anthropologists as well as virologists and specialists in communicable diseases to develop creative ways of uncovering patterns in health and disease. 11. Finding different ways of looking for patterns of disease will be conceptually difficult and may be fairly expensive to implement. Yet the AIDS pandemic tells us that in the face of some dangers we must develop the capacity to respond globally. Failure to do so will condemn us to the vagaries of chance in our confrontation with the health challenges that appear, today as in the past, to be the inevitable traveling companions of social, economic, and political change. 93 Global Questions 1. What is the main idea of the article? (Copy the sentence from the article.) ________________________________________________________________ 2. What is the conclusion of the article? (Write in your own words) ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ 3. What is the relationship between paragraphs 3 and 4? _____________________ ________________________________________________________________ 4. What is the relationship between paragraphs 5 and 6? _____________________ ________________________________________________________________ 5. What is the relationship between paragraphs 6 and 7? _____________________ ________________________________________________________________ 6. Which word in paragraph 8 signals to us that paragraph 8 continues an idea from paragraph 7? ________________________ 7. Divide the article into sections, and write an outline with the name of each section. By Minna Lipner 94 Annotating Texts How can annotating a text help me? It helps you to focus on the text – you are active instead of passive. It helps you to analyze the text. It helps you remember the material quickly and easily after time has passed. You will have the text and your notes in the same place. What should I mark? Things that are important -main ideas (of the text and of paragraphs) -purpose/plan of the text -conclusion -topic of sections of the text -structure of the text (if it’s not clear) -key words, important phrases/ideas -words that show the relationship between ideas in the text (e.g. first, second, for example, however) Things that are confusing / unfamiliar -ideas that you don’t understand and would like to clarify -words you don’t know (if they seem important) -write questions about the text (This is important for active reading!) Comments -write comments on the side -summarize parts of the text as you read -try to connect this text to other things you have read How should I mark the text? Use any combination of the following techniques: Circle or put boxes or shapes around words and phrases Underline (but not too much - it can get messy!) Highlight Write in the margins and on the top and bottom of the page The most common complaint about annotating is that it slows down your reading. Yes, it does. That’s the point. [10 pts] By Minna Lipner