大学英语六级预测作文 30 篇及范文
资料提供：恩波教育
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Turn off
Your Cell Phone. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1、手机给我们的生活带来了便利。
2、但是手机铃声也会影响其他人。
3、在某些场合请关掉你的手机。
Turn off Your Cell Phone
With the development of information techno1ogy and reduced price of communication
products, the mobi1e phone has become a necessity for most people. Obviously, it shortens the
distance between people and makes our life more convenient. Thanks to the cell phone, it’s easy
for us to contact or be contacted by others anytime and anywhere. We will never miss any
important meetings，great deals or admirable opportunities.
However，have you noticed sometimes the cell phone also brings embarrassment to us? It’s
not rare to see someone pressing the cell phone to his ear and shouting 1oud1y in public as if there
were no one else present. And I’m sure each one has had such an experience that the cell phone
ring continuous1y on a formal occasion. Perhaps these people have many 1ife-and-death reasons
to keep the phone working at all times, but it interrupts people around them who have to hear what
they don’t care when they want to concentrate on what they’re doing.
So if you are one of them, please shut off your cell phone in public, especially on a quiet and
serious occasion. It’s a respect for both others and yourself.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: The
Post-graduate Craze. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the
outline (given in Chinese) below:
1、目前很多人报考研究生
2、我认为形成这股热潮的原因是……
The Post-graduate Craze
Each year, millions of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination.
More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of
their education.
What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma? First, it is the demand of
the time. In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in
college can hardly meet the demand of society. Talents of high quality who are equipped with the
latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever. That is why many students will further
their studies.
Second, we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to
succeed. Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential
treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training. A
post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career.
Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for
jobs becomes more and more fierce. One way to gain some advantage over others is to have a
higher degree.
No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: My
Idea of Pop Music. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1、 有人认为流行音乐不能登大雅之堂。
2、 有人认为音乐无高低贵贱之分，只有兴趣上的差别。
3、 我认为……
My Idea of Pop Music
Pop music is held I contempt by many people. In these people’s eyes pop music is always in
sharp contrast to “lofty music”. The latter refers to symphonies and operas of the European
countries. They show great concern for the fact that many people prefer pop music to symhonies,
because for them pop music should be excluded from the holy palace of music.
Conversely, many people have an ordor for pop music. They argue that people who want us
to listen to symhonies are advocating a kind of “elite culture”. This notion is unacceptable to pop
music fans, for they don’t believe that symphonies are loftier than pop music. The difference only
lies in the interests of different people. It is unfair to speak of pop music with contempt while
speaking of symphonies with awe.
In conclusion, my idea is that just as there is no distinction between high culture and low
culture, so it is inappropriate to say pop music belongs to the “lower” people whereas symphonies
in a higher, loftier form of music. After all, there are many badly-composed symphonies. And we
can’t expect every piece of pop music to be excellent. Pop music reflects the thoughts and interests
of a certain age group of a generation. It is the product of a certain age, but it also has something
universal, something that belongs to all human beings, that underlies its great success among
people. In this sense it is rather foolish for some peopleof media to show great concern simply
because many people prefer pop music. Anyway pop music has become an indispensable part of
the human family.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
What Should Children Do in Their Spare Time. You should write at least 150 words and base your
composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1、现在许多家长让孩子在业余时间参加各种学习班，如跳舞、绘画等。
2、家长的观点。
3、我的观点与看法。
What Should Children Do in Their Spare Time
Nowadays, many parents send their children to various classesin the children’s spare time.
These classes can be classified into two categories. First, on school subject, their intention is to
reinforce and enrich the children’s knowledge acquired in school by means of more clarification
and exercises. Second, classes to cultivate children’s interest, such as classes in English, dancing,
etc.
Children’s attending classes in their spare time has become a controversial issue. Those who
are for it think that the pratice is good for the long term benefit of children and can enlighten
children’s interest, broaden their horizon. Those who are against it hold the view that children
have been deprived of their free timeby attending classes they are not interested and thus become
mechanical learners, at the price of their own interests.
I think children should have the right to enjoy their childhood, and to play. But certain
guidance by parents to attend some classes is necessarysince the parents havereasoning power and
experince to raise the children to be prepared for their future with diversified interest and
competence. But these classes should be refreshing and be able to attract children’s interest and
not too much.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Private Cars’ Effect on Our Life. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition
on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1、汽车给人们的生活提供了诸多便利。
2、然而汽车也给环境，交通等施加了压力。
3、如何缓解交通压力，改善环境。
Private Cars’ Effect on Our Life
Along with the economic growth, private cars have penetrated into a wealth of citizens’ lives
because of its convenience features. Undoubtedly, the widespread use of cars promotes the social
productivity and enhances the economic development. But we are supposed to weigh strengths
and weaknesses of the popularity of cars. With the growing prevalence of vehicles, a host of
problems have emerged.
To begin with, car emissions are having an immeasurable effect on the world’s climate. Solid
scientific evidence can confirm this harm. Secondly, because the car depends so heavily on fossil
fuels, it is a major source of carbon dioxide that causes global warming. Additionally, soaring
ownership of cars puts tremendous pressure on the limited capacity of current transport system.
There is a heavy urban traffic flow with frequent traffic jam. These harmful side effects of autos
burden our society with unacceptable costs to human health, the environment, and our economy.
So we must reverse this rising trend and promote the mass transportation. Our heavy reliance
on private cars must be reduced.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang
Yu. Write a letter to invite your friend to China to celebrate the Spring Festival – Chinese Lunar
New Year with you. You should write at least 150 words according to the suggestion given below
in Chinese:
1、介绍你写信的原因。
2、如何度过这个节日,有什么活动。
3、期待他/她的到来。
Dear Peter:
I am more than delighted to invite you to join us to celebrate the Spring Festival – Chinese
Lunar New Year. Similar to the importance of the Christmas Day for the westerners, the Spring
Festival is the most important celebration for Chinese people. Because of its incomparable status,
people carry out a variety of activities across the country to welcome the Spring Festival.
The whole family having reunion dinner together is indispensable. According to the
traditional custom, the ways of Spring Festival celebration include lion dances, temple fairs,
festive lanterns and etc.. You can select some folk handicrafts at temple fairs and present them to
your friends. I will teach you how to make dumplings you are eager to learn. By the way, you can
partner with me to have a try in lion dances. It’s so exciting! And the grand lantern festival parade
will be bound to impress you.
I look forward to seeing you in Nan Jing before New Year’s Eve-the climax of celebration.
Sincerely yours,
Zhang Yu
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a resume. You should write at
least 150 words and base on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1、假使你看到了一个公司的招聘广告。
2、介绍自己的背景材料(如学历、专业、特长、爱好、等等)。
3、说明有强烈的应聘愿望。
October 13,2007
P.O. Box 36
Tsinghua University
Beijing,China 100084
Dear Sir/Madam:
Your advertisement for a Network Maintenance Engineer in the October 10 Student Daily
interested me bacause the position that you described sounds exactly like the kind of job I am
seeking.
According to the advertisement, your position requires top university, Bachelor or above in
Computer Science or equivalent field and proficient in Windows NT4.0 and LINUX System. I feel
that I am competent to meet the requirements. I will be graduating from Tsinghua University this
year with a Bechelor degree. My studies have included courses in computer control and
management and I designed a control simulation system developed with Microsoft Visual
InterDev and SQL Server.
During my education, I have grasped the principals of my major and skills of practice. Not
only have I passed CET-6, but more important I can communicate with others freely in English.
My ability to write and speak English is out of question.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional
information you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for
a personal interview.
With many thanks,
Zhang Yu
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Perseverance. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1、 有毅力就容易成功。
2、 毅力使人成功的原因是什么。
3、 毅力是必需的特质。
Perseverance
Of all the advantageous characteristics to have, I think that perseverance plays the greatest
role in one’s success. Other characteristics, such as intelligence, confidence, and honesty, are no
doubt important, but they do not necessarily guarantee success. Perseverance offers no guarantees
either, but I believe that this trait offers one more opportunity to succeed.
There are several reasons why perseverance often leads to success. First of all, a man who
has perseverance does not give up after a failure. He tries again and can, therefore, learn from his
mistakes. Second, a persistent person is usually a hard worker, and hard work is an important
ingredient in success. Last, with perseverance comes a certain amount of confidence — the
confidence that one will eventually succeed.
For all of these reasons, I believe that perseverance is the most important characteristic to
have. It is easily combined with other traits such as diligence and confidence to increase the
chances of success. However, without perseverance, one’s success may be more dependent on
luck than anything else.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Learning about Life. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1、 有人喜欢听取别人的建议而学习。
2、 有人喜欢通过亲身体验而学习。
3、 我的选择。
Learning about Life
As we grow, we learn many things about life. Some of these lessons are easy and some are
difficult. Some believe that they can learn best by listening to the advice of others, while others
believe that it is better to learn through personal experience.
In the first case, learning by listening to others, we have the benefit of learning from others’
mistakes and are thus being able to avoid them ourselves. Our friends and family will help us
make better decisions and avoid costly errors. Furthermore, the people who know us well can
advise us effectively because they understand our strengths and weaknesses. At the same time,
they are sometimes able to see situations more objectively than we are.
In the second case, learning through doing, we have the advantage of gaining meaningful
experience. We will no doubt better remember the lessons we learn when we enjoy the rewards or
suffer the consequences ourselves. Moreover, we can often develop other skills through personal
experience and can learn from our mistakes.
Given a choice between these two ways of learning about life, I would still choose the former.
This is because I believe I should take advantage of all the resources available, and the
experiences of my family and friends are a valuable resource. For example, if I were preparing to
take my first trip abroad on my own, the advice of others who have already experienced such a
trip could only help me. Just as we can learn from history, we can learn from the past actions of
those close to us.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Quick
Decisions. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in
Chinese) below:
1、 有人认为仓促决定一定出错，有的人并不这样认为。
2、 我的看法并说出原因。
Quick Decisions
Everyone must make many decisions every day of his life. They range from the trivial — tea
or coffee for breakfast — to issues of life-changing importance, such as who to marry. Some
people make decisions quickly, while others take as much time as possible to consider all their
options. They tend to think that quick decisions are always wrong, but I disagree with this opinion.
As a matter of fact, quick decisions are sometimes the best ones. When faced with a difficult
choice, it is often our first instinct that is the best. This is why people are sometimes told to “go
with your gut”. Moreover, when we think too long about a decision we may become confused.
And if we worry too much we may become so anxious that we are unable to make any decision at
all. Last but not least, some decisions are simply too trivial to spend any time worrying about.
When the consequences of making the “wrong” decision are slight, whether our decision is right
or wrong is irrelevant.
For all of these reasons, I cannot agree with the statement that quick decisions are always
wrong. Long consideration does not guarantee that the choice we make will be the right one, and
sometimes too much deliberation can even lead us astray. Therefore, I believe it is all right to
make a quick decision now and then, for it cannot always be wrong.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Staying Healthy. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1、 健康的重要性。
2、 保持健康的方法。
3、 养成保持健康的习惯。
Staying Healthy
There is no denying the importance of health. Without it, it is difficult to live a happy life no
matter how much money or success one has. In order to maintain our good health and lead lives
that are as fulfilling as possible, it is important to take some steps.
The first step is to keep regular hours and stick to a healthy, balanced diet. This is the basis of
good health. Our bodies need sufficient nutrition and rest in order to function well and resist
illness. The second step is to get regular exercise. Moderate exercise, such as walking, can have
great benefits for our health if done on a regular basis. Third, I suggest seeing a doctor for an
annual checkup. A doctor can often diagnose problems before they become serious enough to be
apparent to us. Last but not least, take time to relax and renew your spirits and mental energy
every day. This is just as essential as physical exercise because mental state often has a profound
influence on our physical health. As the saying goes, “A sound mind in a sound body.”
There are many things that we can do to stay healthy. The important thing is to value our
health and not neglect it. This means making healthy habits a part of our everyday life. If we
simply develop a healthy way of living we are bound to live healthier, more satisfying lives.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Save
the Forests. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given
in Chinese) below:
1、 森林是最重要的自然资源。
2、 森林对其他自然资源起着重要的作用。
3、 保护森林，拯救地球。
Save the Forests
These days we often talk about the importance of our natural resources. In many countries
they are disappearing at a rapid rate and environmentalists are urging people everywhere to protect
their air, water, forests, wildlife, and so on. It is difficult to choose just one natural resource to save,
but in my opinion, saving the forests should be the top priority.
First of all, forests help to preserve other natural resources such as water, air, and animals.
Without forests, the land cannot hold water as well. This means that in a heavy rain hillsides will
collapse, causing great damage. Not only that, but without the protection of trees, the nutrient-rich
topsoil will be washed away and nothing will be able to grow on the land. Trees also help to clean
the air by absorbing carbon dioxide and producing oxygen. And, of course, forests are the natural
habitat of many wild animals. Without them, these animals will not be able to survive. Another
reason to preserve our forests is that large numbers of trees can help to mitigate the greenhouse
effect by absorbing solar radiation. And finally, forests are a place where people can get close to
nature, and if they learn to love nature, they will want to preserve all the earth’s natural resources.
All of the earth’s natural resources are important, and we should all work to save them. The
reason that I choose the forests as most important is because they help us in so many ways. By
saving the forests, I believe we can save the planet.
Directions: Write a letter of complaint according to the following situation: You and your friend
went to buy souvenirs, but the assistant refused your request of removing the dust from some of
the bronze statues and murmured that your friend is foolish. You ask the manager to look into this
unsatisfactory state of affairs.
Write your letter in no less than 150 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the
letter; use Zhang Yu instead. You do not need to write the address.
A Letter of Complaint
November 23, 2007
Dear Manager,
Much to my regret, I write this to place a complaint against one of your shop-assistants
concerning bad service in the course of our shopping yesterday.
Yesterday at about ten o’clock in the morning, my husband, a lady friend of ours and I, came
to your shop with the intention of buying some souvenirs. One of your shop-assistants, whose
badge number was 15 if I got it right, was asked to remove the dust from some of the bronze
statues in order that our friend might have a good look at these objects before making up her mind
to buy. Under such a suitation, it was the assistant’s duty either to do what she was asked to do or
to explain why she was unable to comply with such a request.
Instead of attending to her duty and acting in a polite manner, the assistant turned a deaf ear
to our request and walked away murmuring in a sarcastic manner that our friend was foolish in
asking for the removal of the dust. Great was our embarrassment in such an awkward situation.
We ask you to look into this unsatisfactory state of affairs and to take steps to prevent a
similar recurrnce of such offensive behavior in future. The lady in question is from New Zealand
and it would be a pity if she should form an unfavorable impression of the service in this city.
Yours Respectfully,
Zhang Yu
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Keeping Customs. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1、 当移居国外时，有人喜欢入乡随俗。
2、 有人喜欢坚持故乡风俗习惯。
3、 你的看法。
Keeping Customs
When people move to another country, they not only face a different environment and
language, but also different customs. Some people choose to follow the customs of their adopted
country, they may find that it helps them to adapt more quickly to the new society. They have
something to discuss and share with their new neighbors, and sharing customs is one way for
people to feel closer to one another. Thus, following the new customs may help immigrants feel
more at home. It may also help them to see the positive things in their new environment and do
forget their feelings of homesickness.
On the other hand, some people choose to continue following their own customs may also
find that it helps them feel more at home. There are many things to adjust to in another country,
and following their traditional customs may help people feel more secure in the new surroundings.
More importantly, our customs are a part of us. They are an expression of the culture that has
shaped us. This is something that most of us would like to pass down to our children and share
with others.
To sum up, our customs have value and are an important part of our culture. Therefore, I
don’t believe that we should abandon our traditional customs when we move to another country.
At the same time, I believe that we should learn about the customs of our new home and follow
those that appeal to us. In this way, we can remember and celebrate our old culture while adapting
to our new one.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How
People Spend Their Holidays. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on
the table and the outline given below:
Year 1990 1995 2000
Traveling 37% 51% 76%
Staying at home 63% 49% 24%
1、 根据上表，简要描述 1990 年、1995 年、2000 年某城市人们度假方式的情况及其变
化；
2、 请说明发生这些变化的原因；
3、 得出结论。
How People Spend Their Holidays
As is clearly shown in the table that there was a dramatic change in the way people spent
their holidays between 1990 and 2000. Especially, in 1990, 63% of people spent their holidays at
home, while the figure decreased considerably to 24% in 2000. there are three reasons for this
phenomenon.
To begin with, with the development of market-oriented economy, people earn by far more
money than they used to, making it possible for them to afford traveling expenses. In addition,
people realize the importance of getting well-informed about the outside world in this modern era
to develop their potential. For example, a traveller may encounter or talk with someone of a
different cultural background so as to broaden his vision. Last but not least, by traveling outside,
people are close to nature, which is not only beneficial to both their health and peace of mind. In
short, more and more people take the occasion of holiday to travel outside and relax themselves.
As far as I am concerned, I prefer to go traveling instead of staying at home during holidays.
On the one hand, I love meeting different people and take in some fresh ideas. On the other hand,
it is agreed that the world is becoming a global village. No one could confine himself within his
small circle of families or relatives. In brief, I have benefited a lot and will benefit more from
traveling during the holidays.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic
Incomes and Savings. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the table
and the outline given below:
1、 上图所示为近年中国居民收入和存款增长率的变化，描述其变化并说明原因；
2、 对此做出评价。
Incomes and Savings
From the charts we can easily find that incomes in China are increasing, and savings deposits
are also increasing. In 1965, the average annual income in China increased at a rate of 6%, and the
savings increased 6.5%. in 2005 the numbers soared to 29.5% and 31% respectively.
The possible reasons, I think, may be as follows. First, with the development of the economy,
the wealth of our whole nation’s increasing. So this promotes the increase in income and savings.
Secondly, people have changed their consumption habits greatly in recent years. For example,
many parents now spend a lot on their children’s education, and they have to save money for their
children’s higher education. Last but not least, with the increase of income, people have more
money to save, which can later be spent on insurance, house payments and other large expenses.
In my opinion, the increase of income and savings is just like a double-edged sword which
can benefit the whole nation’s revenue while hindering the economy’s development. The more
money is saved in the bank, the less money people spend. To put it briefly, I think China’s
government should take some effective measures to encourage consumption to promote the further
development of the economy.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The
Changes of the Percentages of Chinese Professions. You should write at least 150 words, and base
your composition on the table and the outline given below:
1、 根据上表，简要描述 1980 年与 1999 年我国农业、工业和服务业从业人员所占比例
的情况及其变化；
2、 请说明发生这些变化的原因；
3、 得出结论。
The Changes of the Percentages of Chinese Professions
It can be seen from the chart that the great changes have occurred in the professional pattern
in China between 1980 and 1999 with a great increase in the people involved either in
manufacturing or service and a corresponding shrinking in agricultural population. Especially, in
1999, 38% of the Chinese working in the agriculturak industry, decreased nearly half to that of
1980 while the number of people engaged in service industry quadrupled that of 1980. Why are
there such great changes during 20 years?
In my opinion, three possible reasons contribute to it. First of all, with the development of
primitive economy, more people will move over into manufacturing and the service industries.
Secondly, China’s open-door and economic reform policies realize more efficient and effective
farming and increased urbanization. For example, with the development of what is called the
village and township enterprises, a great number of farmers are now working in various small
business without living their homes, which accounts mainly for the increase in manufacturing
population. Finally, the economic policies result in an immense improvement in the Chinese
people’s living standard, which creates a great huge demand for service and thus enable the
service industries to flourish and absorbs more and more people into these fields.
As far as the effect is concerned, the changes of the percentages of Chinese professions will
have far-reaching significance. On the one hand, these changes signify the great achievements
China has made since she launched the economic reform and opened her door to the world. On the
other hand, they also mark a great leap foward on her way towards an economic power in the
world. In a word, both the nation’s development and her people’s living standard will get more and
more benefit from these changes.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The
Decline in Technical Secondary Schools. You should write at least 150 words, and base your
composition on the table and the outline given below:
1、 上图是 1999~2001 年我国中等专业学校发展图表，描述其变化；
2、 简略说明产生这些变化的原因。
The Decline in Technical Secondary Schools
According to the above statistics, the number of students attending technical secondary
schools is decreasing. As a result, more and more technical secondary schools have closed down,
which has raised great public concern.
There are several reasons that contribute to the decline of enrollment in these schools. First,
with the reform of the national educational system, colleges and high schools are enrolling an
increasing number of students, resulting in intensified competition for technical secondary schools.
Secondly, the requirement for technicians are becoming more and more demanding, while many
of these schools have failed to meet the increased requirements and lost their attraction to young
people. Thirdly, most people don’t respect these schools and play down their importance.
However, this decline will come to an end in the near future and technical secondary
education will thrive once again because our society is in great need of workers with considerable
technical skills for economic development. At the same time, through years of struggle for
existence, these schools have learned to adapt themselves to the changing situation, orient their
curriculums towards the demands of the market and provide necessary instruction for their
graduates. In addition, the government considers technical secondary education to be important,
and these schools will enjoy stronger support from the government.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic
Changes in Chinese People’s Diet. You should write at least 150 words, and base your
composition on the table and the outline given below:
Changes in Chinese People’s Diet
1、 根据上表，描述人们饮食结构的变化；
2、 请说明发生这些变化的原因；
3、 得出结论。
Changes in Chinese People’s Diet
From 1999 to 2003, great changes had taken place in Chinese people’s diet. As is revealed in
the table, during the five years, the consumption of grain decreased by 9%, while that of meat and
milk increased by 6% and 4% respectively. From the figures we can draw the conclusion that
grain, as the staple food in China, is playing a less important role in people’s diet, while the
consumption of high-energy food, such as meat and milk, has increased steadily.
What has caused these changes? From my point of view, there are two main reasons. On the
one hand, people now have more money to buy high-energy food. On the other hand, people now
pay more attention to the quality of their diet. They are seeking for the most reasonable diet
structure that will do good to their health.
As a result, we can see that people’s living standard has greatly improved in the five years.
We can also expect better living standard and more reasonable diet structure in the future.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter. You should write at least
150 words and base your letter on the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你是张钰，上周四接受了林逸对你的面试，请写一封感谢信：
1、 感谢他给你面试机会；
2、 希望能够得到这份工作。
A Letter of Thanks
Dear Lin Yi,
I would like to sincerely thank you for the time that you spent with me last Thursday, briefing
me on your company’s background and operations, and interviewing me for the position of
Administrative Assistant.
The interview was quite a pleasant experience for me, and I hope you had the same feeling as
I did. Now that I have met you and some of your colleagues, and have learned more about the
activities of your company, I am even more excited about the possibility of working with you and
your team than I was before the interview. I feel that my skills and abilities make me suitable for
the job, and that I will definitely be a valuable addition to your company.
If you have any follow-up questions, please don’t hesitate to call me at 15820080808 or send
me an e-mail at zhangyu2008@yahoo.com.cn. I am looking forward to hearing from you in the
near future.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Yu
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled More
Candidates for Civil Servant. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given
below in Chinese:
1、 现在有越来越多的大学应届毕业生报考公务员，带来了一定的不利因素；
2、 列举两到三个不利因素加以论述；
3、 你对此有何看法。
More Candidates for Civil Servant
Nowadays many college graduates apply for civil servant positions. It is true that the
positions are ideal in terms of incomes, employment security and respect of others. However, the
ever increasing number of applicants doesn’t necessarily mean a good thing. The fever for civil
servant has brought some side effects. The side effects are listed as follows:
Firstly, many students apply for the positions for wrong reasons. Some of them apply just
because their friends do it or because their parents want them. Some, instead of aiming at serve the
people, have the intention of enjoying the interests and power brought by their future position.
Secondly, too many candidates compete for limited positions. Take such hot positions as those in
the judicial branch of government for example, it is estimated that one matriculate is selected out
of 200 candidates. More worse, with the flow of most talents to such positions, those positions that
are important for social welfare but inferior in personal welfare are left uninterested. This should
arouse our deep concern.
For my part, college students should be cautious when deciding whether to apply for the
positions. On the one hand, they should not follow others blindly. On the other hand, there are
plenty of ways of employment and self-employment, so why crowd on one bus? In a word, the
fever should be cooled down.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Fast Food.
You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1、 快餐在中国十分流行，它是现代快节奏社会的最佳反应，并分析快餐受欢迎的原因；
2、 然而，从营养角度来讲，快餐却差强人意；
3、 对快餐还是以偶尔品尝为宜。
Fast Food
In present-day China, fast food is so popular, especially among children and teenagers, that it
can be seen in every big and medium-sized city. It’s even difficult to think of any other single
thing that represents the fast pace of modern society in the way that fast food does. Some people
think it is very convenient and saves a lot of time. The trends of modern society seem to all point
to one ultimate goal—saving time, and fast food well serves this purpose. In their opinions, its
popularity is also attributed to the restaurants’ clean and cozy environment, excellent service, and
guaranteed quality of food and drinks.
However, others maintain that fast food is usually low in nutrition and can’t be regarded as a
balanced diet. For example, doctors suggest that people, especially children, eat fast food as little
as possible. Besides, although cooking at home is time-consuming and the following washing-up
tiresome, it offers healthy and delicious meals your body needs and likes.
As far as I’m concerned, fast food is not my best choice. For one thing, I prefer traditional
spicy Chinese food. For another, being engaged in the work all day, I may spend one or two hours
to prepare my favorite dishes to ensure myself a nice rest. As a result, fast food is only a good
choice when I am in a hurry and resort to it once in a while.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Never Give
Up. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1、 人们常说“不要放弃”，这句话的意义何在？
2、 具体论述你对这句话的理解。
Never Give Up
“Never give up” is often said by people when they are frustrated or in depression. This phrase
means determination and encouragement. In my opinion, the determination to succeed is of great
importance. Therefore, I believe that we should never give up.
If we give up too easily, we will rarely achieve anything. It is not unusual for us to fail in our
first attempt at something new, so we should not feel discouraged by our failures; instead we
should try again. Besides, if we always give up when we fail, we will not be able to develop new
skills and grow as we should.
Another reason that we should never give up is because we can learn from our mistakes only
if we make a new effort. If we do not try again, the lesson we have learned is of no use.
Finally, as we work to reach our goals, we develop confidence, and this confidence can help
us succeed in other areas of life. If we never challenge ourselves, we will begin to doubt our
abilities.
In short, it is important that we do not give up when working for our goals. Whether we
succeed in the end or not, we will learn something, and what we learn will help us do better in our
future work. Furthermore, if we give up, we have no chance of attaining our goals; but if we keep
trying, there is always a chance that we will succeed one day.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should We
Worship Celebrities? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in
Chinese:
1、 我们是否应当崇拜名人？明确阐述你的观点；
2、 从正反两方面具体论述你的观点。
Should We Worship Celebrities?
Celebrities have excelled in their respective fields and made a place for themselves in the
society. Actors, athletes, rock stars and even politicians whom we look up to are all celebrities.
However, achievement in careers does not necessarily make celebrities idols to be worshipped
blindly, as they think and make mistakes too as we common people do.
Having a role model is of no harm, but we should not imitate everything we hear about the
celebrities without any judgment. Learn from the celebrities with our minds open; do not let their
persona overshadow our judgment. We should remember that however extraordinary these people
are, they are also ordinary huamn beings and liable to make mistakes or even very bad decisions at
some point of their life. For example, a number of athletes and rock stars have been associated
with drugs. It is for us to decide what we should imbibe from them and what not.
Meanwhile, though the celebrities are at the zenith of their professions, it is not always
necessary that they are as good in their personal life. We should let their actions speak for them.
What they do in real life is more important than what they preach. An ordinary man on the street,
though unknown to the public, may be a better person than they are.
In conclusion, we should keep ourselves open to others’ opinions, but at the same time decide
by ourselves what is right.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The
Function of an MP3 Player. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below
in Chinese:
1、 介绍 MP3 播放器的用途并举例；
2、 指出 MP3 播放器的不利影响。
The Function of an MP3 Player
An MP3 player, which is one of the most popular electronic devices, is widely used
nowadays due to its multifunction.
Basically, an MP3 player can download or transfer a significant amount of music of your
favorites. The attached devices are easy to use, making it simple to transfer music files to and from
your computer and the player.
With built-in voice recorder, most MP3 players can record sounds and voices. A reporter can
use it to record interviews instead of the old, inconvenient way of writing them in a notebook.
With its functions of recording and repeating, students can use it to learn foreign languages,
improving their listening ability, recording their own voice to improve pronunciation.
An MP3 player can also be used as a removable USB disk. Its data storage function allows
you to safely store important documents.
Except for its wide use, the MP3 player has its negative effect. Your hearing can be seriously
harmed if you listen to an MP3 with the volume too high. Sometimes you may violate other
person’s privacy if the recording function of your MP3 player is improperly used. So use it in the
right way, and it will does you good.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Knowledge and Diploma (Fake Diploma). You should write at least 150 words and base your
composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
(1) 目前，在社会上有这样的一种说法，文凭越高越吃香；
(2) 而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识；
(3) 你的观点
Knowledge and Diploma (Fake Diploma)
With the development of the society, more and more people enroll in the postgraduate
examination for getting a high diploma. It is believed that high diploma equals to high ability and
profound knowledge. Most companies are inclined to hire the people with high diploma. It seems
that having high diploma means a better future.
However, is it really true that high diploma equals to high ability or profound knowledge?
Some people do not agree on this kind of idea. They claim that ability or knowledge means more
than diploma. Take Bill Gates, the head of the Microsoft, for example, he does not have a MBA
degree which is believed to play a vital role in the success in commercial life. Furthermore, Sam
Walton of Wal-Mart Stores Inc. does not a MBA degree, but they are the most successful man in
commercial.
In my opinion, diploma does not equal to knowledge. A diploma is a piece of paper which
establishes your education degree. But your true ability and the real knowledge come from your
hard work and endowment. If you got a diploma by dishonest behavior, no matter how high a
diploma it is, it was just a piece of paper, and you were as blank as that paper.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Online Education. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1. 目前网络教育形成热潮。
2. 我认为这股热潮的原因是.....
3. 我对网络教育的评价。
Online Education
Recently an online activity has become very “in”. That is online education. 68 online
education colleges have been established in the past decade in our country.
Why could online education be so popular in such a short time? Among other reasons, the
quick development of internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending
class in a distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society
and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with lightning speed. To
catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. While on the other
hand, due to the great pace of modern society, most people are too busy to study full time at
school. Online education just comes to their aids.
Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It’s indeed a helpful complement to the
traditional educational means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile
ways to learn. Most of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time
study and absorb the latest knowledge.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:
Young Generation Lacking of Striving Spirit. You should write at least 150 words and base your
composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 社会上不少人认为，现在的青年学生拼搏精神不够
2. 对此你的看法是….
Young Generation Lacking of Striving Spirit
It is now said that the young generation is lacking of striving spirit. As I see it, this
phenomenon is truly footed in fact. They are easy to give up and always turn a pessimistic attitude
to failure. But why does it happen?
First of all, I have a sense that it is the living condition that matters. Born in the 1980s, most
of us are the only child in the family living in the green house, we receive endless care like
flowers. It is the love from our parents that set us away from the real world. As this goes on, when
we step into the society one day, we cannot get accustomed to the fierce and competitive social
life.
What's more, with a negative attitude, many young people are easy to be tired with
everything. When coming across with a sticky problem, they are willing to stay behind rather than
have a crack. Perhaps the so-called sloth has claimed them for its own.
The last but not the least, nowadays, the competition in the society is fiercer than we could
imagine. In order to survive, the young people have to struggle under burden of study and work.
Be adapted to the press and failure, the young people lose their self-confidence and self-esteem
little by little, not to mention about the striving spirit.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: On
Sportsmanship. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1，有些人为了赢下比赛不择手段
2，你对运动精神的看法
On Sportsmanship
It seems in our sports today, the concept of good sportsmanship has been lost. While winning
at all costs may be promoted in professional sports, this does not mean it is the proper way for
athletes to behave.
Whether we like it or not, sportsmanship in sports is a direct reflection of our own ethics in
real life. Sportsmanship like ethics concerns both the character and the actions of an athlete. The
image you project as an athlete is a product of your character. Good sportsmanship is not just what
you do on the field, it is hopefully the way you conduct your life both on and off the field.
Unsportsmanlike behaviour—acts that are unfair, dishonest, disrespectful or against the rules—are
unsportsmanlike because they are unethical. If you are unethical in sports, can you be ethical in
the other areas of your life—your business dealings, your treatment of others, your family?
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of
Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues. You should write at least 150 words
following the outline given below:
1． 当今的年轻人越来越强调个性发展；
2． 发展个性是否意味着忽视中国的传统美德；
3． 你的观点。
Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues
Today’s youth do things in their own ways, spend money on whatever they want and talk to
people in their own languages——personality development is ○1overstated by young people these
days. To some of them, personality means to be totally different from who their parents used to be.
But the problem is that during their pursuit of their personal goals they ignore some of the
traditional virtues of which their ○1forefathers were proud. Take the question of ○2fidelity to
elders for example. With better education and different experiences, some young people find it’s
hard to agree with their parents any longer. They have a feeling of superiority and even sometimes
○3turn their back on their elder parents.
To me, personality development and traditional virtues ○1have nothing to do with right or
wrong. In our society, we need them both. These virtues help you to become a better Chinese,
while personality development will improve your own character.
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一、就业
1、大学生难找工作，
2、原因很多，
3、解决的办法。
Job hunting has always been a headache for college students. though many graduates are
employed right after graduation, some are not. most serious of all, some still have no idea where to
go working even a long time after graduation.
The reasons for this phenomenon are various. on the one hand, a few years ago colleges
and universities enrolled so many students in popular majors, such as economy, finance and so on
that the number of graduates was greater than the need in the market. on the other hand, most
graduates would rather stay in large cities without suitable job to do than go to the country.
I reckon this problem can be solved if both colleges and students take measures. first，
they should research the market and develop special skills to suit its need. second， students
‘ attitude towards employment should be changed. they should go to small cities and country.
there they can also give full play to their professional knowledge. in a word， if we pay much
attention， the situation can be improved.
二、网络
1、互联网使用的现状，
2、大学生是否应该使用互联网，人们的看法不同，
3、我的看法。
In recent years，people are developing an inseparable relationship with internet. as is
known to all， it is convenient for us to click the mouse when surfing on line，either to entertain
ourselves or to meet the work‘s needs.
On the one hand, no one denies that internet is currently one of the most useful media in
our daily life. as a college student, i get on line every day to exchange information through e-mails
with my net friends. but on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much
addicted to internet to maintain a regular and wholesome lifestyle.
Thus，it is necessary for us to use internet in a reasonable way and restrain from
overindulgence. after all，internet is invented to enrich our life，and to improve the efficiency of
our work rather than shackle us with a chain.
三、求学信
1、 入学条件，
2、 学费和奖学金，
3、 住宿情况。
Dear sir or madam,
I am a chinese student who wishes to apply for admission into your prestigious university.
my plan is to start my course next term, and i would be grateful if you would be kind enough to
provide me with certain essential information.
First， what qualifications do i need to follow a course of study at your university? i
already have a bachelor's degree from beijing university， but i wonder if there are any further
academic requirements. second， how much are the tuition fees? although i intend to be
self-supporting， i would be interested to hear if there are any scholarships available for
international students. third， what is the situation regarding accommodation?
I look forward to your reply, and to attending your esteemed institution.
yours sincerely,
li ming
四、邀请信
1、邀请参加晚会，
2、说明举办晚会的原因，
3、将安排哪些活动。
dear snoopy,
I am greatly honored to formally invite you to participate in mr. guo jing's wedding
ceremony with ms. huang rong to be held at beijing grand hotel from 8 to 10 p.m. on april 1，2007.
As you are a close friend of us， we would very much like you to attend the celebration
and share our joy. the occasion will start at seven o‘clock in the evening， with the showing of
their wedding ceremony. this will be followed by a dinner party. at around ten， we will hold a
small musical soiree， at which a band will perform some works by bach and strauss.
If you do not have any prior appointment on april 1, we look forward to the pleasure of
your company.
yours sincerely,
li ming
五、致辞
1、进行自我介绍，
2、详细介绍大会内容，
3、结束语。
good morning, ladies and gentlemen, welcome to beijing! to begin with, i would like to
make a brief introduction to myself. i am the president of motorola (china) electronics ltd.
the following is my introduction to the conference. first, it is my great honor to be here
with all of you and declare open the conference of international trade cooperation. second, on
behalf of our company, i would like to express my heartfelt welcome to all the guests and
delegates. last, i believe our cooperative efforts are sure to be productive.
i wish all of you enjoy yourselves during this conference and hope the above information
will help you. if you have any question for me, please feel free to ask at any time. thank you for
your attention.
六、告示
1、比赛目的、时间、地点，
2、参赛者的要求，
3、裁判和奖励的细节。
you should write about 120 words. do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. use
department of chinese language and literature at the end of the announcement.
chinese speaking contest
february 3, 2008
to improve students‘ ability to speak chinese and enrich after-class activities， the
students’ union of department of chinese language and literature is organizing a school-wide
chinese speaking contest to be held on saturday next week (10 february) at the
students‘ auditorium. those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of
their classes before tuesday next week. five professors will be invited to be judges. the first six
winners will be given awards. everybody is welcome to be present at the contest. the
students'union department of chinese language and literature。
七.wealth and happiness
everybody wants to get wealth. in today’s material world, making money or becoming
wealthy symbolizes a person’s success and capability. many people just make every effort, pay
any price to attain greater wealth. with money, they can but nice, large apartments in nice
neighborhood; with money, they can own stately luxury cars. wealth seems with money, they can
own stately luxury cars. wealth seems to bring all happiness in life.
in my opinion, people cannot do anything without money, but money is not everything.
what money will bring you depends on your personal belief and goal in life. if you are kind
enough to help others, especially the poor, money is a good thing to you. with it, you can do much
more for the benefit of people and your country, and it will and to your own happiness. if you
want money just for your own needs, you’ll never be satisfied or happy. in a word, you should
have money spent for more people, only then can money be the source of your happiness.
八 1. 近几年来越来越多的学生选择留学
2. 出现这种现象的原因
3. 这种现象可能带来的影响
Studying Abroad
Recent years have witnessed a phenomenon that more and more students swarm into
foreign countries to finish their education.They have not considered our homeland as the unique
place to enrich their knowledge any more. Instead, some excellent boys and girls whose financial
condition is fine simultaneously began to pay their attention on some oversea prestigious colleges
and institutions and dream to get degrees there.
There are several reasons to cause this change. First of all, with the globalization and much
more frequent communications with developed countries, most of the people in China get to
realize the wide gaps in many fields, especially in science and technology,between China and
western countries. They thirst for studying aboard to get ready better for the fierce competition in
the job-hunting market. Moreover, the life in foreign countries is usually attractive to young
people and studying aboard may satisfy their curiosity.
Besides, the rapid development of our mother country and the remarkable growth in our
income make going abroad to study available, which is almost impossible to average Chinese
students in the past.
The move-out of our students changes our society a lot.
On one hand, being students in foreign universities will widen their view and offer them
more possibility to get favorite jobs. And consequently their success will draw more latecomers to
do the same thing.On the other hand, if the majority of them will not go back to China to work in
the future, our fatherland will probably suffer a significant loss which may be difficult to be
estimated by money.
九 拥有手机的优点和缺点
Advantages and Disadvantages of the Mobile Phone
With the rapid economic development，the mobile phone has found its way into campuses
and a host of students take advantage of this wonderful gadget to communicate with each other.
This phenomenon gives rise to this question：What are the advantages and disadvantages of the
mobile phone?
It is widely believed that it greatly facilitates students’ campus life. Many instances could
be found to support this type of opinion. A graduating student in our university bought a mobile
phone in the course of hunting for his job. He told me that through the mobile phone he could
easily keep in touch with the employer of the company he intends to work with and would not
miss any opportunities.
However，everything has both positive and negative facets. The mobile phone also has
many disadvantages. For instance，the ringing of the mobile phone often disturbs the teacher’s
teaching and other students’ learning.
Personally，the advantages of the mobile phone outweigh the disadvantages of it as long as
we don’t interfere with others while using it.
十. 有一个会议在你所在的城市召开，你想去参加。给会议的组织者写一封信。说一
下你想参加的原因，并简单介绍一下自己。并请他提供一些会议的相关信息。
Dear Professor Huang，
I write for information regarding the forthcoming International Education Conference to be
held at your prestigious university.
I am a first
year student from Nanjing University majoring in Education，and have a
particular interest in the teaching of work place skills and employer’s perceptions of new
graduates.
I plan to attend the conference and would like information about the contributory
speakers，the content of their talks，and their research interests. However，although I have been
living in Nanjing in the past four years，I am unfamiliar with Nanjing. Therefore，if you could
please also send the details of how to get to your university it would make my arrangements much
easier.
In addition，if you could let me have details of the accommodation that is available I would
be more than grateful.
I look forward to receiving the information and meeting you in person.
Sincerely yours，
Frank
十一、1.私家轿车越来越多，有些问题随之产生
2.比较明显的大问题有……
3.我对这种现象的看法
Cars and Air Pollution
Too many cars have created a lot of serious problems in our world. Besides congestion,
accidents and fast fuel consumption, cars are responsible for a good part of air pollution in big
cities. All the time, they are pumping huge amounts of waste gases into the atmosphere. These
gases are very harmful, causing disease and even death.
One possible solution is to design and develop clean cars and clean fuels. In Shanghai,
some of the public buses begin to run on natural gas, which does not give off as much carbon
dioxide as the petrol. But it may take decades for the new models of clean cars completely replace
the traditional ones.Another solution is to develop modern public transportation systems and
restrict the use of private cars. If the price of petrol rises constantly and the public vehicles are
efficient and convenient enough, most people will not buy private cars. And the total number of
cars in big cities will reduce greatly.
On the whole, the elimination of air pollution needs the collective efforts from the
government, the public and the environmentalists.
十二、.目前很多父母在孩子高中毕业前就送他们出国学习
2.导致这种趋势的原因是什么
3.我对此的看法
Overseas Study at an Early Age
Nowadays more and more parents are eager to send their children to study abroad before
they finish high school by whatever means and at whatever cost.
It is quite understandable for parents to send their children to study overseas because they
place high expectations on their children. They are encouraged by the success stories of those who
have completed their overseas study. With the development of economy, companies and
institutions at home are giving more and more emphasis on overseas experiences, too.
Consequently, pursuing overseas study became a kind of short cut in gaining a better future.
Moreover, there is still one underlying reason for this rush
economic reason. The rapid
economic progress in the past few years in China has enabled more and more parents to afford the
huge cost for their children’s overseas study.
As for me, overseas study is surely a helpful way to get both advanced knowledge and
necessary experiences, but overseas study at an early age is neither necessary nor beneficial. The
students may be too young to either tend for themselves or think for themselves. I do think that
overseas study can contribute to one’s self improvement, but it’s better to be pursued after one
has finished his college study at home, when he is more capable of learning and living on his own.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic
Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base
your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题
2)分析导致该问题的原因
3)大学生应该如何应对该问题
Employment
Pressure
Facing
College
Students
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点提出一个问题，提纲第 2 点要求分析该问题产生
的原因，提纲第 3 的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原
因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。
高分范文
Employment Pressure Facing College Students
[1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after
their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Today’s university students usually experience
great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness.
[2]What is the cause of this phenomenon?
[3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates
exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job.
[3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying
academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. [3]Thirdly, some students don’t study hard
during the college. After four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those
fairly good jobs or positions require.
[6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to
change this situation. [3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and
[7]put our heart into our studies. [3]What’s more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social
activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we
apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience
than to the starting salary.
【亮点点评】
[1]过去和现在进行对比。
[2]设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。
[3]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[4]“大学生供过于求”。
[5]“倾向，趋于”。
[6]“面对日趋激烈的竞争”，现在分词作状语。
[7]“用心学习”。
[8]“积累相关的实际经验”。
[9]“更加关注”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to
change this situation.
临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。
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2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting
salary
临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。
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【KEY】
1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis.
2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to one’s abilities than to his degree.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic
High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your
composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业发展空间才是
更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
High
Salaries
or
Career
Development?
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第 2 点要求分别阐述
这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第 3 点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型
作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的侧重点：注重
高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”的倾向并说明理由。
高分范文
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views
about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that
promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills
and advancement possibilities.
[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness.
[3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer
from depression [4]due to lack of enough money. [2]However, the holders of the second view
argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that
counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner
or later.
In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term
satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally
speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my
vote to the career development first and then high salaries.
【亮点点评】
[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。
[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。
[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。
[4]“因为缺钱”。
[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。
[6]while 引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。
[7]“一般来说”。
[8]“选择”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and
advancement possibilities.
临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。
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2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as
roundly as possible.
临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，因此应该得
到特殊待遇。
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3.佳句：Career may give us long
ng term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.
临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如何相互理解。
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【KEY】
1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western
fast food.
2. However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great
contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.
3. The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how
to understand each other.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The
Attitude towards Examination. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on
the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)人们对待考试一直褒贬不一
2)你怎样看待考试，为什么?
3)提出你的建议
The
Attitude
towards
Examination
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。
提纲第 1 点提出一个有争议的话题，
提纲第 2 点要求谈谈“我”
对其的态度，提纲第 3 点要求提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：通过大学考试引出人们对待考试的不同态度;表
明“我”对考试的态度，并说明理由;针对考试提出“我”的建议。
高分范文
The Attitude towards Examination
[1]There are always many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of examination.
Some people think examination is the only best way to test how examinees have mastered what
they have studied. [2]However, still others hold the opposite opinion. They argue that examination
can’t measure how the students have really studied. They say it can do [3]nothing but burden the
students.
[4]As for me, I think the examination is very useful to both teachers and students. [4]On the
one hand, examination can help teachers check how much students have learned about a subject
and thus know what should be their teaching focus. [4]On the other hand, [5]as far as students are
concerned, by examination, they can [6]not only know how they have studied [6]but also find out
what they haven’t mastered well. [4]Thus, they could improve their studying method so as to
make greater progress.
[4]Of course, examination is not the only way to measure one’s ability. [4]Also, too many
examinations are a burden on both teachers and students. [4]But, in sum, the examination [7]does
more good than harm. Therefore, I think the correct attitude towards examination should be to
[8]take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantage.
【亮点点评】
[1]用于表示某事存在争议。
[2]用于引出对立观点。
[3]“仅仅，只是”。
[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“就…而言”。
[6]用于连接并列成分。
[7]“利大于弊”。
[8]“扬长避短”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：They say it can do nothing but burden the students.
临摹：最终，不诚实只会带来麻烦。
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2.佳句：Examination can help teachers check how much students have learned about a
subject and thus know what should be their teaching focus.
临摹：一些学生可能会把假期的大部分时间都用来娱乐，而因此荒废了学业。
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3.佳句：
佳句：They can not only know how they have studied but also find out what they haven’t
mastered well.
临摹：人们不仅需要生活必需品，还想生活得舒适。
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【KEY】
1. In the end, dishonesty brings nothing but troubles.
2. Some students might spend most of their holiday time on amusement, and thus leave their
study neglected.
3. People not only need the basic necessities of life, but also want to live comfortably.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic
Reserving a Seat. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline
(given in Chinese) below:
1)很多大学里“占座”现象十分普遍
2)这种现象会带来哪些影响
3)你对此的看法
Reserving
a
Seat
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点指出一种现象，提纲第 2 点要求分析该现象带来
的影响，提纲第 3 点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生在教室和图书馆“占座”的现象;阐述
这种现象带来的不良影响;谈谈“我”对“占座”现象的看法。
高分范文
Reserving a Seat
We often see there is a table-cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or
library, [1]indicating the seat is taken. This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all
colleges and universities. [2]Strangely enough, most of students seem to [3]take this for granted,
and few will protest it.
[4]Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for the purpose of better study, this
kind of phenomenon has great negative effects. [5]On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which
damages other students’ interests. [6]Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they
can not find a seat. [5]On the other hand, reserving a seat [7]violates the rule of fairness. [8]No
matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you [6]even though many others
are eager for that seat.
[9]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, [10]it is high time that we college students took
a good look of our behavior. [5]Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a
difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.
【亮点点评】
[1]“表示”，现在分词短语作伴随状语。
[2]“非常奇怪的是”，副词使用恰当。
[3]“认为…理所当然”。
[4]though 引导让步状语从句，引出对不良影响的阐述。
[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[6]even if/ even though 引导让步状语从句。
[7]“违背了公平原则”。
[8]“no matter +疑问词”表示“无论，不管”，引导让步状语从句。
[9]用于得出结论。considering 用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。
[10]用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时候了”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat.
临摹：即使要花费更多的钱，父母仍然愿意送他们的独生子女去更好的学校。
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2.佳句：No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you.
临摹：有了私家车，不管天气如何，也不管什么时候出门，人们都可以带孩子或父母去
任何地方。
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3.佳句：
Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good
look of our behavior.
临摹：鉴于以上所述，我认为，加强对大学生的心理辅导是当务之急。
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【KEY】
1. Parents are willing to send their only child to better schools even if it costs more.
2. With private cars, people can take their children or elder parents anywhere, no matter what
the weather is like and no matter when they go out.
3. Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time for us to strengthen the
psychological instruction on college students.
Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment
You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion,
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary,
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to
follw the instructions may result may result in a loss of marks.
参考范文： 来源于网络，仅供参考
In recent years, tourism has developed rapidly in China. Many people believe that tourism
produce positive effects on economic growth and we should try our best to promote tourism. But
what these people fail to see is that tourism may bring about a disastrous impact on our
environment. As for me, I'm firmly convinced that too much tourists bring harm to the
environment.
The bad impact of tourism on the environment has mainly expressed itself in various ways.
One way is the process of exploiting a new scenic spot. In order to attract tourists, a lot of artificial
facilities have been built, which have certain unfavorable effects on the environment. This process
usually breaks the ecological balance of the area. In some mountainous places, trees are being cut
down to build hotels for others to see and explore the beauty of the mountains. Then land slides
and mud-rock flows come up. Another way the development of tourism has damaged the
environment occurs when tourists go to scenic spots. Some tourists don't have the awareness to
protect the environment, and ignorantly throw their garbage here and there. Some people even kill
the local wildlife to eat, which badly damages the balance of the natural environment.
It is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism. We must keep in mind
that too much tourists bring harm to the environment. We need to find a balance between
satisfying the needs of tourists and reducing to a minimum the pollution they cause.
好词佳句总结：
bring about
造成, 引起〔导致〕(某事)
e.g.
Gambling had brought about his ruin.
赌博终于毁了他。
a disastrous impact
灾难性影响
firmly convinced that
深信不疑
Exploit scenic spots 开发风景区
artificial facility 人造设施
unfavorable effect 不利影响
break the ecological balance 破坏生态平衡
land slide 滑坡，土崩
mud-rock flows 泥石流
ignorantly 无知地
throw garbage here and there 乱丢垃圾
It is wrong to sacrifice the environment for the growth of tourism.
为旅游增长而牺牲环境是错误的。最后一段阐明观点。
We need to find a balance between satisfying the needs of tourists and reducing to a
minimum the pollution they cause.
该句式还可套用于类似话题，更换划线部分即可。
(一)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short
essay on the topic of Immoral Behavior in Public. You should write at least
150 words following the outline given below:
1.我们经常在公共场合见到各种不道德的行为，叙述你的一次相关经历。
2.这些不文明行为会有哪些影响。
3.我们应该怎样改善这种现象。
●审题概述●
这是一篇议论文，可以根据作文要求列出提纲：第一部分，列举不文明行为
并叙述一次相关经历;第二部分，不文明行为的影响，一两个即可;第三部分，提
出建议。
【范文】
Immoral Behavior in Public
To witness 1immoral behavior in public, one need only visit the
Beijing subway. I still remember the first time I took the Beijing subway.
It was an early morning. I was in a hurry to go to school. When I was trying
to get a ticket, I found a lot of people waiting in front of me, but nobody
was in the line.
1Immoral behaviors in public 2initiate a series of problems. One of
the most serious ones is that it may exert a negative impact on our 3sense
of social responsibility. We will keep ignoring other people’s rights
and feelings, and in turn, we too will be disrespected some day.
The reform of1 this phenomenon is certainly not easy. With an eye on
practical 2implementation and 3cost effectiveness , I propose that
society make it clear in every way that people who fail to respect the
④common good will be seriously punished. Stricter policies for this
should be made to correct this phenomenon as soon as possible.
We all expect “A World without Thieves". Everyone 1shares the huge
responsibility of 2demonstrating his or her justice at the proper time.
Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious socialist society.
◇第一段思路点评：
作文要求第一点，相关经历
◇语言点提示：
1 immoral behavior in public：直接点题
◇第二段思路点评：
不文明行为的影响
◇语言点提示：
1 immoral behavior in public：重复名词词组，与第一段衔接
2 initiate：意思是“产生，发动”
3sense of social responsibility：意思是“社会责任感”
◇第三段思路点评：
如何改善这些现象
◇语言点提示：
1 this phenomenon：指代前文“immoral behavior in public”，与上文
衔接，且避免重复
2implementation：意为“执行，实施”
3cost effectiveness：意为“成本效率”
④ common good：意为“公益”
◇第四段思路点评：
总结
◇语言点提示：
1share a huge responsibility: 意为“承担重大责任”
2demonstrate：意为“展现”
(二)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short
essay on the topic of Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues.
You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 当今的年轻人越来越强调个性发展;
2. 发展个性是否意味着忽视中国的传统美德;
3. 你的观点。
●审题概述●
这是一篇议论文，题目比较大。主要讨论个性发展和传统美德之间的关系。
根据提示，可分为三部分：年轻人的个性发展，可以适当举例;个性发展是否意
味着忽视传统美德，可以笼统地讲，也可以具体地解释某一种美德;最后提出自
己的观点。
Should We still Cherish Chinese Traditional Virtues
Today’s youth do things in their own ways, spend money on whatever
they want and talk to people in their own languages——personality
development is 1overstated by young people these days. To some of them,
personality means to be totally different from who their parents used to
be.
But the problem is that during their pursuit of their personal goals
they ignore some of the traditional virtues of which their 1forefathers
were proud. Take the question of 2fidelity to elders for example. With
better education and different experiences, some young people find it’s
hard to agree with their parents any longer. They have a feeling of
superiority and even sometimes 3turn their back on their elder parents.
To me, personality development and traditional virtues 1have nothing
to do with right or wrong. In our society, we need them both. These virtues
help you to become a better Chinese, while personality development will
improve your own character.
◇第一段思路点评：
个性的发展
◇语言点提示：
1overstate：意为“夸大”
◇第二段思路点评：
个性发展是否意味着忽视传统美德
◇语言点提示：
1forefather：意为“祖先”
2fidelity：意为“忠实，忠诚”
3turn one’s back on：意为“背弃，抛弃”
◇第三段思路点评：
个人观点
◇语言点提示：
1have nothing to do with：意为“ 与……无关”
(三)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short
essay entitled Change of Entrance Exams for Graduate Schools. You should
write at least 150 words based on the chart and outline given below:
上图所示为 1997 年、2002 年、2007 年参加研究生入学考试的情况，请描述
其变化，并请说明这些变化的原因;
●审题概述●
这是一道图表题。首先要看懂图表，从中找出规律。这幅图是关于研究生入
学考试考生人数的变化。可以看出 1997——2002 和 2002——2007 这两段时间段
中人数增加的趋势有所不同。重点分析这一变化的原因。
【范文】
This graph is about the increase of the numbers of people taking part
in the 1entrance exams for graduate schools. From it we can see that during
the first five years, from 1997 to 2002, the change is gradual. In 1997
there were 500,000 people, while in 2002 there were 1,500,000, showing
an increase of one million people. But during the second five years, from
2002 to 2007, the growth is sharp——2.5 million, with 4 million people
sitting the exams in 2007.
The reasons for this change may be as follows. First, 1999 was the
starting year of 1the college expansion plan, which obviously means that
after four years, in 2003, more students graduated from universities and
colleges. Secondly, as the competition to find a satisfactory job has
become more severe in recent years, to be equipped with a higher degree
improves the chances of applicants finding a better job. Thirdly, not only
new graduates feel the competition but also some people who already have
a job. In order to get a promotion or to perform better in their jobs,
lots of them returned to the 2battle field to fight for better career
prospects.
◇第一段思路点评：
描述图表，指出两个时间段的不同
◇语言点提示：
1entrance exams for graduate school：意为“研究生入学考试”
◇第二段思路点评：
分析原因
◇语言点提示：
1the college expansion plan：意为“高校扩招”
2battle field: 意为“战场”
(四)
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter
of application for a MBA program in Columbia University. You should write
at least 150 words following the outline given below:
1. 介绍你目前所学专业;
2. 介绍个人特长爱好以及性格;
3. 说明为什么申请该校的 MBA。
●审题概述●
这是一封留学申请信。要提供申请人的个人资历，写明申请学校和所学专业
以及申请的理由。
【范文】
Dear Sir,
1I am writing in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further
my study in the MBA program in your university.
My name is Li Ming, and I am an 1undergraduate student of Marketing
in Nanjing University. During the last four years, I have been studying
hard and also working hard for the Students’ Union. I am careful to 2keep
a balance between study and 3extracurricular activities. I have won from
the University various scholarships for my good study and my efficient
Student’s Union work.
I’m interested in business and wish I could 1further my study
overseas. I choose Columbia University because you have a long history
and enjoy a good reputation in this field. I believe my interests are
extremely 2congruent with the strengths of your school, and my solid
academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for
graduate study.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
◇第一段思路点评：
直接表明要申请的专业
◇语言点提示：
1I am writing in the hope that：申请信常用句式
◇第二段思路点评：
个人情况简介
◇语言点提示：
1undergraduate：意为“大学生”
2keep a balance between：意为“保持平衡”
3extracurricular activities：意为“课外活动”
◇第三段思路点评：
说明申请该校的原因
◇语言点提示：
1further：意为“促进，进一步”
2congruent with：意为“适合的，适当的”
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short
essay on the topic Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town? You should
write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作;
2. 也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯;
3. 结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。
● 审题概述●
这是一篇议论文，观点很明确。去大城市发展还是到小城镇工作。可以分段
列明两者的优缺点，然后提出自己的看法。
Starting Career in a Big City or Small Town
Want to be a small fish in a big pond or 1the other way round? Every
graduate faces this question when he starts his career. Some prefer to
stay in the big cities after graduation. To them, big cities mean more
experiences, more opportunities to see the big world and more space for
career development. At the same time, higher salary is another
2temptation.
But1 some other graduates want to start in small towns. Even though
there may not be many big companies, they can have a quieter and less
competitive life. Another reason is they can be a big fish in a small pond.
They can easily get the management’s attention and may win promotion
earlier.
As far as I am concerned, I prefer to start in a big city like Shanghai.
1A good begin is half the battle, and in Shanghai I can find a job in a
big company where I can meet people from different places and cultures.
I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks.
◇第一段思路点评：
在大城市发展的好处
◇语言点提示：
1the other way round：意为“与之相反”
2temptation：意为“诱惑”
◇第二段思路点评：
在小城镇工作的好处
◇语言点提示：
1 some other graduates：提出另一观点
◇第三段思路点评：
个人看法
◇语言点提示：
1A good begin is half the battle：意为“开头好等于成功了一半”
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition on the topic Skipping Classes on College Campus. You should
write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given
in Chinese) below:
1)大学里逃课现象时有发生
2)分析学生逃课的原因
3)如何减少逃课现象
Skipping Classes on College Campus
_________________________________________________________________
______________
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点指出一种现象，提纲第 2 点要求
分析该现象产生的原因，提纲第 3 点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文
应为问题解决型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生逃课现象及主要表现;
分析大学生逃课的主要原因;说明应该如何减少逃课现象。
高分范文
该文章转载自无忧考网：
http://www.51test.net/show.asp?id=704002&Page=3
Skipping Classes on College Campus
In colleges and universities, the phenomenon of students skipping
classes is not unusual. There are often some students who skip those
classes for feeling uncomfortable or other private reasons. [1]Besides,
still some students are absent in classes without any reason but for they
don’t want to.
[2]There are two main reasons for college students skip classes.
[1]First, [3]compared with in middle school, students have more freedom
in college. [4]It depends more on one student’s consciousness [4]whether
he will attend the class. So those students lacking self-discipline begin
to skip classes. [1]Second, some teachers’ classes could not attract
students’ interests [5]so that some students [6]would rather skip
classes to study what they are interested in.
[7]For whatever reasons, skipping classes [8]does bring negative
effects on students’ study. [1]Therefore, [9]it is necessary to take some
effective measures to reduce this phenomenon. [1]On the one hand, the
school and teachers should make students realize the negative effects of
skipping classes and increase their consciousness of attending the class.
[1]On the other hand, teachers have to improve their teaching quality to
attract students’ interests. [10]Only in this way can the phenomenon of
skipping classes be reduced as soon as possibly.
【亮点点评】
[1]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[2]用于引出原因。
[3]“和…相比”。
[4]it 充当形式主语，whether 从句是真正的主语。
[5]so that 引导结果状语从句。
[6]“宁愿”。
[7]“不管什么原因”。
[8]强调谓语动词。
[9]用于引出解决办法。
[10]“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。
佳句临摩
1.佳句：It depends more on one student’s consciousness whether
he will attend the class.
临摩：在过去，一个学生只要成绩好就行，有没有好的身体不要紧。
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______.
2.佳句：Some teachers’ classes could not attract students’
interests so that some students would rather skip classes to study what
they are interested in.
临摩：他们的时间完全被工作占据以至于几乎没有时间和孩子们认真交
流。
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______.
3.佳句：For whatever reasons, skipping classes does bring
negative effects on students’ study.
临摩：不管学习外语的原因是什么，它都能够使一个人受益。
_____________________________________________________________________
______.
【KEY】
1. In the past, it did not matter whether a student had a strong
body or not, as long as he got the top marks.
2. They are fully occupied by their work so that they have little
time to talk with their children seriously.
3. To acquire another language, for whatever reasons, is very
useful for a person.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a
composition on the topic Reserving a Seat. You should write at least 150
words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
我要高分
1)很多大学里“占座”现象十分普遍
2)这种现象会带来哪些影响
3)你对此的看法
Reserving a Seat
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点指出一种现象，提纲第 2 点要求
分析该现象带来的影响，提纲第 3 点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生在教室和图书馆“占
座”的现象;阐述这种现象带来的不良影响;谈谈“我”对“占座”现象的看法。
高分范文
Reserving a Seat
We often see there is a table-cloth, a book or something else on
the desk in the classroom or library, [1]indicating the seat is taken.
This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and
universities. [2]Strangely enough, most of students seem to [3]take this
for granted, and few will protest it.
[4]Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for the
purpose of better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative
effects. [5]On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other
students’ interests. [6]Even if many students come to the classroom very
early, they can not find a seat. [5]On the other hand, reserving a seat
[7]violates the rule of fairness. [8]No matter how late you come to class,
the seat is still reserved for you [6]even though many others are eager
for that seat.
[9]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, [10]it is high time
that we college students took a good look of our behavior. [5]Indeed, only
if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task
for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”.
【亮点点评】
[1]“表示”，现在分词短语作伴随状语。
[2]“非常奇怪的是”，副词使用恰当。
[3]“认为…理所当然”。
[4]though 引导让步状语从句，引出对不良影响的阐述。
[5]过渡衔接词语，使文章条
条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[6]even if/ even though 引导让步状语从句。
[7]“违背了公平原则”。
[8]“no matter +疑问词”表示“无论，不管”，引导让步状语从句。
[9]用于得出结论。considering 用作介词，意为“考虑到，鉴于”。
[10]用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性,常译为“早该是…的时
候了”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they
can not find a seat.
临摹：即使要花费更多的钱，父母仍然愿意送他们的独生子女去更好的学
校。
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2.佳句：No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still
reserved for you.
临摹：有了私家车，不管天气如何，也不管什么时候出门，人们都可以带
孩子或父母去任何地方。
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______.
3.佳句：
Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we
college students took a good look of our behavior.
临摹：鉴于以上所述，我认为，加强对大学生的心理辅导是当务之急。
_____________________________________________________________________
______.
【KEY】
1. Parents are willing to send their only child to better schools
even if it costs more.
2. With private cars, people can take their children or elder
parents anywhere, no matter what the weather is like and no matter when
they go out.
3. Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time for
us to strengthen the psychological instruction on college students.
该文章转载自无忧考网：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30
minutes to write a composition on the topic The Attitude towards
Examination. You should write at least 150 words, and base your
composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)人们对待考试一直褒贬不一
2)你怎样看待考试，为什么?
3)提出你的建议
The
Attitude
towards
Examination
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行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点提出一个有争议的话题，提纲第 2
点要求谈谈“我”对其的态度，提纲第 3 点要求提出“我”的建议，由此可判断
本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：通过大学考试引出人们对待考试的
不同态度;表明“我”对考试的态度，并说明理由;针对考试提出“我”的建议。
高分范文
The Attitude towards Examination
[1]There are always many arguments about the advantages and
disadvantages of examination. Some people think examination is the only
best way to test how examinees have mastered what they have studied.
[2]However, still others hold the opposite opinion. They argue that
examination can’t measure how the students have really studied. They say
it can do [3]nothing but burden the students.
[4]As for me, I think the examination is very useful to both teachers
and students. [4]On the one hand, examination can help teachers check how
much students have learned about a subject and thus know what should be
their teaching focus. [4]On the other hand, [5]as far as students are
concerned, by examination, they can [6]not only know how they have studied
[6]but also find out what they haven’t mastered well. [4]Thus, they could
improve their studying method so as to make greater progress.
[4]Of course, examination is not the only way to measure one’s
ability. [4]Also, too many examinations are a burden on both teachers and
students. [4]But, in sum, the examination [7]does more good than harm.
Therefore, I think the correct attitude towards examination should be to
[8]take full adva antage of it and avoid its disadvantage.
【亮点点评】
[1]用于表示某事存在争议。
[2]用于引出对立观点。
[3]“仅仅，只是”。
[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
[5]“就…而言”。
[6]用于连接并列成分。
[7]“利大于弊”。
[8]“扬长避短”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：They say it can do nothing but burden the students.
临摹：最终，不诚实只会带来麻烦。
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2.佳句：Examination can help teachers check how much students have
learned about a subject and thus know what should be their teaching focus.
临摹：一些学生可能会把假期的大部分时间都用来娱乐，而因此荒废了学
业。
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3.佳句：
佳句：They can not only know how they have studied but also find
out what they haven’t mastered well.
临摹：人们不仅需要生活必需品，还想生活得舒适。
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______.
【KEY】
1. In the end, dishonesty brings nothing but troubles.
2. Some students might spend most of their holiday time on amusement,
and thus leave their study neglected.
3. People not only need the basic necessities of life, but also want
to live comfortably.
该文章转载自无忧考网：Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30
minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career
Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your
composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大学毕业生选择工作时主要看重高工资，而有的则认为良好的职业
发展空间才是更重要的
2)阐述他们各自的考虑
3)表明你的看法
High
Salaries
or
Career
Development?
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__________
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__________
_____________________________________________________________________
__________
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第 1 点指出两种不同的选择，提纲第 2 点
要求分别阐述这两种选择各自的理由，提纲第 3 点要求表明“我”的看法，由此
可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学毕业生选择工作时不同的
侧重点：注重高工资和注重职业发展空间;对比阐述他们各自的理由;表明“我”
的倾向并说明理由。
高分范文
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they
have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some
of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries.
[1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn
skills and advancement possibilities.
[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will
result in more happiness. [3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be
able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression
[4]due to lack of enough money. [2]However, the holders of the second view
argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It
is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be
outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.
In my view, career development is the right choice because career
may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short
term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development
will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to
the career development first and then h high salaries.
【亮点点评】
[1]用于引出两种不同的观点或倾向。
[2]用于对比分析两种观点各自的理由。
[3]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构充当状语。
[4]“因为缺钱”。
[5]强调句型，此处是强调句子的主语。
[6]while 引导比较状语从句，意为“然而”。
[7]“一般来说”。
[8]“选择”。
佳句临摹
1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances
to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
临摹：近些年来，越来越多的人开始喜欢洋快餐。
_____________________________________________________________________
______.
2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should
develop his skills as roundly as possible.
临摹：然而，持第二种观点的人认为体育明星们为社会做出了杰出的贡献，
因此应该得到特殊待遇。
_____________________________________________________________________
______.
3.佳句：Career may give us long
ng term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term
happiness.
临摹：我们之间的共同之处使我们的关系牢固，而不同之处则都会我们如
何相互理解。
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______.
【KEY】
1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed
a preference for western fast food.
2. However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports
stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some
special treatment.
3. The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the
difference teaches us how to understand each other.
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该文章转载自无忧考网：http://www.51test.net/show/697629.html
30 minutes to write a short essay entitle Population Burden . You should write at least 150
words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1．人口老龄化问题正困扰着中国。
2．人口老龄化带来的问题。
3．应采取怎样的措施，谈谈自己的观点。我要收藏
题目分析：
在世界人口走向老龄化和发达国家人口老龄化发展的同时，中国人口老龄化也在加
剧。人口老龄化的产生，正是社会进步、经济发展的结果。
参考范文： 摘自 http://cet.hjenglish.com/page/27205/?page=1 范文的高级词汇较多，
童鞋们根据自身实际情况来选择掌握哈~
Population Burden
Many countries will experience aging populations in the next century because of declining
birth and mortality rates. China will soon join their ranks.
As for the issue of aging, its situation has been growing increasingly severe in spite of the
fact most people are still ignorant of the problems it brings about. Firstly, with families becoming
smaller and living pace escalating, it is even graver for families to care for aged members
adequately. Secondly, aging causes a relative decline in working force in that fewer people have to
support the increasing aged people. Consequently, the productivity of the whole society is affected
to some extent. Thirdly and most importantly, the aging of population in China resulted from the
successful implementation of family planning has not been synchronized with national economic
progress.
The rapidity of the population's aging has made it more urgent for the adoption of
countermeasures. No doubt they key is to build a solid economic foundation. Meanwhile,
importance shall be attached to overall social progress by changing the backward situation in
social security, welfare and service. What's more, family care and community services shall also
be encouraged.
好词佳句总结：
aging population 老年人口
birth rate 出生率
mortality rate 死亡率
ignorant of 不知道 不懂
graver 更严重的
e.g.This heavy rain could have grave consequences.
这场大雨会造成严重后果。
adequately 充分地
productivity 生产力
implementation 执行
family planning 计划生育
rapidity 速度 在这用 rapidity 比 spee ed 好~
countermeasure 对策
solid economic foundation 稳固的经济基础
Population old age 人口老龄化
Population burden 人口负担
Old age social security 老年社会保障
Sustainable development 可持续发展
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t owrite a short essay entitle Earth Hour . You should
write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1 地球一小时始于澳大利亚，并迅速席卷全球。活动旨在倡议个人、社区、企业和政
府在特定的时间熄灯一小时,来表明他们对应对气候变化行动的支持。
2 地球一小时带来的变化。
3 你的观点
题目分析：
话说今晚偶们学校基本还是灯火通明……囧 这次作文与时俱进，选材于最新最热的
一个话题：Earth Hour
但不管话题再怎么变，基本套路还是不变 D
参考范文： （偶刚刚摘选了新闻素材炮制出来。
。。）
Earth Hour
Earth Hour started in Australia with millions of homes and businesses turning their lights
off for one hour. Now it has grown to become one of the world’s biggest climate change
initiatives. People are all joining together in a global effort to show that it’s possible to take action
on global warming.
Earth Hour has brought about some new changes to our lives. The iconic "Bird’s Nest"
National Stadium and the nearby "Water Cube" National Aquatics Center, usually illuminated by
floodlights, went dark at 8:30 p.m., while dozens of hotels, office buildings, shopping malls and
restaurants also switched some lights off. People join activities such as candle-lit dinners and
star-gazing parties as a response to the call for "going dark". However, some critics have
dismissed the event as simply a gimmick that will not make any difference.
From my point of view, Earth Hour is a global call to action to every individual, every
business and every community. A call to stand up, to take responsibility and to get involved in
working towards a sustainable future. Earth Hour is a message of hope and a message of action.
Everyone can make a difference.
好词佳句总结：
initiative 主动的行动, 倡议
global warming 全球变暖，人尽皆知的一个词，但关键时候说不定就忘鸟~ - -！
iconic 标志性的
"Bird’s Nest" National Stadium 鸟巢 国家体育场
"Water Cube" National Aquatics Center 水立方 国家游泳中心 （两个现代化标志性建
筑） 我要收藏
illuminate 照亮
floodlight 泛光灯
switch off 关灯，关电视之类~
candle-lit dinners 烛光晚餐 看来也可以给自己一个浪漫的理由
star-gazing parties 观星派对，据说悉尼关灯后看到的星星多了好几倍呢！
gimmick 花招, 诡计, 骗人的玩
玩意儿 (很好表达出一些专家的不屑)
sustainable future 可持续的，美好 D 未来
get involved in doing sth 参与到做某事中
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t owrite a short essay entitle On
Qualification-obtaining Fever . You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given
below in Chinese.
1 校园“考证族”的队伍不断壮大，很多学生忙于考区各种资格证书
2 大学生忙考证的利弊
3 你的观点
题目分析：
本文围绕大学生忙于考取各种证书的情况展开论述。此类作文通常要在第一段指出这
种现象，并进行简要描述；接下来详细论述这种现象的利弊或产生的原因；最后表明自己的
观点。
参考范文：
On Qualification-obtaining Fever
Currently, there is a long-lasting fever of obtaining a variety of qualifications among
college students, including vocational qualifications and skills certificates. Many students spend
their weekends and vocation in preparing for tests on English, Law and Computer Science. Even
after their graduation, some of them are still having full enthusiasm on it.
No doubt qualifications have attractions of their own. They are evidences to confirm
students’ abilities. Work-related or competence-based qualifications may even help students find
a satisfactory job, so students hold the opinion that they are obtaining not credentials but
opportunities for their future.
However, as it is known to all that each coin has its two sides, obtaining qualifications also
brings negative influences in spite of its advantages. First, some vocational qualifications are
obtained at the expense of the basic discipline study or major learning. Second, it will take 300 to
500 Yuan to go in for a certain certificate, leading to great financial burden. Third, better jobs do
not always necessarily follow more qualifications.
From my point of view, what matters most is relevant experience or skill, not the number
of credentials you have obtained.
好词佳句总结：
fever 狂热 可用指某种现象
vocational qualification 职业证照
work-related 与工作有关
credentials 学历资历等的资格
at the expense of 以……为牺牲
童鞋们注意下范文最后一句，使用该句式又稳妥，又能拿个不错的分数。
From my point of view, what matters most is… not…
英语六级作文高分技巧：精彩你的“强调”
一、用形容词“very”
，
“single”等表示强调
Red Army fought a battle on this very spot. 红军就在此地打过一仗。
Not a single person has been in the office this afternoon. 今天下午竟然没有一个人来过
办公室。
二、用反身代词表示强调
I myself will see her off at the station. 我将亲自到车站为她送行。
You can do it well yourself. 你自己能做好这件事情。
三、用助词“do”表示强调
The baby is generally healthy， but every now and then she does catch a cold. 那孩子的
健康状况尚好，但就是偶尔患感冒。
Do be quiet. I told you I had a headache. 务必安静，我告诉过你，我头疼。
四、用副词“very”
，
“only”
，“even”
，
“too”，
“just”等表示强调
He drank it to the very last drop.他把它喝得一干二净。
Only in this way can we wipe out the enemy troops. 只有用这样的方法我们才能消灭敌
军。
He didn’t answer even my letter.他甚至连我的信都不回。
I will too go! 我要去的!
The scenery is just superb. 风景真是美极了。
五、用“...and that”
，
“...and those”，
“not...too much”，“否定加否定”等结构表示强
调
They fulfilled the task， and that in a few days. 他们在几天内完成的就是那项任务。
I gave her some presents， and those the day before yesterday. 前天我送给她的就是那些
礼物。
I can’t thank you too much. 我无论怎样感谢你都不过份。
I am not unfaithful to you. 我对你无比忠诚。
六、用短语“in every way”
，
“in no way”，
“by all means”，
“by no means”，
“only too”
，
“all too”
，
“but too”
，
“in heaven”
，
“in the world”
，
“in hell”，
“on earth”，
“under the sun”
等表示强调
His behaviour was in every way perfect. 他的举止确实无可挑剔。
By all means take your son with you. 你一定要把儿子带来。
The news was only too true. 这消息确实是事实。
It was over all too soon! 此事的确了结得很快!
Where in heaven were you then?当时你到底在哪里?
Nobody under the sun would buy that car. 确实没有人会买那辆车。
七、用倒装句表示强调
Dishonest he is! 他的确不诚实!
In wine is the truth. 酒后吐真言。
八、用强调句型表示强调
It was the headmaster who opened the door for me. 正是校长为我开的门。
It was yesterday that we carried out that experiment. 就是在昨天我们做了那个实验。
四六级写作考试应用文模版两篇
最后给出应用文模版两篇，考纲上要求却没考过的，以防爆冷。不一定要背下来，心里有
数，注意表达方式和展开思路比较重要。
邀请信：(如邀请同学参加校庆）
Dear &&&:
How time flies! There have been for years since we parted 3 years ago. Delightedly, there
is an opportunity for us to reunion that the celebrity ceremony of the fundation of our university
will be held in &*&^%, I cordially invite you to come.
第一段先表明来意，可能是给老朋友写，就寒暄下，如给陌生人写，就首先打招呼，
说明你是谁和你的身份，把对方往尊敬了说，把自己往大学校大公司说，然后再说邀请的目
的和诚挚邀请。
第二段就要看出题的意图了。有可能指校庆的流程，那就注意层次，如：
I would like to introduce the whole plan of the ceremony. To begin with..........Then,.........At
night.....注意层次的变化，中间可举例和具体化，如说下开会活动的主题，地点，参与者啦。
也可能会写学校的变化，参观公司的程序等，第二段大同小异，拓展法按上课的就好。
第三段可能是提醒注意事项，比如让写回执，注意带的东西，注意语气就好。最后再
表达真挚的期待和邀请。
In addition, you`d better send.........and take......with you. Could you phone me before you
set off so that I can pick you up in the airport?
I am sincerely looking forward to your reply and arrival!
Best regards,
Yours cordially,
***
通知：
通知和邀请其实就类似了，开头讲目的，中间讲流程，最后提醒。
My fellow students:
I am &^%$, the president of the student`s union.According to the recent conference of the
university board, **** will be held in********(时间和地点）
，and it is decided that every class
shall send 3 representative to attend this significant activity.
Here are the details and precedures we have to follow on that day. At 9
a.m...................Then...........3 hours later.......
By the way , you`d better.........and remember all the details.
I am cordially looking forward to seeing all of you.
Yours sincerely,
&&&&
祝愿大家好好休息，放平心态，要相信努力终会回报！
No perfect, but splendid!
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道歉信+呼吁信
道歉信：
Dear...
I am delighted to learn that.....Unfortunately, I have some imperative reasons obliging me
not able to......I am writing this letter to send my sincere apology to you.
开宗明义，先写你很开心的事情，比如收到对方的邀请，比如得知你被对方公司录取，
再一转，说你不能赴约或来工作之类，希注意表达，灵活处理。
I planned to....when......However, I .......ten days ago.
主体段落，写表明你原来（PLANNED）是想要去的，结果十天前得知一个什么东西
导致你不得不去，内容自己发挥了，希望写些不让人反感的东西，不要写有更好的选择，最
好写家里不同意，学校保研之类，并写下你的争取和曲折过程。
I hope you can kindly understand my reasons and apologize for the troubles I have made
again. If there is a chance, would you please allow me to make some amends?
Your considerate understanding is greatly appreciated.
Best regards!
呼吁信：
My fellow students:
I am honored to have the opportunity standing here to call for a significant event. First of
all, please allow me to introduce myself to you all. My name is @@@, the president of the
student`s union.
As we all know......
把呼吁的事情陈述出来，进来有曲折感，用对比法，说以前好，现在的问题。可能是
帮助同学，也可能是环境问题，捐助之类。
I hope all of you can be generous to......Let us make painstaking efforts to........and I firmly
believe that....
第一个省略号写需要大家出什么力，比如捐款，比如宣传；第二个说来解决这个问题，
第三个写你的期望，比如会变更好，会迅速解决。
Your kindness is appreciated and will be surely rewarding.
Best regards!
真善美句型：
任何解决问题的文章结尾肯定都要呼吁和展望未来，可用一万能倒装句，被我称为真
善美句型，句套为：
Only if we..............can our society/campus become a more...for you, for me, for everybody
to live/study in!
第一个省略号写我们应该做的事情，比如说一起努力，比如说更加关注什么问题，如：
Only if we make unwavering （坚定不移的） and constant efforts
or
Only if we pay more attention to environmental protection/....
第二个省略号写我们这样了我们的社会或者校园或者大自然会变成一个更怎么的什
么东西，如
can our society become a more harmonious heaven（我们的社会变成更和谐的天堂）
or
can our mother nature become a more beautiful wonderland（我们的大自然母亲变成一片
更美丽的热土）
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