Smith 1 Tamara Smith Dr. Pittman English 1010 November 2, 2009 Critical/Rhetorical Analysis Of “Everyday Use” “Everyday Use,” a short story written by Alice Walker in 1973, is about an African American mother and her two daughters. The mother narrates the story which centers around the oldest daughter, Dee, coming back home from college for a rare visit with her family. Alice Walker utilizes everyday language to introduce the members of the Johnson family and explain their differences, particularly their conflicting views about the meanings of family, tradition and heritage. To put it simply, this story illustrates how some people ‘talk the talk’ and others actually ‘walk the walk’.V The story opens simply enough with the mother and her youngest daughter, Maggie, working together in their yard, which also serves as the family’s living room, trying to get it cleaned up in preparation for Dee’s visit. In this introduction, the author offers hints about the mother’s perception of herself through the suggestion, “A yard like this is more comfortable than most people know. It is not just a yard,” (443).V Smith 2 While waiting for Dee to arrive, the narrator reflects on the many differences between her two daughters. Dee, we learn is “lighter than Maggie with nicer hair and a fuller figure,” (Walker 444) and that her feet are neat looking as if “God had shaped them with a certain style” (445). Poor Maggie, on the other hand, has never left home and is not bright or attractive. Her manner is compared to that of a lame animal and we learn that she shuffles with her “chin on her chest, eyes on the ground,” (444). Since the narrator’s tone remains matter of fact throughout much of the story, she adds details that bring depth to the characters to help the reader form opinions about them. By describing Maggie in such a humble way, for example, the author is able to evoke the reader’s sympathy for her. The author makes great use of background information to acquaint the reader with the characters and to build tension about the reunion. We are slowly given details of events from the family’s history, such as the fire that claimed their previous house. We learn that Maggie was burned during the fire and that she has scars on her arms and legs. Dee, on the other hand, wasn’t the least bit affected by the fire because she had always hated the house. In fact, Walker gives readers an insight to the mother’s frustration at Dee’s attitude when she wonders, “why don’t you do a dance around the ashes?” (444). The mother Smith 3 speculates that Dee will probably want to burn the newer house down because it is exactly like the other house but for the tin roof. Walker cleverly uses a dream as a method of revealing the mother’s relationship to Dee. In the dream, the mother is reunited with Dee on a television program where a teary eyed Dee embraces her and pins an orchid on her dress. The mother imagines herself as being thinner, with lighter skin and glistening hair because she feels that this is how Dee wishes her to look. The recounting of the dream is followed by the mother’s realization of it’s absurdity. In reality, she is a “large, big-boned woman with rough looking man-working hands” (444) who, much like her ancestors, lives a simple life in which being resourceful and practical is highly valued. She is proud of the manual labor she performs to maintain her modest three room house. She boasts about her ability to,“work outside all day, breaking ice to get water for washing” (444) and how she can butcher calves with a sledgehammer. She also points out the fact that, unlike Dee, she has never been able to look anyone, especially a white man, directly in the eyes. Walker’s straightforward observations don’t always allow readers to make simple conclusions about the narrator’s sentiment. For instance, she tries to establish the fact that Smith 4 the mother is proud of her oldest daughter’s intelligence through the revelation, “we raised the money, the church and me, to send her to school in Augusta” (445). The author then follows this with the narrator’s sense of disappointment in how Dee used her education to alienate herself from the family, using her book knowledge as a way to make herself appear superior. From this, the reader must determine whether or not the mother feels insecure about her own lack of education or if perhaps she feels that education isn’t useful. When Dee finally arrives, the mother is dismayed by her bright flashy clothing and surprised to see that she has brought someone with her. The mother remembers how Dee once wrote a letter to her stating that no matter where she and Maggie chose to live, she would always manage to come see them but that she would never bring her friends. This shows the embarrassment that Dee has always felt toward her family. The author highlights the irony of Dee’s attitude by having her pull out a Polaroid camera, in the manner of a tourist, to take several photos of her mother and Maggie, making sure to capture the house and even a cow that has wandered nearby. By adding this information, the author has shrewdly reinforced a strong message that she is trying to convey about Dee. The author wants the reader to Smith 5 understand that Dee is merely a spectator and not a participant. She is an outsider looking in. The author uses the characters of Dee and Maggie as symbols for readers to evaluate. Dee symbolizes the modern and shallow view that many young people had of their heritage during the time this story was written. She had no appreciation or respect for the actual work and struggle that went into creating the culture. her. The customs and traditions held no real meaning for Instead, she focused on the material aspects of the culture because it was considered hip and trendy to do so. Dee tells her mother and Maggie that she has changed her name to the African name Wangero Leewanika Kemanjo because she hates being named after the people who oppressed her. When the mother explains to Dee that she was named after her aunt Dicie and that this name had been passed on down through many generations, Dee fails to recognize the significance of this. The author shows us that Dee is unable or unwilling to accept the connection to her immediate heritage. It is during the course of dinner that the narrator makes the reason for Dee’s visit obvious. Dee has come to collect various items from the mother’s house with the intention of displaying them as artwork. The mother and Maggie sit at the table while Dee helps herself to a butter churn and a dasher. Smith 6 When Maggie tries to tell the history of the items, Dee seems uninterested and jokes about Maggie having the memory of an elephant. The author has kept Maggie’s character quiet up to this point and because of this, her words seem more meaningful. It is when Dee begins to gather up her grandmother’s hand stitched quilts that the mother finally reacts.V She remembers Dee refusing the quilts when they bad been offered to her before because she considered them too old fashioned. The author points out this action because it reflects the theme of the story. Dee has no real respect or understanding of why the quilts are important. The grandmother made the quilts to serve a purpose, as in the title of the story, yet Dee doesn’t want to use the quilts; she wants to hang them. The mother realizes that Dee has always been ashamed of and uncomfortable with her heritage while Maggie has clung to it. Maggie has acquired the skills that are necessary to preserve her heritage, such as sewing, churning butter and passing on details about her relatives. Dee wants to project the image of a proud cultured black woman only as it relates to a style, but Maggie is a proud black woman who will continue the customs and traditions of her ancestors. Smith 7 Works Cited Walker, Alice. “Everyday Use.” An Introduction to Fiction. Ed. X. J. Kennedy and Dana Gioia. 10th ed. New York: Longman, 2007. 443-449.