Characteristics of a Theme or Central Idea Statement Purposes of the Theme or Central Idea Statement The theme or central idea statement can help you interpret and write about literature/text in two main ways: (1) it forces you to decide on a clear, simple interpretation before you begin writing, and (2) it provides your reader with a summary of your interpretation. Characteristics of a Good Theme Statement A successful theme or central idea statement must be general enough to capture the overall meaning of the work but specific enough so that it conveys your unique interpretation. If your theme or central idea statement follows the following guidelines, and if you don't misread or misinterpret the text, you will be stating an interpretation in a powerful way. 1. In a sense, every text makes a statement or has a point. When you create a theme or central idea statement, you're substituting your single sentence for the entire text. That means that you have to simplify the meaning somewhat to get it into a single sentence, but nevertheless, your statement itself should make a point. Also, the statement should be a complete sentence. "Love and death" (for example) is not a theme statement. It's just an announcement of the topic of the work. What in particular is the author saying about love and death? A sentence like "The theme of the text is love and death" is grammatically speaking a complete sentence, but if you remove the beginning of the sentence ("The theme of the poem is"), then you don't have a complete sentence, just a wordy announcement of the topic. 2. The theme or central idea statement should describe the general meaning of the work, not the specific events, actions, or characters. The statement "Luke defeats Darth Vader" is not a theme or central idea statement but a plot summary. In a story, instead of describing what the characters do, discuss what they represent ("Good defeats evil"). Often these statements take the form of a moral or a judgment ("We cannot defeat an external evil until we acknowledge our own dark side"). Of course this theme results from what the characters do (or from the literal meaning of words in a text), and in supporting your general interpretation, you should cite some of these specific details. In a piece of nonfiction, authors express their central ideas through word choice, structure, and other elements of rhetoric. 3. The theme or central idea statement should reflect the values of the entire work, not just one or two lines, paragraphs, or sections. In particular, look at the end of the story or the concluding lines of a poem or any concluding ideas to carefully consider if the text matches what you think its general meaning is. Common Mistakes in Writing a Theme or Central Idea Statement o Theme is not a moral. A moral tells us how to behave or what to do; it is meant to be instructive. A theme observes, weighs, and considers the actions of a character; theme avoids judging what a character should or should not do. Therefore, words like “ought” and “should” are not appropriate in a thematic statement. o Themes are not short clichés or bumper sticker ideas. Themes reflect the complexity of life echoes in the work of literature. o Themes do not refer to specific names or the events of the plot. Theme does not summarize a work although it does reflect what happens in the work. Theme drops character names and uses more general terms like “parents,” “leaders,” “society,” or “adolescents” in a general observation about the human experience. o Themes avoid absolute terms like “anyone,” “all,” “none,” “everything,” and “everyone” because they indicate sloppy thinking; they are categorical, no exceptions. Terms like “we,” “often,” and “sometimes” suggest a more realistic view of the variety of human experiences. Theme Vocabulary *Abstract ideas to use to form thematic statements. Alienation Ambition Appearance vs. reality Custom / tradition Betrayal Bureaucracy Children Courage / cowardice Women / feminism Cruelty / violence Defeat / failure Despair/discontent/disillusionment Chance / fate / luck Domination / suppression Dreams / fantasies Duty Education / school Escape Exile Faith / loss of faith Falsity / pretense Family / parenthood Free will / will power Games/contests/sports/tricks Greed Guilt Heaven / paradise / utopia Home Heart vs. reason Initiation Illusion / innocence Instinct Journey/psychological journey Law / justice Loneliness / alones Loyalty Materialism Memory / the past Mob psychology Music / dance Mysterious stranger Persistence / perseverance Patriotism Poverty Prejudice Prophecy Repentance Resistance / rebellion Revenge / retribution Ritual / ceremony Scapegoat / victim Search for identity Social status Supernatural Time/ eternity War Sample Thematic Statements “The Most Dangerous Game” Men, when they are courageous and lucky, even in a hostile environment, can overcome the odds against their survival. Our reason, courage, and strength can reach their full potential when challenged by a hostile environment. The Adventures in Huckleberry Finn Much of our learning happens outside the classroom. Sometime our private discoveries show us the falsity of society that the classroom or society teaches as truth. The Catcher in the Rye In the presence of what we see as phony or corrupt, we often first choose to escape because we are afraid of becoming phony too. Fleeing provides some hope of preserving our innocence but denies our responsibility to alter, rebel against, or sometimes grow to accept what we see as threatening. Grading Rubric: Themes Statement for “The Bet” Below Proficiency – Doesn’t Meet Expectations (Level 1 Response) Anton Chekhov’s story “The Bet” is about a banker who bets a lawyer two million rubles he cannot stay imprisoned for fifteen years. The lawyer spends his time in prison reading a lot of books about different things. Five minutes before the fifteen years are up he walks out of the prison and loses the bet and the money. Approaching Proficiency – Meets Minimal Expectations (Level 2.5 Response) Anton Chekov’s story “The Bet” is about a lawyer who gives up two million rubles because he thinks money can’t buy happiness. In prison he reads a lots of books and decides it’s better to be smart than rich. Mastery Response – Exceeds Expectations (Level 4 Response) The central theme of Anton Chekhov’s story “The Bet” is that spiritual values are more important than material things. Although most people think they will be happy if they have a lot of money, Chekhov argues that money cannot buy wisdom, so spending one’s life in the pursuit of money is misguided. The protagonist in “The Bet” gives up two million rubles, because after fifteen years in prison studying is what is valuable in life, he comes to the conclusion that most people wrongly “workship things, not ideas” and “take falsehood for truth and ugliness for beauty.”