The Wfitet's Ctalt RobertFrost andDescribingNaturalScenes by BobertS. Boone Frostdoesnottell us muchaboutthe crow, he does place it againsta whitebackground. He hasthisbird porformone singleact, one we can easilyperceive.And becausethe narratorfindsthis littlesceneimportant enoughto savehis day,we take anextralookouGelves. Asingle;mage from nature quietly gathers meaning arounditself. Wui"lllHb:isi"r to readaboutrugs,elevators,sofas, VCRS,microwaves, computers,or anythingelsethat is madeby humansand belongsinside.But we will encounterwheelba(ows,apple trees, hotses, sea shores, foul weather,wells, shovels,ladders, leaves,and snow.In the poemsof RobertFrost,we meetlhe world of natureand objectsfromth€outside. Sometimesthese objects stand alone:moreoftenwe'll experience them through a nafiator who is choppingwood, picking apples, staringdown a well, or being involvedwith naturein some other way. HoweverFrostintroduceshis objects,though,he findsways io makethemvividandmeaningful. PureFoetry: "Th€Dust of Snow" SometimesFrostplac€s his outdoorthingsunadorned, allbythemselves,for us to savot lt's as if heexpectsus to fill in the detailsandform a moreclmpletepictureoi whathe writes.In "The Dustof Snow,"he doesnot useany modificationat all. Thecrowandthetreesimplyappear isolatodfor us to study: Shookdownonme Thedustof snow Froma hemlocklree Hasgivenmyheart A changeof mood Andsavedsomopart Oi a dayI hadrued. Short and to the point. Though 28 The Tools of hetry: Figures of Sp€€ch But "The Dustof Snow"is unusual.Mostoften,Frostenhanceshis objectsby usingpoeticdevices.He almostaiways,lor example,appeals directlyto oursenses.ln "TheRunaway,"he directsmuchof the languageat our earsas he doscribesa younghorseon the move: Hedippedhishead Andsnorted atus.Andlhenhehad to bolt. Weheardtheminiatur€ thunder where heiled... Frostappealsto other sensesas well. In the next line, the young horseis too far awayto hear,but wc - . .sawhim,orthought wesaw him,dimandgray, Likea shadow against thecunain otiallingflakes. "A figureof speech,"Frostonce said,"issayingonothingandmeaningsomething else."Heusesa wide rangeof figuresof spe€ch.Youhave discovered in yourownr€adingand writing both the powgr and eificioncyof sirniles,metaphors,and otherfigures.Frostusesthem repeatedlyto establishclearlythe r€af nessof obiectsthat populatehis poems.Lookagainatthelinesaying the horseis "likea shadowagainst the curtainof fallingflakesl'In one ,ine he has usedbotha simile(in stalingd;rectlythatthe appearance of the horseis " likea shadow")and (incallingthe backdrop a metaphor of snowa-''curtain"), One tool that Frostusesextensivelyis personification, theendow- Ing ani, "Or 1 e T thin t{ot ster F "St Eva hor sc€ hor ing sh€ f qul ste tior $ri l 5 3 a P thil inr 'ing inst )ne 0n lcE ing of human qualities to objects or anlmals. He personities water in "Oncebythe Pacific": Theshalleredwatermadea misty rnd rop Greal waves lookedover others comrngIn. Andthoughtoidoingsomethingto en- Thai waterneverdid to landbefore. Waves,as far as we know, cannot think,but by pretendingthattheydo, Frostturns them into tefiifying morF sters. Frostalso porsonifesanimals.ln "Stopping Woods by on a Snowy Evening," the narratorreinsup his horsefora moment 10relisha winter scene.Insteadof sayingthat the horse"acts as if it wantsto get going;'he enterstheanimal'smindto shareits reactionsin humanterms: [,lylittlehorsemustthinkil qu€er Tostopwithout afarmhouse near Frost even personifiesabstract qualitiesin terms of the nalural wodd,ln "l\4yNovember Guest;'insteadof simplydescribingthe emotionof sorrow,hetransformsthis abstractionintoa thinkingcreature: IvlySorrow, whenshe'sherewith Thinksthesedarkdaysof autumn In choosingfiguresof speech, Frostdoesn'tstop with personification.In " Bereft,"for instance,he unleashesa powerfulmetaphorby transformingan innocentpile of leavesinto a snake.Just whenyou thoughtit was safeto 9o out on the porch... Ouliniheporch'ssagging floor, gotupina coilandhissed, Leavos Blindlystruckat my kneeand Us andPoetry; TheMeaningsofNature Anotherway that Frostenlivens his outdoorscenosis to placethe readerina uniquerelationshipto nature.In "TheNovember Guest,"we lookat naturethroughthe eyesof sorrow.In"TheSoundof Trees," we considertreesin an equallyunique poetstell us to manner.Ordinarily, reveaethese creaturesof nature('l thinkthatlshallneve.see.. _"), but Frost,in this poem,asks us to considerthemothorwise: I wonder aboutthetrees. Whydo wewishto b6at Forevsrthe noiseof these Morethananothernoise Socloselo ourdwellingplac€? What's he saying? lt seems al- mostsacrilegiousfor anyoneto ask Arebeauliful asdayscanbe; "wonde/'abouttrees.But he Shelovesthe bare,the withered us to does wonder,so forcefullythat we 3 Shewalksthesoddon pasture are lorcedto considerhis pointof tane, Sorrow,of course,is not some. ForFrost,in his poemsaboutthe thingwe findoutsidelikea rakeora outdoors, is notsimplyoffering us a worm.But by lreaiingit so, Frost pleasantslideshowof quaintnature findsanotherwayfor us to experi- scenes.Rather,he uses natureto : encenatureas hedoes. make profoundpoints.He might wnlTNG! / ociober 1989 startwitha particular image,buthe will invariablyconcludewith an abstractidea;yet somehowhe covers this treacherousspace without soundingforcedor preachy.Toward the middleof"TheSoundof Trees," he compardstreesto peoplewho neverdo anything:"They are thai that talks of going./But nevergets awayl' In the end, the nafiator de- i. \/ v I 4 po KN sh cidesthatratherthanbehaving likea tree, he will make a "rockless choice."lvlaybehe shall have"less to say" than the treesas ihey sway in the wind,but at least"l shallbe gone-" In "Desert Places,"Frost moves from a descriptionof a snowscen€ to a sweepingstatementaboutlon€linessas a factof life.Heseeslonelinessall aroundhim in the "ground almostcoveredsmoothin snow" and in "a few weedsand stubble showinglast." He sees it in th€ woodsandtheanimals, andhefinds it in himself"unawar€s." Andhe r+ alizesthat he "will be morelonely" still,andendsonthisbleaknote: Theycannolscarcmewiththeir there at bottoml' And he's not talkingaboutdeadfrogs.Fora moment, herealizes, hejusimightbelooking at an ultimatetrulh behindthe ap"somethingmoreotthe pearancos: dopihs-andthenI lostit." ThroughoutFrost'spoetry,we find suchleapsfroma specificnatural imageto a profoundabstractquestionabouthumanexistence. ln"The. RoadNotTaken;'Frostraisesquestionsaboutthe relalionshipbetween whatwe do now and whatwe become later onr In "Stopping by Woodson a SnowyEvening,"he wantsus to considerthe difference betweenour workinglivesand momentsolleisure.ln " Birches," heexplainsthe humanurge"to getaway from earth awhile/Andthen come Between staB-on starswhereno backto it and beginover." numanracels, I havsit inmesomuchnearerhome As you read more of Frost'spo' Toscaremys€ltwithmyowndesert etry,youwillfindyourownfavorites, with scenesthat remindyou of your "Bereft"reachesthe samesub- ownexperience and ideasthat have ject of loneliness.Frosl Jirst de- occurred to you.Youmightalsofind scribesthewind,the"frothyshorej' yourselfwantingto wite poetryas the leaves,and ihe cloudsas he RobertFrostdid-beginning with stands "holding open a restive humbleobjectsof natureand the door."Then,heturnsthese ominous outdoors,and openingup on the signsintoa lhoughtabouthis own ondlessvistasofthe humanexperiisolation: ence. tr Somelhing sinister inthetone Toldmemysecretmustbeknown: WrttuAttay WordI wasin thehousealone l. Whatobjectcan you recallseeing Somehow musthavegotien clearly outside?Whatwasthe occaabrcad, sion?Doesit represent something to Wordlwas in mylifealone, WordI hadnooneleftbutGod. you paraas rccall it now? In a You In "For Once,Then, Something," graph, share this object with a the narrator gazes down a well and reader,trying to showwhat it is that wonders about "whatever it was lay youfindso compelling. 30 Il. Frostis ableto movefromthespecificlo the abstractwithoutseeming too preachy.After you describe something fromoutside,ask your self:"Whal doesthis proveabout somethingbigger?"Then find a way,oitherin poetryor prose,to de velopyourpoint. lll. Writean imaginarydiscussion Thesubject: amongseveralpoople. asinglebirchtreo-Thepanelshould includea representative of a cgnservationgroup,th€presidentof a timberclmpany,a toad,RipVanWin' I Pe Wr pE on: I N, in.l Ja< sot ot4 Ll6.h^d.n.lc^^n lV Considerthesequotationsabout nature: "NeverdoesNaturesay one thing andWisdomanother." -.JUVenal " Natureabhorsa vacuum." -Rabelais "One touch of naturemakesthe wholeworld kin." - Shakespeare "So Naturedealswith us and takes Our playthings one by one,and by the hand Leadsus to rest." -Longfellow In paragraphs, respondio anyor all of these.Whichto youisthe mcst unusual?The most ambiguous? I netrue$a V, Frostdoesn'twriteaboutTV sets or laserdiscs,but maybeyou can. Writea storyor a poemaboutsome thingthatisnotpariot naiure. ocrober 1989/ WFITING! DE ga thi no or ter ne un po 0r rat po