DBQ Writing Introduction What is a DBQ? • You are an historian and you have a question about a certain topic, event, person, theme, etc. • Your task is to come up with a thesis to answer your question (or question posed by others) • Thesis must be backed by evidence obtained from documents that you analyze • So you are an historian seeking the truth – You have documents that shed some light on the truth, but each is only a small piece What is a DBQ? (cont) • As an historian you must put these documents together in a way to come up with a solid thesis answering the question • A DBQ is a way to have you simulate the historian’s methods for interpreting the past DBQ Thesis • Answer the question, don’t just repeat it • Good thesis must focus squarely on the question • Must interpret the evidence DBQ Use of all the documents • Must make use of all the documents • You can refer to each document in a way you like, but it must be clear which document you are referencing • Use the name of the document (Hammurabi’s Code,) and document number (Doc.1) • Must demonstrate understanding of all documents, but can misinterpret one document & still get point DBQ Supporting evidence • Documents must be used to support thesis • Can use quote from the document or simply describe which part of document you are using • Tip—basically don’t quote– not enough time (Just Make sure your references are clear) • Receive 1 or 2 points for supporting evidence – 2 points for appropriate evidence from all but 1 doc. – 1 point for appropriate evidence from all but 2 docs. DBQ--Point of View • Must analyze author’s point of view in at least TWO documents • Look at the documents: – – – – What type of document is it? For what purpose was it created? Who wrote it? What is the tone? Is the tone intended to create a particular outcome? – Why would this person feel this way at this time, in this place? – Who is the intended audience? – What is the validity or reliability of the document? DBQ Point of View • Historians look for evidence from different points of view to insure correct analysis • You are seeking the truth, therefore you must evaluate the reliability of the document • Required to do two, but try to do all! • Point of View Examples: “Since Hammurabi’s Code was inscribed in clay tablets and in human size stone monuments that have been dated historically accurate, we can assume that the laws expressed are here are the real representation of Hammurabi’s laws.” More on Point of View • Answer the question, “How would the negotiations between Iran and the US be portrayed by each countries spokesperson”? • What would United States Secretary of State, Jon Kerry say about Iran’s nuclear development? • What would Iranian leader Hassan Rouhani say? • Consider what a report of in each country’s newspaper would look like. DBQ Grouping Documents • You will be grouping documents to help strengthen your thesis or argument • Must group documents in a way that makes sense to you • No formula for this • Could group by chronology, theme, region, culture, etc. • Can group by authors that agree with each other DBQ Grouping Documents • No one way to group documents, but must be clearly identified • For DBQ you must group in TWO or Three ways – Plan to group in at least three ways – Same document can appear in several groups • You are going to use your groups to support your thesis DBQ Grouping Documents • categories in the law code documents some – Forced submission through use of military force • 2,3,4,6 – Enriching or benefiting the conquered lands or people • 1,3,5,7,8 – Codified laws • 1,8 – Terrorize to set an example • 4,6 – Religious legitimacy or empowerment • 1,2,3,5,7 – Techniques of “theatre state” (surrounding with grandeur, honorific titles-1,2,3,5,7 DBQ Additional Document • This is easy to forget, but don’t! • Must identify ONE type of additional document or source • Must explain why document would help answer the question • Assume you are an historian & can’t quite understand the issue – You need another view or type of document DBQ Additional Document • If only I knew how………. • Must be specific (can’t merely say “I’d like to hear from a woman”) • Must explain how this document might change or expand the interpretation of the available evidence and the prompt • Place the discussion of the additional document immediately following the introduction, in the conclusion, or in each group—not as part of the thesis. DBQ Additional Document • Additional Document Example in Law Codes: – Voice of conquered people to determine how rule was carried out – Notes from a priest Word usage & meanings • Analyze means to first identify component parts of the question and then then examine their nature and relationship • Assess/evaluate asks you to make a judgment, consider negative and/or positive points (or advantages and disadvantages), or give an opinion Word usage & meanings • Compare requires you to note both similarities and differences • Describe simply asks you to tell about something. It generally isn’t as difficult as analyzing, assessing, evaluating, or comparing • Discuss means to talk through and consider a topic from different points of view, or possibly debate • Explain means to clarify. It involves making clear the causes or reasons for the issue or topic, as well as some historical evidence to illustrate your main points. The Question for Law Codes • Based on the following documents, analyze the methods by which rulers in the early civilizations of the Middle East established legitimate power over the empires they created. What additional kind of document(s) would you need to evaluate how these ancient rulers maintained power? • You may refer to relevant historical evidence not mentioned in the documents. The question in this DBQ is asking you to analyze • Analyze means to first identify component parts of the question and then then examine their nature and relationship • Based on the following documents, analyze the methods by which rulers in the early civilizations of the Middle East established legitimate power over the empires they created. How to start your thesis • Start your thesis out by identifying the time period: – “During the early civilizations of the Middle East,” – “From approximately 2300 BCE to 539 BCE,” • Answer the question: – “During the early civilizations of the Middle East , rulers established legitimate power over their empires through the methods of …………………………………………………….. Key Points on your groups • Develop your groups as paragraphs to support your thesis – Use a topic sentence to convey the major supporting idea of your group – Remember to not explain what the document means, but use the documents meaning to support the thesis – Refer to the document by its formal name or document # (use both) Concluding Paragraph • Rewrite your thesis in a more comprehensive way. • You can add a sentence on the additional document you would like to have viewed to make your analysis more accurate Basic Outline of Essay • Paragraph #1 – clearly stated thesis – Remember in historical writing you don’t need a lot of color and fluff to surround the thesis • Paragraph #2– missing document analysis • Paragraph #3—Group one documents support of thesis (remember POV & label docs. ) • Paragraph #4—Group two documents support of thesis (remember POV & label docs. ) • Paragraph # 5—Group three documents support of thesis (remember POV & label docs.) • Paragraph #6—Conclusion: restatement of thesis—try to write it more comprehensively