MEDIEVAL ROMANCE UNIT OUTLINE Middle Ages / 1066-1485 Pages 72-88 in our text Introduce the story of King Arthur Read “Sir Gawain and the Green Knight” / pages 159-167 Discus Christianity and Romance/Romance Hero Read “The Death of Arthur” by Sir Thomas Malory / pages 171-176 Discuss Christianity and Romance Hero Read “Tristan and Isolde” / handout Review Thesis Assign Romance and Romance Heroes Paper Vocabulary Archetype: a recurrent symbol or motif in literature, art, or mythology 1 Romance and Romance Heroes Paper Using your knowledge of the Romance genre, read and analyze the story of Tristan and Isolde, a popular story in the King Arthur myth. You will need to cite proof that the story of Tristan and Isolde falls into the romance definition. (See Gawain Romance Hero assignment.) Find quotes from Tristan and Isolde/”Tristan and Isolde” to support your thesis. THESIS: Prompt reference (key words) Title – underlined (because you’re handwriting it) for long poems (Beowulf), novels, and plays Author (if there is one / Tristan and Isolde/”Tristan and Isolde” does not have an author) Theme (statement) o What is the message for society/humanity? Prompt A: What does this Romance story say about the status and image of women? How does the Romance genre relate to romantic love? Prompt B: Discuss how the end of the story supports the tenets in the Romance genre. Grade Thesis Quotes Quote incorporation Strong Analysis Clear organization Introduction/conclusion paragraphs Pronouns Sentence variety Assignment Deadline A B Clear, focused, supported 7 quotes Incorporated smoothly into each sentence Clear support for each quote Can be identified 5 quotes An attempt to incorporate into the sentences An attempt to explain the importance of the quotes Multiple paragraphs with clear topic sentences and conclusion sentences / transition between ideas Interesting and organized An attempt to organize Omission of personal pronouns and second person pronouns Omission of sentences that start with “This…” / Sentence variety Includes the parts of Romanticism/Romantic Hero Turned in within the deadline parameters C Difficult to determine 3 quotes Quote stand alone as their own sentence Difficult to determine the importance of the quotes One long paragraph or written in short answer form An attempt to include introduction/conclusion paragraphs 1-2 errors Omitted Some use of “This…” / basic sentence variety Many sentences that begin with “This…”/ little sentence variety Unclear, little connection to the assignment Some deviation One to three days late More than 3 More than 3 days late 2 QUOTE INTEGRATION GUIDELINES Our goal: To learn how to integrate supporting quotes into your essays so that the quotes flow smoothly out of your own words. That way, the quotes are given a context, they become part of your argument, and they do not distract the reader from your ideas. Some guidelines: Do not leave your quotes "naked." Make sure they are clearly connected to the argument you are trying to make. NO: After June's humiliating piano recital, Waverly adds insult to injury. "You aren't a genius like me" (Tan 151). YES: After June's humiliating piano recital, Waverly adds insult to injury by declaring, "You aren't a genius like me" (Tan 151). Tan = the author When there is no author (Beowulf), then the title goes in the parenthesis (Beowulf). When the title has more than one word, “Tristan and Isolde,” the first main word goes in the parenthesis (“Tristan”). Use brackets ([ ]) and ellipses (. . .) to change verbs or other parts of the original quotes when necessary. This technique is especially useful for maintaining present tense in your paper. P.S. Know the difference between using (. . .) and (. . . .). NO: Dwight is a bully who takes out his anger and insecurity on those who are weaker than he is. "This made him furious; on the way back to the car he would kill anything he saw. He killed chipmunks, squirrels, blue jays, and robins"(Wolff 171). YES: Dwight is a bully who takes out his anger and insecurity on those who are weaker than he is. While hunting, he boosts his ego by "kill[ing] anything he [sees]. He kill[s] chipmunks, squirrels, blue jays, and robins" (Wolff 171). If you're quoting poetry, make sure you use a slash (/) to indicate where each line ends. That way, you are staying true to the text, and the reader will know that you are quoting poetry, instead of prose. Ex.: When Duncan asks for an update on the battle, the captain describes the struggling armies as "two spent swimmers that do cling together/And choke their art" (Macbeth 1.2.10-11). 3 At the end of the quote, use the QUO-PAR-PUNC Rule: Quotation marks-ParenthesesPunctuation. Within the parentheses, you usually write the author's last name and the page number. If you are only quoting from one book throughout your paper, then you only have to put the page number. If you are quoting Shakespeare or any play, you need to cite the play, act, scene, and line numbers. NO: When Waverly accuses her mother of showing off, Lindo's eyes turn "into dangerous black slits. She ha[s] no words for [Waverly], just sharp silence. (Tan 102)" YES: When Waverly accuses her mother of showing off, Lindo's eyes turn "into dangerous black slits. She ha[s] no words for [Waverly], just sharp silence" (Tan 102). Note: If a quote ends with a question mark or exclamation point, then put that punctuation before the quotation marks, to make sure the intended emotion is retained. Ex.: During their phone conversation, Toby's father tries to win Toby over by saying, "I've made some mistakes . . . . We all have. But that's behind us. Right, Tober?" (211). If there is a quote within the quote you are using, then use single quotation marks to set off the inner quote. Ex.: When Lena shows Ying-Ying around her new house, Ying-Ying complains that "the slant of the floor makes her feel as if she is 'running down'" (Tan 163). 4 Transition Signals: Why They Matter! The use of transitional phrases is an integral ingredient in your essays. Using transitional phrases improves the coherency of your paragraphs and makes the contrasts stand out. In addition, they draw attention to the writer's movement back and forth from one subject to the other, emphasizing either similarities or differences. Hence, transitions help the reader to grasp your logic and follow your argument easily. Here are a number of useful transition words and phrases. To show contrast/difference/ apparent contradiction: in contrast however yet on the other hand on the contrary although otherwise conversely as opposed to unlike nevertheless still despite in spite of instead while even though whereas rather To show similarity: also like likewise similar to similarly by the same token just as . . . so too the same is true of . . . indeed in comparison in addition furthermore moreover not only . . . but also 5